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| issue date = 07/05/2006
| issue date = 07/05/2006
| title = Email: (PA) Draft AMP Section of Audit Report
| title = Email: (PA) Draft AMP Section of Audit Report
| author name = Hoang D V
| author name = Hoang D
| author affiliation = NRC/NRR/ADRO/DLR
| author affiliation = NRC/NRR/ADRO/DLR
| addressee name = Orr M P
| addressee name = Orr M
| addressee affiliation = NRC/RES
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==Subject:==
==Subject:==
Re: Draft AMP section of Audit report Mark, Please make a correction per my attached comments form.I can be reached at 301-415-3052 if there are any questions.
Re: Draft AMP section of Audit report Mark, Please make a correction per my attached comments form.
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==Title:==
Audit and Review Report for Plant Aging Management Reviews and Programs for Pilgrim Nuclear Power Station Area of Review:       Aging Management Audit Report Section 1. "Introduction and General Information" to Section 3.0.3.3.6.3 "Conclusion."
Reviewer Guidelines:
: 1. Review for specific area of responsibility and/or expertise.
: 1. Review for specific area of responsibility and/or expertise.
: 2. Direct comments to the actions within the scope of the document.3. Record comment on this form. List page number and line number from document to identify location of proposed change. If comment is extensive or you have marked-up the document, make a notation on this form (e.g., "See comments on markup copy of document.")
: 2. Direct comments to the actions within the scope of the document.
and return both this form and the marked-up document to the comment coordinator.
: 3. Record comment on this form. List page number and line number from document to identify location of proposed change. If comment is extensive or you have marked-up the document, make a notation on this form (e.g., "See comments on markup copy of document.") and return both this form and the marked-up document to the comment coordinator.
: 4. If information is technically correct, do not change because of personal style preference.
: 4. Ifinformation is technically correct, do not change because of personal style preference. You may, however, indicate clearer or more concise wording.
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Latest revision as of 03:15, 14 March 2020

Email: (PA) Draft AMP Section of Audit Report
ML062130089
Person / Time
Site: Pilgrim
Issue date: 07/05/2006
From: Dan Hoang
NRC/NRR/ADRO/DLR
To: Michael Orr
Office of Nuclear Regulatory Research
References
TAC MC9669
Download: ML062130089 (4)


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.James Davis - Re: Draft AMP section of Audit report Page 1 "1 James Davis Re: Draft AMP section of Audit report Page 11 From: Dan Hoang To: Mark Orr Date: 07/05/2006 1:53:08 PM

Subject:

Re: Draft AMP section of Audit report Mark, Please make a correction per my attached comments form.

I can be reached at 301-415-3052 ifthere are any questions.

Thanks, Dan CC: James Davis

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James Davis- comment form.wpd Page1 Document Review Comment Form Document

Title:

Audit and Review Report for Plant Aging Management Reviews and Programs for Pilgrim Nuclear Power Station Area of Review: Aging Management Audit Report Section 1. "Introduction and General Information" to Section 3.0.3.3.6.3 "Conclusion."

Reviewer Guidelines:

1. Review for specific area of responsibility and/or expertise.
2. Direct comments to the actions within the scope of the document.
3. Record comment on this form. List page number and line number from document to identify location of proposed change. If comment is extensive or you have marked-up the document, make a notation on this form (e.g., "See comments on markup copy of document.") and return both this form and the marked-up document to the comment coordinator.
4. Ifinformation is technically correct, do not change because of personal style preference. You may, however, indicate clearer or more concise wording.
5. Ifyou consider the comment critical and require that you review the revised document before it is approved, put a "Y"inthe "Critical Comment" box.

Comment Page Une Comment Critical Comment Resolution No. No. No. Comment?

1 47 31 "...programwill..: Need space inbetween Y "...program will.."

2 161 22 "Program procedure. The GALL Report..." New Y Begin with the new text paragraph (no longer Para. part of the Enhancement) with:

"The GALL Report...'

3 165 43 '...water-controlstructures..." Need a space in "...water- control structures...'

between controlstructures

James Davis - comment form.wpd ..Paje 2]

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