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| number = ML062090303
| number = ML062090303
| issue date = 07/05/2006
| issue date = 07/05/2006
| title = 2006/07/05-Email: (PA) Draft AMP Section of Audit Report
| title = Email: (PA) Draft AMP Section of Audit Report
| author name = Hoang D
| author name = Hoang D
| author affiliation = NRC/NRR/ADRO/DLR
| author affiliation = NRC/NRR/ADRO/DLR
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{{#Wiki_filter:James Davis - Re: Draft AMP section of Audit report                       Page 1li:
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James Davis Re: Draft AMP section of Audit report
James Davis - Re: Draft AMP section of Audit report Page 1 I From:
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Dan Hoang To:
Page 1 I From:             Dan Hoang To:               Mark Orr Date:           Wed, Jul 5, 2006 1:53 PM
Mark Orr Date:
Wed, Jul 5, 2006 1:53 PM


==Subject:==
==Subject:==
Re: Draft AMP section of Audit report Mark, Please make a correction per my attached comments form.
Re: Draft AMP section of Audit report
: Mark, Please make a correction per my attached comments form.
I can be reached at 301-415-3052 if there are any questions.
I can be reached at 301-415-3052 if there are any questions.
Thanks, Dan CC:               James Davis
: Thanks, Dan CC:
James Davis


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James Davis - comment form.wpd Page 1 I James Davis - comment form.wpd Page 1 '1 Document Review Comment Form Document
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==Title:==
Audit and Review Report for Plant Aging Management Reviews and Programs for Pilgrim Nuclear Power Station Area of Review:
Aging Management Audit Report Section 1. "Introduction and General Information" to Section 3.0.3.3.6.3 "Conclusion."
Reviewer Guidelines:
Reviewer Guidelines:
: 1. Review for specific area of responsibility and/or expertise.
: 1.
: 2. Direct comments to the actions within the scope of the document.
Review for specific area of responsibility and/or expertise.
: 3. Record comment on this form. List page number and line number from document to identify location of proposed change. If comment is extensive or you have marked-up the document, make a notation on this form (e.g., "See comments on markup copy of document.") and return both this form and the marked-up document to the comment coordinator.
: 2.
: 4. If information is technically correct, do not change because of personal style preference. You may, however, indicate clearer or more concise wording.
Direct comments to the actions within the scope of the document.
: 5. If you consider the comment critical and require that you review the revised document before it is approved, put a "Y" in the "Critical Comment" box.
: 3.
Comment       Page   Une                           Comment                     Critical                 Comment Resolution No.           No. No.                                                     Comment?
Record comment on this form. List page number and line number from document to identify location of proposed change. If comment is extensive or you have marked-up the document, make a notation on this form (e.g., "See comments on markup copy of document.") and return both this form and the marked-up document to the comment coordinator.
1         47     31     "...programwill..: Need space in between             Y       "...program will.."
: 4.
2         161     22   "Program procedure. The GALL Report..." New           Y     Begin with the new text paragraph (no longer Para.                                                       part of the Enhancement) with:
If information is technically correct, do not change because of personal style preference. You may, however, indicate clearer or more concise wording.
                                                                                                        '_The GALL Report..."
: 5.
3         165     43     "...water-controlstructures..." Need a space in     Y       *...water- control structures..."
If you consider the comment critical and require that you review the revised document before it is approved, put a "Y" in the "Critical Comment" box.
Comment Page Une Comment Critical Comment Resolution No.
No.
No.
Comment?
1 47 31  
"...programwill..: Need space in between Y  
"...program will.."
2 161 22 "Program procedure. The GALL Report..." New Y
Begin with the new text paragraph (no longer Para.
part of the Enhancement) with:
'_The GALL Report..."
3 165 43  
"...water-controlstructures..." Need a space in Y  
*...water-control structures..."
between controlstructures
between controlstructures


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Latest revision as of 07:47, 15 January 2025

Email: (PA) Draft AMP Section of Audit Report
ML062090303
Person / Time
Site: Pilgrim
Issue date: 07/05/2006
From: Dan Hoang
NRC/NRR/ADRO/DLR
To: Michael Orr
Advanced Technologies & Labs International
References
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Download: ML062090303 (4)
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James Davis - Re: Draft AMP section of Audit report Page 1li:

James Davis - Re: Draft AMP section of Audit report Page 1 I From:

Dan Hoang To:

Mark Orr Date:

Wed, Jul 5, 2006 1:53 PM

Subject:

Re: Draft AMP section of Audit report

Mark, Please make a correction per my attached comments form.

I can be reached at 301-415-3052 if there are any questions.

Thanks, Dan CC:

James Davis

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Re: Draft AMP section of Audit report Wed, Jul 5, 2006 1:53 PM Dan Hoang DVH@nrc.gov Recipients atlintl.com MPOrr (Mark Orr) nrc.gov OWGWPOO3.HQGWDOO1 JAD CC (James Davis)

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James Davis - comment form.wpd Page 1 I James Davis - comment form.wpd Page 1 '1 Document Review Comment Form Document

Title:

Audit and Review Report for Plant Aging Management Reviews and Programs for Pilgrim Nuclear Power Station Area of Review:

Aging Management Audit Report Section 1. "Introduction and General Information" to Section 3.0.3.3.6.3 "Conclusion."

Reviewer Guidelines:

1.

Review for specific area of responsibility and/or expertise.

2.

Direct comments to the actions within the scope of the document.

3.

Record comment on this form. List page number and line number from document to identify location of proposed change. If comment is extensive or you have marked-up the document, make a notation on this form (e.g., "See comments on markup copy of document.") and return both this form and the marked-up document to the comment coordinator.

4.

If information is technically correct, do not change because of personal style preference. You may, however, indicate clearer or more concise wording.

5.

If you consider the comment critical and require that you review the revised document before it is approved, put a "Y" in the "Critical Comment" box.

Comment Page Une Comment Critical Comment Resolution No.

No.

No.

Comment?

1 47 31

"...programwill..: Need space in between Y

"...program will.."

2 161 22 "Program procedure. The GALL Report..." New Y

Begin with the new text paragraph (no longer Para.

part of the Enhancement) with:

'_The GALL Report..."

3 165 43

"...water-controlstructures..." Need a space in Y

  • ...water-control structures..."

between controlstructures

James Davis - comment form.wpd Page 2]

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