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{{#Wiki_filter:From: Lashley, Phil H.
{{#Wiki_filter:From:           Lashley, Phil H.
To: Venkataraman, Booma Cc: McCreary, Dave M
To:             Venkataraman, Booma Cc:             McCreary, Dave M


==Subject:==
==Subject:==
[External_Sender] Beaver Valley NFPA 805 Amendment Application Draft Safety Evaluation Date: Wednesday, November 29, 2017 8:26:06 AM Attachments:
[External_Sender] Beaver Valley NFPA 805 Amendment Application Draft Safety Evaluation Date:           Wednesday, November 29, 2017 8:26:06 AM Attachments:   2017-11-28 Draft SE FENOC Comments.pdf
2017-11-28 Draft SE FENOC Comments.pdf


==Dear Ms. Venkataraman,==
==Dear Ms. Venkataraman,==
As requested by U.S. Nuclear Regulatory Commission correspondence dated November 9, 2017, the FirstEnergy Nuclear Operating Company and applicable contractors have


reviewed the draft safety evaluation (SE) for proposed amendments regarding transition to
As requested by U.S. Nuclear Regulatory Commission correspondence dated November 9, 2017, the FirstEnergy Nuclear Operating Company and applicable contractors have reviewed the draft safety evaluation (SE) for proposed amendments regarding transition to NFPA 805, Performance-Based Standard for Fire Protection for Light Water Reactor Electric Generating Plants. Based on this review, the draft SE does not contain any proprietary or sensitive unclassified non-safeguards information. Specific items related to the factual accuracy and completeness of the SE were identified and are listed in the attached document for your consideration.
Respectfully, Phil H. Lashley Fleet Licensing Supervisor Cell: (330) 696-7208 Office: (330) 315-6808 Mail Stop: A-WAC-B1 The information contained in this message is intended only for the personal and confidential use of the recipient(s) named above. If the reader of this message is not the intended recipient or an agent responsible for delivering it to the intended recipient, you are hereby notified that you have received this document in error and that any review, dissemination, distribution, or copying of this message is strictly prohibited. If you have received this communication in error, please notify us immediately, and delete the original message.


NFPA 805, "Performance-Based Standard for Fire Protection for Light Water Reactor
Beaver Valley Units 1 and 2 Draft SER Compiled Comments A        B            C            D                              E                                              F                                          G                                    H 20171109  20171109    Paragraph 20171109 Draft SE Statement                                      Comment                Proposed Revised Statement                                References Draft SE  Draft SE Page    No.
Section No.      No.
3        1            1          Title                                                      Amendment Nos. 301 and 190 should                                                      Same title as preceding be inserted in the title.                                                              page.
4      1, 9      various                                                                  "First Energy" should be "FirstEnergy"                                                  See licensee name in throughout document.                                                                    second paragraph of draft SE Reference 8 (ML14002A086).
5      1.2          4        3rd full  implement under 10 CFR 50.48(a), and (c) the      A comma and "and" need to be re        implement under 10 CFR 50.48(a) and (c), and paragraph results.                                            arranged.                              the results.
on page 6      2.2          8            1    The NRC staffs review also relied on the          NUREG2180 is not listed                Include a new bullet for: NUREG2180,          Licensee response to PRA following additional codes, RGs, and standards:                                            "Determining the                                RAI 27 (Reference 17 Effectiveness, Limitations,                    ADAMS Accession No.
and Operator Response                          ML17030A312) and PRA RAI for Very Early Warning                          03 (Reference 19  ADAMS Fire Detection Systems in                      Accession No.
Nuclear Facilities                              ML17177A097)
(DELORESVEWFIRE)"
7      2.2          11            4    The NRC staffs review also relied on the          NUREG1824, Supplement 1 is not        Include a bullet for NUREG1824, Verification  NUREG1824, Supplement 1 following additional codes, RGs, and standards:    listed                                  and Validation of Selected Fire Models for      (Reference 165  ADAMS Nuclear Power                                  Accession No.
Plant Applications, Supplement 1" or supplement ML16309A011) and Draft the existing NUREG1824 bullet similar to the  SER Attachment A and NUREG/CR6850 bullet and discussion.            Attachment B 8      2.4.1        17            2    The licensee requested that 25 exemptions be        There are 26 total exemptions as        The licensee requested that 26 exemptions be    Supplemented Attachment rescinded for Beaver Valley, Unit No. 1. Since      identified in the supplemented          rescinded for Beaver Valley, Unit No. 1.        K (L17122 ML17111A887)
Beaver Valley, Unit No. 2, was licensed to operate  Attachment K (L17122                                                                  Enclosure B after January 1, 1979, licensing actions associated ML17111A887) with 10 CFR 50, Appendix R, were not issued as exemptions to the regulation, and therefore, the    Note Attachment O did not include licensee did not request that any exemptions be    new LA 11.26 (lack of fire rescinded for Beaver Valley, Unit No. 2. The        extinguishers, identified in licensee also determined that no orders need to    Attachment L review).
be superseded or revised to implement an FPP that complies with 10 CFR 50.48(c).
Attachment K described below lists the correct Licensing Actions that will and will not be transitioned. This should be okay. Only thing that needs corrected is that there are 26 total, not 25.
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Electric Generating Plants." Based on this review, the draft SE does not contain any
Beaver Valley Units 1 and 2 Draft SER Compiled Comments A        B            C          D                              E                                              F                                        G                                      H 20171109  20171109  Paragraph 20171109 Draft SE Statement                                      Comment            Proposed Revised Statement                                  References Draft SE  Draft SE Page    No.
Section No.      No.
9      2.4.1        17          2    The licensee requested that 25 exemptions be        Unit 2 deviations need to be        Since Beaver Valley, Unit No. 2, was licensed to  Supplemented Attachment rescinded for Beaver Valley, Unit No. 1. Since      described. There are a total of 31  operate after January 1, 1979, licensing actions  K (L17122 ML17111A887)
Beaver Valley, Unit No. 2, was licensed to operate  Unit 2 Licensing Actions with 11 of associated with 10 CFR 50, Appendix R, were not    Enclosure B; SER Section after January 1, 1979, licensing actions associated the them transitioning.            issued as exemptions to the regulation, and        3.5.1.3 with 10 CFR 50, Appendix R, were not issued as                                          therefore, the licensee did not request that any exemptions to the regulation, and therefore, the                                       exemptions be rescinded for Beaver Valley, Unit licensee did not request that any exemptions be                                        No. 2, but were listed as deviations. The licensee rescinded for Beaver Valley, Unit No. 2. The                                            requested that 31 deviations be rescinded for licensee also determined that no orders need to                                        Beaver Valley, Unit No. 2.
be superseded or revised to implement an FPP that complies with 10 CFR 50.48(c).
10      2.4.1        17          3    The NRC staff accepts the licensees                There are 26 total exemptions as    The NRC staff accepts the licensees              Supplemented Attachment determination that 25 exemptions should be          identified in the supplemented      determination that 26 exemptions should be        K (L17122 ML17111A887) rescinded for Beaver Valley, Unit No. 1, and that  Attachment K (L17122              rescinded for Beaver Valley, Unit No. 1, and 31    Enclosure B; SER Section no orders need to be superseded or revised to      ML17111A887).                      deviations should be rescinded for Beaver Valley,  3.5.1.3 implement NFPA 805 at Beaver Valley. (See SE        Unit 2 deviations need to be        Unit No. 2, and that no orders need to be Section 2.5 for the NRC staffs detailed evaluation described. There are a total of 31  superseded or revised to implement NFPA 805 at of the exemptions being rescinded.)                Unit 2 Licensing Actions with 11 of Beaver Valley. (See SE Section 2.5 for the NRC the them transitioning.            staffs detailed evaluation of the exemptions being rescinded.
11      2.5          20          2    The licensee previously requested and received This should state 6 of the 26            The licensee previously requested and received    Supplemented Attachment NRC approval for 26 exemptions from 10 CFR          exemptions are being transitioned. NRC approval for 26 exemptions from 10 CFR        K (L17122 ML17111A887)
Part 50, Appendix R. These exemptions were                                              Part 50, Appendix R. These exemptions were        Enclosure B; SER Section discussed in detail in LAR Attachment K, as                                            discussed in detail in LAR Attachment K, as        3.5.1.3 supplemented. The licensee requested that the                                          supplemented. The licensee requested that the exemptions be rescinded and that the underlying                                        exemptions be rescinded and that the underlying engineering evaluations for 9 of the 25                                                engineering evaluations for 6 of the 26 exemptions be transitioned to the new licensing                                        exemptions be transitioned to the new licensing basis under 10 CFR 50.48(a) and 50.48(c), as                                            basis under 10 CFR 50.48(a) and 50.48(c), as previously approved (NFPA 805, Section 2.2.7),                                          previously approved (NFPA 805, Section 2.2.7),
and compliant with the new regulation.                                                  and compliant with the new regulation.
12      2.5          22          4    The following exemptions are rescinded, but the This should state (see SE Section      The following exemptions are rescinded, but the    Supplemented Attachment engineering evaluation of the underlying            3.5.1.3)                            engineering evaluation of the underlying          K (L17122 ML17111A887) condition will be used as a qualitative                                                condition will be used as a qualitative            Enclosure B; SER Section engineering evaluation for transition to NFPA 805                                      engineering evaluation for transition to NFPA 805  3.5.1.3 (see SE Section 3.5.1.1):                                                              (see SE Section 3.5.1.3):
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proprietary or sensitive unclassified non-safeguards information. Specific items related to
Beaver Valley Units 1 and 2 Draft SER Compiled Comments A        B            C          D                              E                                              F                                          G                                    H 20171109  20171109  Paragraph 20171109 Draft SE Statement                                      Comment              Proposed Revised Statement                                  References Draft SE  Draft SE Page    No.
Section No.      No.
13      2.5          22                N/A                                              The Unit 2 Deviations need to be      The following deviations are rescinded as        Supplemented Attachment added to this section.                requested by the LAR. The underlying condition    K (L17122 ML17111A887) has been evaluated using RI/PB methods and        Enclosure B; SER Section found to be acceptable with no further actions,  3.5.1.3 because the philosophy of DID and sufficient safety margins are maintained (numbering scheme provided by the licensee): All 31 deviations need listed, with the 11 deviations that will be transitioning also listed.
14      2.6.1        25          1    Deterministic Approach: Comply with NFPA 805, NFPA 805 Chapter 3                        Deterministic Approach: Comply with NFPA 805,    NFPA 805 Chapter 3 Chapter 2, and Section 4.2.3                                                            Chapter 3, and Section 4.2.3 requirements; or                                                                        requirements; or 15      2.6.2        28          1    Accordingly, these cause and effect relationship  BV plans to use the Change            Accordingly, these cause and effect relationship RG 1.205 (Reference 4 models may be used after transition to NFPA 805  Evaluation Process discussed in NFPA  models may be used after transition to NFPA 805 ML092730314) as a part of the FREs conducted to determine the  805 Sections 2.2(h), 2.2.9 & 2.4.4 for as a part of the Change Evaluation Process change in risk associated with proposed plant    all future plant modification or other conducted to determine the change in risk changes.                                          changes to the Fire Protection        associated with proposed plant changes.
Program (FPP). BV plans to follow the guidance in RG 1.205 Regulatory Position C.3.2 "NFPA 805 Plant Change Evaluation Process."
BV does not intend to use the Fire Risk Evaluation Process discussed in NFPA 805 Section 4.2.4.2. This process was followed during the transition to NFPA 805 as discussed in RG 1.205 Regulator Position C2.4.
16      2.7.1        28          1      As described below, LAR Attachment S, Table S 2, Attachment S does not "identify the    As described below, LAR Attachment S, Table S 2, Supplemented Attachment Plant Modifications Committed, as              compensatory actions required to be    Plant Modifications Committed, as              S (L17122 ML17111A887) supplemented, provides a description of each of  in place", it only indicates whether a supplemented, provides a description of each of Enclosure D the proposed plant modifications, presents the    compensatory measure is required or    the proposed plant modifications, presents the problem statement explaining why the              not.                                  problem statement explaining why the modification is needed, and identifies the                                              modification is needed, and identifies if a compensatory actions required to be in place                                            compensatory actions is required to be in place pending completion/implementation of the                                                pending completion/implementation of the modification.                                                                            modification.
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the factual accuracy and completeness of the SE were identified and are listed in the
Beaver Valley Units 1 and 2 Draft SER Compiled Comments A        B            C          D                                E                                              F                                          G                                      H 20171109  20171109  Paragraph  20171109 Draft SE Statement                                      Comment                Proposed Revised Statement                                  References Draft SE  Draft SE Page    No.
Section No.      No.
17      2.7.2        29          2      Each implementation item will be completed        Table S3, as supplemented on Aug.      Each implementation item will be completed        Reference 18 prior to the deadline for implementation of the    22, 2017 (Reference 20), includes a    prior to the deadline for implementation of the    (ML17111A887), Note 1 at RI/PB FPP based on NFPA 805 as specified in the    caveat that certain specifically        RI/PB FPP based on NFPA 805 as specified in the    the end of Table S3 on license conditions and the letter transmitting the identified implementation items will    license conditions and the letter transmitting the Page S19 (pdf 261/261) amended license (i.e., implementation period),    not be complete in the 12 month        amended license (i.e., implementation period),
which states that the licensee will implement the  transition period; instead those        which states that the licensee will implement the items listed in LAR Attachment S, Table S3, as    specific items (generally related to    items listed in LAR Attachment S, Table S3, as supplemented on August 22, 2017, 12 months        FPRA updates to account for final as  supplemented on August 22, 2017, 12 months after NRC issuance of the license amendments.      built configuration of mods) will be    after NRC issuance of the license amendments, implemented within 2 refueling          except for those items specifically marked to be outages consistent with the S2        implemented according to the Table S2 modification implementation            modification implementation schedule.
schedule.
18    3.1.1.2        34      bullet list                                                  One section should be added to this    Add an evaluation of 3.3.6, Roofs, based on FPE    Reference 14 list: section 3.3.6. Ref 12 provided a  RAI 05.02 and Table 5b.01 table of sections that need to be changed from Complies with Clarification to either Complies or Complies with use of EEEE. Ref 14 provided an update to that table -
Table 5b.01. The third item is Section 3.3.6 with a compliance statement of Complies with Use of EEEE -
Functionally Equivalent.
Other sections classified like this are given an explanation in the draft SER, confirming that the EEEE demonstrates the basis for being acceptable.
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attached document for your consideration.
Beaver Valley Units 1 and 2 Draft SER Compiled Comments A        B            C          D                                E                                              F                                        G                                        H 20171109  20171109  Paragraph 20171109 Draft SE Statement                                        Comment              Proposed Revised Statement                                    References Draft SE  Draft SE Page    No.
Respectfully, Phil H. Lashley
Section No.      No.
19    3.1.1.2        36          1    The licensee further stated that the engineering    A followup RAI was issued regarding  Add: In FPE RAI 04.01 (Reference 25), the NRC      FPE RAI 04.01 (L15371 analysis determined that the majority of the        NFPA 805 Section 3.3.5.3 (FPE RAI      staff stated In the engineering evaluation, the    ML15356A136); L16058 electric cables used within the power block are      04.01 L15371 ML15356A136), with      licensee concluded that the low population of      (ML16055A160); SER equivalent to the requirements of NFPA 805,          the response stating that approval    cables that do not meet Institute of Electrical and Section 3.1.4.6 (pg 90)
Section 3.3.5.3, and the low population of electric  will be requested as an Attachment L  Electronics Engineers (IEEE) cables with potentially nonqualified electric cable  Item. The Attachment L Item was        Standard 383, 1974 Edition, or equivalent, were insulation materials installed in electrical        submitted as Approval Request 6 . (L  considered in the fire modeling raceways is acceptable. The NRC staff concludes      16058 ML16055A160).                  evaluation and determined to be adequate for that the licensees response to the RAI is                                                  the hazard. In accordance with acceptable because the licensee demonstrated        This should be updated to reflect the  FAQ 060008, this type of EEEE cannot be self that it used engineering evaluations to compare      Approval Request, which is identified  approved by the licensee. In its response to FPE its cable installations against the criteria of NFPA in SE Section 3.1.4.6                  RAI 04.01 (Reference 14), the licensee stated that 805 and the guidance of FAQ 06 0022 and                                                    the compliance strategy for NFPA 805 Section determined that the insulation materials are        See SE page 194 for same comment.      3.3.5.3, for the low population of cables with acceptable.                                                                                potentially nonqualified electrical cable insulation material installed in electrical raceways at BVPS1 and BVPS2 will be revised to "Submit for NRC Approval" 20    3.1.1.2        42          2    125 Ventilation Duct Chase (VDC)                    Incorrect acronym                      125 Volts Direct Current                            LAR Acronym List 21    3.1.1.2        43          3      The licensee stated that the halon systems in fire  Halon is only installed in 1CV3. CO2  The licensee stated that the halon system in fire  FPE RAI 05.02(a) (L15371 compartments 1 CV 3, 1 DG 1, 1 DG 2, and 2 SB 3      is installed in 1DG1, 1DG2, and 2 compartment 1 CV 3 and CO2 systems in fire          ML15356A136); original have been analyzed for over pressurization          SB3.                                  compartments, 1 DG 1, 1 DG 2, and 2 SB 3 have      LAR Attachment A, Table B conditions for the area and determined that no                                              been analyzed for over pressurization conditions    1 3.10.3 records for 1DG1, additional vents are required.                                                              for the area and determined that no additional      1DG2, and 2SB3.
vents are required.
22    3.1.1.3        46          2    In FPE RAI 7b (Reference 22), the NRC staff stated Typo: FPE RAI 17b                        In FPE RAI 17b (Reference 22)                      SER Reference 22 that in LAR Attachment A, Table B 1, the licensee stated in fire areas 2 CB 1 and 2 PA 3 that the 3M Interam E 50 series blanket assemblies were evaluated in an engineering evaluation to provide a 1 hour fire resistance rating for ductwork and a 2 hour fire resistance for the protection of the 1 1/2 hour fire dampers 23    3.1.1.3        46          2    The licensee stated that the compliance strategy Typo: NFPA 805, Section 3.11.2            NFPA 805, Section 3.11.2                            L15150 ML15147A372 pg for NFPA 805, Section 3.11.5 for fire                                                                                                          54 compartments 2 CB 1, 2 CV 1, 2 CV 3, 2 PA 3, 2 PA 4, 2 SB 3, and 2 SB 4 will be revised to delete references to fire barriers for ductwork, and the compliance strategy for NFPA 805, Section 3.11 for fire compartment 2 CB 1 will be revised to include the results of the engineering evaluation regarding fire barriers for ductwork.
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Fleet Licensing Supervisor
Beaver Valley Units 1 and 2 Draft SER Compiled Comments A        B            C            D                                E                                              F                                          G                                      H 20171109  20171109    Paragraph 20171109 Draft SE Statement                                        Comment              Proposed Revised Statement                                    References Draft SE  Draft SE Page    No.
Section No.      No.
24    3.1.1.3        46            2    In a letter dated October 25, 2017 (Reference        This statement is not contained      In Attachment L Approval Request 5, dated            Reference 15 21), the licensee indicated this change was made. within Ref 21 for this paragraph (it is  February 24, 2016 (Reference 15), the licensee confused with the previous            indicated this change was made.
paragraph).
25    3.1.1.4        52            3    o In LAR Attachment A, the licensee stated that in The following additional                o In LAR Attachment A, the licensee stated that in  LAR Table B1 Transition of fire compartments 2 SB 1, 2 SB 2, 2 SB 3, 2 SB 4, 2 compartments state that ductwork is    fire compartments 2 SB 1, 2 SB 2, 2 SB 3, 2 SB 4, 2  Fundamental Fire SB 5, 2 SB 6, 2 SB 7, 2 SB 8, 2 SB 9, 2 WH 1, and 3 wrapped with 1 hour fire wrap          SB 5, 2 SB 6, 2 SB 7, 2 SB 8, 2 SB 9, 2 WH 1, and 3  Protection Program and CR 1 there are HVAC duct penetrations in the        material to extend the barrier, as    CR 1 there are HVAC duct penetrations in the        Design Elements Worksheet barrier between the affected fire area and          noted in LAR Attachment A: 2SB3,    barrier between the affected fire area and          Fire Protection Features adjacent fire compartments that are protected                                              adjacent fire compartments that are protected        Transition Report by two 11/2 hour fire rated dampers in series, and                                          by two 11/2 hour fire rated dampers in series, and    BVPS2 A2 pages 284 a deviation for using two 11/2 hour fire dampers in                                          a deviation for using two 11/2 hour fire dampers in lieu of one 3 hour fire damper, and in fire                                                lieu of one 3 hour fire damper, and in fire compartment 2 PA 3 ventilation ductwork is                                                compartment 2 PA 3 and 2 SB 3 ventilation wrapped with 1 hour fire wrap material to extend                                          ductwork is wrapped with 1 hour fire wrap the fire barriers in lieu of fire dampers at the                                          material to extend the fire barriers in lieu of fire barriers.                                                                                  dampers at the barriers.
26    3.1.1.4        52      1st bullet In LAR Attachment A, the licensee stated that fire The following additional                In LAR Attachment A, the licensee stated that fire  LAR Table B1 Transition of doors that are not 3hour firerated are installed compartments were noted in LAR          doors that are not 3hour firerated are installed  Fundamental Fire in fire compartments 1CR2, 1CR4, 1CS1, Attachment A: 1PA1A, 1PA1C, 1            in fire compartments 1CR2, 1CR4, 1CS1,        Protection Program and 1CV1, 1CV2, 1ES1, 1ES2, 1FB1,              PAGA, 1PAGB, 1PAGC.              1CV1, 1CV2, 1ES1, 1ES2, 1FB1,              Design Elements Worksheet 1MG1, 1MS1, 1NS1, 1PA1E, 1PA1G,                                                  1MG1, 1MS1, 1NS1, 1PA1A, 1PA1C,            Fire Protection Features 1PT1, 1SGPD1, 1TB1, 3CR1, 3IS1,                                                  1PA1E, 1PA1G, 1PAGA, 1PAGB, 1PAGC,        Transition Report 3IS2, 3IS3, 3IS4, and 3IS6.                                                        1PT1, 1SGPD1, 1TB1, 3CR1, 3IS1,            BVPS1 A2 pages 259, 266, 3IS2, 3IS3, 3IS4, and 3IS6.                  298, 304, 310, 27    3.1.1.4        52      2nd bullet In LAR Attachment A, the licensee stated that in    Fire compartment 2SG1S (3.11.2) is In LAR Attachment A, the licensee stated that in      FPE RAI 02 (L15150 fire compartments 2 ASP, 2 CB 1, 2 CB 6, 2 CV 1, 2  not listed, but was identified in the fire compartments 2 ASP, 2 CB 1, 2 CB 6, 2 CV 1, 2  ML15147A372 pg 11)
CV 2, 2 CV 3, 2 CV 5, 2 CV 6, 2 FB 1, 2 PA 4, and 2  FPE RAI 02 Table for NFPA 805        CV 2, 2 CV 3, 2 CV 5, 2 CV 6, 2 FB 1, 2 PA 4, and 2 PA 5, there are (HVAC duct penetrations in the      Section 3.11.2.                      PA 5, and 2SG1S, there are (HVAC duct barrier between the affected fire compartment                                            penetrations in the barrier between the affected fire compartment 28    3.1.1.4        52      3rd Bullet o In LAR Attachment A, the licensee stated that in Fire Compartments 2PT1, 2SG1S In LAR Attachment A, the licensee stated that in          FPE RAI 02 (L15150 fire compartments 2 SB 1, 2 SB 2, 2 SB 3, 2 SB 4, 2 are not listed, but were identified in fire compartments 2PT1, 2 SB 1, 2 SB 2, 2 SB 3, 2  ML15147A372 pgs 9,11)
SB 5, 2 SB 6, 2 SB 7, 2 SB 8, 2 SB 9, 2 WH 1, and 3 the FPE RAI 02 Table for NFPA 805      SB 4, 2 SB 5, 2 SB 6, 2 SB 7, 2 SB 8, 2 SB 9, 2SG CR 1 there are HVAC duct penetrations in the        Section 3.11.3.                      1S, 2 WH 1, and 3 CR 1 barrier between the affected fire area and adjacent fire compartments that are protected by two 11/2 hour fire rated dampers in series, and a deviation for using two 11/2 hour fire dampers in lieu of one 3 hour fire damper, 29    3.1.1.4        54            1    NFPA 805 Section 3.11.3                              Fire Compartment 2RC1 is not        Add: In LAR Attachment A, the licensee stated        FPE RAI 02 (L15150 described in this section, but was    that in fire compartment 2RC1, the                ML15147A372 pg 9); SER listed in the FPE RAI 02 Table for    containment access hatch does not contain a UL      Section 3.5.1 pg 193 NFPA 805 Section 3.11.3.              label or certification of fire testing.
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30    3.1.1.4        54            1    NFPA 805 Section 3.11.3                            Fire Compartments 2TR1, 2TR2, 2  Add: Also in its response to FPE RAI 02, the      FPE RAI 02 (L15150 TR3 are not described but were in    licensee revised its compliance strategy to        ML15147A372 pgs 11) the FPE RAI 02 Table for NFPA 805    remove "Compliance by Previous Approval" to Section 3.11.2 to state the          credit a performancebased evaluation for fire compliance basis changed from        compartments 2TR1, 2TR2, and 2TR3.
                                                                                              "Complies by Previous Approval" to "Performancebasedevaluation".
31    3.1.1.5        55      5th bullet Section 3.11.3, which concerns the requirement Add discussion to align with Section      Add: In the revised Approval Request 5, approval L16162 ML16133A340 that the listed fire resistance rating for fire    3.1.4.5 since in the supplemented    was requested for the use of fire damper          page L1; SER section dampers is consistent with the designated fire    Attachment L, Approval Request 5      configurations that contain two 1.5hour fire      3.1.4.5 page 84.
resistance rating of the barrier as determined by does not identify 1hour fire wrap. dampers in series as follows: 1. Two 1.5hour fire the performance requirements established by        (L16162 ML16133A340 page L1)      dampers in series located within the fire barrier Chapter 4. The licensee requested NRC approval                                          and 2. Two 1.5hour fire dampers in series with for the use of a PB method to justify the use of                                        one located within the fire barrier and one two 1.5 hour rated fire dampers in series with a 1                                      located close to, but outside, the fire barrier.
hour fire wrap on the ductwork instead of a 3 hour fire damper, thereby meeting the requirements of NFPA 805. See SE Section 3.1.4.5.
32    3.1.1.6        62            3    NFPA 805, Section 3.4.3(a), ...The licensee        The LAR Attachment S, Table S3 that  NFPA 805, Section 3.4.3(a), ... The licensee      Reference 8 and ADAMS included this action in LAR Attachment S, Table S requires update of fire brigade      included this action in LAR Attachment S, Table S accession number 3, as supplemented, Implementation Item BV1 procedure is BV13020.                      3, as supplemented, Implementation Item BV1      ML14002A086 2371.                                                                                    3020.
33    3.1.1.6        63            1    In LAR Attachment A, the licensee identified an This does not align with what LAR        In LAR Attachment A, the licensee identified an    Reference 8 and ADAMS action to verify flow rate nozzle pressure for all Attachment A, Section 3.6.2 stated:  action to verify there is an adequate water flow  accession number hose stations upon completion the hydraulic        "Will Comply With Use Of              rate and nozzle pressure for all hose stations by  ML14002A086 calculations.                                      Commitment                            completion of hydraulic calculations.
The capability to ensure an adequate water flow rate and nozzle pressure will be verified upon completion of hydraulic calculations."
34    3.1.1.6        63            2    NFPA 805, Section 3.8.2, The licensee identified  Item BV20487 is for CO2 discharge    NFPA 805, Section 3.8.2, The licensee identified Reference 8 and ADAMS actions in LAR Attachment S, Table S2, as        testing. BV21022 is for diesel room  actions in LAR Attachment S, Table S2, as        accession number supplemented, Modifications BV11875, BV1        ventilation fan control. Neither of  supplemented, Modifications BV11875, BV1        ML14002A086 2839, BV12840, BV12841, and LAR Attachment      these are related to NFPA 72, nor the 2839, BV12840, BV12841, and LAR Attachment S, Table S 3, as supplemented, Implementation      discussed fire compartments. They    S, Table S 3, as supplemented, Implementation Items BV12826, BV20487, and BV21022.            should be removed from this          Items BV12826, BV20487, and BV21022.
paragraph.
35    3.1.1.6        65          2nd    The licensee included these actions in LAR        This should be BV21576.              The licensee included these actions in LAR        Ref 18 ML17111A887 2017 paragraph Attachment S, Table S 3, as supplemented,                                                Attachment S, Table S 3, as supplemented,          0421, Enclosure B, Att. K Implementation Items BV1 3041 and BV11576.                                              Implementation Items BV1 3041 and BV21576.
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36      3.1.2        68          1    As stated in LAR Section 4.1.3, the power block      The words used in section 4.1.3 state  As stated in LAR Section 4.1.3, the power block    Reference 9 and ADAMS includes structures that contain equipment that      "structures that have equipment        includes structures that have equipment required    accession number could affect plant operation for power              required for nuclear plant              for nuclear plant operations as identified in LAR  ML14002A086 generation, equipment important to safety,          operations."                            Attachment I, Table I1, Beaver Valley, Unit No.
equipment that could affect the ability to                                                  1 Power Block Definition, and LAR Attachment I, maintain the NSCA in the event of a fire, or        It does not specifically state        Table I2, Beaver Valley, Unit No. 2 Power Block structures containing radioactive materials that    "structures that contain equipment Definition."
could potentially be released in the event of a      that could affect plant operation for fire.                                                power generation, equipment important to safety, equipment that could affect the ability to maintain the NSCA in the event of a fire, or structures containing radioactive materials that could potentially be released in the event of a fire."
37    3.1.3.2        68          6    In LAR Attachment S, Table S2, as supplemented,    LAR Table S2 item BV12854 will        "In LAR Attachment S, Table S2, as                Reference 17, Modification Items BV11875 and BV20829, the        install incipient detection in an      supplemented, Modification Items BV11875,          ML17030A312, 20170130, licensee proposed the installation of very early    inverter cabinet greater than 250V      BV12854, and BV20829, the licensee proposed      Attachment Page 2 and warning fire detection systems (VEWFDS) in low      (treated as a power cabinet per        the installation of very early warning fire        Reference 18, voltage cabinets located in fire compartments 1    NUREG2180) consistent with the LAR detection systems (VEWFDS) in low voltage select        ML17111A887, 20170421, CR4, 2CB1, and 2CB6                            Attachment S Supplement and the        cabinets located in fire compartments 1CR4, 2    Att 3 Page 2 and Enclosure response to PRA RAI 27.                CB1, and 2CB6"                                  D Page S12.
38    3.1.3.2        69          8      The licensee further stated that sensitivity      This should be changed to "sensitivity The licensee further stated that sensitivity        FPE RAI 15B (L15118 testing will include the gain and alarm              settings."                              settings will include the gain and alarm            ML15118A484 pg 11 of 68) thresholds, and that each detector will have an                                              thresholds, and that each detector will have an associated setpoint document that contains the                                              associated setpoint document that contains the alarm setpoints, which will be subject to design                                            alarm setpoints, which will be subject to design control program requirements.                                                                control program requirements.
39    3.1.3.2        70          4    In its response to FPE RAI 15f (Reference 12) , the  Both BV1 & 2 modifications have        In its response to FPE RAI 15f (Reference 11) , the Reference 18 and ADAMS licensee stated that the VEWFDS will be              been completed. Items BV13110          licensee stated that the VEWFDS will be            accession number connected to interface with the control room        and BV21624 Interface the Unit1/2 connected to interface with the control room            ML17111A887 annunciation system, and that LAR Attachment S,      Incipient Fire Detection System with annunciation system, and that LAR Attachment S, Table S2, as supplemented, was revised to          the Main Control Room Annunciator Table S2, as supplemented, was revised to include the modification. The licensee included      System were added to Table S1        include the modification. The modifications have this action in a letter dated April 21, 2017, in LAR                                        been completed. The licensee included this Attachment S, Table S2, as supplemented,                                                    action in a letter dated April 21, 2017, in LAR Modification BV13110.                                                                      Attachment S, Table S1, as supplemented, Modifications BV13110 and BV21624.
40    3.1.3.2;        70;          4;    ...in a letter dated April 21, 2017,                Include a reference to the Utility's    ...in a letter dated April 21, 2017 (Reference 18), SE Reference 18, 3.2.6.1        122          9                                                          letter.                                ...                                                ML17111A887, L17122, Attachment 3 pg 1 and Updated pg S8 (pdf Pg 250) 11/28/2017                                                                                                      8 of 26


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41    3.1.3.2        71          1    The detailed discussion of the VEWFDS in          Include a reference for FPE RAI 15e. The detailed discussion of the VEWFDS in          SE Reference 11, response to FPE RAI 15e, such as operator and                                            response to FPE RAI 15e (Reference 11), such as ML15147A372, L15150, Pg operator response credited in the NSCA, is                                              operator and operator response credited in the 52 included in SE Section 3.2.6.                                                            NSCA, is included in SE Section 3.2.6.
42    3.1.3.2        71          2    The NRC concludes that the licensees response    "FPE RAI 15ac" should be "FRE RAI    The NRC concludes that the licensees response Reference 10 and ADAMS to FPE RAI 15ac and RAI 15f is acceptable        15ad" since the FPE RAI 15          to FPE RAI 15ad and RAI 15f is acceptable        accession number because the licensee demonstrated that the        discussion included a, b, c & d.      because the licensee demonstrated that the        ML151184A484 design, installation, maintenance, and operation    Also "Table S2. Modification BV1  design, installation, maintenance, and operation Reference 18 and ADAMS of the VEWFDS is in accordance with the            3110" should be "Table S1,          of the VEWFDS is in accordance with the            accession number guidance contained in FAQ 080046, and the        Modification Items BV13110 and      guidance contained in FAQ 080046, and the        ML17111A887 alarm annunciation system will comply with the    BV21624"                            alarm annunciation system will complies with the requirements of NFPA 805, Section 3.8, subject to                                        requirements of NFPA 805, Section 3.8, as completion of LAR Attachment S, Table S2,                                              indicated by completion of LAR Attachment S, Modification BV13110                                                                    Table S1, Modification Items BV13110 and BV2 1624.
43    3.1.3.3        71          3    In its response to FPE RAI 01 (Reference 12)      FPE RAI 01 response is included in    In its response to FPE RAI 01 (Reference 11)      Letter dated May 27, 2015 Reference 11 44    3.1.3.3        72          4    in accordance with Table FPE 01 of its response FPE RAI 01 response is included in      in accordance with Table FPE 01 of its response    Letter dated May 27, 2015 to FPE RAI 01 (Reference 12),                      Reference 11                          to FPE RAI 01 (Reference 11),
45    3.1.4.6        91          4    The licensee stated that for the                  Cable trays with mixed thermoplastic  The licensee stated that for the                   Letter L17358 thermoplastic/unknown cable types, it assumed and thermoset do not always use           thermoplastic/unknown cable types, it assumed bounding case thermoplastic flame                  bounding case thermoplastic. Rather,  bounding case thermoplastic flame                  DRAFT SER Attachment A, propagation/spread, HRRs, and thermal damage the method used at BVPS is                  propagation/spread, HRRs, and thermal damage      Page 8 criteria in the FM analysis. The licensee further  consistent with or more conservative  criteria in the FM analysis. The licensee further stated that the FM analysis assumed a bounding than the guidance in NUREG/CR            stated that the FM analysis assumed a bounding case (thermoplastic) flame propagation/spread 7010.                                     case (thermoplastic)is consistent with or more rate, HRR, and thermal damage criteria for                                              conservative than the approved guidance (i.e.,
raceways containing a mixture of thermoplastic                                          NUREG/CR7010, and thermoset cable types, and that this results                                        NUREG/CR6850) with regards to flame in a conservative and bounding FM analysis with                                          propagation/spread rate, HRR, and thermal regard to cable material types and associated                                            damage criteria for raceways containing a flame propagation rates.                                                                mixture of thermoplastic and thermoset cable types, and that this results in a conservative and bounding FM analysis with regard to cable material types and associated flame propagation rates.
46      3.2.1        105          10    ...As described in Section 4.2.1.1 and Attachment Unable to locate in Attachment B a    ...As described in Section 4.2.1.1 and Attachment  ADAMS Package Accession B of the LAR, the licensee performed a review      description of the referenced review. B of the LAR, the licensee performed a review      No. ML14002A086 (LAR against the guidance of NEI 0001, Revision 2, to This is only described in LAR Section against the guidance of NEI 0001, Revision 2, to  Attachment B).
identify substantive changes from NEI 0001,      4.2.1.1.                              identify substantive changes from NEI 0001, Revision 1, that are applicable to the NFPA 805                                          Revision 1, that are applicable to the NFPA 805 transition.                                                                            transition.
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47      3.2.1        106          4    In Safe Shutdown Analysis (SSD) RAI 01              Typo: the response to SSD RAI 01 is in In Safe Shutdown Analysis (SSD) RAI 01              Reference 11, ADAMS (Reference 22), the NRC staff ... requested that    Reference 11, not Reference 10.        (Reference 22), the NRC staff ... requested that    accession number the licensee clarify the discrepancy. In its                                              the licensee clarify the discrepancy. In its        ML15147A372, Attachment response to SSD RAI 01 (Reference 10), the                                                response to SSD RAI 01 (Reference 11), the          L15150, Page 56.
licensee stated                                                                          licensee stated 48    3.2.1.4      112          2    ...The licensee stated that decay heat is removed  The "RHR" abbreviation is ambiguous ...The licensee stated that decay heat is removed      Section 2.2.2, Page 115, by use of a natural circulation cooldown and        in this context: recommend this be    by use of a natural circulation cooldown and        under "Decay Heat steam release by the main steam safety valves      clarified to distinguish between the steam release by the main steam safety valves        Removal".
and manual operation of atmospheric dump            RHR Valve and the RHR System. The and manual operation of atmospheric dump valves or RHR and that AFW is credited to supply    RHR System is not credited for Hot    valves or RHR valve and that AFW is credited to cooling water to the SGs...                        Standby, while the RHR Valve is an     supply cooling water to the SGs...
alternative to the atmospheric dump valves.
49    3.2.1.5      113          4    ...The licensee further stated that the turns ratio Typo: Volume 2 of JACQUEFIRE is      ...The licensee further stated that the turns ratio Section 9.0, Page 244, analysis is based upon NUREG/CR 7150, Joint        Reference 141, not 128.                analysis is based upon NUREG/CR 7150, Joint        Reference 141.
Assessment of Cable Damage and Quantification                                              Assessment of Cable Damage and Quantification of Effects from Fire (JACQUE FIRE), Volume 2:                                              of Effects from Fire (JACQUE FIRE), Volume 2:
Expert Elicitation Exercise for Nuclear Power                                              Expert Elicitation Exercise for Nuclear Power Plant Fire Induced Electrical Circuit Failure                                            Plant Fire Induced Electrical Circuit Failure (Reference 128), which concluded...                                                        (Reference 141), which concluded...
50      3.2.4        119          6    ...                                                Table B3 is not LAR Att. B but is LAR ...                                                Reference 9 and ADAMS The results of the MSO expert panel discussions Att. C                                    The results of the MSO expert panel discussions accession number were added to each of these tables; and                                                    were added to each of these tables; and            ML14002A086 The MSOs that were added to the NSCA and                                                  The MSOs that were added to the NSCA and resulted in failures are documented as VFDRs,                                              resulted in failures are documented as VFDRs, and resolutions are documented in LAR                                                      and resolutions are documented in LAR Attachment B, Table B3.                                                                  Attachment C, Table B3.
51      3.2.5        120          6    As described in LAR Section 4.2.1.3, the licensees The reference for FAQ 070030 is      As described in LAR Section 4.2.1.3, the licensees Reference 72 process is based on the methodology of FAQ 07 Reference 72.                              process is based on the methodology of FAQ 07 0030 (Reference 131) and consisted of the                                                  0030 (Reference 72) and consisted of the following steps:                                    The reference for FAQ 070030 is not  following steps:
Reference 131.
52    3.2.6.1      122          6    In LAR Attachment S, Table S2, as supplemented, LAR Table S2 item BV12854 will          In LAR Attachment S, Table S2, as supplemented, Reference 17, Modification Items BV11875 and BV20829, the install incipient detection in an            Modification Items BV11875, BV12854, and BV2 ML17030A312, 20170130, licensee indicated that a VEWFDS will be added inverter cabinet greater than 250V          0829, the licensee indicated that a VEWFDS will Attachment Page 2 as follows:                                        (treated as a power cabinet per        be added as follows:
NUREG2180) consistent with the LAR                                                        Reference 18, Attachment S Supplement and the                                                            ML17111A887, 20170421, response to PRA RAI 27.                                                                    Att 3 Page 2 and Enclosure D Page S12.
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53    3.2.6.1      122            10      In LAR Attachment W, the licensee stated that    To clarify, suggest adding that        In LAR Attachment W, the licensee stated that    PRA RAI 27 (L17024, the installation of VEWFDS incipient detection in "VEWFDS will be installed in the 480V  the installation of VEWFDS incipient detection in ML17030A312 pg 2 of 3) low voltage cabinets located in fire              Computer Inverter and credited in      low voltage cabinets located in fire              BV12854 compartments 1 CR 4, 2 CB 1, and 2 CB 6 is to    accordance with NUREG2180."          compartments 1CR4, 2CB1, and 2CB6 is to reduce the likelihood of fire propagation outside                                        reduce the likelihood of fire propagation outside the cabinets                                                                            the cabinets. VEWFDS will also be installed in one 480 VAC cabinet in accordance with NUREG 2180 (Ref. 17) 54      3.2.7        124            2      The NRC staff reviewed the proposed installation LAR Table S2 item BV12854 will        The NRC staff reviewed the proposed installation  Reference 17, of a VEWFDS to monitor conditions in certain key install incipient detection in an      of a VEWFDS to monitor conditions in certain key  ML17030A312, 20170130, electrical cabinets at Beaver Valley as described inverter cabinet greater than 250V    electrical cabinets at Beaver Valley as described Attachment Page 2 in LAR Modification Items BV11875 and BV2      (treated as a power cabinet per        in LAR Modification Items BV11875, BV12854 0829, and in its response to FPE RAI 15.          NUREG2180) consistent with the LAR and BV20829, and in its response to FPE RAI 15      Reference 18, Attachment S Supplement and the        and PRA RAI 27.                                  ML17111A887, 20170421, response to PRA RAI 27.                                                                  Att 3 Page 2 and Enclosure D Page S12.
55    3.4.1.2      127            6      each retained VFDR was evaluated against the      Safety margin was evaluated for the each compartment with VFDRs was evaluated            LAR Section 4.5.2.2 safety margin criteria                            compartment and not for each VFDR against the safety margin criteria 56    3.4.1.2      127      6 (bullet 1) FM for the FPRA was specifically reviewed for    BVPS has used additional FAQs that    FM for the FPRA was specifically reviewed for    SER Reference 10, 11, and adequate safety margin and, in general, was      are not listed in LAR Section 3.4      adequate safety margin and, in general, was      12 (responses to PRA RAI developed utilizing industry, NRC, and National                                          developed utilizing industry, NRC, and National  4,7,9, and 25)
Institute of Standards and Technology (NIST)                                            Institute of Standards and Technology (NIST) accepted codes, supported by guidance that                                              accepted codes, supported by guidance that includes NUREG/CR6850, EPRI/NRCRES Fire                                              includes NUREG/CR6850, EPRI/NRCRES Fire PRA Methodology for Nuclear Power Facilities;                                          PRA Methodology for Nuclear Power Facilities; NEI 0402; and associated FAQs resolutions as                                            NEI 0402; and associated FAQs resolutions as described in LAR Section 3.4 and specifically                                            described in LAR Section 3.4 and specifically identified throughout the LAR.                                                          identified throughout the LAR and subsequent RAI responses.
57    3.4.1.2        128      5 (very last Based on its review of the LAR, the FREs, and the should refer to PRA RAI 21, instead of Based on its review of the LAR, the FREs, and the Reference 11, sentence in licensees response to PRA RAI 20                  20                                    licensees response to PRA RAI 21                ML1547A372. (pages 179 the                                                                                                                                                and 183, or pdf 181 and section)                                                                                                                                              185) 58    3.4.2.2      131            2      accordance with NEI 0701 (Reference 139)        Typo  NEI 0701 should be NEI 0712 accordance with NEI 0712 (Reference 139)          N/A 59    3.4.2.2      132            3      In PRA RAI 01.a (Reference 22) associated with    Missing a digit in the F&0 reference  In PRA RAI 01.a (Reference 22) associated with    Reference 22 and ADAMS F&O CFA10 , the NRC staff stated that the                                              F&O CFA101 , the NRC staff stated that the      accession number licensees use of Option #2 from NUREG/CR                                              licensees use of Option #2 from NUREG/CR        ML15049A507 6850                                                                                    6850 11/28/2017                                                                                                    11 of 26


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60    3.4.2.2      132          4    In PRA RAI 1.c (Reference 22) concerning F&O          The F&O discussed in this RAI applies  In PRA RAI 1.c (Reference 22) concerning F&O          Reference 10, QNSC101, the NRC staff requested that the          to BV1 only (BV2 LERF was fully        QNSC101, the NRC staff requested that the          ML15118A484. (page 28 of licensee provide justification for the sufficiency of quantified and screened                licensee provide justification for the sufficiency of 68, or pdf 30/70).
the sampling method it used to determine that        appropriately). The draft statement    the sampling method it used to determine that        First sentence of the RAI the sum of the LERF contributions for all            refers to the additional sampling      the sum of the LERF contributions for all            response.
screened scenarios was less than 10 percent of        screening as applicable to both units. screened scenarios at Unit 1 was less than 10 the estimated total LERF for fire events. In its                                            percent of the estimated total LERF for fire response to PRA RAI 01.c (Reference 10), the                                                events. In its response to PRA RAI 01.c licensee explained that scenarios having a CDF                                              (Reference 10), the licensee explained that higher than 1E08 were retained and that LERF                                                scenarios having a CDF higher than 1E08 were screening was performed on the next most risk                                                retained and that LERF screening was performed dominant scenarios (i.e., scenarios with a CDF                                              on the next most risk dominant scenarios (i.e.,
between 1E08/year and 1E09/year). The                                                      scenarios with a CDF between 1E08/year and licensee explained that it compared the total                                                1E09/year). The licensee explained that it LERF of the screened scenarios for each unit to                                              compared the total LERF of the screened the LERF of unscreened scenarios (i.e., scenarios                                            scenarios for Unit 1 to the LERF of unscreened with a CDF higher than 1E08/year) and used this                                            scenarios (i.e., scenarios with a CDF higher than comparison to conservatively calculate the ratio                                            1E08/year) and used this comparison to of screened LERF scenarios to total LERF, which                                              conservatively calculate the ratio of screened was determined to be about 3 percent                                                        LERF scenarios to total LERF, which was determined to be about 3 percent 61    3.4.2.2      132          4    The NRC staff concludes that the licensees          The F&O discussed in this RAI applies The NRC staff concludes that the licensees            Reference 10, response to the RAI is acceptable because the        to BV1 only (BV2 LERF was fully        response to the RAI is acceptable because the        ML15118A484. (page 28 of licensee demonstrated that its treatment of          quantified and screened                licensee demonstrated that its treatment of          8, or pdf 30/70).
quantitative screening using the simplified          appropriately). The draft statement quantitative screening using the simplified              First sentence of the RAI approach is sufficient to show that the ratio of      refers to the additional sampling      approach is sufficient to show that the ratio of      response.
quantitatively screened LERF scenarios is a small screening as applicable to both units. quantitatively screened LERF scenarios is a small fraction of the total LERF for both units and                                                fraction of the total LERF for Unit 1 and because because all fire scenarios would be rescreened                                              all fire scenarios would be rescreened prior to prior to self approval.                                                                      self approval.
62    3.4.2.2      132          4    Implementation Items BV13108 and BV21662 Typo  BV21662 should be BV21622 Implementation Items BV13108 and BV21622                          N/A 63    3.4.2.2      135          2    In its response to PRA RAI 05                        Wrong reference                        In its response to PRA RAI 05                        Reference 11 and ADAMS (Reference 10), the licensee explained that it                                              (Reference 11), the licensee explained that it        accession number credited RAs associated with repairs for DID but                                            credited RAs associated with repairs for DID but      ML15147A372 did not credit them in the FPRA.                                                            did not credit them in the FPRA.
64    3.4.2.2      138          4    In its response to                                    Wrong reference                        In its response to                                    Reference 10 and ADAMS PRA RAI 13 (Reference 11), the licensee explained                                            PRA RAI 13 (Reference 1110), the licensee            accession number that Unit Nos. 1 and 2 are physically                                                        explained that Unit Nos. 1 and 2 are physically      ML15118A484 separate units and that the partitioning of the                                              separate units and that the partitioning of the plants into PAUs for the FPRA was performed to                                              plants into PAUs for the FPRA was performed to maintain this separation with the exception of                                              maintain this separation with the exception of locations where cable or equipment from both                                                locations where cable or equipment from both units was located.                                                                          units was located.
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Beaver Valley Units 1 and 2 Draft SER Compiled Comments A        B            C            D                                E                                           F                                           G                                     H 20171109  20171109    Paragraph 20171109 Draft SE Statement                                      Comment                Proposed Revised Statement                                  References Draft SE  Draft SE Page    No.
BeaverValleyUnits1and2 DraftSERCompiledCommentsABCD E F G H 2017 11 09DraftSESectionNo.2017 11 09DraftSEPageNo.ParagraphNo.2017 11 09DraftSEStatement CommentProposedRevisedStatementReferences311TitleAmendmentNos.301and190shouldbeinsertedinthetitle.Sametitleasprecedingpage.41,9various"FirstEnergy"shouldbe"FirstEnergy"throughoutdocument.SeelicenseenameinsecondparagraphofdraftSEReference8(ML14002A086).51.243rdfullparagraphonpage-implementunder10CFR50.48(a),and(c)theresults-.Acommaand"and"needtoberearranged.-implementunder10CFR50.48(a)and(c),andtheresults-.62.281TheNRCstaff'sreviewalsoreliedonthefollowingadditionalcodes,RGs,andstandards:
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NUREG 2180isnotlistedIncludeanewbulletfor:NUREG 2180,"Determiningthe Effectiveness,Limitations, andOperatorResponse forVeryEarlyWarning FireDetectionSystemsin NuclearFacilities (DELORES VEWFIRE)"LicenseeresponsetoPRARAI27(Reference17ADAMSAccessionNo.ML17030A312)andPRARAI03(Reference19ADAMSAccessionNo.ML17177A097)72.2114TheNRCstaff'sreviewalsoreliedonthefollowingadditionalcodes,RGs,andstandards:
65    3.4.2.2      139            2    In its response to PRA RAI 14                      PRA RAI 14 response was contained    In its response to PRA RAI 14                      Reference 10, (Reference 11) and PRA RAI 03 (Reference 19),       in Reference 10 (ML15118A484), not    (Reference 10) and PRA RAI 03 (Reference 19),      ML15118A484. (page 41 of the licensee explained that based on a sensitivity Reference 11 (ML15147A372)             the licensee explained that based on a sensitivity 68, or pdf 43/70).
NUREG 1824,Supplement1isnotlisted IncludeabulletforNUREG 1824,"V erificationandValidationofSelectedFireModelsforNuclearPower PlantApplications,Supplement1"orsupplementtheexistingNUREG 1824bulletsimilartotheNUREG/CR 6850bulletanddiscussion.
study, the impact of SOKC was determined to be                                            study, the impact of SOKC was determined to be very small, and therefore, was not included in the                                        very small, and therefore, was not included in the risk estimates in its integrated analysis.                                                risk estimates in its integrated analysis.
NUREG 1824,Supplement1(Reference165ADAMSAccessionNo.ML16309A011)andDraftSERAttachmentAandAttachmentB82.4.1172Thelicenseerequestedthat25exemptionsberescindedforBeaverValley,UnitNo.1.SinceBeaverValley,UnitNo.2,waslicensedtooperateafterJanuary1,1979,licensingactionsassociatedwith10CFR50,AppendixR,werenotissuedasexemptionstotheregulation,andtherefore,thelicenseedidnotrequestthatanyexemptionsberescindedforBeaverValley,UnitNo.2.Thelicenseealsodeterminedthatnoordersneedtobesupers ededorrevisedtoimplementanFPPthatcomplieswith10CFR50.48(c).Thereare26totalexemptionsasidentifiedinthesupplementedAttachmentK(L 17 122ML17111A887)
66    3.4.2.2      139            3    In its response to PRA RAI 15 (Reference 11), the  Wrong reference                      In its response to PRA RAI 15 (Reference 10), the  Reference 10 and ADAMS licensee                                                                                  licensee                                            accession number explained that the HRA used to support the LAR                                            explained that the HRA used to support the LAR      ML15118A484 reflects the guidance in the final July 2012                                              reflects the guidance in the final July 2012 NUREG1921 report, and therefore, there is no                                            NUREG1921 report, and therefore, there is no impact to the risk estimates from using the draft                                        impact to the risk estimates from using the draft version.                                                                                  version.
NoteAttachmentOdidnotincludenewLA11.26(lackoffireextinguishers,identifiedinAttachmentLreview).AttachmentKdescribedbelowliststhecorrectLicensingActionsthatwillandwillnotbetransitioned.Thisshouldbeokay.Onlythingthatneedscorrectedisthatthereare26total,not25.Thelicenseerequestedthat26exemptionsberescindedforBeaverValley,UnitNo.1.SupplementedAttachmentK(L 17 122ML17111A887)EnclosureB 11/28/2017 1of26 BeaverValleyUnits1and2 DraftSERCompiledCommentsABCD E F G H 2017 11 09DraftSESectionNo.2017 11 09DraftSEPageNo.ParagraphNo.2017 11 09DraftSEStatement CommentProposedRevisedStatementReferences92.4.1172Thelicenseerequestedthat25exemptionsberescindedforBeaverValley,UnitNo.1.SinceBeaverValley,UnitNo.2,waslicensedtooperateafterJanuary1,1979,licensingactionsassociatedwith10CFR50,AppendixR,werenotissuedasexemptionstotheregulation,andtherefore,thelicenseedidnotrequestthatanyexemptionsberescindedforBeaverValley,UnitNo.2.Thelicenseealsodeterminedthatnoordersneedtobesupers ededorrevisedtoimplementanFPPthatcomplieswith10CFR50.48(c).Unit2deviationsneedtobedescribed.Thereareatotalof31Unit2LicensingActionswith11ofthethemtransitioning.SinceBeaverValley,UnitNo.2,waslicensedtooperateafterJanuary1,1979,licensingactionsassociatedwith10CFR50,AppendixR,werenotissuedasexemptionstotheregulation,andtherefore,thelicenseedidnotrequestthatanyexemptionsberescindedforBeaverValley,UnitNo.2 ,butwerelistedasdeviations.Thelicenseerequestedthat31deviationsberescindedforBeaverValley,UnitNo.2.SupplementedAttachmentK(L 17 122ML17111A887)EnclosureB;SERSection3.5.1.3102.4.1173TheNRCstaffacceptsthelicensee'sdeterminationthat25exemptionsshouldberescindedforBeaverValley,UnitNo.1,andthatnoordersneedtobesupersededorrevisedtoimplementNFPA805atBeaverValley.(SeeSESection2.5fortheNRCstaff'sdetailedevaluationoftheexemptionsbeingrescinded.)
67    3.4.2.2      140            2    (i.e., Unit No. 1  CDF of                          Unit 2 CDF should be 6.9E05 not      (i.e., Unit No. 1  CDF of 5.9E05/year and LERF of N/A 5.9E05/year and LERF of 4.3E07/year; Unit No. 6.9E05                                4.3E07/year; Unit No. 2  CDF of 6.9E05/year 2  CDF of 6.9E05/year and LERF of                                                        and LERF of 1.8E06/year),
Thereare26totalexemptionsasidentifiedinthesupplementedAttachmentK(L 17 122ML17111A887).
1.8E06/year),
Unit2deviationsneedtobedescribed.Thereareatotalof31Unit2LicensingActionswith11ofthethemtransitioning.
68    3.4.2.2      140            2    "In its response to                                Wrong reference                      "In its response to                                Reference 19 and ADAMS PRA RAI 19 (Reference 12), the licensee provided                                          PRA RAI 19 (Reference 1219), the licensee          accession number the total risk increase associated with                                                  provided the total risk increase associated with    ML17177A097 retained VFDRs without crediting risk reduction                                          retained VFDRs without crediting risk reduction plant modifications."                                                                plant modifications."
TheNRCstaffacceptsthelicensee'sdeterminationthat26exemptionsshouldberescindedforBeaverValley,UnitNo.1,and31devi ationsshouldberescindedforBeaverValley,UnitNo.2,andthatnoordersneedtobesupersededorrevisedtoimplementNFPA805atBeaverValley.(SeeSESection2.5fortheNRCstaff'sdetailedevaluationoftheexemptionsbeingrescinded.SupplementedAttachmentK(L 17 122ML17111A887)EnclosureB;SERSection3.5.1.3112.5202ThelicenseepreviouslyrequestedandreceivedNRCapprovalfor26exemptionsfrom10CFRPart50,AppendixR.TheseexemptionswerediscussedindetailinLARAttachmentK,assupplemented.Thelicenseerequestedthattheexemptionsberescindedandthattheunderlyingengineeringevaluationsfor9ofthe25exemptionsbetransitionedtothenewlicensingbasisunder10CFR50.48(a)and50.48(c),aspreviouslyapproved(NFPA805,Section2.2.7),andcompliantwiththenewregulation.
69    3.4.2.2      142            2    In its response to PRA RAI 03.b (Reference 12)     The response to PRA RAI 03.b is      In its response to PRA RAI 03.b (Reference 19)     Reference 19 Reference 19.                                                                             ML17177A097 20170623 70    3.4.2.2      142            2    Table S 3, to fully apply the guidance contained in Typo  NUREG 2160 should be NUREG Table S 3, to fully apply the guidance contained in N/A NUREG 2160 and NUREG 2178                          2169                                  NUREG 2169 and NUREG 2178 71    3.4.2.2 &  139, 238 &        3,   In PRA RAI 15 (Reference 22), the NRC staff        NUREG1921 is listed in the reference In PRA RAI 15 (Reference 22), the NRC staff        SER Section 9.0 9.0        244      Reference explained that guidance in a draft version of        section twice. Suggest removing      explained that guidance in a draft version of 60, &  NUREG1921, EPRI/NRCRES Fire Human                reference 145 from Section 9.0 and NUREG1921, EPRI/NRCRES Fire Human Reference Reliability Guidelines (Reference 145)             updating reference on page 139 to    Reliability Guidelines (Reference 60) 145                                                        Reference 60 72    3.4.2.3.1      144            1    V &V of these algebraic models is documented in LAR Attachment J and SER                  V&V of these algebraic models is documented in Supplemental Information NUREG1824, Verification and Validation of        Attachment A reference NUREG        NUREG1824, Verification and Validation of        Regarding LAR (Reference Selected Fire Models for Nuclear Power Plant        1824, Supplement 1 as the V&V basis Selected Fire Models for Nuclear Power Plant          18  ADAMS Accession No.
Thisshouldstate6ofthe26exemptionsarebeingtransitioned.ThelicenseepreviouslyrequestedandreceivedNRCapprovalfor26exemptionsfrom10CFRPart50,AppendixR.TheseexemptionswerediscussedindetailinLARAttachmentK,assupplemented.Thelicenseerequestedthattheexemptionsberescindedandthattheunderlyingengineeringevaluationsfor6ofthe26exemptionsbetransitionedtothenewlicensingbasisunder10CFR50.48(a)and50.48(c),aspreviouslyapproved(NFPA805,Section2.2.7),andcompliantwiththenewregulation.SupplementedAttachmentK(L 17 122ML17111A887)EnclosureB;SERSection3.5.1.3122.5224Thefollowingexemptionsarerescinded,buttheengineeringevaluationoftheunderlyingconditionwillbeusedasaqualitativeengineeringevaluationfortransitiontoNFPA805(seeSESection3.5.1.1): Thisshouldstate(seeSESection3.5.1.3)Thefollowingexemptionsarerescinded,buttheengineeringevaluationoftheunderlyingconditionwillbeusedasaqualitativeengineeringevaluationfortransitiontoNFPA805(seeSESection3.5.1.3):SupplementedAttachmentK(L 17 122ML17111A887)EnclosureB;SERSection3.5.1.3 11/28/2017 2of26 BeaverValleyUnits1and2 DraftSERCompiledCommentsABCD E F G H 2017 11 09DraftSESectionNo.2017 11 09DraftSEPageNo.ParagraphNo.2017 11 09DraftSEStatement CommentProposedRevisedStatementReferences132.522N/ATheUnit2Deviationsneedtobeaddedtothissection.ThefollowingdeviationsarerescindedasrequestedbytheLAR.TheunderlyingconditionhasbeenevaluatedusingRI/PBmethodsandfoundtobeacceptablewithnofurtheractions,becausethephilosophyofDIDandsufficientsafetymarginsaremaintained(numberingschemeprovidedbythelicensee):All31deviationsneedlisted,withthe11deviationsthatwillbetransitioningalsolisted.SupplementedAttachmentK(L 17 122ML17111A887)EnclosureB;SERSection3.5.1.3142.6.1251DeterministicApproach:ComplywithNFPA805,Chapter2 ,andSection4.2.3requirements;orNFPA805Chapter3DeterministicApproach:ComplywithNFPA805,Chapter3 ,andSection4.2.3requirements;orNFPA805Chapter3152.6.2281Accordingly,thesecauseandeffectrelationshipmodelsmaybeusedaftertransitiontoNFPA805asapartoftheFREsconductedtodeterminethechangeinriskassociatedwithproposedplantchanges.BVplanstousetheChangeEvaluationProcessdiscussedinNFPA805Sections2.2(h),2.2.9&2.4.4forallfutureplantmodificationorotherchangestotheFireProtectionProgram(FPP).BVplanstofollowtheguidanceinRG1.205RegulatoryPositionC.3.2"NFPA805PlantChangeEvaluationProcess." BVdoesnotintendtousetheFireRiskEvaluationProcessdiscussedinNF PA805Section4.2.4.2.ThisprocesswasfollowedduringthetransitiontoNFPA805asdiscussedinRG1.205RegulatorPositionC2.4.Accordingly,thesecauseandeffectrelationshipmodelsmaybeusedaftertransitiontoNFPA805asapartoftheChangeEvaluationProcessconductedtodeterminethechangeinriskassociatedwithproposedplantchanges.RG1.205(Reference4ML092730314)162.7.1281Asdescribedbelow,LARAttachmentS,TableS2,"PlantModificationsCommitted,"assupplemented,providesadescriptionofeachoftheproposedplantmodifications,presentstheproblemstatementexplainingwhythemodificationisneeded,andidentifiesthecompensatoryactionsrequire dtobeinplacependingcompletion/implementationofthemodification.
Applications, Volumes 3 and 4 (Reference 57). for the algebraic models. Update          Applications, Supplement 1 Volumes 3 and 4        ML17111A887) accordingly                          (Reference 165).
AttachmentSdoesnot"identifythecompensatoryactionsrequiredtobeinplace",itonlyindicateswhetheracompensatorymeasureisrequiredornot.Asdescribedbelow,LARAttachmentS,TableS2,"PlantModificationsCommitted,"assupplemented,providesadescriptionofeachoftheproposedplantmodifications,presentstheproblemstatementexplainingwhythemodificationisneeded,andidentifiesifacompensatoryactionsisrequiredtobeinplacependingcompletion/implementationofthemodification.SupplementedAttachmentS(L 17 122ML17111A887)EnclosureD 11/28/2017 3of26 BeaverValleyUnits1and2 DraftSERCompiledCommentsABCD E F G H 2017 11 09DraftSESectionNo.2017 11 09DraftSEPageNo.ParagraphNo.2017 11 09DraftSEStatement CommentProposedRevisedStatementReferences172.7.2292EachimplementationitemwillbecompletedpriortothedeadlineforimplementationoftheRI/PBFPPbasedonNFPA805asspecifiedinthelicenseconditionsandthelettertransmittingtheamendedlicense(i.e.,implementationperiod),whichstatesthatthelicenseewillimplementtheitemslistedinLARAttachmentS,TableS 3,assupplementedonAugu st22,2017,12monthsafterNRCissuanceofthelicenseamendments.
73    3.4.2.3.1     144            3    This HGL correlation is described in NUREG1805, LAR Attachment J and SER                This HGL correlation is described in NUREG1805, Supplemental Information and its V&V is documented in NUREG1824,            Attachment A reference NUREG        and its V&V is documented in NUREG1824,            Regarding LAR (Reference Volume 3.                                           1824, Supplement 1 as MQH's HGL      Supplement 1.                                       18  ADAMS Accession No.
TableS 3,assupplementedonAug.22,2017(Reference20),includesacaveatthatcertainspecificallyidentifiedimplementationitemswillnotbecompleteinthe12monthtransitionperiod;insteadthosespecificitems(generallyrelatedtoFPRAupdatestoaccountforfinalas builtconfigurationofmods)willbeimplementedwithin2refuelingoutagesconsistentwiththeS 2modificationimplementationschedule.EachimplementationitemwillbecompletedpriortothedeadlineforimplementationoftheRI/PBFPPbasedonNFPA805asspecifiedinthelicenseconditionsandthelettertransmittingtheamendedlicense(i.e.,implementationperiod),whichstatesthatthelicenseewillimplementtheitemslistedinLARAttachmentS,TableS 3,assupplementedonAugust22,2017,12monthsafterNRCissuanceofthelicenseamendments
Correlation V&V basis. Update                                                            ML17111A887) accordingly 11/28/2017                                                                                                    13 of 26
,exceptforthoseitemsspecificallymarkedtobeimplementedaccordingtotheTableS 2modificationimplementationschedule.Reference18(ML17111A887),Note1attheendofTableS 3onPageS 19(pdf261/261)183.1.1.234bulletlist Onesectionshouldbeaddedtothislist:section3.3.6.Ref12providedatableofsectionsthatneedtobechangedfrom"C omplieswithClarification"toeither"Complies"or"ComplieswithuseofEEEE".Ref14providedanupdatetothattable-Table5b.01.ThethirditemisSection3.3.6withacompliancestatementof"ComplieswithUseofEEEE-FunctionallyEquivalent."
 
OthersectionsclassifiedlikethisaregivenanexplanationinthedraftSER,confirmingthattheEEEEdemonstratesthebasisforbeingacceptable.Addanevaluationof3.3.6,Roofs,basedonFPERAI05.02andTable5b.01 Reference14 11/28/2017 4of26 BeaverValleyUnits1and2 DraftSERCompiledCommentsABCD E F G H 2017 11 09DraftSESectionNo.2017 11 09DraftSEPageNo.ParagraphNo.2017 11 09DraftSEStatement CommentProposedRevisedStatementReferences193.1.1.2361ThelicenseefurtherstatedthattheengineeringanalysisdeterminedthatthemajorityoftheelectriccablesusedwithinthepowerblockareequivalenttotherequirementsofNFPA805,Section3.3.5.3,andthelowpopulationofelectriccableswithpotentiallynonqualifiedelectriccableinsulationmaterialsinstalledinelectricalracewaysisacceptable.TheNRCstaffconcludesthatthelicensee'sresponsetotheRAIisacceptablebecausethelicenseedemonstratedthatitusedengineeringevaluationstocompareitscableinstallationsagainstthecriteriaofNFPA805andtheguidanceofFAQ060022anddeterminedthattheinsulationmaterialsareacceptable.
Beaver Valley Units 1 and 2 Draft SER Compiled Comments A        B            C            D                                E                                             F                                               G                                       H 20171109  20171109    Paragraph  20171109 Draft SE Statement                                      Comment                    Proposed Revised Statement                                  References Draft SE  Draft SE Page    No.
Afollow upRAIwasissuedregardingNF PA805Section3.3.5.3(FPERAI04.01L 15 371ML15356A136),withtheresponsestatingthatapprovalwillberequestedasanAttachmentLItem.TheAttachmentLItemwassubmittedasApprovalRequest6.(L 16 058ML16055A160).ThisshouldbeupdatedtoreflecttheApprov alRequest,whichisidentifiedinSESection3.1.4.6 SeeSEpage194forsamecomment.Add:InFPERAI04.01(Reference25),theNRCstaffstatedIntheengineeringevaluation,thelicenseeconcludedthatthelowpopulationof cablesthatdonotmeetInstituteofElectricalandElectronicsEngineers(IEEE)Standard383,1974Edition,orequivalent,wer econsideredinthefiremodeling evaluationanddeterminedtobeadequateforthehazard.Inaccordancewith FAQ06 0008,thistypeofEEEEcannotbeselfapprovedbythelicensee.InitsresponsetoFPERAI04.01(Reference14),thelicenseestatedthatthecompliancestrategyforNFPA805Section3.3.5.3,forthelowpopulationofcableswithpotentiallynon qualifiedelectricalcableinsulationmaterialinstalledinelectricalracewaysatBVPS 1andBVPS 2willberevisedto"SubmitforNRCApproval"FPERAI04.01(L 15 371ML15356A136);L 16 058(ML16055A160);SERSection3.1.4.6(pg90)203.1.1.2422125VentilationDuctChase(VDC)Incorrectacronym 125VoltsDirectCurrentLARAcronymList213.1.1.2433Thelicenseestatedthatthehalonsystems infirecompartments1CV3,1DG1,1DG2,and2SB3havebeenanalyzedforoverpressurizationconditionsfortheareaanddeterminedthatnoadditionalvent sarerequired.Halonisonlyinstalledin1 CV 3.CO2isinstalledin1 DG 1,1 DG 2,and2 SB 3.Thelicenseestatedthatthehalonsysteminfirecompartment1CV3andCO2systemsinfirecompartments
Section No.     No.
,1DG1,1DG2,and2SB3havebeenanalyzedforoverpressurizationconditionsfortheareaanddeterminedthatnoadditionalventsarerequired.FPERAI05.02(a)(L 15 371ML15356A136);originalLARAttachmentA,TableB 13.10.3recordsfor1 DG 1,1 DG 2,and2 SB 3.223.1.1.3462InFPERAI7b(Reference22),theNRCstaffstatedthatinLARAttachmentA,TableB1,thelicenseestatedinfireareas2CB1and2PA3thatthe3MInteramE50seriesblanketassemblieswereevaluatedinanengineeringevaluationtoprovidea1hourfireresistanceratingforductworkanda2hourfireresistancefortheprotectionofthe11/2hourfiredampers Typo:FPERAI17b InFP ERAI17b(Reference22)SERReference22233.1.1.3462ThelicenseestatedthatthecompliancestrategyforNFPA805,Section3.11.5forfirecompartments2CB1,2CV1,2CV3,2PA3,2PA4,2SB3,and2SB4willberevisedtodeletereferencestofirebarriersforductwork,andthecompliancestrategyforNFPA805,Section3.11forfirecompartment2CB1willberevisedtoincludetheresultsoftheengineer ingevaluationregardingfirebarriersforductwork.Typo:NFPA805,Section3.11.2NFPA805,Section3.11.2 L 15 150ML15147A372pg54 11/28/2017 5of26 BeaverValleyUnits1and2 DraftSERCompiledCommentsABCD E F G H 2017 11 09DraftSESectionNo.2017 11 09DraftSEPageNo.ParagraphNo.2017 11 09DraftSEStatement CommentProposedRevisedStatementReferences243.1.1.3462InaletterdatedOctober25,2017(Reference21),thelicenseeindicatedthischangewasmade.ThisstatementisnotcontainedwithinRef21forthisparagraph(itisconfusedwiththepreviousparagraph).InAttachmentLApprovalRequest5,datedFebruary24,2016(Reference15),thelicenseeindicatedthischangewasmade.Reference15253.1.1.4523oInLARAttachmentA,thelicenseestatedthatinfirecompartments2SB1,2SB2,2SB3,2SB4,2SB5,2SB6,2SB7,2SB8,2SB9,2WH1,and3CR1thereareHVACductpenetrationsinthebarrierbetweentheaffectedfireareaandadjacentfirecompartmentsthatareprotectedbytwo11/2hourfirerateddampersinseries,andadeviationforusingtwo11/2hourfiredampersinlieuofone3hourfiredamper,andinfirecompartment2PA3ventilationductworkiswrappedwith1hourfirewrapmaterialtoextendthefirebarriersinlieuoffiredampersatthebarriers.Thefollowingadditionalcompartmentsstatethatductworkiswrappedwith1hourfirewrapmaterialtoextendthebarrier,asnotedinLARAttachmentA:2 SB 3,oInLARAttachmentA,thelicenseestatedthatinfirecompartments2SB1,2SB2,2SB3 ,2SB4,2SB5,2SB6,2SB7,2SB8,2SB9,2WH1,and3CR1thereareHVACductpenetrationsinthebarrierbetweentheaffectedfireareaandadjacentfirecompartmentsthatareprotectedbytwo11/2hourfirerateddampersinseries,andadeviationforusingtwo11/2hourfiredampersinlieuofone3hourfiredamper,andinfirecompartment2PA3and2SB3ventilationductworkiswrappedwith1hourfirewrapmaterialtoextendthefirebarriersinlieuoffiredampersatthebarrier s.LARTableB 1TransitionofFundamentalFireProtectionProgramandDesignElementsWorksheetFireProtectionFeatures TransitionReportBVPS 2A2pages284263.1.1.4521stbulletInLARAttachmentA,thelicenseestatedthatfiredoorsthatarenot3hourfireratedareinstalledinfirecompartments1CR2,1CR4,1CS1,1CV1,1CV2,1ES1,1ES2,1FB1,1MG1,1MS1,1NS1,1PA1E,1PA1G,1PT1,1SGPD1,1TB1,3CR1,3IS1,3IS2,3IS3,3IS4,and3IS6.Thefollowi ngadditionalcompartmentswerenotedinLARAttachmentA:1 PA 1A,1 PA1C,1 PA GA,1 PA GB,1 PA GC.InLARAttachmentA,thelicenseestatedthatfiredoorsthatarenot3hourfireratedareinstalledinfirecompartments1CR2,1CR4,1CS1,1CV1,1CV2,1ES1,1ES2,1FB1,1MG1,1MS1,1NS1,1 PA 1A,1 PA1C,1PA1E,1PA1G,1 PA GA,1 PA GB,1 PA GC,1PT1,1SGPD1,1TB1,3CR1,3IS1,3IS2,3IS3,3IS4,and3IS6.LARTableB 1TransitionofFundamentalFir eProtectionProgramandDesignElementsWorksheetFireProtectionFeatures TransitionReportBVPS 1A2pages259,266,298,304,310,273.1.1.4522ndbulletInLARAttachmentA,thelicenseestatedthatinfirecompartments2ASP,2CB1,2CB6,2CV1,2CV2,2CV3,2CV5,2CV6,2FB1,2PA4,and2PA5,thereare(HVACductpenetrationsinthebarrierbetweentheaffectedfirecompartment-Firecompartment2 SG 1S(3.11.2)isnotlisted,butwasidentifiedintheFPERAI02TableforNFPA805Section3.11.2.InLARAttachmentA,thelicenseestatedthatinfirecompartments2ASP,2CB1,2CB6,2CV1,2CV2,2CV3,2CV5,2CV6,2FB1,2PA4,and2PA5,and2 SG 1S,thereare(HVACductpenetrationsinthebarrierbetweentheaffectedfirecompartment-FPERAI02(L 15 150ML15147A372pg11)283.1.1.4523rdBulletoInLARAttachmentA,thelicenseestatedthatinfirecompartments2SB1,2SB2,2SB3,2SB4,2SB5,2SB6,2SB7,2SB8,2SB9,2WH1,and3CR1thereareHVACductpenetrationsinthebarrierbetweentheaffectedfireareaandadjacentfirecompartmentsthatareprotectedbytwo11/2hourfirerateddampersinseries,andadeviationforusingtwo11/2hourfiredampersinlieuofone3hourfiredamper,Fir eCompartments2 PT 1,2 SG 1Sarenotlisted,butwereidentifiedintheFPERAI02TableforNFPA805Section3.11.3.InLARAttachmentA,thelicenseestatedthatinfirecompartments2 PT 1, 2SB1,2SB2,2SB3,2SB4,2SB5,2SB6,2SB7,2SB8,2SB9,2 SG 1S,2WH1,and3CR1FPERAI02(L 15 150ML15147A372pgs9,11)293.1.1.4541NFPA805Section3.11.3FireCompartment2 RC 1isnotdescribedinthissection,butwaslistedintheFPERAI02TableforNFPA805Section3.11.3.Add:InLARAttachmentA,thelicenseestatedthatinfirecompartment2 RC 1,thecontainmentaccesshatchdoesnotcontainaULlabelorcertificationoffiretesting-.FPERAI02(L 15 150ML15147A372pg9);SERSection3.5.1pg19311/28/2017 6of26 BeaverValleyUnits1and2 DraftSERCompiledCommentsABCD E F G H 2017 11 09DraftSESectionNo.2017 11 09DraftSEPageNo.ParagraphNo.2017 11 09DraftSEStatement CommentProposedRevisedStatementReferences303.1.1.4541NFPA805Section3.11.3FireCompartments2 TR 1,2 TR 2,2 TR 3arenotdescribedbutwereintheFPERAI02TableforNFPA805Section3.11.2tostatethecompliancebasischangedfrom"CompliesbyPreviousApproval"to"Performance based evaluation".Add:AlsoinitsresponsetoFPERAI02,thelicenseereviseditscompliancestrategytoremove"CompliancebyPreviousApproval"tocreditaperformance basedevaluationforfirecompartments2 TR 1,2 TR 2,and2 TR 3.FPERAI02(L 15 150ML15147A372pgs11)313.1.1.5555thbulletSection3.11.3,whichconcernstherequirementthatthelistedfireresistanceratingforfiredampersisconsistentwiththedesignatedfireresistanceratingofthebarrie rasdeterminedbytheperformancerequirementsestablishedbyChapter4.ThelicenseerequestedNRCapprovalfortheuseofaPBmethodtojustifytheuseoftwo1.5hourratedfiredampersinserieswitha1hourfirewrapontheductworkinsteadofa3hourfiredamper,therebymeetingtherequirementsofNFPA805.SeeSESection3.1.4.5.AdddiscussiontoalignwithSection3.1.4.5sinceinthesupplementedAttachmentL,ApprovalRequest5doesnotidentify"1 hourfirewrap".(L 16 162ML16133A340pageL 1)Add:IntherevisedApprovalRequest5,approvalwasrequestedfortheuseoffiredamperconfigurationsthatcontaintwo1.5 hourfiredampersinseriesasfollows:1.Two1.5 hourfiredampersinserieslocatedwithinthefirebarrierand2.Two1.5 hourfiredampersinserieswi thonelocatedwithinthefirebarrierandonelocatedcloseto,butoutside,thefirebarrier.L 16 162ML16133A340pageL 1;SERsection3.1.4.5page84.323.1.1.6623NFPA805,Section3.4.3(a),...ThelicenseeincludedthisactioninLARAttachmentS,TableS 3,assupplemented,ImplementationIte mBV1 2371.TheLARAttachmentS,TableS 3thatrequiresupdateoffirebrigadeprocedureisBV1 3020.NFPA805,Section3.4.3(a),...ThelicenseeincludedthisactioninLARAttachmentS,TableS 3,assupplemented,ImplementationItemBV1 3020.Reference8andADAMSaccessionnumberML14002A086 333.1.1.6631InLARAttachmentA,thelicenseeidentifiedanactiontoverifyflowratenozzlepressureforallhosestationsuponcompletionthehydrauliccalculations.ThisdoesnotalignwithwhatLARAttachmentA,Section3.6.2stated:"WillComplyWithUseOfCommitment Thecapabilitytoensureanadequatewaterflowrateandnozzlepressurewillbeverifieduponcompletionofhydrauliccalculations." InLARAttachmentA,thelicenseeidentifiedanactiontoverifythereisanadequatewaterflowrateandnozzlepressureforallhosestationsbycompletionofhydrauliccalculations.
74    3.4.2.3.1      144            4      In LAR Section 4.5.1.2, the licensee identified the LAR Section 4.5.1.2 does not provide      In LAR Attachment J, the licensee identified the use of the following empirical correlations that a list of empirical correlations. This        use of the following empirical correlations that are not addressed in NUREG1824, Volumes 3          needs to be verified.                      are not addressed in NUREG1824, Volumes 3 and 4.                                                                                         and 4.
Reference8andADAMSaccessionnumberML14002A086343.1.1.6632NFPA805,Section3.8.2,-ThelicenseeidentifiedactionsinLARAttachmentS,TableS 2,assupplemented,ModificationsBV1 1875,BV1 2839,BV1 2840,BV1 2841,andLARAttachmentS,TableS3,assupplemented,ImplementationItemsBV1 2826,BV2 0487,andBV2 1022.ItemBV2 0487isforCO2dischargetesting.BV2 1022isfordieselroomve ntilationfancontrol.NeitherofthesearerelatedtoNFPA72,northediscussedfirecompartments.Theyshouldberemovedfromthisparagraph.NFPA805,Section3.8.2,-ThelicenseeidentifiedactionsinLARAttachmentS,TableS 2,assupplemented,ModificationsBV1 1875,BV1 2839,BV1 2840,BV1 2841,andLARAttachmentS,TableS3,assupplemented,ImplementationItem sBV1 2826 ,BV2 0487,andBV2 1022.Reference8andADAMSaccessionnumberML14002A086353.1.1.6652ndparagraph ThelicenseeincludedtheseactionsinLARAttachmentS,TableS3,assupplemented,ImplementationItemsBV13041andBV1 1576.ThisshouldbeBV2 1576.ThelicenseeincludedtheseactionsinLARAttachmentS,TableS3,assupplemented,ImplementationItemsBV13041andBV2 1576.Ref18ML17111A8872017 04 21,EnclosureB,Att.K 11/28/2017 7of26 BeaverValleyUnits1and2 DraftSERCompiledCommentsABCD E F G H 2017 11 09DraftSESectionNo.2017 11 09DraftSEPageNo.ParagraphNo.2017 11 09DraftSEStatement CommentProposedRevisedStatementReferences363.1.2681AsstatedinLARSection4.1.3,thepowerblockincludesstructuresthatcontainequipmentthatcouldaffectplantoperationforpowergeneration,equipmentimportanttosafety,equipmentthatcouldaffecttheabilitytomaintaintheNSCAintheeventofafire,orstructurescontainingradioactivematerialsthatcouldpotentiallybereleasedintheeventofafire.Theword susedinsection4.1.3state"structuresthathaveequipmentrequiredfornuclearplantoperations." Itdoesnotspecificallystate"structuresthatcontainequipmentthatcouldaffectplantoperationforpowergeneration,equipmentimportanttosafety,equipmentthatcouldaffecttheabilitytomaintaintheNSCAintheeventofafire,orstructurescontainingradioactivematerialsthatcouldpotentiallybereleasedintheeventofafire." AsstatedinLARSection4.1.3,thepowerblockincludesstructuresthathaveequipmentrequiredfornuclearplantoperationsasidentifiedinLARAttachmentI,TableI 1,"BeaverValley,UnitNo.1PowerBlockDefinition,"andLARAttachmentI,TableI 2,"BeaverValley,UnitNo.2Powe rBlockDefinition
75    3.4.2.3.1      144          14      All algebraic fire models and empirical            Algebraic fire models and empirical        All algebraic fire models and empirical            LAR Attachment J, Page J13 correlations were implemented in a database        correlations were not implemented          correlations were implemented in a database and workbook referred to as the Fire Modeling      into a database.                           and workbook referred to as the Fire Modeling      Reference 18, Workbook (FMWB).                                                                               Workbook (FMWB).                                   ML17111A887, 20170421, Enclosure A, Page J14 76    3.4.2.3.1      144        4, 2nd    "Ceiling Jet Temperature, Method of Alpert          Remove ceiling jet temperature            "Ceiling Jet Temperature, Method of Alpert        Section 6.2, NUREG1824, bullet    (Reference 150)"                                   correlation from this bulleted list. It is (Reference 150)"                                   Volume 4 (Reference 57)
." Reference9andADAMSaccessionnumberML14002A086373.1.3.2686InLARAttachmentS,TableS 2,assupplemented,ModificationItemsBV1 1875andBV2 0829,thelicenseeproposedtheinstallationofveryearlywarningfiredetectionsystems(VEWFDS)inlowvoltagecabinetslocatedinfirecompartments1 CR 4,2 CB 1,and2 CB 6LARTableS 2itemBV1 2854w illinstallincipientdetectioninaninvertercabinetgreaterthan250V(treatedasapowercabinetperNUREG 2180)consistentwiththeLARAttachmentSSupplementandtheresponsetoPRARAI27."InLA RAttachmentS,TableS 2,assupplemented,ModificationItemsBV1 1875 ,BV1 2854,andBV2 0829,thelicenseeproposedtheinstallationofveryearlywarningfiredetectionsystems(VEWFDS)inlowvoltage selectcabinetslocatedinfirecompartments1 CR 4,2 CB 1,and2 CB 6" Reference17,ML17030A312,2017 01 30,AttachmentPage2andReference18,ML17111A887,2017 04 21,Att3Page2andEnclosureDPageS 12.383.1.3.2698Thelicenseefurtherstatedthatsensitivitytestingwillincludethegainandalarmthresholds,andthateachdetectorwillhav eanassociatedsetpointdocumentthatcontainsthealarmsetpoints,whichwillbesubjecttodesigncontrolprogramrequirements.Thisshouldbechangedto"sensitivitysettings."Thelicenseefurtherstatedthatsensitivitysettingswillincludethegainandalarmthresholds,andthateachdetectorwillhav eanassociatedsetpointdocumentthatcontainsthealarmsetpoints,whichwillbesubjecttodesigncontrolprogramrequirements.FPERAI15B(L 15 118ML15118A484pg11of68)393.1.3.2704InitsresponsetoFPERAI15f(Reference12),thelicenseestatedthattheVEWFDSwillbeconnectedtointerfacewiththecontrolroomannunciationsystem,andthatLARAttachmentS,TableS2,assupplemented,wasrevisedtoincludethemodification.ThelicenseeincludedthisactioninaletterdatedApril21,2017,inLARAttachmentS,TableS2,assupplemented,ModificationBV13110.BothBV1&2modificationshavebeencompleted.ItemsBV1 3110andBV2 1624"InterfacetheUnit1/2IncipientFireDetectionSystemwiththeMainControlRoomAnnunciatorSystem"wereaddedtoTableS 1 InitsresponsetoFPERAI15f(Reference1 1),thelicenseestatedthattheVEWFDSwillbeconnectedtointerfacewiththecontrolroomannunciationsystem,andthatLARAttachmentS,TableS2,assupplemented,wasrevisedtoincludethemodification.Themodificationshavebeencompleted.ThelicenseeincludedthisactioninaletterdatedApril21,2017,inLARAttachmentS,TableS1 ,assupplemented,Modification sBV13110andBV2 1624.Reference18andADAMSaccessionnumberML17111A887 403.1.3.2;3.2.6.1 70;122 4;9...inaletterdatedApril21,2017,-IncludeareferencetotheUtility'sletter....inaletterdatedApril21,2017(Reference18),...SEReference18,ML17111A887,L 17 122,Attachment3pg1andUpdatedpgS 8(pdfPg250)11/28/2017 8of26 BeaverValleyUnits1and2 DraftSERCompiledCommentsABCD E F G H 2017 11 09DraftSESectionNo.2017 11 09DraftSEPageNo.ParagraphNo.2017 11 09DraftSEStatement CommentProposedRevisedStatementReferences413.1.3.2711ThedetaileddiscussionoftheVEWFDSinresponsetoFPERAI15e,suchasoperatorandoperatorresponsecreditedintheNSCA,isincludedinSESection3.2.6.IncludeareferenceforFPERAI15e.ThedetaileddiscussionoftheVEWFDSinresponsetoFPERAI15e(Reference11),suchasoperatorandoperatorresponsecreditedintheNS CA,isincludedinSESection3.2.6.SEReference11,ML15147A372,L 15 150,Pg52423.1.3.2712TheNRCconcludesthatthelicensee'sresponsetoFPERAI15acandRAI15fisacceptablebecausethelicenseedemonstratedthatthedesign,installation,maintenance,andoperationoftheVEWFDSisinaccordancewiththeguidancecontainedinFAQ080046,andthealarmannunciationsystemwillcomplywiththerequirementsofNFPA805,Section3.8,subjecttocompletionofLARAttachmentS,TableS2,ModificationBV13110"FPERAI15a c"shouldbe"FRERAI15a d"sincetheFPERAI15discussionincludeda,b,c&d.Also"TableS 2.ModificationBV1 3110"shouldbe"TableS 1,ModificationItemsBV1 3110andBV2 1624" TheNRCconcludesthatthelicensee'sresponsetoFPERAI15adandRAI15fisacceptablebecausethelicenseedemonstratedthatthedesign,installation,maintenance,andoperationoftheVEWFDSisinaccordancewiththeguidancecontainedinFAQ080046,andthealarmannunciationsystemwillcompl ieswiththerequirementsofNFPA805,Section3.8,asindicatedbycompletionofLARAttachmentS,TableS1 ,ModificationItemsBV13110andBV2 1624.Reference10andADAMSaccessionnumberML151184A484 Reference18andADAMSaccessionnumberML17111A887433.1.3.3713InitsresponsetoFPERAI01(Reference12)FPERAI01responseisincludedinReference11 InitsresponsetoFPERAI01(Reference1 1)LetterdatedMay27,2015443.1.3.3724inaccordancewithTableFPE01ofitsresponsetoFPERAI01(Reference12),FPERAI01responseisincludedinReference11 inaccordancewithTableFPE01ofitsresponsetoFPERAI01(Reference1 1),LetterdatedMay27,2015453.1.4.6914Thelicenseestatedthatforthethermoplastic/unknowncabletypes,itassumedboundingcasethermoplasticflamepropagation/spread,HRRs,andthermaldamagecriteriaintheFManalysis.ThelicenseefurtherstatedthattheFManalysisassumedaboundingcase(thermoplastic)flamepropagation/spreadrate,HRR,andthermaldamagecriteriaforracewayscontainingamixtureofthermoplasticandthermosetcabletypes,andthatthisresultsinaconservativeandboundingFManalysiswithregardtocablematerialtypesandassociatedflamepropagationrates.Cabletrayswithmixedthermoplasticandthermosetdonotalwaysuseboundingcasethermoplastic.Rather,themethodusedatBVPSisconsistentwithormoreconservativethantheguidanceinNUREG/CR 7010.Thelicenseestatedthatforthethermoplastic/unknow ncabletypes,itassumedboundingcasethermoplasticflamepropagation/spread,HRRs,andthermaldamagecriteriaintheFManalysis.ThelicenseefurtherstatedthattheFManalysisassumedaboundingcase(thermoplastic) isconsistentwithormoreconservativethantheapprovedguidance(i.e.,NUREG/CR 7010, NUREG/CR 6850)withregardstoflamepropagation/spreadrate,HRR,andthermaldamagecriteriaforracewayscontainingamixtureofthermoplasticandthermosetcabletypes,andthatthisresultsinaconservativeandboundingFManalysiswithregardtocablematerialtypesandassociatedflamepropagationrates.LetterL 17 358 DRAFTSERAttachmentA,Page8463.2.110510...AsdescribedinSection4.2.1.1andAttachmentBoftheLAR,thelicenseeperformedareviewagainsttheguidanceofNEI00 01,Revision2,toidentifysubstantivechangesfromNEI00 01,Revision1,thatareapplicabletotheNFPA805transition.-
V&V'd per Section 6.2 of NUREG 1824                                                                                          Supplemental Information Regarding LAR (Reference 18  ADAMS Accession No.
UnabletolocateinAttachmentBadescriptionofthereferencedreview.ThisisonlydescribedinLARSection4.2.1.1....AsdescribedinSection4.2.1.1andAttachmentBoftheLAR,thelicenseeperformedareviewagainsttheguidanceofNEI00 01,Revision2,toidentifysubstantivechangesfromNEI00 01,Revision1,thatareapplicabletotheNFPA805transition.-
ML17111A887),
ADAMSPackageAccessionNo.ML14002A086(LARAttachmentB).11/28/2017 9of26 BeaverValleyUnits1and2 DraftSERCompiledCommentsABCD E F G H 2017 11 09DraftSESectionNo.2017 11 09DraftSEPageNo.ParagraphNo.2017 11 09DraftSEStatement CommentProposedRevisedStatementReferences473.2.11064InSafeShutdownAnalysis(SSD)RAI01(Reference22),theNRCstaff...requestedthatthelicenseeclarifythediscrepancy.InitsresponsetoSSDRAI01(Reference10),thelicenseestated-Typo:theresponsetoSSDRAI01isinReference11,notReference10.InSafeShutdownAnalysis(SSD)RAI01(Reference22),theNRCstaff...requestedthatthelicenseeclarifythediscrepancy.InitsresponsetoSSDRAI01(Reference11),thelicenseestated-Reference11,ADAMSaccessionnumberML15147A372,AttachmentL 15 150,Page56.483.2.1.41122...Thelicenseestatedthatdecayheatisremovedbyuseofanaturalcirculationcooldownandsteamreleasebythemainsteamsafetyvalv esandmanualoperationofatmosphericdumpvalvesorRHRandthatAFWiscreditedtosupplycoolingwatertotheSGs...The"RHR"abbreviationisambiguousinthiscontext:recommendthisbeclarifiedtodistinguishbetweentheRHRValveandtheRHRSystem.TheRHRSystemisnotcreditedforHotStandby,whiletheRHRValveisanalternativetotheatmosphericdumpvalves....Thelicenseestatedthatdecayheatisremovedbyuseofanaturalcirculationcooldownandsteamreleasebythemainsteamsafetyvalvesandmanualoperationofatmosphericdumpvalv esorRHRvalveandthatAFWiscreditedtosupplycoolingwatertotheSGs...Section2.2.2,Page115,under"DecayHeatRemoval".493.2.1.51134...ThelicenseefurtherstatedthattheturnsratioanalysisisbaseduponNUREG/CR7150,"JointAssessmentofCableDamageandQuantificationofEffectsfromFire(JACQUEFIRE),Volume2:ExpertElicitationExerciseforNuclearPowe rPlantFireInducedElectricalCircuitFailure"(Reference128),whichconcluded...
Supplemented LAR Attachment J 77    3.4.2.3.1      145            1      The licensees screening was based on the 98th      HRRs from NUREG2178 are also              The licensees screening was based on the 98th    DRAFT SER Section 3.4.2.2 percentile fire HRR from the NUREG/CR6850          used.                                      percentile fire HRR from the NUREG/CR6850 methodology (Reference 51).                                                                    methodology (Reference 51) and NUREG2178          Response to PRA RAI 03.b (Reference 140).                                   (Reference 19), Attachment 1, Page 8 78    3.4.2.3.1      145            5      V&V of CFAST and FDS is documented in NUREG NUREG1824, Supplement 1 used as V&V of CFAST and FDS is documented in NUREG Supplemental Information 1824, Volumes 5 and 7, respectively.                the V&V basis for FDS Version 6            1824, Volumes 5 and 7, respectively as well as    Regarding LAR (Reference analyses                                  NUREG1824, Supplement 1 (Reference 165).         18  ADAMS Accession No.
Typo:Volume2ofJACQUEFIREisReference141,not128....ThelicenseefurtherstatedthattheturnsratioanalysisisbaseduponNUREG/CR7150,"JointAssessmentofCableDamageandQuantificationofEffectsfromFir e(JACQUEFIRE),Volume2:ExpertElicitationExerciseforNuclearPowerPlantFireInducedElectricalCircuitFailure"(Reference141),whichconcluded...
ML17111A887),
Section9.0,Page244,Reference141.503.2.41196...TheresultsoftheMSOexpertpaneldiscussionswereaddedtoeachofthesetables;andTheMSOsthatwereaddedtotheNSCAandresultedinfailuresaredocumentedasVFDRs,andresolutionsaredocumentedinLARAttachmentB,TableB 3.TableB 3isnotLARAtt.BbutisLARAtt.C...TheresultsoftheMSOexpertpaneldiscussionswereaddedtoeachofthesetables;andTheMSOsthatwereaddedtotheNSCAandresultedinfailuresaredocumentedasVFDRs,andresolutionsaredocumentedinLARAttachmentC ,TableB 3.Reference9andADAMSaccessionnumberML14002A086513.2.51206AsdescribedinLARSection4.2.1.3,thelicensee'sprocessisbasedonthemethodologyofFAQ07 0030(Reference131)andconsistedofthefollowingsteps: ThereferenceforFAQ07 0030isReference72.ThereferenceforFAQ07 0030isnotReference131.AsdescribedinLARSection4.2.1.3,thelicensee'sprocessisbasedonthemethodologyofFAQ07 0030(Reference72)andconsistedofthefollowi ngsteps: Reference72523.2.6.11226InLARAttachmentS,TableS 2,assupplemented,ModificationItemsBV1 1875andBV2 0829,thelicenseeindicatedthataVEWFDSwillbeaddedasfollows:LARTableS 2itemBV1 2854willinstallincipientdetectioninaninvertercabinetgreaterthan250V(treatedasapowe rcabinetperNUREG 2180)consistentwiththeLARAttachmentSSupplementandtheresponsetoPRARAI27.InLARAttachmentS,TableS 2,assupplemented,ModificationItemsBV1 1875 ,BV1 2854,andBV2 0829,thelicenseeindicatedthataVEWFDSwillbeaddedasfollows: Reference17,ML17030A312,2017 01 30,AttachmentPage2 Reference18,ML17111A887,2017 04 21,Att3Page2andEnclosureDPageS 12.11/28/2017 10of26 BeaverValleyUnits1and2 DraftSERCompiledCommentsABCD E F G H 2017 11 09DraftSESectionNo.2017 11 09DraftSEPageNo.ParagraphNo.2017 11 09DraftSEStatement CommentProposedRevisedStatementReferences533.2.6.112210InLARAttachmentW,thelicenseestatedthattheinstallationofVEWFDSincipientdetectioninlowvoltagecabinetslocatedinfirecompartments1CR4,2CB1,and2CB6istoreducethelikelihoodoffirepropagationoutsidethecabinets Toclarify,suggestaddingthat"VEWFDSwillbeinstalledinthe480VComputerInverterandcreditedinaccordancewithNUREG2180." InLARAttachmentW,thelicenseestatedthattheinstallationofVEWFDSincipientdetectioninlowvoltagecabinetslocatedinfirecompartments1 CR 4,2 CB 1,and2 CB 6istoreducethelikelihoodoffirepropagationoutsidethecabinets.VEWFDSwillalsobeinstalledinone480VACcabinetinaccordancewithNUREG2180(Ref.17)PRARAI27(L 17 024,ML17030A312pg2of3)BV1 2854543.2.71242TheNRCstaffreviewedtheproposedinstallationofaVEWFDStomonitorconditionsincertainkeyelectricalcabinetsatBeaverValleyasdescribedinLARModificationItemsBV1 1875andBV2 0829,andinitsresponsetoFPERAI15.LARTableS 2itemBV1 2854willinstallincipientdetectioninaninvertercabinetgreaterthan250V(treatedasapowercabinetperNUREG 2180)consistentwiththeLARAttachmentSS upplementandtheresponsetoPRARAI27.TheNRCstaffreviewedtheproposedinstallationofaVEWFDStomonitorconditionsincertainkeyelectricalcabinetsatBeaverValleyasdescribedinLARModificationItemsBV1 1875 ,BV1 2854andBV2 0829,andinitsresponsetoFPERAI15andPRARAI27.Reference17,ML17030A312,2017 01 30,AttachmentPage2Reference18,ML17111A887,2017 04 21,Att3Page2andEnclosureDPageS 12.553.4.1.21276eachretainedVFDRwasevaluatedagainstthesafetymargincriteria SafetymarginwasevaluatedforthecompartmentandnotforeachVFDR eachcompartmentwithVFDRswasevaluatedagainstthesafetymargincriteriaLARSection4.5.2.2563.4.1.21276(bullet1)FMfortheFPRAwasspecificallyreviewedforadequatesafetymarginand,ingeneral,wasdevelopedutilizingindustry,NRC,andNationalInstituteofStandardsandTechnology(NIST)acceptedcodes,supportedbyguidancethatincludesNUREG/CR 6850,"EPRI/NRC RESFirePRAMethodologyforNuclearPowerFacilities";NEI04 02;andassociatedFAQsresolutionsasdescribedinLARSection3.4andspecificallyidentifiedthroughouttheLAR.BVPShasusedadditionalFAQsthatarenotlistedinLARSection3.4 FMfortheFPRAwasspecificallyreviewedforadequatesafetymarginand,ingeneral,wasdeve lopedutilizingindustry,NRC,andNationalInstituteofStandardsandTechnology(NIST)acceptedcodes,supportedbyguidancethatincludesNUREG/CR 6850,"EPRI/NRC RESFirePRAMethodologyforNuclearPowerFacilities";NEI04 02;andassociatedFAQsresolutionsasdescribedinLARSection3.4andspecificallyidentifiedthroughouttheLARandsubsequentRAIresponses.SERReference10,11,and12(responsestoPRARAI4,7,9,and25)573.4.1.21285(verylastsentenceinthesection)BasedonitsreviewoftheLAR,theFREs,andthelicensee'sresponsetoPRARAI20 shouldrefertoPRARAI21,insteadof20 BasedonitsreviewoftheLAR,theFREs,andthelicensee'sresponsetoPRARAI2 1 Reference11,ML1547A372.(pages179and183,orpdf181and185)583.4.2.21312accordancewithNEI07 01(Reference139)TypoNEI07 01shouldbeNEI0712accordancewithNEI07 12(Reference139)N/A593.4.2.21323InPRARAI01.a(Reference22)associatedwithF&OCF A1 0,theNRCstaffstatedthatthelicensee'suseofOption#2fromNUREG/CR 6850-MissingadigitintheF&0referenceInPRARAI01.a(Reference22)associatedwithF&OCF A1 0 1,theNRCstaffstatedthatthelicensee'suseofOption#2fromNUREG/CR 6850-Reference22andADAMSaccessionnumberML15049A50711/28/2017 11of26 BeaverValleyUnits1and2 DraftSERCompiledCommentsABCD E F G H 2017 11 09DraftSESectionNo.2017 11 09DraftSEPageNo.ParagraphNo.2017 11 09DraftSEStatement CommentProposedRevisedStatementReferences603.4.2.21324InPRARAI1.c(Reference22)concerningF&OQNSC101,theNRCstaffrequestedthatthelicenseeprovidejustificationforthesufficiencyofthesamplingmethoditusedtodeterminethatthesumoftheLERFcontributionsforallscreenedscenarioswaslessthan10percentoftheestimatedtotalLERFforfireevents.InitsresponsetoPRARAI01.c(Refer ence10),thelicenseeexplainedthatscenarioshavingaCDFhigherthan1E08wereretainedandthatLERFscreeningwasperformedonthenextmostriskdominantscenarios(i.e.,scenarioswithaCDFbetween1E08/yearand1E09/year).ThelicenseeexplainedthatitcomparedthetotalLERFofthescreenedscenariosforeachunittotheLERFofunscreenedscenarios(i.e.,scenarioswithaCDFhigherthan1E08/year)andusedthiscomparisontoconservativelycalculatetheratioofscreenedLERFscenariostototalLERF,whichwasdeterminedtobeabout3percentTheF&OdiscussedinthisRAIappliestoBV1only(BV2LERFwasfullyquantifiedandscreenedappropriately).Thedraftstatementreferstotheadditionalsamplingscreeningasapplicabletobothunits.InPRARAI1.c(Reference22)concerningF&OQNSC101,theNRCstaffrequestedthatthelicenseeprovidejustificationforthesufficiencyofthesamplingmethoditusedtodeterminethatthesumoftheLERFcontributionsforallscreenedscenariosatUnit1waslessthan10percentoftheestimatedtotalLERFforfireevents.InitsresponsetoPRARAI01.c(Refer ence10),thelicenseeexplainedthatscenarioshavingaCDFhigherthan1E08wereretainedandthatLERFscreeningwasperformedonthenextmostriskdominantscenarios(i.e.,scenarioswithaCDFbetween1E08/yearand1E09/year).ThelicenseeexplainedthatitcomparedthetotalLERFofthescreenedscenariosforUnit1totheLERFofunscreenedscenarios(i.e.,scenarioswithaCDFhigherthan1E08/year)andusedthiscomparisontoconservativelycalculatetheratioofscreenedLERFscenariostototalLERF,whichwasdeterminedtobeabout3percentReference10,ML15118A484.(page28of68,orpdf30/70).FirstsentenceoftheRAIresponse.613.4.2.21324TheNRCstaffconcludesthatthelicensee'sresponsetotheRAIisacceptablebecausethelicenseedemonstratedthatitstreatmentofquantitativescreeningusingthesimplifiedapproachissufficienttoshowthattheratioofquantitativelyscreenedLERFscenariosisasmallfractionofthetotalLERFforbothunitsandbecauseallfirescenarioswoul dberescreenedpriortoselfapproval.TheF&OdiscussedinthisRAIappliestoBV1only(BV2LERFwasfullyquantifiedandscreenedappropriately).Thedraftstatementreferstotheadditionalsamplingscreeningasapplicabletobothunits.TheNRCstaffconcludesthatthelicensee'sresponsetotheRAIisacceptablebecausethelicenseedemonstratedthatitstreatmentofquantitativescr eeningusingthesimplifiedapproachissufficienttoshowthattheratioofquantitativelyscreenedLERFscenariosisasmallfractionofthetotalLERFforUnit1andbecauseallfirescenarioswoul dberescreenedpriortoselfapproval.Reference10,ML15118A484.(page28of8,orpdf30/70).FirstsentenceoftheRAIresponse.623.4.2.21324ImplementationItemsBV13108andBV21662TypoBV2 1662shouldbeBV21622ImplementationItemsBV13108andBV21622 N/A633.4.2.21352InitsresponsetoPRARAI05(Reference10),thelicenseeexplainedthatitcreditedRAsassociatedwithrepairsforDIDbutdidnotcreditthemintheFPRA.WrongreferenceInitsresponsetoPRARAI05(Reference11),thelicenseeexplainedthatitcreditedRAsassociatedwithrepairsforDIDbutdidnotcreditthemintheFPRA.Reference11andADAMSaccessionnumberML15147A372643.4.2.21384Initsresponseto PRARAI13(Reference11),thelicenseeexplainedthatUnitNos.1and2arephysically separateunitsandthatthepartitioningoftheplantsintoPAU sfortheFPRAwasperformedto maintainthisseparationwiththeexceptionoflocationswherecableorequipmentfrombothunitswaslocated.WrongreferenceInitsresponseto PRARAI13(Reference11 10),thelicenseeexplainedthatUnitNos.1and2arephysically separateunitsandthatthepartitioningoftheplantsintoPAUsfortheFPRAwasperformedto maintainthisseparationwiththeexceptionoflocationswherecableorequipmentfrombothunitswaslocated.Reference10andADAMSaccessionnumberML15118A484 11/28/2017 12of26 BeaverValleyUnits1and2 DraftSERCompiledCommentsABCD E F G H 2017 11 09DraftSESectionNo.2017 11 09DraftSEPageNo.ParagraphNo.2017 11 09DraftSEStatement CommentProposedRevisedStatementReferences653.4.2.21392InitsresponsetoPRARAI14(Reference11)andPRARAI03(Reference19),thelicenseeexplainedthatbasedonasensitivitystudy,theimpactofSOKCwasdeterminedtobeverysmall,andtherefore,wasnotincludedintheriskestimatesinitsintegratedanalysis.PRARAI14responsewascontainedinReference10(ML15118A484),notReference11(ML15147A372)
Supplemented LAR Attachment J 79    3.4.2.3.1      155      1st bullet, "The licensee also stated that it credited fire    Per response to FM RAI 02.b, neither "The licensee also stated that it credited fire          Licensee Response to RAIs 2nd      wraps and barrier systems for the duration of the cable tray covers fire wraps were            wraps and barrier systems for the duration of the dated 20150626 paragraph manufacturer's rating, but that it did not credit credited in high hazard events                manufacturer's rating., but that it The licensee  (Reference 12  ADAMS wraps within the ZOI of a high hazard event to                                                did not credit wraps or cable tray covers within Accession No.
InitsresponsetoPRARAI14(Reference10)andPRARAI03(Reference19),thelicenseeexplainedthatbasedonasensitivitystudy,theimpactofSOKCwasdeterminedtobeverysmall,andtherefore,wasnotincludedintheriskestimatesinitsintegratedanalysis.Reference10,ML15118A484.(page41of68,orpdf43/70).663.4.2.21393InitsresponsetoPRARAI15(Reference11),thelicensee explainedthattheHRAusedtosupporttheLARreflectstheguidanceinthefinalJuly2012 NUREG 1921report,andtherefore,thereisnoimpacttotheriskestimatesfromusingthedraftversion.WrongreferenceInitsresponsetoPRARAI15(Reference10),thelicensee explainedthattheHRAusedtosupporttheLARreflectstheguidanceinthefinalJuly2012 NUREG 1921report,andtherefore,thereisnoimpacttotheriskestimatesfromusingthedraft version.Reference10andADAMSaccessionnumberML15118A484673.4.2.21402(i.e.,UnitNo.1CDFof5.9E05/yearandLERFof4.3E07/year;UnitNo.2CDFof6.9E05/yearandLERFof1.8E 06/year), Unit2CDFshouldbe6.9E 05not6.9E05(i.e.,UnitNo.1CDFof5.9E05/yearandLERFof4.3E 07/year;UnitNo.2CDFof6.9E05/yearandLERFof1.8E 06/year), N/A683.4.2.21402"Initsresponseto PRARAI19(Reference12),thelicenseeprovidedthetotalriskincreaseassociatedwithretainedVFDRswithoutcreditingriskreductionplantmodifications----." Wrongreference"Initsresponseto PRARAI19(Reference12 19),thelicenseeprovidedthetotalriskincreaseassociatedwithretainedVFDRswithoutcreditingriskreductionplantmodifications----." Reference19andADAMSaccessionnumberML17177A097693.4.2.21422InitsresponsetoPRARAI03.b(Reference12)TheresponsetoPRARAI03.bisReference19.InitsresponsetoPRARAI03.b(Reference1 9)Reference19ML17177A0972017 06 23 703.4.2.21422TableS3,tofullyapplytheguidancecontainedinNUREG2160andNUREG2178TypoNUREG2160shouldbeNUREG2169 TableS3,tofullyapplytheguidancecontainedinNUREG2169andNUREG2178N/A713.4.2.2&9.0 139,238&244 3,Reference60,&Reference145 InPRARAI15(Reference22),theNRCstaffexplainedthatguidanceinadraftversionofNUREG 1921,"EPRI/NRC RESFireHumanReliabilityGuidelines"(Reference145)-NUREG 1921islistedinthereferencesectiontwice.Suggestremovingreference145fromSection9.0andupdatingreferenceonpage139toReference60 InPRARAI15(Reference22),theNRCstaffexplainedthatguidanceinadraftversionofNUREG 1921,"EPRI/NRC RESFireHumanReliabilityGuidelines"(Reference60)-SERSection9.0723.4.2.3.11441V&VofthesealgebraicmodelsisdocumentedinNUREG 1824,"VerificationandValidationofSelectedFireModelsforNuclearPowerPlantApplications,"Volumes3and4(Reference57).LA RAttachmentJandSERAttachmentAreferenceNUREG 1824,Supplement1astheV&Vbasisforthealgebraicmodels.Updateaccordingly V&VofthesealgebraicmodelsisdocumentedinNUREG 1824,"VerificationandValidationofSelectedFireModelsforNuclearPowerPlantApplications,Supplement1"Volumes3and4(Reference165).SupplementalInformationRegardingLAR(Reference18ADAMSAccessionNo.ML17111A887)733.4.2.3.11443ThisHGLcorrelationisdescribedinNUREG 1805,anditsV&VisdocumentedinNUREG 1824,Volume3.LARAttachmentJandSERAttachmentAreferenceNUREG 1824,Supplement1asMQH'sHGLCorrelationV&Vbasis.Updateaccordingly ThisHGLcorrelationisdescribedinNUREG 1805,anditsV&VisdocumentedinNUREG 1824,Supplement1.S upplementalInformationRegardingLAR(Reference18ADAMSAccessionNo.ML17111A887) 11/28/2017 13of26 BeaverValleyUnits1and2 DraftSERCompiledCommentsABCD E F G H 2017 11 09DraftSESectionNo.2017 11 09DraftSEPageNo.ParagraphNo.2017 11 09DraftSEStatement CommentProposedRevisedStatementReferences743.4.2.3.11444InLARSection4.5.1.2,thelicenseeidentifiedtheuseofthefollowingempiricalcorrelationsthat arenotaddressedinNUREG 1824,Volumes3and4.LARSection4.5.1.2doesnotprovidealistofempiricalcorrelations.Thisneedstobeverified.InLARAttachmentJ ,thelicenseeidentifiedtheuseofthefollowingempiricalcorrelationsthat arenotaddressedinNUREG 1824,Volumes3and4.753.4.2.3.114414AllalgebraicfiremodelsandempiricalcorrelationswereimplementedinadatabaseandworkbookreferredtoastheFireModelingWorkbook(FMWB).Algebraicfiremodelsandempiricalcorrelationswerenotimplementedintoadatabase.Allalgebraicfiremodelsandempiricalcorrelationswer eimplementedinadatabaseandworkbookreferredtoastheFireModelingWorkbook(FMWB).LARAttachmentJ,PageJ 13 Reference18,ML17111A887,2017 04 21,EnclosureA,PageJ 14763.4.2.3.11444,2ndbullet"CeilingJetTemperature,MethodofAlpert(Reference150)" Removeceilingjettemperaturecorrelationfromthisbulletedlist.ItisV&V'dperSection6.2ofNUREG 1824" CeilingJetTemperatur e,MethodofAlpert(Reference150)" Section6.2,NUREG 1824,Volume4(Reference57)SupplementalInformationRegardingLAR(Reference18ADAMSAccessionNo.ML17111A887),SupplementedLARAttachmentJ773.4.2.3.11451Thelicensee'sscreeningwasbasedonthe98thpercentilefireHRRfromtheNUREG/CR 6850methodology(Reference51).HRRsfromNUREG 2178arealsoused.Thelicensee'sscreeningwasbasedonthe98thpercentilefireHRRfromtheNUREG/CR 6850methodology(Reference51)andNUREG 2178(Reference140).DRAFTSERSection3.4.2.2 ResponsetoPRARAI03.b(Reference19),Attachment1,Page8783.4.2.3.11455V&VofCFASTandFDSisdocumentedinNUREG 1824,Volumes5and7,respectively.
prevent damage in those scenarios."                                                            the ZOI of a high hazard event to prevent damage ML15177A110), Page 52 in those scenarios."
NUREG 1824,Supplement1usedastheV&VbasisforFDSVersion6analyses V&VofCFASTandFDSisdocumentedinNUREG 1824,Volumes5and7,respectivelyaswellasNUREG 1824,Supplement1(Reference165).SupplementalInformationRegardingLAR(Reference18ADAMSAccessionNo.ML17111A887),SupplementedLARAttachmentJ793.4.2.3.11551stbullet,2ndparagraph"Thelicenseealsostatedthatitcreditedfirewrapsandbarriersystemsforthedurationofthemanufacturer'srating,butthatitdidnotcreditwrapswithintheZOIofahighhazardeventtopreventdamageinthosescenarios." PerresponsetoFMRAI02.b,neithercabletraycoversfirewrapswerecreditedinhighhazardevents"Thelicenseealsostatedthatitcreditedfirewrapsandbarriersystemsforthedurationofthemanufacturer'srating.,butthatitThelicenseedidnotcreditwrapsorcabletraycoverswithintheZOIofahighhazardeventtopreventdamageinthosescenarios."LicenseeResponsetoRAIsdated2015 06 26(Reference12ADAMSAccessionNo.ML15177A110),Page52803.4.2.3.21521cabinetsintheMCRareseparatedbyasinglemetalwallwithcablesindirectcontact Thiswasaconservativeassumptionandwasnotverified cabinetsintheMCRareconservativelyassumedtobeseparatedbyasinglemetalwallwithcablesindirectcontact FMRAI01.j(vii)813.4.31583TheNRCstaffconcludesthatthelicensee'sapproachforcalculatingthechangeinriskassociatedwithVFDRsisacceptablebecauseitisconsistentwithRG1.205,Section2.2.4.1,andFAQ08 0054(Reference79).ThereferenceforFAQ08 0054isReference80.ThereferenceforFAQ08 0054isnotReference79.TheNRCstaffconcludesthatthelicensee'sapproachforcalculatingthechangeinriskassociatedwithVFDRsisacceptablebecauseitisconsistentwithRG1.205,Section2.2.4.1,andFAQ08 0054(Reference80).Reference80 11/28/2017 14of26 BeaverValleyUnits1and2 DraftSERCompiledCommentsABCD E F G H 2017 11 09DraftSESectionNo.2017 11 09DraftSEPageNo.ParagraphNo.2017 11 09DraftSEStatement CommentProposedRevisedStatementReferences823.4.41583ThelicenseeidentifiedalargenumberofRAsinitsLARAttachmentG,TableG 1,providedinitsresponsetoPRARAI03(Reference19).InPRARAI18(Reference22),NRCstaffrequestedthatthelicenseeprovideclarificationregardingwhichRAswereidentifiedforonlyDID.TherearetwotableinLARAttachmentG:TableG 1andTableG 2.SeeLIC(20)inReference19.ThelicenseeidentifiedalargenumberofRAsinitsLARAttachmentG,TableG 1andTableG 2 ,providedinitsresponsetoPRARAI03(Reference19).InPRARAI18(Reference22),NRCstaffrequestedthatthelicenseeprovideclarificationregardingwhichRAswereidentifiedforonlyDID.Reference19andADAMSaccessionnumberML17177A097 833.4.41592TheNRCstaffconcludesthattheCDFandLERFforbothunitsareabovetheriskacceptanceguidelinesof1E05/yearand1E6/yearcontainedinRG1.174,respectively.TheriskacceptanceguidelineforCDFis1E 05,not1E05.TheNRCstaffconcludesthattheCDFforbothunitsareabovetheriskacceptanceguidelinesof1E05/yearandLERFisbelowtheriskacceptanceguidelinesof1E06/yearcontainedinRG1.174.(ADAMSAccessionNo.ML17177A097).843.4.41593ThelicenseereviewedalloftheRAsforadverseimpactandresolvedeachactionasstatedinLARAttachmentG.TheNRCstafffoundthatnoneoftheRAslistedinLARAttachmentG,TableG 1,haveanadverseimpactontheFPRA.ThelicenseeevaluatedallRAsagainstthefeasibilitycriteriaprovidedinNEI04 02,FAQ07 0030,andRG1.205.Inaddition,thelicenseeincludedanactioninLARAttachmentS,TableS 3,ImplementationItemBV1 3027,todemonstrateanddocumentthefeasibilityofcreditedNFPA805RAsandupdatetrainingandbrigadedrillsafterthefireresponseproceduresareupdated.TheNRCstaffconcludesthatthisactionisacceptablebecauseitwillincorporatetheprov isionsofNFPA805intotheFPPandwouldberequiredbytheproposedlicensecondition.
80    3.4.2.3.2      152            1      cabinets in the MCR are separated by a single      This was a conservative assumption cabinets in the MCR are conservatively assumed FM RAI 01.j(vii) metal wall with cables in direct contact            and was not verified                      to be separated by a single metal wall with cables in direct contact 81      3.4.3       158            3     The NRC staff concludes that the licensees        The reference for FAQ 080054 is          The NRC staff concludes that the licensees        Reference 80 approach for calculating the change in risk        Reference 80.                             approach for calculating the change in risk associated with VFDRs is acceptable because it is                                              associated with VFDRs is acceptable because it is consistent with RG 1.205, Section 2.2.4.1, and      The reference for FAQ 080054 is not consistent with RG 1.205, Section 2.2.4.1, and FAQ 080054 (Reference 79).                         Reference 79.                             FAQ 080054 (Reference 80).
TherearetwotablesinLARAttachmentG:TableG 1andTableG 2.SeeLIC(20)inReference19.ThelicenseereviewedalloftheRAsforadverseimpactandresolvedeachactionasstatedinLARAttachmentG.TheNRCstafffoundthatnoneoftheRAslistedinLARAttachmentG,TableG 1andTableG 2 ,haveanadverseimpactontheFPRA.ThelicenseeevaluatedallRAsagainstthefeasibilitycriteriaprovidedinNEI04 02,FAQ07 0030,andRG1.205.Inaddition,thelicenseeincludedanactioninLARAttachmentS,TableS 3,ImplementationItemBV1 3027,todemonstrateanddocumentthefeasibilityofcreditedNFPA805RAsandupdatetrainingandbrigadedrillsafterthefireresponseproceduresareupdated.TheNRCstaffconcludesthatthisactionisacceptablebecauseitwillincorporatetheprov isionsofNFPA805intotheFPPandwouldberequiredbytheproposedlicensecondition.
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Reference19andADAMSaccessionnumberML17177A097853.4.61604InitsresponsetoPRARAI19(Reference11),thelicenseeprovideditsexplanationofhowitmademodelling adjustmentssothatthechangeinriskwasnotunderestimated.
 
WrongreferenceInitsresponsetoPRARAI19(Reference19),thelicenseeprovideditsexplanationofhowitmademodellingadjustmentssothatthechangeinriskwasnotunderestimated.
Beaver Valley Units 1 and 2 Draft SER Compiled Comments A        B            C          D                              E                                              F                                          G                                    H 20171109  20171109  Paragraph 20171109 Draft SE Statement                                      Comment              Proposed Revised Statement                                  References Draft SE  Draft SE Page    No.
Reference19andADAMSaccessionnumberML17177A097 11/28/2017 15of26 BeaverValleyUnits1and2 DraftSERCompiledCommentsABCD E F G H 2017 11 09DraftSESectionNo.2017 11 09DraftSEPageNo.ParagraphNo.2017 11 09DraftSEStatement CommentProposedRevisedStatementReferences863.4.61604InPRARAI19(Reference22),theNRCstaffexplainedthatconservatismsinthecompliantplantmodelcouldhavecausedoverestimationoftheriskoffsetvaluesandunderestimationofthechangeinrisk.TheNRCstaffrequestedthatthelicenseeidentifyconservativemodelingormodellingassumptionsresultinginunderestimationofthechangeinriskandtoshowthatinsuchcasestheunderestimationcouldstillbeoffsetbythedecreaseassociatedwithnonVFDRmodifications.InitsresponsetoPRARAI19(Reference11),thelicenseeprovideditsexplanationofhowitmademodellingadjustmentssothatthechangeinriskwasnotunderestimated.
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Ithinkthissectionshouldalsorefe rtoPRARAI19.01anditsresponse,whichfurtherdiscussedthisissue.InPRARAI19(Reference22)andPRARAI19.01(Reference29),theNRCstaffexplainedthatconservatismsinthecompliantplantmodelcouldhavecausedoverestimationoftheriskoffsetvalu esandunderestimationofthechangeinrisk.TheNRCstaffrequestedthatthelicenseeidentifyconservativemodelingormodellingassumptionsresultinginunderestimationofthechangeinriskandtoshowthatinsuchcasestheunderestimationcouldstillbeoffsetbythedecreaseassociatedwithnonVFDRmodifications.Initsresponse stoPRARAI19(Reference11)andPRARAI19.01(Reference20),thelicenseeprovideditsexplanationofhowitmademodellingadjustmentssothatthechangeinriskwasnotunderestimated.
82      3.4.4        158          3     The licensee identified a large number of RAs in There are two table in LAR              The licensee identified a large number of RAs in Reference 19 and ADAMS its LAR Attachment G, Table G1, provided in its Attachment G: Table G1 and Table G its LAR Attachment G, Table G1 and Table G2, accession number response to PRA RAI 03 (Reference 19). In PRA      2. See LIC (20) in Reference 19.     provided in its response to PRA RAI 03 (Reference ML17177A097 RAI 18 (Reference 22), NRC staff requested that                                          19). In PRA RAI 18 (Reference 22), NRC staff the licensee provide clarification regarding which                                        requested that the licensee provide clarification RAs were identified for only DID.                                                         regarding which RAs were identified for only DID.
Reference20,ML17235A512.(page3of12,orpdf5/19)Reference29,ML17220A234873.4.71614InitsresponsetoPRARAI14(Reference11)andPRARAI03 (Refer ence19),thelicenseeexplainedthatfromasensitivitystudy,itdeterminedtheimpactofSOKCtobeverysmall,andtherefore,wasnotincludedintheriskestimates.
83      3.4.4        159          2    The NRC staff concludes that the CDF and LERF      The risk acceptance guideline for CDF The NRC staff concludes that the CDF for both      (ADAMS Accession No.
WrongreferenceInitsresponsetoPRARAI14(Reference11 10)andPRARAI03(Reference19),thelicenseeexplainedthatfromasensitivitystudy,itdeterminedtheimpactofSOKCtobeverysmall,andtherefore,wasnotincludedintheriskestimates.
for both units are above the risk acceptance        is 1E05, not 1E05.                   units are above the risk acceptance guidelines of ML17177A097).
Reference10andADAMSaccessionnumberML15118A484 883.4.8163 1stbulletAccordingly,theCDFandLERFforbothunitsabovetheriskacceptanceguidelinesof1E05/yearand1E6/yearinRG1.174,respectively.TheriskacceptanceguidelineforCDFis1E 05,not1E05.Theconclusionstatementisnotclear.Accordingly,theCDFforbothunitsareabovetheriskacceptanceguidelinesof1E05/yearandLERFisbelowtheriskacceptanceguidelinesof1E06/yearcontainedinRG1.174.(ADAMSAccessionNo.ML17177A097).893.5.1.11692ThelicenseeperformedadetailedanalysisoffireprotectionfeaturesandidentifiedthefiresuppressionanddetectionsystemsrequiredtomeettheNSPCforeachfirearea.Includepassivefireprotectionfeatures,asinItem4)inthepreviousparagraph.Section3.5.1.8doesnotreferenceTable4 3listingofpassivefireprotectionfeatures.Thelicenseeperformedadetailedanalysisoffireprotectionfeaturesandidentifiedthefiresuppressionanddetectionsystemsandpassivefireprotectionfeaturesrequire dtomeettheNSPCforeachfirearea.LAR903.5.1.31691InLARSection4.2.3,thelicenseestatedthatsixlicensingactionsforUnitNo.1andninelicensingactionsforUnitNo.2willbetransitionedintotheNF PA805FPPaspreviouslyapproved.ThiswassupplementedintheupdatedAttachmentKsubmittedinL 17 122(ML17111A887)EnclosureB.InthisupdatedAttachmentK,therearesixlicensingactionsforUnitNo.1(11.02,11.05,11.16,11.18,11.24,11.26)andelevenlicensingactionsforUnit2(3,4,5,6,8,11,18,26,29,30,31)thatwillbetransitionedintotheNFPA805FPPaspreviouslyapprov ed.InLARSection4.2.3,thelicenseestatedthatsixlicensingactionsforUnitNo.1andelevenlicensingactionsforUnitNo.2willbetransitionedintotheNFPA805FPPaspreviouslyapproved.UpdatedAttachmentKL 17 122(ML17111A887)EnclosureB 11/28/2017 16of26 BeaverValleyUnits1and2 DraftSERCompiledCommentsABCD E F G H 2017 11 09DraftSESectionNo.2017 11 09DraftSEPageNo.ParagraphNo.2017 11 09DraftSEStatement CommentProposedRevisedStatementReferences913.5.1.3 Table3.5 2171LA11.02 NRCStaff'sEvaluation 4thparagraph Missingaconditionasbasesforexemptionapproval.Addin.PressurizerPORVblockingvalvepowercablesareruninconduitapproximately20feetabovethefloortothepenetrationareawheretheyareseparatedbyafirebarrierandautomaticsuppressionanddetectionsystem.Ref18ML17111A8872017 04 21,EnclosureB,Att.K923.5.1.3 Table3.5 2175LA11.16 NRCStaff'sEvaluation2nd paragraph Missingaconditionasbasesforexemptionapproval.Addin.Separationofapproximately5feetismaintainedbetweensourcerangechannels.Sourcerangecablesareinconduit.Ref18ML17111A8872017 04 21,EnclosureB,Att.K933.5.1.3 Table3.5 2175LA11.16 NRCStaff'sEvaluation 4thparagraph InresponsetoSSDRAI06(Reference12),thelicenseestatedthatLicensingAction10willnotbetransitioned.LicensingActionnumberisincorrectandmaybeconfusedwithBVPS 2 InresponsetoSSDRAI06(Reference12),thelicenseestatedthatLicensingAction11.10willnotbetransitioned.Ref12ML15177A1102015 06 26943.5.1.3 Table3.5 2176LA11.18ApplicableFireCompartm ent 1 NS 1 1 PA 1A 1 PA 1C 1 PA 1E 1 PA 1G 1 PA 1GA 1 PA 1GB 1 PA 1GC 1 TB 1 3 CR 1 3 IS 1 3 IS 2 3 IS 3 3 IS 4Correcte dfirecompartments1 NS 1 1 PA 1A 1 PA 1C 1 PA 1E 1 PA 1G 1 PA 1GA 1 PA 1GB 1 PA 1GC 1 PT 1 1 SB GEN 1SGPD 1 1 TB 1 3 CR 1 3 IS 1 3 IS 2 3 IS 3 3 IS 4 3 IS 6 Ref18ML17111A8872017 04 21,EnclosureB,Att.K953.5.1.3 Table3.5 2186LA11ApplicableFireCompartm ent NotApplicable DoesnotmatchthefirecompartmentinLicensingAction11 NotApplicable 2 PA 4 Ref18ML17111A8872017 04 21,EnclosureB,Att.K963.5.1.3 Table3.5 2189LA26 NRCStaff'sEvaluation2ndParagraph Thedieselgeneratorsuppliesthe120Valternatingcurrent(AC)uninterruptiblepowersupplysystemrequiredforthedetectionsystemandthe25Vdirectcurrent(DC)panelsforthefiredetectionandsuppressionsystems.TypoThedieselgeneratorsuppliesthe120Valternatingcurrent(AC)uninterruptiblepowersupplysystemrequiredforthedetectionsystemandthe125Vdirectcurrent(DC)panelsforthefiredetectionandsuppressionsystems.Ref18ML17111A8872017 04 21,EnclosureB,Att.K 11/28/2017 17of26 BeaverValleyUnits1and2 DraftSERCompiledCommentsABCD E F G H 2017 11 09DraftSESectionNo.2017 11 09DraftSEPageNo.ParagraphNo.2017 11 09DraftSEStatement CommentProposedRevisedStatementReferences973.5.1.3 Table3.5 2191LA30ClarificationRequest15:ItisrequestedthattheNRCdocumentasa"priorapproval"recognitionthattheabsenceofsprinklerprotectionintheintakestructurecompartment(3IS4)thathousesthedieselfirepumpisacceptable ClarificationRequest15waswithdrawnperSSDRAI13(d)(L 15 188ML15177A110)andFPERAI05(a)(viii)(L 15 118ML15118A484).Thisisalsodiscussedinsection3.5.2(pg203)oftheSE.ClarificationRequest15:ItisrequestedthattheNRCdocumentasa"priorapproval"recognitionthattheabsenceofsprinklerprotectionintheintakestructurecompartment(3IS4)thathousesthedieselfirepumpisacceptable SSDRAI13(d)(L 15 188ML15177A110);FPERAI05(a)(viii)(L 15 118ML15118A484);SERSection3.5.2(pg203)983.5.1.3 Table3.5 2191LA30BasedonthepreviousstaffapprovalofthisdeviationinSERdatedJune6,1979(Reference96),ClarificationRequest15 ,andthestatementbythelicenseethatthebasesremainvalid,theNRCstaffconcludesthattheapplicabilityofthislicensingactionisacceptable.
guidelines of 1E05/year and 1E 6/year contained                                          1E05/year and LERF is below the risk acceptance in RG 1.174, respectively.                                                                guidelines of 1E06/year contained in RG 1.174.
ClarificationRequest15waswithdrawnperSSDRAI13(d)(L 15 188ML15177A110)andFPERAI05(a)(viii)(L 15 118ML15118A484).Thisisalsodiscussedinsection3.5.2(pg203)oftheSE.Basedonthepreviousstaffapprov alofthisdeviationinSERdatedJune6,1979(Reference96),ClarificationRequest15 ,andthestatementbythelicenseethatthebasesremainvalid,theNRCstaffconcludesthattheapplicabilityofthislicensingactionisacceptable.
84      3.4.4        159          3    The licensee reviewed all of the RAs for adverse There are two tables in LAR              The licensee reviewed all of the RAs for adverse    Reference 19 and ADAMS impact and resolved each action as stated in LAR Attachment G: Table G1 and Table G impact and resolved each action as stated in LAR        accession number Attachment G. The NRC staff found that none of 2. See LIC (20) in Reference 19.          Attachment G. The NRC staff found that none of      ML17177A097 the RAs listed in LAR Attachment G, Table G1,                                           the RAs listed in LAR Attachment G, Table G1 have an adverse impact on the FPRA. The                                                  and Table G2, have an adverse impact on the licensee evaluated all RAs against the feasibility                                        FPRA. The licensee evaluated all RAs against the criteria provided in NEI 0402, FAQ 070030, and                                          feasibility criteria provided in NEI 0402, FAQ 07 RG 1.205. In addition, the licensee included an                                          0030, and RG 1.205. In addition, the licensee action in LAR Attachment S, Table S3,                                                   included an action in LAR Attachment S, Table S Implementation Item BV13027, to demonstrate                                              3, Implementation Item BV13027, to and document the feasibility of credited NFPA                                            demonstrate and document the feasibility of 805 RAs and update training and brigade drills                                            credited NFPA 805 RAs and update training and after the fire response procedures are updated.                                           brigade drills after the fire response procedures The NRC staff concludes that this action is                                              are updated. The NRC staff concludes that this acceptable because it will incorporate the                                                action is acceptable because it will incorporate provisions of NFPA 805 into the FPP and would                                            the provisions of NFPA 805 into the FPP and be required by the proposed license condition.                                           would be required by the proposed license condition.
SSDRAI13(d)(L 15 188ML15177A110);FPERAI05(a)(viii)(L 15 118ML15118A484);SERSection3.5.2(pg203)993.5.1.3 Table3.5 2191LA30ApplicableFireCompartm ent 3 IS 4 OtherIntakeFir eCompartmentsarealsopartoftheLA 3 IS 1 3 IS 2 3 IS 3 3 IS 4 Ref18ML17111A8872017 04 21,EnclosureB,Att.K1003.5.1.31942InitsresponsetoFPERAI04aandFPERAI04c(Reference12),thelicenseestatedthatLARAttachmentK,assupplemented,LicensingAction27isnotrequired,andanengineeringevaluationwasperformedthatanalyzedthelowpopulationofcableswithpotentialnonqualifiedelectriccableinsulationmaterialinstalledinelectricalracewaysanddeterminedtheconfigurationtobeacceptable,andremovedthecompliancestatement"SubmitforNRCApproval."TheNRCstaffconcludesthatthelicensee'sresponsetoFPERAI04aisacceptablebecauseitperformedanengineer ingevaluationandconcludedthatthecableisacceptable,whichisinaccordancewithRG1.205,NEI0402,andFAQ060022 Afollow upRAIwasissuedregardingNFPA805Section3.3.5.3(FPERAI04.01L 15 371ML15356A136),withtheresponsestatingthatapprovalwillberequestedasanAttachmentLItem.TheAttachmentLItemwassubmittedasApprovalRequest6.(L 16 058ML16055A160).ThisshouldbeupdatedtoreflecttheApprovalRequest,whichisidentifiedinSESection3.1.4.6 SeeSEpages35/36forsamecomment.Replacewith:InFPERAI04.01(Reference25),theNRCstaffstatedIntheengineeringevaluation,thelicenseeconcludedthatthelowpopulationofcablesthatdonotmeetInstituteofElectricalandElectronicsEngineers(IEEE)Standard383,1974Edition,orequivalent,wereconsideredinthefiremodelingevaluationanddeterminedtobeadequateforthehaza rd.InaccordancewithFAQ06 0008,thistypeofEEEEcannotbeselfapprovedbythelicensee.InitsresponsetoFPERAI04.01(Reference14),thelicenseestatedthatthecompliancestrategyforNFPA805Section3.3.5.3,forthelowpopulationofcableswithpotentiallynon qualifiedelectr icalcableinsulationmaterialinstalledinelectricalracewaysatBVPS 1andBVPS 2willberevisedto"SubmitforNRCApproval."FPERAI04.01(L 15 371ML15356A136);L 16 058(ML16055A160);SERSection3.1.4.6(pg90)11/28/2017 18of26 BeaverValleyUnits1and2 DraftSERCompiledCommentsABCD E F G H 2017 11 09DraftSESectionNo.2017 11 09DraftSEPageNo.ParagraphNo.2017 11 09DraftSEStatement CommentProposedRevisedStatementReferences1013.5.1.51962InLARAttachmentC,thelicenseeidentifiedVFDRBV2 0502infirearea2 CV 1,whichinvolvesfiredamagetopowercablesassociatedwithhighlowpressureinterfacevalves2RHS MV701A P,2RHS MV701B P,2RHS MV702A P,and2RHS MOV702B P.ThelicenseestatedinthedispositionthattheVDRwillbecorrectedbyaplantmodification.
85      3.4.6        160          4    In its response to PRA RAI 19 (Reference 11), the Wrong reference                        In its response to PRA RAI 19 (Reference 19), the  Reference 19 and ADAMS licensee provided its explanation of how it made                                          licensee provided its explanation of how it made    accession number modelling                                                                                modelling adjustments so that the change in risk    ML17177A097 adjustments so that the change in risk was not                                            was not underestimated.
ComponentIDforthreeofthefouraffectedvalvesweretranscribedincorrectlyfromLARAttachmentC.Theyshouldbe: 2RHS MOV701A P 2RHS MOV701B P 2RHS MOV702A P 2RHS MOV702B P Typo:VFDR InLARAttachmentC,thelicenseeidentifiedVFDRBV2 0502infirearea2 CV 1,whichinvolvesfiredamagetopowercablesassociatedwithhighlowpressureinterfacevalves2RHS M O V701A P,2RHS M O V701B P,2RHS M O V702A P,and2RHS MOV702B P.ThelicenseestatedinthedispositionthattheVFDRwillbecorrectedbyaplantmodification.LARAttachmentC,Page49(VFDRBV2 0502).1023.5.1.61972Thelicenseestatedthatthegeneratorfueltankhasa4galloncapacity,whichwillrunthegeneratorforabout4.2hours,andthattheavailablegasolineisenoughtokeepthegeneratorrunningforabout15.75hours.ThelicenseefurtherstatedthatthegasolineenginedrivenfansusedfortheBeaverValley,UnitNo.1,dieselgeneratorroomshaveaonequartfuelcapacity,whichwillrunthefanforabout1hour;therefore,theavailablegasoline/oilmixtureisenoughtokeepbothfansrunningforabout10hours.excessivedetail thelicenseedemonstratedadequatereservesoffuelforsustainableoperationofportableventilationequipmentduringwhichtimeadditionalfuelcouldbeobtainedtoreplenishreserves.N/A1033.5.1.71992...InitsresponsetoSSDRAI04a(Reference12),thelicenseestatedthatthedifferentiationofRAsinLARAttachmentG,TablesG 1andG 2,wasdefinedandsubmittedaspartofthelicensee'sresponsetoPRARAI18b(Reference22).ThelicenseeresponseforPRARAI18biscontainedinReference11.ThelicenseeresponseforPRARAI18bisnotcontainedinReference22....InitsresponsetoSSDRAI04a(Reference12),thelicenseestatedthatthedifferentiationofRAsinLARAttachmentG,TablesG 1andG 2,wasdefinedandsubmittedaspartofthelicensee'sresponsetoPRARAI18b(Reference11).Reference9andADAMSaccessionnumberML14002A0861043.5.1.71992ThelicenseefurtherstatedthattheRAswouldbeupdatedinresponsetoPRARAI03(Reference22),whichisevaluatedinSESection3.4.ThelicenseeresponseforPRARAI03iscontainedinReference19.ThelicenseeresponseforPRARAI03isnotcontainedinReference22.ThelicenseefurtherstatedthattheRAswouldbeupdatedinresponsetoPRARAI03(Reference19),whichisevaluatedinSESection3.4.Reference9andADAMSaccessionnumberML14002A0861053.5.22012InLARAttachmentT,PriorApprovalClarificationRequest2,thelicenseestatedthatthelicensingsubmittalsassociatedwithLicensingAction11.02didnotstatethat"allcables"areroutedinconduit,-TwolicensingactionsaredependentontheclarificationinAttachmentT,ClarificationRequest#2.InLARAttachmentT,PriorApprovalClarificationRequest2,thelicenseestatedthatthelicensingsubmittalsassociatedwithLicensingAction11.02and11.16didnotstatethat"allcables"areroutedinconduit,-Reference8,LARAttachmentT1063.5.22022ThelicenseesubmitteditsrevisedLARAttachmentLincludingApprovalRequest5onFebruary24,2016(Reference15).ApprovalRequest5wasrevisedinasubsequentsubmittal.
underestimated.
ThelicenseesubmitteditsrevisedLARAttachmentLincludingApprovalRequest5onFebruary24,2016(Reference15)andanupdatedApprovalRequest5onMay12,2016(Reference16).Reference16 11/28/2017 19of26 BeaverValleyUnits1and2 DraftSERCompiledCommentsABCD E F G H 2017 11 09DraftSESectionNo.2017 11 09DraftSEPageNo.ParagraphNo.2017 11 09DraftSEStatement CommentProposedRevisedStatementReferences1073.5.22023"InitsresponsetoSSDRAI13d(Reference12),thelicenseeprovidedexcerptsfromNRCSERdatedJune6,1979(Reference96),aletterfromDuquesneLightandPowertotheNRC,andtheBeaverValley,UnitNo.2,NUREG1057SER(Reference96),indicatingthatthefirepumpsarelocatedintheintakestructure,..." ReferencepointstoBVPS 1documentratherthanreferenceforBVPS 2"InitsresponsetoSSDRAI13d(Reference12),thelicenseeprovidedexcerptsfromNRCSERdatedJune6,1979(Reference35),aletterfromDuquesneLightandPowertotheNRC,andtheBeaverValley,UnitNo.2,NUREG1057SER(Reference96),indicatingthatthefirepumpsarelocatedintheintakestructure,..." Reference351083.5.3.32076"Pinchpointsrefertoaparticularlocationinanareawherethedamagefromasinglefirescenariocouldresultinfailureofmultiplecomponentsortrainsofasystemsuchthatthemaximumdetrimentonthatsystem'sperformancewoul dberealizedfromthesinglefirescenario.Typically,thisinvolvescloseverticalproximityofcablesthatsupportredundantcomponentsortrainsofasystemsuchthatallsuchcablescanbedamagedbyjustonefirescenario." ThisdefinitionisnotconsistentwiththedefinitionstatedinLARAttachmentDorLARSection4.3.LARSection4.3.1definesapinchpointas:"plantlocationswhereasinglefiremaydamageallsuccesspathsofaKSF."OtherlocationsintheLARhaveslightlydifferent,butconsistent,wording.ThisdefinitionisconsistentwithFAQ07 0040,whichstatesonPage14to"Identifylocationswhere:1.Firesmaycausedamagetotheequipment(andcabling)creditedabove.""PinchpointsrefertoplantlocationswhereasinglefiremaydamageallsuccesspathsofaKSF.aparticularlocationinanareawherethedamagefromasinglefirescenariocouldresultinfailureofmultiplecomponentsortrainsofasystemsuchthatthemaximumdetrimentonthatsystem'sperformancewouldberealizedfromthesinglefirescenario.Typically,thisinvolvescloseverticalproximityofcablesthatsupportredundantcomponentsortrainsofasystemsuchthatallsuchcablescanbedamagedbyjustonefirescenario."LARSection4.3.1,Page40.FAQ07 0040Revision4,SectionF.3,ADAMSAccessionNo.ML082070249.1093.7.22141...thelicensee'smonitoringprogramwillmeettherequirementsspecifiedinSections2.6.1,2.6.2,and2.6.3ofNFPA805-NFPA805,Section2.6requiresthemonitoringprogramto"ensurethattheassumptionsintheengineeringanalysisremainvalid"forthoseassumptionsthataresubjecttochange....thelicensee'smonitoringprogramwillmeettherequirementsspecifiedinSections2.6,2.6.1,2.6.2,and2.6.3ofNFPA805-NFPA805,Reference3.1103.8.22173TheLARalsostatedthatanalysesbasedonthePRAprogram,whichincludestheFREs,areissuedasformalanalysessubjecttothesesameconfigurationcontrolprocesses,andareadditionallysubjectedtothePRApeerreviewprocessspecifiedintheASME/ANSPRAstandard(Reference45).Fireriskevaluationsgetanexpertpanelreview,notnecessarilyaFPRApeerreview.TheLARalsostatedthatanalysesbasedonthePRAprogram,whichincludestheFREs,requiretheuseofqualifiedindividuals,proceduresthatrequire calculationsbesubjecttoindependentreviewandverification,recordretention,peerreview,andacorrectiveactionprogramthatensuresappropriateactionsaretakenwhenerrorsarediscovered.
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Reference8,LARSection4.7.2.11/28/2017 20of26 BeaverValleyUnits1and2 DraftSERCompiledCommentsABCD E F G H 2017 11 09DraftSESectionNo.2017 11 09DraftSEPageNo.ParagraphNo.2017 11 09DraftSEStatement CommentProposedRevisedStatementReferences1113.8.2.12181Thelicenseestatedthatitsproceduresrequireindependentreviewofanalyses,calculations,andevaluations,includingthoseperformedinsupportofcompliancewith10CFR50.48(c).TheLARstatedthatthetransitiontoNFPA805wasindependentlyreviewed,andthatanalyses,calculations,andevaluationstobeperformedposttransitionwillbeindependentlyreviewed,asrequiredbyexistingprocedures.FPRAisperformedconsistentwiththestandardforinternaleventsPRA,notwithstandardsforAppendixBprograms.ThewordsinthedraftSEarenotstatedintheLAR.Replacewiththesewords,"FENOCrequiresthatthecalculationsandevaluationsinsupportofNFPA805,exclusiveoftheFir ePRA,beperformedwithinthescopeoftheQAprogram,whichrequiresindependentreviewasdefinedbyBVPS 1andBVPS 2 procedures." Reference8,LARSection4.7.31123.8.3.2.12181NUREG 1824,"VerificationandValidationofSelectedFireModelsforNuclearPowerPlantApplications,"Volumes1 7(Reference57),documentstheV&VoffiveselectedfiremodelscommonlyusedtosupportapplicationsofRI/PBfireprotectionatNPPs.Thesevenvolu mesofthisNUREG seriesreportprovidetechnical...
 
NUREG 1824,Supplement1shouldalsobereferencedperSupplementLARAttachmentJ NUREG 1824,"VerificationandValidationofSelectedFireModelsforNuclearPowe rPlantApplications,"Volumes1 7(Reference57)andSupplement1toNUREG 1824(Reference165)documentstheV&VoffiveselectedfiremodelscommonlyusedtosupportapplicationsofRI/PBfireprotectionatNPPs.ThesevenvolumesofthisTheseNUREG seriesreport sprovidetechnical...SupplementalInformationRegardingLAR(Reference18ADAMSAccessionNo.ML17111A887),SupplementedLARAttachmentJ1133.8.3.2.12182"Accordingly,forthoseFMelementsperformedbythelicenseeusingtheV&VapplicationscontainedinNUREG 1824tosupportthetransitiontoNFPA805,theNRCstaffconcludesthattheuseofthesemodelsisacceptable,providedthattheintendedapplicationiswithintheappropriatelimitationsofthemodel,asidentifiedinNUREG1824." NUREG 1824,Supplement1shouldbereferencedperSupplementLARAttachmentJ"Accordingly,forthoseFMelementsperformedbythelicenseeusingtheV&VapplicationscontainedinNUREG 1824 ,Supplement1tosupportthetransitiontoNFPA805,theNRCstaffconcludesthattheuseofthesemodelsisacceptable,providedthattheintendedapplicationiswithintheappropriatelimitationsofthemodel,asidentifiedinNUREG 1824 ,Supplement1."SupplementalInformationRegardingLAR(Reference18ADAMSAccessionNo.ML17111A887),S upplementedLARAttachmentJ1143.8.3.2.12183InLARAttachmentJ,assupplemented,thelicenseeidentifiedtheuseofseveralempiricalcorrelationsthatarenotaddressedinNUREG 1824(seeSESection3.4.2.3.1).TheNRCstaffreviewedthesecorrelations,aswellastherelatedmaterialprovidedintheLAR,inordertodeterminewheth erthelicenseeadequatelydemonstratedalignmentwithspecificportionsoftheapplicableNUREG 1824guidance.NUREG 1824,Supplement1shouldbereferencedperSupplementLARAttachmentJ InLARAttachmentJ,assupplemented,thelicenseeidentifiedtheuseofseveralempiricalcorrelationsthatarenotaddressedinNUREG 1824 ,Supplement1(seeSESection3.4.2.3.1).TheNRCstaffreviewedthesecorrelations,aswellastherelatedmaterialprovidedintheLAR,inordertodeterminewhetherthelicenseeadequatelydemonstratedalignmentwithspecificportionsoftheapplicableNUREG 1824 ,Supplement1guidance.SupplementalInformationRegardingLAR(Reference18ADAMSAccessionNo.ML17111A887),S upplementedLARAttachmentJ1153.8.3.2.12184"TheNRCstaffconcludesthatthetheoreticalbasesofthemodelsandempiricalcorrelationsusedintheFMcalculationsthatwerenotaddressedinNUREG 1824wereidentifiedbytheNRCstaffanddescribedinauthoritativepublications,peerreviewedjournalarticlesorconferencepapers,ornationalresearchlaboratoryreports..." NUREG 1824,Supplement1shouldbereferencedperSupplementLARAttachmentJ"TheNRCstaffconcludesthatthetheoreticalbasesofthemodelsandempiricalcorrelationsusedintheFMcalculationsthatwerenotaddressedinNUREG 1824 ,Supplement1wereidentifiedbytheNRCstaffanddescribedinauthoritativepublications,peerreviewedjournalarticlesorconfer encepapers,ornationalresearchlaboratoryreports..."SupplementalInformationRegardingLAR(Reference18ADAMSAccessionNo.ML17111A887),SupplementedLARAttachmentJ 11/28/2017 21of26 BeaverValleyUnits1and2 DraftSERCompiledCommentsABCD E F G H 2017 11 09DraftSESectionNo.2017 11 09DraftSEPageNo.ParagraphNo.2017 11 09DraftSEStatement CommentProposedRevisedStatementReferences1163.8.3.2.12193Basedontheabove,theNRCstaffconcludesthatthisapproachprovidesreasonableassurancethattheFMusedinthedevelopmentofthefirescenariosfortheBeaverValleyFREsisappropriate,andthus,acceptableforuseintransitiontoNFPA805becausetheV&VoftheempiricalcorrelationsusedbythelicenseewereconsistentwitheitherNUREG 1824,authoritativepublications,peerreviewedjournalarticles,ornationalresearchlaboratoryreports.NUREG 1824,Supplement1shouldbereferencedperSupplementLARAttachmentJ Basedontheabove,theNRCstaffconcludesthatthisapproachprovidesreasonableassurancethattheFMusedinthedevelopmentofthefirescenariosfortheBeaverValleyFREsisappropriate,andthus,acceptableforuseintransitiontoNFPA805becausetheV&VoftheempiricalcorrelationsusedbythelicenseewereconsistentwitheitherNUREG 1824,Supplement1,authoritativepublications,peerreviewedjournalarticles,ornationalresearchlaboratoryreports.S upplementalInformationRegardingLAR(Reference18ADAMSAccessionNo.ML17111A887),SupplementedLARAttachmentJ1173.8.3.2.22191stbullet,2ndparagraph"Thelicenseefurtherexplainedthatthefuelsandcorrespondingsmokepropertiesintheareaswhereitappliedthesmokedetectionactuationcorrelationarewithintherangeofthematerialsthatweretestedtodevelopthetemperaturetosmokedensitycorrelation."AddstatementclarifyingthatNUREG 1824,Supplement1isnowusedastheV&Vbasis,perSupplementLARAttachmentJ"Thelicenseefurtherexplainedthatthefuelsandcorrespondingsmokepropertiesintheareaswhereitappliedthesmokedetectionactuationcorrelationarewithintherangeofthematerialsthatweretestedtodevelopthetemperaturetosmokedensitycorrelation.IntheletterdatedApril21,2017(Reference18),thelicenseeidentifiedthatAlpert'sceilingjetcorrelationhasbeenappliedwithintheNUREG 1824,Supplement1(Reference165)validatedrangeoritprovidedtechnicaljustificationincasesinwhichitusedthecorrelationoutsidetherange."SupplementalInformationRegardingLAR(Reference18ADAMSAccessionNo.ML17111A887),SupplementedLARAttachmentJ1183.8.3.3.22201stbullet,2ndparagraph InitsresponsetoFMRAI04.a(Reference12),thelicenseestatedthatthelimitationsandassumptionsassociatedwiththealgebraicmodelsaredocumentedinNUREG 1805andNUREG 1824,andthatinmostcases,itappliedthesubjectcorrelationswithinnormalizedparameterrangessummarizedinNUREG 1934.ThelicenseefurtherexplainedthatincaseswhereitappliedanalgebraicmodeloutsidethevalidatedrangedescribedinNUREG 1824,itjustifieditsuse,eitherbyaqualitativeassessmentorbyaquantitativesensitivityanalysis.AddstatementclarifyingthatNUREG 1824,Supplement1isnowusedastheV&Vbasis,perSupplementLARAttachmentJ.PerresponsetoFMRAI04.a,NUREG 1934isusedinreferencetothevalidatedranges,norNUREG 1824.InitsresponsetoFMRAI04.a(Refer ence12),thelicenseestatedthatthelimitationsandassumptionsassociatedwiththealgebraicmodelsaredocumentedinNUREG 1805andNUREG 1824,andthatinmostcases,itappliedthesubjectcorrelationswithinnormalizedparameterrangessummarizedinNUREG 1934.Thelicenseefurtherexplainedthatincaseswher eitappliedanalgebraicmodeloutsidethevalidatedrangedescribedinNUREG 1 93 4,itjustifieditsuse,eitherbyaqualitativeassessmentorbyaquantitativesensitivityanalysis.IntheletterdatedApril21,2017(Reference18),thelicenseeidentifiedthatthealgebraicmodelshavebeenappliedwithintheNUREG 1824,Supplement1(Reference165)validatedrangesoritprovidedtechnicaljustificationincasesinwhichitusedthealgebraicmodelsoutsidetherange.LicenseeResponsetoRAIsdated2015 06 26(Reference12ADAMSAccessionNo.ML15177A110),Page56SupplementalInformationRegardingLAR(Reference18ADAMSAccessionNo.ML17111A887),S upplementedLARAttachmentJ 11/28/2017 22of26 BeaverValleyUnits1and2 DraftSERCompiledCommentsABCD E F G H 2017 11 09DraftSESectionNo.2017 11 09DraftSEPageNo.ParagraphNo.2017 11 09DraftSEStatement CommentProposedRevisedStatementReferences1193.8.3.3.22212ndbullet,2ndparagraph"InitsresponsetoFMRAI04.c(Reference12),thelicenseeexplainedthatthenormalizedparameterssummarizedinNUREG 1934werecalculatedforeachoftheFDSanalyses.Thelicenseefurtherexplainedthatincaseswherethemodelwasappliedoutsidethevalidatedrange,itjustifiedtheuseofthemodeleitherbyaqualitativeassessmentorbyaquantitativesensitivityanalysis."SincesubmittalofthisRAI,FDSVersion6wasusedintwoanalyses,whichisvalidatedbyNUREG 1824,Supplement1."InitsresponsetoFMRAI04.c(Reference12),thelicenseeexplainedthatthenormalizedparameterssummarizedinNUREG 1934werecalculatedforeachoftheFDSanalyses.Thelicenseefurtherexplainedthatincaseswherethemodelwasappliedoutsidethevalidatedrange,itjustifiedtheuseofthemodeleitherbyaqualitativeassessmentorbyaquantitativesensitivityanalysis.IntheletterdatedApril21,2017(Refer ence18),thelicenseeidentifiedthatFDSVersion6analyseshavebeenappliedwithintheNUREG 1824,Supplement1(Reference165)validatedrangesoritprovidedtechnicaljustificationincasesinwhichitusedthecorrelationoutsidetherange."SupplementalInformationRegardingLAR(Reference18ADAMSAccessionNo.ML17111A887),S upplementedLARAttachmentJ1203.8.3.4.22232ndbulletInFMRAI05.d(Reference22),theNRCstaffrequestedthatthelicenseeexplainhowitensuredconsistencybetweenthetwocontractorsthatwereinvolvedintheFManalysesperformedinsupportoftheLAR.Three,nottwo,contractorsperformedfiremodeling InFMRAI05.d(Reference22),theNRCstaffrequestedthatthelicenseeexplainhowitensuredconsistencyamongthecontractorsthatwereinvolvedintheFManalysesperformedinsupportoftheLAR.FMRAI05.d1213.8.3.5.1224(2)AnextensivediscussionofquantifyingmodeluncertaintycanbefoundinNUREG 1934,"NuclearPowerPlantFireModelingApplicationGuide(NPPFI REMAG)"(Reference61).NUREG 1824,Supplement1isnotlistedaswell.NewanalysesuseNUREG 1824,Supplement1uncertainty.
Beaver Valley Units 1 and 2 Draft SER Compiled Comments A        B            C          D                                E                                              F                                                G                                      H 20171109  20171109  Paragraph  20171109 Draft SE Statement                                        Comment                  Proposed Revised Statement                                    References Draft SE  Draft SE Page    No.
AnextensivediscussionofquantifyingmodeluncertaintycanbefoundinNUREG 1934,"NuclearPowerPlantFireModelingApplicationGuide(NPPFIREMAG)"(Reference61)andNUREG 1824,Supplement1,"VerificationandValidationofSelectedFireModelsforNuclearPowerPlantApplications,"(Reference165).NUREG 1824,Supplement11223.8.3.5.222612thsub bullet Cabletrayswithanyamountofthermoplasticcable,regardlessofpercentage,weretreatedasthermoplasticforfirespreadrate.TheapproachhasbeenrefinedtoutilizethefullguidancewithinNUREG/CR 7010forscenarioswhereNUREG 2180wasapplied.Cabletrayswithapredominantanyamountofthermoplasticcable,regardlessofpercentage
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,weretreatedasthermoplasticforinaccordancewithNUREG/CR 7010(i.e.,FLASHCAT)firespreadrate.DraftSER,Att.A,pgA 10 NUREG/CR 7010,Section9.2.2,pg152 Reference18,ML17111A887,2017 04 21,EnclosureA,PageJ 13 11/28/2017 23of26 BeaverValleyUnits1and2 DraftSERCompiledCommentsABCD E F G H 2017 11 09DraftSESectionNo.2017 11 09DraftSEPageNo.ParagraphNo.2017 11 09DraftSEStatement CommentProposedRevisedStatementReferences1234.0230(c)2Insert"[2]"after"Unit1"intwoplacestonotethislicenseconditionappliestobothunits.ThelicenseeshallimplementtheUnit1(2)modificationstoitsfacility,asdescribedinAttachmentS,TableS2,"PlantModificationsCommitted,"inFENOCletterL17122,datedApril21,2017,tocompletethetransitiontofullcompliancewith10CFR50.48(c),bythecompletionofthesecondUnit1andUnit2refuelingoutage s,respectively,afterissuanceofthesafetyevaluation.Thelicenseeshallmaintainappropriatecompensatorymeasuresinplaceuntilcompletionofthesemodifications.
86      3.4.6        160          4      In PRA RAI 19 (Reference 22), the NRC staff          I think this section should also refer    In PRA RAI 19 (Reference 22) and PRA RAI 19.01      Reference 20, explained that conservatisms in the compliant        to PRA RAI 19.01 and its response,         (Reference 29), the NRC staff explained that        ML17235A512. (page 3 of plant model could have caused overestimation of which further discussed this issue.            conservatisms in the compliant plant model          12, or pdf 5/19) the risk offset values and underestimation of the                                              could have caused overestimation of the risk change in risk. The NRC staff requested that the                                                offset values and underestimation of the change    Reference 29, licensee identify conservative modeling or                                                      in risk. The NRC staff requested that the licensee  ML17220A234 modelling assumptions resulting in                                                              identify conservative modeling or modelling underestimation of the change in risk and to                                                    assumptions resulting in underestimation of the show that in such cases the underestimation                                                    change in risk and to show that in such cases the could still be offset by the decrease associated                                                underestimation could still be offset by the with non VFDR modifications. In its response to                                                decrease associated with non VFDR PRA RAI 19 (Reference 11), the licensee provided                                                modifications. In its responses to PRA RAI 19 its explanation of how it made modelling                                                        (Reference 11) and PRA RAI 19.01 (Reference 20),
Thelicenseconditionappliestobothunits.1244.0230(c)3ThelicenseeshallimplementtheitemslistedinAttachmentS,TableS3,"ImplementationItems,"ofFENOCletterL17268,datedAugust22,2017,by12monthsafterissuanceofthesafetyevaluation AstatementneedsaddedthattheTableS 3implementationitemsrelatedtotheFPRAmodelupdates(BV1 1633,BV1 2974,BV1 3060,BV1 3108,BV1 3109,BV2 1580,BV2 1622,BV2 1623,andBV2 1750).ThiswasdescribedinL 17 122(ML17111A887)"Tabl eS 3ImplementationItemChanges"Note1.Also,thiswasshownintheupdatedAttachmentS,TableS 3,Note1(L 17 268ML17235A512)
adjustments so that the change in risk was not                                                  the licensee provided its explanation of how it underestimated.                                                                                made modelling adjustments so that the change in risk was not underestimated.
ThelicenseeshallimplementtheitemslistedinAttachmentS,TableS3,"ImplementationItems,"ofFENOCletterL17268,datedAugust22,2017,by12monthsafterissuanceofthesafetyevaluation(withtheexceptionofItemsBV1 1633,BV1 2974,BV1 3060,BV1 3108,BV1 3109,BV2 1580,BV2 1622,BV2 1623,andBV2 1750,whicharetobecompletedinaccordancewiththeTableS 2ModificationsSchedule."L 17 122(ML17111A887)"TableS 3ImplementationItemChanges"Note1;UpdatedAttachmentS,TableS 3,Note1(L 17 268ML17235A512)1259.0234Reference18-"(ADAMSPackageAccessionNo.ML17111A882).
87      3.4.7        161          4      In its response to PRA RAI 14 (Reference 11) and    Wrong reference                            In its response to PRA RAI 14 (Reference 1110)      Reference 10 and ADAMS PRA RAI 03                                                                                      and PRA RAI 03                                      accession number (Reference 19), the licensee explained that from                                                (Reference 19), the licensee explained that from ML15118A484 a sensitivity study, it determined the impact of                                                a sensitivity study, it determined the impact of SOKC to be very small, and therefore, was not                                                  SOKC to be very small, and therefore, was not included in the risk estimates.                                                                included in the risk estimates.
" AccessionNo.ML17111A882isnotfoundinADAMS.-"(ADAMSPackageAccessionNo.ML17111A887)." Reference18andADAMSaccessionnumberML17111A8871269.0245Reference153"NBSIR85 3196"Referencehasaminortypo"NBSIR85 319 5"N B S I R85 3195,"HeatReleaseRateCharacteristicsofSomeCombustibleFuelSourcesinNuclearPowerPlants"127Att.AA4Row2Column4"TheplumeradiuscorrelationisderivedfromHeskestad'splumecenterlinetemperaturecorrelation,forwhichV&VisdocumentedinNUREG 1824.Theplumeradiuscorrelationissubjecttothesamevalidatedranges." NRC'sEvaluationofAcceptabilitydoesnotreferencejustificationsforwhenplumeradiusisoutsidethevalidatedrangeasmentioninLARAttachmentJ.ItalsoshouldreferenceNUREG 1824,Supplement1."TheplumeradiuscorrelationisderivedfromHeskestad'splumecenterlinetemperaturecorrelation,forwhichV&VisdocumentedinNUREG 1824 ,Supplement1.Theplumeradiuscorrelationissubjecttothesamevalidatedrangesandjustifications(SeeresponsetoFMRAI04.a(Refer ence12))."SupplementalInformationRegardingLAR(Reference18ADAMSAccessionNo.ML17111A887)128Att.AA6Row2Column4"-thevalidatedrangereportedinNUREG 1934,Supplement1." NRC'sEvaluationofAcceptabilityshouldreferenceNUREG 1824,Supplement1-thevalidatedrangereportedinNUREG 1 82 4,Supplement1."SupplementalInformationRegardingLAR(Reference18ADAMSAccessionNo.ML17111A887) 11/28/2017 24of26 BeaverValleyUnits1and2 DraftSERCompiledCommentsABCD E F G H 2017 11 09DraftSESectionNo.2017 11 09DraftSEPageNo.ParagraphNo.2017 11 09DraftSEStatement CommentProposedRevisedStatementReferences129Att.AA9Row3 ObstructedPlumeRadiusV&VBasisismissingforSERAttachmentA.V&VBasisforobstructedplumeradiusneedstobeaddedasstatedinSeePageJ 16ofLARAttachmentJassupplemented(i.e.,Reference18).AddFollowingtoSERAttachmentA:"ObstructedPlumeRadius";"Correlation,""ApplicationofBeaverValley,UnitNo.1&BeaverValley,UnitNo.2,""V&VBasis,"and"NRCStaff'sEvaluationofAcceptability."S upplementalInformationRegardingLAR(Reference18ADAMSAccessionNo.ML17111A887),PageJ 16ofSupplementedLARAttachmentJ130Att.BB4Row2Column4"-NUREG 1824-"AllreferencestoNUREG 1824intheevaluationofacceptabilitysectionshouldbeNUREG 1824,Supplement1"-NUREG 1824 ,S upplement1-"SupplementalInformationRegardingLAR(Reference18ADAMSAccessionNo.ML17111A887)131Att.CC1°CdegreesCelsius(°C)isdefinedin3.4.2.2,butitisnotlistedintheabbreviationtableAdd°CldegreesCelsius draftSE,page136132Att.CC 1A C AC(alternatingcurrent)isnotlistedintheabbreviationslistAddAClalternatingcurrent draftSE,page189133Att.CC1ASMEASMElAmericanSocietyforTestingandMaterials IncorrectacronymdefinitionASMElAmericanSocietyofMechanicalEngineers N/A134Att.CC1BVPSAcronymBVPSanddefinitionaremissingfromAttachmentC.BVPSlBeaverValleyPowe rStation DraftSERPage232and241135Att.CC1CVCS chemicalvolumecontrolsystem(CVCS)isdefinedin3.2.2,butitisnotlistedintheabbreviationtableAddCVCSlchemicalvolumecontrolsystem draftSE,page115136Att.CC1DWSTdemineralizedwaterstoragetank(DWST)isdefinedinin3.2.2,butitisnotlistedintheabbreviationtableAddDWSTldemineralizedwaterstoragetank draftSE,page114137Att.CC1ERFemergencyresponsefacility(ERF)isdefinedin3.1.1.6,butitisnotintheabbreviationtableAddERFlemergencyresponsefacility draftSE,page63138Att.CC1FMDBFMDBlFiremodelingdatabaseAcronymFMDBisnotusedintheSER,however,FMWBisusedonpage144andthroughoutAtt.AofthedraftSER FMWBlFireModelingWorkbook DraftSERPage144andAtt.A.139Att.CC1FPEE fireprotectionengineeringevaluation(FPEE)islistedinTable2.3 1,butitisnotintheabbreviationtable addFPEElfireprotectionengineeringevaluation draftSE,page144140Att.CC1GPM gallonsperminute(gpm)islistedinTable3.5 2,butnotintheabbreviationtableAddgpmgallonsperminute draftSE,page190141Att.CC2HRRPUAAcronymHRRPUAanddefinitionaremissingfromAttachmentC.HRRPUAlheatreleaserateperunitarea DraftSERPage146142Att.CC 2I A3.4.3listsinstrumentair(IA),butit'sn addIAlinstrumentair draftSE,page157143Att.CC2POS PlantOperatingState(POS)isin3.5.3.1,butitisnotintheabbreviationlist Ad dPOSlPlantOperatingState draftSE,page206 11/28/2017 25of26 BeaverValleyUnits1and2 DraftSERCompiledCommentsABCD E F G H 2017 11 09DraftSESectionNo.2017 11 09DraftSEPageNo.ParagraphNo.2017 11 09DraftSEStatement CommentProposedRevisedStatementReferences144Att.CC2PPDWST primaryplantdemineralizedwaterstoragetank(PPDWST)isin3.2.2,butnotintheabbreviationlistAddPPDWSTlprimaryplantdemineralizedwaterstoragetank draftSE,Page114145Att.CC2PPE personalprotectiveequipment(PPE)isin3.2.5,butnotinabbreviationlistAddPPElpersonalprotectiveequipment draftSE,page121146Att.CC 3RW/SW RW/SWiswrittenin3.2.2,butitisnotintheabbreviationlistandisnotdefinedinthetext addRW/SWlriverwater/servicewater147Att.CC3SG steamgenerator(SG)isin3.2.1.3,butitisnotintheabbreviationlist addSGlsteamgenerator draftSE,page77148Att.CC 3SOFCSOFClstate of knowledgecorrelationIncorrectacronymdefinitionSO K Clstate of knowledgecorrelationDraftSERPages139and161149Att.CC3VDCventilationductchase VDCislistedasventilationductchaseintheabbreviationlist,butitlookslikeitshouldbeVDC(VoltsDC)VoltsDirectCurrent 11/28/2017 26of26}}
88      3.4.8        163      1st bullet Accordingly, the CDF and LERF for both units        The risk acceptance guideline for CDF Accordingly, the CDF for both units are above the (ADAMS Accession No.
above the risk acceptance guidelines of              is 1E05, not 1E05. The conclusion        risk acceptance guidelines of 1E05/year and        ML17177A097).
1E05/year and 1E 6/year in RG 1.174,                 statement is not clear.                    LERF is below the risk acceptance guidelines of 1E respectively.                                                                                  06/year contained in RG 1.174.
89    3.5.1.1       169          2      The licensee performed a detailed analysis of fire  Include passive fire protection            The licensee performed a detailed analysis of fire LAR protection features and identified the fire          features, as in Item 4) in the previous protection features and identified the fire suppression and detection systems required to        paragraph. Section 3.5.1.8 does not suppression and detection systems and passive meet the NSPC for each fire area.                    reference Table 43 listing of passive fire protection features required to meet the fire protection features.                  NSPC for each fire area.
90    3.5.1.3      169          1       In LAR Section 4.2.3, the licensee stated that six This was supplemented in the                In LAR Section 4.2.3, the licensee stated that six Updated Attachment K L licensing actions for Unit No. 1 and nine licensing updated Attachment K submitted in L licensing actions for Unit No. 1 and eleven                17122 (ML17111A887) actions for Unit No. 2 will be transitioned into the 17122 (ML17111A887) Enclosure B. licensing actions for Unit No. 2 will be                    Enclosure B NFPA 805 FPP as previously approved.                                                            transitioned into the NFPA 805 FPP as previously In this updated Attachment K, there approved.
are six licensing actions for Unit No. 1 (11.02, 11.05, 11.16, 11.18, 11.24, 11.26) and eleven licensing actions for Unit 2 (3, 4, 5, 6, 8, 11, 18, 26, 29, 30, 31) that will be transitioned into the NFPA 805 FPP as previously approved.
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Beaver Valley Units 1 and 2 Draft SER Compiled Comments A        B            C            D                              E                                              F                                        G                                    H 20171109  20171109    Paragraph  20171109 Draft SE Statement                                      Comment              Proposed Revised Statement                                References Draft SE  Draft SE Page    No.
Section No.      No.
91    3.5.1.3        171        LA 11.02                                                      Missing a condition as bases for    Pressurizer PORV blocking valve power cables are Ref 18 ML17111A887 2017 Table 3.52                NRC Staff's                                                    exemption approval. Add in.          run in conduit approximately 20 feet above the  0421, Enclosure B, Att. K Evaluation                                                                                          floor to the penetration area where they are 4th                                                                                              separated by a fire barrier and automatic paragraph                                                                                            suppression and detection system.
92    3.5.1.3        175        LA 11.16                                                      Missing a condition as bases for    Separation of approximately 5 feet is maintained Ref 18 ML17111A887 2017 Table 3.52                NRC Staff's                                                    exemption approval. Add in.          between source range channels.                  0421, Enclosure B, Att. K Evaluation 2nd                                                                                              Source range cables are in conduit.
paragraph 93    3.5.1.3        175        LA 11.16  In response to SSD RAI 06 (Reference 12), the      Licensing Action number is incorrect In response to SSD RAI 06 (Reference 12), the    Ref 12 ML15177A110 2015 Table 3.52                NRC Staff's licensee stated that Licensing Action 10 will not  and may be confused with BVPS2      licensee stated that Licensing Action 11.10 will 0626 Evaluation  be transitioned.                                                                         not be transitioned.
4th paragraph 94    3.5.1.3        176        LA 11.18  1NS1                                              Corrected fire compartments          1NS1                                          Ref 18 ML17111A887 2017 Table 3.52                Applicable  1PA1A                                                                                  1PA1A                                          0421, Enclosure B, Att. K Fire    1PA1C                                                                                  1PA1C Compartm    1PA1E                                                                                  1PA1E ent    1PA1G                                                                                  1PA1G 1PA1GA                                                                                1PA1GA 1PA1GB                                                                                1PA1GB 1PA1GC                                                                                1PA1GC 1TB1                                                                                  1PT1 3CR1                                                                                  1SBGEN 3IS1                                                                                  1SGPD1 3IS2                                                                                  1TB1 3IS3                                                                                  3CR1 3IS4                                                                                  3IS1 3IS2 3IS3 3IS4 3IS6 95    3.5.1.3        186        LA 11    Not Applicable                                      Does not match the fire              Not Applicable                                  Ref 18 ML17111A887 2017 Table 3.52                Applicable                                                      compartment in Licensing Action 11  2PA4                                          0421, Enclosure B, Att. K Fire Compartm ent 96    3.5.1.3        189        LA 26    The diesel generator supplies the 120V              Typo                                The diesel generator supplies the 120V          Ref 18 ML17111A887 2017 Table 3.52                NRC Staff's alternating current (AC) uninterruptible power                                          alternating current (AC) uninterruptible power  0421, Enclosure B, Att. K Evaluation  supply system required for the detection system                                          supply system required for the detection system 2nd      and the 25V direct current (DC) panels for the fire                                      and the 125V direct current (DC) panels for the Paragraph  detection and suppression systems.                                                       fire detection and suppression systems.
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Beaver Valley Units 1 and 2 Draft SER Compiled Comments A        B            C            D                              E                                                F                                          G                                          H 20171109  20171109    Paragraph 20171109 Draft SE Statement                                        Comment                Proposed Revised Statement                                    References Draft SE  Draft SE Page    No.
Section No.     No.
97    3.5.1.3       191        LA 30    Clarification Request 15: It is requested that the  Clarification Request 15 was            Clarification Request 15: It is requested that the  SSD RAI 13(d) (L15188 Table 3.52                          NRC document as a prior approval recognition      withdrawn per SSD RAI 13(d) (L15      NRC document as a prior approval recognition      ML15177A110); FPE RAI that the absence of sprinkler protection in the    188 ML15177A110) and FPE RAI            that the absence of sprinkler protection in the    05(a)(viii) (L15118 intake structure compartment (3 IS 4) that          05(a)(viii) (L15118 ML15118A484). intake structure compartment (3 IS 4) that          ML15118A484); SER Section houses the diesel fire pump is acceptable                                                  houses the diesel fire pump is acceptable          3.5.2 (pg 203)
This is also discussed in section 3.5.2 (pg 203) of the SE.
98    3.5.1.3        191        LA 30    Based on the previous staff approval of this        Clarification Request 15 was            Based on the previous staff approval of this        SSD RAI 13(d) (L15188 Table 3.52                          deviation in SER dated June 6, 1979 (Reference      withdrawn per SSD RAI 13(d) (L15      deviation in SER dated June 6, 1979 (Reference      ML15177A110); FPE RAI 96), Clarification Request 15, and the statement    188 ML15177A110) and FPE RAI            96), Clarification Request 15, and the statement    05(a)(viii) (L15118 by the licensee that the bases remain valid, the    05(a)(viii) (L15118 ML15118A484). by the licensee that the bases remain valid, the    ML15118A484); SER Section NRC staff concludes that the applicability of this                                          NRC staff concludes that the applicability of this  3.5.2 (pg 203) licensing action is acceptable.                     This is also discussed in section 3.5.2 licensing action is acceptable.
(pg 203) of the SE.
99    3.5.1.3        191        LA 30    3IS4                                              Other Intake Fire Compartments are 3IS1                                                  Ref 18 ML17111A887 2017 Table 3.52                Applicable                                                    also part of the LA                    3IS2                                              0421, Enclosure B, Att. K Fire                                                                                                3IS3 Compartm                                                                                              3IS4 ent 100    3.5.1.3       194            2    In its response to FPE RAI 04a and FPE RAI 04c      A followup RAI was issued regarding    Replace with: In FPE RAI 04.01 (Reference 25),     FPE RAI 04.01 (L15371 (Reference 12), the licensee stated that LAR        NFPA 805 Section 3.3.5.3 (FPE RAI      the NRC staff stated In the engineering            ML15356A136); L16058 Attachment K, as supplemented, Licensing Action    04.01 L15371 ML15356A136), with      evaluation, the licensee concluded that the low    (ML16055A160); SER 27 is not required, and an engineering evaluation  the response stating that approval      population of cables that do not meet Institute of  Section 3.1.4.6 (pg 90) was performed that analyzed the low population      will be requested as an Attachment L    Electrical and Electronics Engineers (IEEE) of cables with potential nonqualified electric      Item. The Attachment L Item was        Standard 383, 1974 Edition, or equivalent, were cable insulation material installed in electrical  submitted as Approval Request 6. (L    considered in the fire modeling evaluation and raceways and determined the configuration to be    16058 ML16055A160).                    determined to be adequate for the hazard. In acceptable, and removed the compliance                                                      accordance with FAQ 060008, this type of EEEE statement Submit for NRC Approval. The NRC        This should be updated to reflect the cannot be selfapproved by the licensee. In its staff concludes that the licensees response to    Approval Request, which is identified response to FPE RAI 04.01 (Reference 14), the FPE RAI 04a is acceptable because it performed      in SE Section 3.1.4.6                  licensee stated that the compliance strategy for an engineering evaluation and concluded that                                                NFPA 805 Section 3.3.5.3, for the low population the cable is acceptable, which is in accordance    See SE pages 35/36 for same            of cables with potentially nonqualified electrical with RG 1.205, NEI 04 02, and FAQ 06 0022          comment.                               cable insulation material installed in electrical raceways at BVPS1 and BVPS2 will be revised to "Submit for NRC Approval."
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101    3.5.1.5      196          2    In LAR Attachment C, the licensee identified        Component ID for three of the four    In LAR Attachment C, the licensee identified        LAR Attachment C, Page 49 VFDR BV20502 in fire area 2CV1, which            affected valves were transcribed      VFDR BV20502 in fire area 2CV1, which            (VFDR BV20502).
involves fire damage to power cables associated    incorrectly from LAR Attachment C. involves fire damage to power cables associated with high low pressure interface valves 2RHS      They should be:                      with high low pressure interface valves 2RHS MV701AP, 2RHSMV701BP, 2RHSMV702AP ,           2RHSMOV701AP                        MOV701AP, 2RHSMOV701BP, 2RHSMOV702A and 2RHSMOV702BP. The licensee stated in the      2RHSMOV701BP                        P , and 2RHSMOV702BP. The licensee stated in disposition that the VDR will be corrected by a    2RHSMOV702AP                        the disposition that the VFDR will be corrected by plant modification.                                2RHSMOV702BP                        a plant modification.
Typo: VFDR 102    3.5.1.6       197          2      The licensee stated that the generator fuel tank  excessive detail                      the licensee demonstrated adequate reserves of N/A has a 4 gallon capacity, which will run the                                              fuel for sustainable operation of portable generator for about 4.2 hours, and that the                                              ventilation equipment during which time available gasoline is enough to keep the                                                  additional fuel could be obtained to replenish generator running for about 15.75 hours. The                                              reserves.
licensee further stated that the gasoline engine driven fans used for the Beaver Valley, Unit No. 1, diesel generator rooms have a one quart fuel capacity, which will run the fan for about 1 hour; therefore, the available gasoline/oil mixture is enough to keep both fans running for about 10 hours.
103    3.5.1.7      199          2    ... In its response to SSD RAI 04a (Reference 12), The licensee response for PRA RAI    ... In its response to SSD RAI 04a (Reference 12), Reference 9 and ADAMS the licensee stated that the differentiation of RAs 18b is contained in Reference 11. the licensee stated that the differentiation of RAs accession number in LAR Attachment G, Tables G1 and G2, was                                              in LAR Attachment G, Tables G1 and G2, was        ML14002A086 defined and submitted as part of the licensees    The licensee response for PRA RAI    defined and submitted as part of the licensees response to PRA RAI 18b (Reference 22).             18b is not contained in Reference 22. response to PRA RAI 18b (Reference 11).
104    3.5.1.7      199          2    The licensee further stated that the RAs would be The licensee response for PRA RAI 03    The licensee further stated that the RAs would be Reference 9 and ADAMS updated in response to PRA RAI 03 (Reference        is contained in Reference 19.        updated in response to PRA RAI 03 (Reference        accession number 22), which is evaluated in SE Section 3.4.                                                19), which is evaluated in SE Section 3.4.         ML14002A086 The licensee response for PRA RAI 03 is not contained in Reference 22.
105    3.5.2       201          2    In LAR Attachment T, Prior Approval Clarification Two licensing actions are dependent    In LAR Attachment T, Prior Approval Clarification Reference 8, LAR Request 2, the licensee stated that the licensing on the clarification in Attachment T,   Request 2, the licensee stated that the licensing Attachment T submittals associated with Licensing Action 11.02 Clarification Request #2.              submittals associated with Licensing Action 11.02 did not state that all cables are routed in                                            and 11.16 did not state that all cables are conduit,                                                                                 routed in conduit, 106    3.5.2       202          2    The licensee submitted its revised LAR              Approval Request 5 was revised in a  The licensee submitted its revised LAR              Reference 16 Attachment L including Approval Request 5 on        subsequent submittal.                 Attachment L including Approval Request 5 on February 24, 2016 (Reference 15).                                                        February 24, 2016 (Reference 15) and an updated Approval Request 5 on May 12, 2016 (Reference 16).
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Beaver Valley Units 1 and 2 Draft SER Compiled Comments A        B            C          D                              E                                              F                                            G                                      H 20171109  20171109  Paragraph 20171109 Draft SE Statement                                      Comment                Proposed Revised Statement                                  References Draft SE  Draft SE Page    No.
Section No.     No.
107    3.5.2        202          3    "In its response to SSD RAI 13d                    Reference points to BVPS1              "In its response to SSD RAI 13d                    Reference 35 (Reference 12), the licensee provided excerpts      document rather than reference for      (Reference 12), the licensee provided excerpts from NRC SER dated June 6, 1979                    BVPS2                                  from NRC SER dated June 6, 1979 (Reference 96), a letter from Duquesne Light and                                            (Reference 35), a letter from Duquesne Light and Power to the NRC, and the Beaver Valley, Unit                                              Power to the NRC, and the Beaver Valley, Unit No. 2, NUREG 1057 SER (Reference 96), indicating                                            No. 2, NUREG 1057 SER (Reference 96), indicating that the fire pumps are located in the intake                                              that the fire pumps are located in the intake structure,..."                                                                              structure,..."
108    3.5.3.3      207          6    "Pinch points refer to a particular location in an  This definition is not consistent with "Pinch points refer to plant locations where a      LAR Section 4.3.1, Page 40.
area where the damage from a single fire            the definition stated in LAR            single fire may damage all success paths of a KSF. FAQ 070040 Revision 4, scenario could result in failure of multiple        Attachment D or LAR Section 4.3.        a particular location in an area where the        Section F.3, ADAMS components or trains of a system such that the                                              damage from a single fire scenario could result in Accession No.
maximum detriment on that systems                  LAR Section 4.3.1 defines a pinch      failure of multiple components or trains of a      ML082070249.
performance would be realized from the single      point as: "plant locations where a      system such that the maximum detriment on fire scenario. Typically, this involves close      single fire may damage all success      that systems performance would be realized vertical proximity of cables that support          paths of a KSF." Other locations in the from the single fire scenario. Typically, this redundant components or trains of a system such    LAR have slightly different, but        involves close vertical proximity of cables that that all such cables can be damaged by just one    consistent, wording.                   support redundant components or trains of a fire scenario."                                                                            system such that all such cables can be damaged This definition is consistent with FAQ by just one fire scenario."
070040, which states on Page 14 to "Identify locations where: 1. Fires may cause damage to the equipment (and cabling) credited above."
109    3.7.2        214          1    ...the licensees monitoring program will meet      NFPA 805, Section 2.6 requires the      ...the licensees monitoring program will meet    NFPA 805, Reference 3.
the requirements specified in Sections 2.6.1,      monitoring program to ensure that      the requirements specified in Sections 2.6, 2.6.1, 2.6.2, and 2.6.3 of NFPA 805                      the assumptions in the engineering      2.6.2, and 2.6.3 of NFPA 805 analysis remain valid for those assumptions that are subject to change.
110    3.8.2        217          3    The LAR also stated that analyses based on the      Fire risk evaluations get an expert    The LAR also stated that analyses based on the    Reference 8, LAR Section PRA program, which includes the FREs, are issued panel review, not necessarily a FPRA      PRA program, which includes the FREs, require      4.7.2.
as formal analyses subject to these same            peer review.                            the use of qualified individuals, procedures that configuration control processes, and are                                                    require additionally subjected to the PRA peer review                                              calculations be subject to independent review process specified in the ASME/ANS PRA standard                                              and verification, record retention, peer review, (Reference 45).                                                                             and a corrective action program that ensures appropriate actions are taken when errors are discovered.
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Beaver Valley Units 1 and 2 Draft SER Compiled Comments A        B            C           D                              E                                            F                                          G                                      H 20171109  20171109  Paragraph 20171109 Draft SE Statement                                    Comment                Proposed Revised Statement                                References Draft SE  Draft SE Page    No.
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111    3.8.2.1      218          1    The licensee stated that its procedures require    FPRA is performed consistent with    Replace with these words, "FENOC requires that Reference 8, LAR Section independent review of analyses, calculations, and  the standard for internal events PRA, the calculations and evaluations in support of    4.7.3 evaluations, including those performed in          not with standards for Appendix B    NFPA 805, exclusive of the Fire PRA, be support of compliance with 10 CFR 50.48(c). The    programs. The words in the draft SE  performed within the scope of the QA program, LAR stated that the transition to NFPA 805 was    are not stated in the LAR.           which requires independent review as defined by independently reviewed, and that analyses,                                              BVPS1 and BVPS2 calculations, and evaluations to be performed                                            procedures."
posttransition will be independently reviewed, as required by existing procedures.
112  3.8.3.2.1      218          1    NUREG1824, Verification and Validation of        NUREG1824, Supplement 1 should      NUREG1824, Verification and Validation of        Supplemental Information Selected Fire Models for Nuclear Power Plant      also be referenced per Supplement    Selected Fire Models for Nuclear Power Plant      Regarding LAR (Reference Applications, Volumes 17 (Reference 57),         LAR Attachment J                      Applications, Volumes 17 (Reference 57) and      18  ADAMS Accession No.
documents the V&V of five selected fire models                                          Supplement 1 to NUREG1824 (Reference 165)        ML17111A887),
commonly used to support applications of RI/PB                                          documents the V&V of five selected fire models    Supplemented LAR fire protection at NPPs. The seven volumes of this                                      commonly used to support applications of RI/PB    Attachment J NUREGseries report provide technical...                                                fire protection at NPPs. The seven volumes of this These NUREGseries reports provide technical...
113  3.8.3.2.1      218          2    "Accordingly, for those FM elements performed      NUREG1824, Supplement 1 should      "Accordingly, for those FM elements performed      Supplemental Information by the licensee using the V&V applications        be referenced per Supplement LAR      by the licensee using the V&V applications        Regarding LAR (Reference contained in NUREG1824 to support the            Attachment J                          contained in NUREG1824, Supplement 1 to          18  ADAMS Accession No.
transition to NFPA 805, the NRC staff concludes                                          support the transition to NFPA 805, the NRC staff  ML17111A887),
that the use of these models is acceptable,                                             concludes that the use of these models is          Supplemented LAR provided that the intended application is within                                        acceptable, provided that the intended            Attachment J the appropriate limitations of the model, as                                            application is within the appropriate limitations identified in NUREG1824."                                                              of the model, as identified in NUREG1824, Supplement 1."
114  3.8.3.2.1      218          3    In LAR Attachment J, as supplemented, the          NUREG1824, Supplement 1 should      In LAR Attachment J, as supplemented, the          Supplemental Information licensee identified the use of several empirical  be referenced per Supplement LAR      licensee identified the use of several empirical  Regarding LAR (Reference correlations that are not addressed in NUREG      Attachment J                          correlations that are not addressed in NUREG      18  ADAMS Accession No.
1824 (see SE Section 3.4.2.3.1). The NRC staff                                          1824, Supplement 1 (see SE Section 3.4.2.3.1). ML17111A887),
reviewed these correlations, as well as the                                              The NRC staff reviewed these correlations, as      Supplemented LAR related material provided in the LAR, in order to                                        well as the related material provided in the LAR, Attachment J determine whether the licensee adequately                                                in order to determine whether the licensee demonstrated alignment with specific portions of                                        adequately demonstrated alignment with specific the applicable NUREG1824 guidance.                                                      portions of the applicable NUREG1824, Supplement 1 guidance.
115  3.8.3.2.1      218          4     "The NRC staff concludes that the theoretical      NUREG1824, Supplement 1 should      "The NRC staff concludes that the theoretical      Supplemental Information bases of the models and empirical correlations    be referenced per Supplement LAR      bases of the models and empirical correlations    Regarding LAR (Reference used in the FM calculations that were not          Attachment J                          used in the FM calculations that were not          18  ADAMS Accession No.
addressed in NUREG1824 were identified by the                                          addressed in NUREG1824, Supplement 1 were        ML17111A887),
NRC staff and described in authoritative                                                identified by the NRC staff and described in      Supplemented LAR publications, peer reviewed journal articles or                                          authoritative publications, peer reviewed journal  Attachment J conference papers, or national research                                                  articles or conference papers, or national laboratory reports..."                                                                  research laboratory reports..."
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116  3.8.3.2.1      219            3      Based on the above, the NRC staff concludes that NUREG1824, Supplement 1 should          Based on the above, the NRC staff concludes that    Supplemental Information this approach provides reasonable assurance that be referenced per Supplement LAR        this approach provides reasonable assurance that    Regarding LAR (Reference the FM used in the development of the fire        Attachment J                          the FM used in the development of the fire          18  ADAMS Accession No.
scenarios for the Beaver Valley FREs is                                                  scenarios for the Beaver Valley FREs is              ML17111A887),
appropriate, and thus, acceptable for use in                                              appropriate, and thus, acceptable for use in        Supplemented LAR transition to NFPA 805 because the V&V of the                                            transition to NFPA 805 because the V&V of the        Attachment J empirical correlations used by the licensee were                                          empirical correlations used by the licensee were consistent with either NUREG1824, authoritative                                          consistent with either NUREG1824, Supplement publications, peer reviewed journal articles, or                                          1, authoritative publications, peer reviewed national research laboratory reports.                                                     journal articles, or national research laboratory reports.
117  3.8.3.2.2      219      1st bullet, "The licensee further explained that the fuels and Add statement clarifying that NUREG "The licensee further explained that the fuels and    Supplemental Information 2nd      corresponding smoke properties in the areas        1824, Supplement 1 is now used as corresponding smoke properties in the areas              Regarding LAR (Reference paragraph where it applied the smoke detection actuation the V&V basis, per Supplement LAR where it applied the smoke detection actuation                  18  ADAMS Accession No.
correlation are within the range of the materials Attachment J                            correlation are within the range of the materials    ML17111A887),
that were tested to develop the temperature to                                            that were tested to develop the temperature to      Supplemented LAR smoke density correlation."                                                              smoke density correlation. In the letter dated      Attachment J April 21, 2017 (Reference 18), the licensee identified that Alpert's ceiling jet correlation has been applied within the NUREG1824, Supplement 1 (Reference 165) validated range or it provided technical justification in cases in which it used the correlation outside the range."
118  3.8.3.3.2      220      1st bullet, In its response to FM RAI 04.a (Reference 12), the Add statement clarifying that NUREG  In its response to FM RAI 04.a (Reference 12), the  Licensee Response to RAIs 2nd      licensee stated that the limitations and          1824, Supplement 1 is now used as      licensee stated that the limitations and            dated 20150626 paragraph assumptions associated with the algebraic            the V&V basis, per Supplement LAR      assumptions associated with the algebraic            (Reference 12  ADAMS models are documented in NUREG1805 and            Attachment J. Per response to FM RAI  models are documented in NUREG1805 and              Accession No.
NUREG1824, and that in most cases, it applied    04.a, NUREG1934 is used in            NUREG1824, and that in most cases, it applied      ML15177A110), Page 56 the subject correlations within normalized        reference to the validated ranges, nor the subject correlations within normalized parameter ranges summarized in NUREG1934.         NUREG1824.                           parameter ranges summarized in NUREG1934.           Supplemental Information The licensee further explained that in cases                                              The licensee further explained that in cases        Regarding LAR (Reference where it applied an algebraic model outside the                                          where it applied an algebraic model outside the      18  ADAMS Accession No.
validated range described in NUREG1824, it                                              validated range described in NUREG1934, it          ML17111A887),
justified its use, either by a qualitative                                                justified its use, either by a qualitative          Supplemented LAR assessment or by a quantitative sensitivity                                              assessment or by a quantitative sensitivity          Attachment J analysis.                                                                                 analysis. In the letter dated April 21, 2017 (Reference 18), the licensee identified that the algebraic models have been applied within the NUREG1824, Supplement 1 (Reference 165) validated ranges or it provided technical justification in cases in which it used the algebraic models outside the range.
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Section No.      No.
119  3.8.3.3.2     221      2nd bullet, "In its response to FM RAI 04.c (Reference 12),     Since submittal of this RAI, FDS    "In its response to FM RAI 04.c (Reference 12),     Supplemental Information 2nd      the licensee explained that the normalized          Version 6 was used in two analyses, the licensee explained that the normalized          Regarding LAR (Reference paragraph parameters summarized in NUREG1934 were              which is validated by NUREG1824,  parameters summarized in NUREG1934 were            18  ADAMS Accession No.
calculated for each of the FDS analyses. The        Supplement 1.                      calculated for each of the FDS analyses. The        ML17111A887),
licensee further explained that in cases where                                          licensee further explained that in cases where      Supplemented LAR the model was applied outside the validated                                              the model was applied outside the validated          Attachment J range, it justified the use of the model either by a                                    range, it justified the use of the model either by a qualitative assessment or by a quantitative                                              qualitative assessment or by a quantitative sensitivity analysis."                                                                  sensitivity analysis. In the letter dated April 21, 2017 (Reference 18), the licensee identified that FDS Version 6 analyses have been applied within the NUREG1824, Supplement 1 (Reference 165) validated ranges or it provided technical justification in cases in which it used the correlation outside the range."
120  3.8.3.4.2     223      2nd bullet In FM RAI 05.d (Reference 22), the NRC staff          Three, not two, contractors        In FM RAI 05.d (Reference 22), the NRC staff        FM RAI 05.d requested that the licensee explain how it          performed fire modeling            requested that the licensee explain how it ensured consistency between the two                                                      ensured consistency among the contractors that contractors that were involved in the FM                                                were involved in the FM analyses performed in analyses performed in support of the LAR.                                               support of the LAR.
121  3.8.3.5.1      224          (2)     An extensive discussion of quantifying model        NUREG1824, Supplement 1 is not    An extensive discussion of quantifying model        NUREG1824, Supplement 1 uncertainty can be found in NUREG1934,              listed as well. New analyses use    uncertainty can be found in NUREG1934, Nuclear Power Plant Fire Modeling Application NUREG1824, Supplement 1                  Nuclear Power Plant Fire Modeling Application Guide (NPP FIRE MAG) (Reference 61).               uncertainty.                       Guide (NPP FIRE MAG) (Reference 61) and NUREG1824, Supplement 1, Verification and Validation of Selected Fire Models for Nuclear Power Plant Applications, (Reference 165).
122  3.8.3.5.2      226        12th sub Cable trays with any amount of thermoplastic          The approach has been refined to    Cable trays with a predominant any amount of        Draft SER, Att. A, pg A10 bullet    cable, regardless of percentage, were treated as utilize the full guidance within        thermoplastic cable, regardless of percentage, thermoplastic for fire spread rate.                  NUREG/CR7010 for scenarios where were treated as thermoplastic for in accordance        NUREG/CR7010, Section NUREG2180 was applied.            with NUREG/CR7010 (i.e., FLASHCAT) fire            9.2.2, pg 152 spread rate.
Reference 18, ML17111A887, 20170421, Enclosure A, Page J13 11/28/2017                                                                                                      23 of 26
 
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Section No.     No.
123      4.0         230          (c)2                                                    Insert "[2]" after "Unit 1" in two    The licensee shall implement the Unit 1 (2)       The license condition places to note this license condition modifications to its facility, as described in    applies to both units.
applies to both units.               Attachment S, Table S 2, Plant Modifications Committed, in FENOC letter L 17 122, dated April 21, 2017, to complete the transition to full compliance with 10 CFR 50.48(c), by the completion of the second Unit 1 and Unit 2 refueling outages, respectively, after issuance of the safety evaluation. The licensee shall maintain appropriate compensatory measures in place until completion of these modifications.
124      4.0        230          (c)3    The licensee shall implement the items listed in  A statement needs added that the      The licensee shall implement the items listed in    L17122 (ML17111A887)
Attachment S, Table S 3, Implementation          Table S3 implementation items        Attachment S, Table S 3, Implementation          Table S3 Implementation Items, of FENOC letter L 17 268, dated August    related to the FPRA model updates Items, of FENOC letter L 17 268, dated August        Item Changes Note 1; 22, 2017, by 12 months after issuance of the      (BV11633, BV12974, BV13060, BV1 22, 2017, by 12 months after issuance of the        Updated Attachment S, safety evaluation                                3108, BV13109, BV21580, BV2        safety evaluation (with the exception of Items    Table S3, Note 1 (L17268 1622, BV21623, and BV21750). This BV11633, BV12974, BV13060, BV13108, BV1        ML17235A512) was described in L17122            3109, BV21580, BV21622, BV21623, and BV2 (ML17111A887) Table S3              1750, which are to be completed in accordance Implementation Item Changes Note with the Table S2 Modifications Schedule."
: 1. Also, this was shown in the updated Attachment S, Table S3, Note 1 (L17268 ML17235A512) 125      9.0        234      Reference "(ADAMS Package Accession No.                     Accession No. ML17111A882 is not      "(ADAMS Package Accession No.                     Reference 18 and ADAMS 18    ML17111A882)."                                    found in ADAMS.                       ML17111A887)."                                    accession number ML17111A887 126      9.0        245      Reference "NBSIR 853196"                                    Reference has a minor typo            "NBSIR 853195"                                    NBSIR 853195, "Heat 153                                                                                                                                                Release Rate Characteristics of Some Combustible Fuel Sources in Nuclear Power Plants" 127    Att. A        A4        Row 2 "The plume radius correlation is derived from        NRC's Evaluation of Acceptability    "The plume radius correlation is derived from      Supplemental Information Column 4 Heskestads plume centerline temperature            does not reference justifications for Heskestads plume centerline temperature          Regarding LAR (Reference correlation, for which V&V is documented in      when plume radius is outside the      correlation, for which V&V is documented in        18  ADAMS Accession No.
NUREG1824. The plume radius correlation is      validated range as mention in LAR    NUREG1824, Supplement 1. The plume radius        ML17111A887) subject to the same validated ranges."            Attachment J.                         correlation is subject to the same validated ranges and justifications (See response to FM RAI It also should reference NUREG1824, 04.a (Reference 12))."
Supplement 1.
128    Att. A        A6        Row 2 "the validated range reported in NUREG1934, NRC's Evaluation of Acceptability            the validated range reported in NUREG1824, Supplemental Information Column 4 Supplement 1."                                      should reference NUREG1824,         Supplement 1."                                     Regarding LAR (Reference Supplement 1                                                                            18  ADAMS Accession No.
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Section No.     No.
129    Att. A        A9        Row 3                                                                                        Add Following to SER Attachment A: "Obstructed    Supplemental Information Obstructed Plume Radius V&V Basis Plume Radius"; "Correlation," "Application of    Regarding LAR (Reference is missing for SER Attachment A. V&V Beaver Valley, Unit No. 1 & Beaver Valley, Unit  18  ADAMS Accession No.
Basis for obstructed plume radius No. 2," "V&V Basis," and "NRC Staff's Evaluation  ML17111A887), Page J16 needs to be added as stated in See of Acceptability."                                of Supplemented LAR Page J16 of LAR Attachment J as Attachment J supplemented (i.e., Reference 18).
130    Att. B        B4        Row 2 "NUREG1824"                              All references to NUREG1824 in the        "NUREG1824, Supplement 1"                      Supplemental Information Column 4                                          evaluation of acceptability section                                                          Regarding LAR (Reference should be NUREG1824, Supplement                                                              18  ADAMS Accession No.
1                                                                                            ML17111A887) 131    Att. C        C1          °C                                            degrees Celsius (°C) is defined in        Add °C l degrees Celsius                          draft SE, page 136 3.4.2.2, but it is not listed in the abbreviation table 132    Att. C        C1          AC                                            AC (alternating current) is not listed      Add AC l alternating current                      draft SE, page 189 in the abbreviations list 133    Att. C        C1        ASME    ASME l American Society for Testing and  Incorrect acronym definition                ASME l American Society of Mechanical            N/A Materials                                                                            Engineers 134    Att. C        C1        BVPS                                            Acronym BVPS and definition are            BVPS l Beaver Valley Power Station                Draft SER Page 232 and 241 missing from Attachment C.
135    Att. C        C1        CVCS                                            chemical volume control system              Add CVCS l chemical volume control system        draft SE, page 115 (CVCS) is defined in 3.2.2, but it is not listed in the abbreviation table 136    Att. C      C1        DWST                                            demineralized water storage tank            Add DWST l demineralized water storage tank      draft SE, page 114 (DWST) is defined in in 3.2.2, but it is not listed in the abbreviation table 137    Att. C        C1          ERF                                            emergency response facility (ERF) is Add ERF l emergency response facility                    draft SE, page 63 defined in 3.1.1.6, but it is not in the abbreviation table 138    Att. C        C1        FMDB    FMDB l Fire modeling database            Acronym FMDB is not used in the            FMWB l Fire Modeling Workbook                    Draft SER Page 144 and Att.
SER, however, FMWB is used on page                                                            A.
144 and throughout Att. A of the draft SER 139    Att. C      C1        FPEE                                            fire protection engineering                add FPEE l fire protection engineering evaluation draft SE, page 144 evaluation (FPEE) is listed in Table 2.3 1, but it is not in the abbreviation table 140    Att. C        C1        GPM                                            gallons per minute (gpm) is listed in Add gpm gallons per minute                              draft SE, page 190 Table 3.52, but not in the abbreviation table 141    Att. C        C2      HRRPUA                                            Acronym HRRPUA and definition are HRRPUA l heat release rate per unit area                    Draft SER Page 146 missing from Attachment C.
142    Att. C        C2          IA                                            3.4.3 lists instrument air (IA), but it's n add IA l instrument air                          draft SE, page 157 143    Att. C        C2        POS                                            Plant Operating State (POS) is in          Add POS l Plant Operating State                  draft SE, page 206 3.5.3.1, but it is not in the abbreviation list 11/28/2017                                                                                          25 of 26
 
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144    Att. C        C2      PPDWST                                          primary plant demineralized water        Add PPDWST l primary plant demineralized draft SE, Page 114 storage tank (PPDWST) is in 3.2.2,       water storage tank but not in the abbreviation list 145    Att. C      C2          PPE                                          personal protective equipment (PPE) Add PPE l personal protective equipment        draft SE, page 121 is in 3.2.5, but not in abbreviation list 146    Att. C        C3      RW/SW                                          RW/SW is written in 3.2.2, but it is      add RW/SW l river water/service water not in the abbreviation list and is not defined in the text 147    Att. C        C3          SG                                          steam generator (SG) is in 3.2.1.3, but add SG l steam generator                  draft SE, page 77 it is not in the abbreviation list 148    Att. C        C3        SOFC    SOFC l stateofknowledge correlation  Incorrect acronym definition              SOKC l stateofknowledge correlation    Draft SER Pages 139 and 161 149    Att. C        C3        VDC    ventilation duct chase                VDC is listed as ventilation duct chase Volts Direct Current in the abbreviation list, but it looks like it should be V DC (Volts DC) 11/28/2017                                                                                       26 of 26}}

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Venkataraman B, NRR/DORL/LPL1
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[External_Sender] Beaver Valley NFPA 805 Amendment Application Draft Safety Evaluation Date: Wednesday, November 29, 2017 8:26:06 AM Attachments: 2017-11-28 Draft SE FENOC Comments.pdf

Dear Ms. Venkataraman,

As requested by U.S. Nuclear Regulatory Commission correspondence dated November 9, 2017, the FirstEnergy Nuclear Operating Company and applicable contractors have reviewed the draft safety evaluation (SE) for proposed amendments regarding transition to NFPA 805, Performance-Based Standard for Fire Protection for Light Water Reactor Electric Generating Plants. Based on this review, the draft SE does not contain any proprietary or sensitive unclassified non-safeguards information. Specific items related to the factual accuracy and completeness of the SE were identified and are listed in the attached document for your consideration.

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Beaver Valley Units 1 and 2 Draft SER Compiled Comments A B C D E F G H 20171109 20171109 Paragraph 20171109 Draft SE Statement Comment Proposed Revised Statement References Draft SE Draft SE Page No.

Section No. No.

3 1 1 Title Amendment Nos. 301 and 190 should Same title as preceding be inserted in the title. page.

4 1, 9 various "First Energy" should be "FirstEnergy" See licensee name in throughout document. second paragraph of draft SE Reference 8 (ML14002A086).

5 1.2 4 3rd full implement under 10 CFR 50.48(a), and (c) the A comma and "and" need to be re implement under 10 CFR 50.48(a) and (c), and paragraph results. arranged. the results.

on page 6 2.2 8 1 The NRC staffs review also relied on the NUREG2180 is not listed Include a new bullet for: NUREG2180, Licensee response to PRA following additional codes, RGs, and standards: "Determining the RAI 27 (Reference 17 Effectiveness, Limitations, ADAMS Accession No.

and Operator Response ML17030A312) and PRA RAI for Very Early Warning 03 (Reference 19 ADAMS Fire Detection Systems in Accession No.

Nuclear Facilities ML17177A097)

(DELORESVEWFIRE)"

7 2.2 11 4 The NRC staffs review also relied on the NUREG1824, Supplement 1 is not Include a bullet for NUREG1824, Verification NUREG1824, Supplement 1 following additional codes, RGs, and standards: listed and Validation of Selected Fire Models for (Reference 165 ADAMS Nuclear Power Accession No.

Plant Applications, Supplement 1" or supplement ML16309A011) and Draft the existing NUREG1824 bullet similar to the SER Attachment A and NUREG/CR6850 bullet and discussion. Attachment B 8 2.4.1 17 2 The licensee requested that 25 exemptions be There are 26 total exemptions as The licensee requested that 26 exemptions be Supplemented Attachment rescinded for Beaver Valley, Unit No. 1. Since identified in the supplemented rescinded for Beaver Valley, Unit No. 1. K (L17122 ML17111A887)

Beaver Valley, Unit No. 2, was licensed to operate Attachment K (L17122 Enclosure B after January 1, 1979, licensing actions associated ML17111A887) with 10 CFR 50, Appendix R, were not issued as exemptions to the regulation, and therefore, the Note Attachment O did not include licensee did not request that any exemptions be new LA 11.26 (lack of fire rescinded for Beaver Valley, Unit No. 2. The extinguishers, identified in licensee also determined that no orders need to Attachment L review).

be superseded or revised to implement an FPP that complies with 10 CFR 50.48(c).

Attachment K described below lists the correct Licensing Actions that will and will not be transitioned. This should be okay. Only thing that needs corrected is that there are 26 total, not 25.

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Section No. No.

9 2.4.1 17 2 The licensee requested that 25 exemptions be Unit 2 deviations need to be Since Beaver Valley, Unit No. 2, was licensed to Supplemented Attachment rescinded for Beaver Valley, Unit No. 1. Since described. There are a total of 31 operate after January 1, 1979, licensing actions K (L17122 ML17111A887)

Beaver Valley, Unit No. 2, was licensed to operate Unit 2 Licensing Actions with 11 of associated with 10 CFR 50, Appendix R, were not Enclosure B; SER Section after January 1, 1979, licensing actions associated the them transitioning. issued as exemptions to the regulation, and 3.5.1.3 with 10 CFR 50, Appendix R, were not issued as therefore, the licensee did not request that any exemptions to the regulation, and therefore, the exemptions be rescinded for Beaver Valley, Unit licensee did not request that any exemptions be No. 2, but were listed as deviations. The licensee rescinded for Beaver Valley, Unit No. 2. The requested that 31 deviations be rescinded for licensee also determined that no orders need to Beaver Valley, Unit No. 2.

be superseded or revised to implement an FPP that complies with 10 CFR 50.48(c).

10 2.4.1 17 3 The NRC staff accepts the licensees There are 26 total exemptions as The NRC staff accepts the licensees Supplemented Attachment determination that 25 exemptions should be identified in the supplemented determination that 26 exemptions should be K (L17122 ML17111A887) rescinded for Beaver Valley, Unit No. 1, and that Attachment K (L17122 rescinded for Beaver Valley, Unit No. 1, and 31 Enclosure B; SER Section no orders need to be superseded or revised to ML17111A887). deviations should be rescinded for Beaver Valley, 3.5.1.3 implement NFPA 805 at Beaver Valley. (See SE Unit 2 deviations need to be Unit No. 2, and that no orders need to be Section 2.5 for the NRC staffs detailed evaluation described. There are a total of 31 superseded or revised to implement NFPA 805 at of the exemptions being rescinded.) Unit 2 Licensing Actions with 11 of Beaver Valley. (See SE Section 2.5 for the NRC the them transitioning. staffs detailed evaluation of the exemptions being rescinded.

11 2.5 20 2 The licensee previously requested and received This should state 6 of the 26 The licensee previously requested and received Supplemented Attachment NRC approval for 26 exemptions from 10 CFR exemptions are being transitioned. NRC approval for 26 exemptions from 10 CFR K (L17122 ML17111A887)

Part 50, Appendix R. These exemptions were Part 50, Appendix R. These exemptions were Enclosure B; SER Section discussed in detail in LAR Attachment K, as discussed in detail in LAR Attachment K, as 3.5.1.3 supplemented. The licensee requested that the supplemented. The licensee requested that the exemptions be rescinded and that the underlying exemptions be rescinded and that the underlying engineering evaluations for 9 of the 25 engineering evaluations for 6 of the 26 exemptions be transitioned to the new licensing exemptions be transitioned to the new licensing basis under 10 CFR 50.48(a) and 50.48(c), as basis under 10 CFR 50.48(a) and 50.48(c), as previously approved (NFPA 805, Section 2.2.7), previously approved (NFPA 805, Section 2.2.7),

and compliant with the new regulation. and compliant with the new regulation.

12 2.5 22 4 The following exemptions are rescinded, but the This should state (see SE Section The following exemptions are rescinded, but the Supplemented Attachment engineering evaluation of the underlying 3.5.1.3) engineering evaluation of the underlying K (L17122 ML17111A887) condition will be used as a qualitative condition will be used as a qualitative Enclosure B; SER Section engineering evaluation for transition to NFPA 805 engineering evaluation for transition to NFPA 805 3.5.1.3 (see SE Section 3.5.1.1): (see SE Section 3.5.1.3):

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13 2.5 22 N/A The Unit 2 Deviations need to be The following deviations are rescinded as Supplemented Attachment added to this section. requested by the LAR. The underlying condition K (L17122 ML17111A887) has been evaluated using RI/PB methods and Enclosure B; SER Section found to be acceptable with no further actions, 3.5.1.3 because the philosophy of DID and sufficient safety margins are maintained (numbering scheme provided by the licensee): All 31 deviations need listed, with the 11 deviations that will be transitioning also listed.

14 2.6.1 25 1 Deterministic Approach: Comply with NFPA 805, NFPA 805 Chapter 3 Deterministic Approach: Comply with NFPA 805, NFPA 805 Chapter 3 Chapter 2, and Section 4.2.3 Chapter 3, and Section 4.2.3 requirements; or requirements; or 15 2.6.2 28 1 Accordingly, these cause and effect relationship BV plans to use the Change Accordingly, these cause and effect relationship RG 1.205 (Reference 4 models may be used after transition to NFPA 805 Evaluation Process discussed in NFPA models may be used after transition to NFPA 805 ML092730314) as a part of the FREs conducted to determine the 805 Sections 2.2(h), 2.2.9 & 2.4.4 for as a part of the Change Evaluation Process change in risk associated with proposed plant all future plant modification or other conducted to determine the change in risk changes. changes to the Fire Protection associated with proposed plant changes.

Program (FPP). BV plans to follow the guidance in RG 1.205 Regulatory Position C.3.2 "NFPA 805 Plant Change Evaluation Process."

BV does not intend to use the Fire Risk Evaluation Process discussed in NFPA 805 Section 4.2.4.2. This process was followed during the transition to NFPA 805 as discussed in RG 1.205 Regulator Position C2.4.

16 2.7.1 28 1 As described below, LAR Attachment S, Table S 2, Attachment S does not "identify the As described below, LAR Attachment S, Table S 2, Supplemented Attachment Plant Modifications Committed, as compensatory actions required to be Plant Modifications Committed, as S (L17122 ML17111A887) supplemented, provides a description of each of in place", it only indicates whether a supplemented, provides a description of each of Enclosure D the proposed plant modifications, presents the compensatory measure is required or the proposed plant modifications, presents the problem statement explaining why the not. problem statement explaining why the modification is needed, and identifies the modification is needed, and identifies if a compensatory actions required to be in place compensatory actions is required to be in place pending completion/implementation of the pending completion/implementation of the modification. modification.

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17 2.7.2 29 2 Each implementation item will be completed Table S3, as supplemented on Aug. Each implementation item will be completed Reference 18 prior to the deadline for implementation of the 22, 2017 (Reference 20), includes a prior to the deadline for implementation of the (ML17111A887), Note 1 at RI/PB FPP based on NFPA 805 as specified in the caveat that certain specifically RI/PB FPP based on NFPA 805 as specified in the the end of Table S3 on license conditions and the letter transmitting the identified implementation items will license conditions and the letter transmitting the Page S19 (pdf 261/261) amended license (i.e., implementation period), not be complete in the 12 month amended license (i.e., implementation period),

which states that the licensee will implement the transition period; instead those which states that the licensee will implement the items listed in LAR Attachment S, Table S3, as specific items (generally related to items listed in LAR Attachment S, Table S3, as supplemented on August 22, 2017, 12 months FPRA updates to account for final as supplemented on August 22, 2017, 12 months after NRC issuance of the license amendments. built configuration of mods) will be after NRC issuance of the license amendments, implemented within 2 refueling except for those items specifically marked to be outages consistent with the S2 implemented according to the Table S2 modification implementation modification implementation schedule.

schedule.

18 3.1.1.2 34 bullet list One section should be added to this Add an evaluation of 3.3.6, Roofs, based on FPE Reference 14 list: section 3.3.6. Ref 12 provided a RAI 05.02 and Table 5b.01 table of sections that need to be changed from Complies with Clarification to either Complies or Complies with use of EEEE. Ref 14 provided an update to that table -

Table 5b.01. The third item is Section 3.3.6 with a compliance statement of Complies with Use of EEEE -

Functionally Equivalent.

Other sections classified like this are given an explanation in the draft SER, confirming that the EEEE demonstrates the basis for being acceptable.

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19 3.1.1.2 36 1 The licensee further stated that the engineering A followup RAI was issued regarding Add: In FPE RAI 04.01 (Reference 25), the NRC FPE RAI 04.01 (L15371 analysis determined that the majority of the NFPA 805 Section 3.3.5.3 (FPE RAI staff stated In the engineering evaluation, the ML15356A136); L16058 electric cables used within the power block are 04.01 L15371 ML15356A136), with licensee concluded that the low population of (ML16055A160); SER equivalent to the requirements of NFPA 805, the response stating that approval cables that do not meet Institute of Electrical and Section 3.1.4.6 (pg 90)

Section 3.3.5.3, and the low population of electric will be requested as an Attachment L Electronics Engineers (IEEE) cables with potentially nonqualified electric cable Item. The Attachment L Item was Standard 383, 1974 Edition, or equivalent, were insulation materials installed in electrical submitted as Approval Request 6 . (L considered in the fire modeling raceways is acceptable. The NRC staff concludes 16058 ML16055A160). evaluation and determined to be adequate for that the licensees response to the RAI is the hazard. In accordance with acceptable because the licensee demonstrated This should be updated to reflect the FAQ 060008, this type of EEEE cannot be self that it used engineering evaluations to compare Approval Request, which is identified approved by the licensee. In its response to FPE its cable installations against the criteria of NFPA in SE Section 3.1.4.6 RAI 04.01 (Reference 14), the licensee stated that 805 and the guidance of FAQ 06 0022 and the compliance strategy for NFPA 805 Section determined that the insulation materials are See SE page 194 for same comment. 3.3.5.3, for the low population of cables with acceptable. potentially nonqualified electrical cable insulation material installed in electrical raceways at BVPS1 and BVPS2 will be revised to "Submit for NRC Approval" 20 3.1.1.2 42 2 125 Ventilation Duct Chase (VDC) Incorrect acronym 125 Volts Direct Current LAR Acronym List 21 3.1.1.2 43 3 The licensee stated that the halon systems in fire Halon is only installed in 1CV3. CO2 The licensee stated that the halon system in fire FPE RAI 05.02(a) (L15371 compartments 1 CV 3, 1 DG 1, 1 DG 2, and 2 SB 3 is installed in 1DG1, 1DG2, and 2 compartment 1 CV 3 and CO2 systems in fire ML15356A136); original have been analyzed for over pressurization SB3. compartments, 1 DG 1, 1 DG 2, and 2 SB 3 have LAR Attachment A, Table B conditions for the area and determined that no been analyzed for over pressurization conditions 1 3.10.3 records for 1DG1, additional vents are required. for the area and determined that no additional 1DG2, and 2SB3.

vents are required.

22 3.1.1.3 46 2 In FPE RAI 7b (Reference 22), the NRC staff stated Typo: FPE RAI 17b In FPE RAI 17b (Reference 22) SER Reference 22 that in LAR Attachment A, Table B 1, the licensee stated in fire areas 2 CB 1 and 2 PA 3 that the 3M Interam E 50 series blanket assemblies were evaluated in an engineering evaluation to provide a 1 hour1.157407e-5 days <br />2.777778e-4 hours <br />1.653439e-6 weeks <br />3.805e-7 months <br /> fire resistance rating for ductwork and a 2 hour2.314815e-5 days <br />5.555556e-4 hours <br />3.306878e-6 weeks <br />7.61e-7 months <br /> fire resistance for the protection of the 1 1/2 hour fire dampers 23 3.1.1.3 46 2 The licensee stated that the compliance strategy Typo: NFPA 805, Section 3.11.2 NFPA 805, Section 3.11.2 L15150 ML15147A372 pg for NFPA 805, Section 3.11.5 for fire 54 compartments 2 CB 1, 2 CV 1, 2 CV 3, 2 PA 3, 2 PA 4, 2 SB 3, and 2 SB 4 will be revised to delete references to fire barriers for ductwork, and the compliance strategy for NFPA 805, Section 3.11 for fire compartment 2 CB 1 will be revised to include the results of the engineering evaluation regarding fire barriers for ductwork.

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24 3.1.1.3 46 2 In a letter dated October 25, 2017 (Reference This statement is not contained In Attachment L Approval Request 5, dated Reference 15 21), the licensee indicated this change was made. within Ref 21 for this paragraph (it is February 24, 2016 (Reference 15), the licensee confused with the previous indicated this change was made.

paragraph).

25 3.1.1.4 52 3 o In LAR Attachment A, the licensee stated that in The following additional o In LAR Attachment A, the licensee stated that in LAR Table B1 Transition of fire compartments 2 SB 1, 2 SB 2, 2 SB 3, 2 SB 4, 2 compartments state that ductwork is fire compartments 2 SB 1, 2 SB 2, 2 SB 3, 2 SB 4, 2 Fundamental Fire SB 5, 2 SB 6, 2 SB 7, 2 SB 8, 2 SB 9, 2 WH 1, and 3 wrapped with 1 hour1.157407e-5 days <br />2.777778e-4 hours <br />1.653439e-6 weeks <br />3.805e-7 months <br /> fire wrap SB 5, 2 SB 6, 2 SB 7, 2 SB 8, 2 SB 9, 2 WH 1, and 3 Protection Program and CR 1 there are HVAC duct penetrations in the material to extend the barrier, as CR 1 there are HVAC duct penetrations in the Design Elements Worksheet barrier between the affected fire area and noted in LAR Attachment A: 2SB3, barrier between the affected fire area and Fire Protection Features adjacent fire compartments that are protected adjacent fire compartments that are protected Transition Report by two 11/2 hour fire rated dampers in series, and by two 11/2 hour fire rated dampers in series, and BVPS2 A2 pages 284 a deviation for using two 11/2 hour fire dampers in a deviation for using two 11/2 hour fire dampers in lieu of one 3 hour3.472222e-5 days <br />8.333333e-4 hours <br />4.960317e-6 weeks <br />1.1415e-6 months <br /> fire damper, and in fire lieu of one 3 hour3.472222e-5 days <br />8.333333e-4 hours <br />4.960317e-6 weeks <br />1.1415e-6 months <br /> fire damper, and in fire compartment 2 PA 3 ventilation ductwork is compartment 2 PA 3 and 2 SB 3 ventilation wrapped with 1 hour1.157407e-5 days <br />2.777778e-4 hours <br />1.653439e-6 weeks <br />3.805e-7 months <br /> fire wrap material to extend ductwork is wrapped with 1 hour1.157407e-5 days <br />2.777778e-4 hours <br />1.653439e-6 weeks <br />3.805e-7 months <br /> fire wrap the fire barriers in lieu of fire dampers at the material to extend the fire barriers in lieu of fire barriers. dampers at the barriers.

26 3.1.1.4 52 1st bullet In LAR Attachment A, the licensee stated that fire The following additional In LAR Attachment A, the licensee stated that fire LAR Table B1 Transition of doors that are not 3hour firerated are installed compartments were noted in LAR doors that are not 3hour firerated are installed Fundamental Fire in fire compartments 1CR2, 1CR4, 1CS1, Attachment A: 1PA1A, 1PA1C, 1 in fire compartments 1CR2, 1CR4, 1CS1, Protection Program and 1CV1, 1CV2, 1ES1, 1ES2, 1FB1, PAGA, 1PAGB, 1PAGC. 1CV1, 1CV2, 1ES1, 1ES2, 1FB1, Design Elements Worksheet 1MG1, 1MS1, 1NS1, 1PA1E, 1PA1G, 1MG1, 1MS1, 1NS1, 1PA1A, 1PA1C, Fire Protection Features 1PT1, 1SGPD1, 1TB1, 3CR1, 3IS1, 1PA1E, 1PA1G, 1PAGA, 1PAGB, 1PAGC, Transition Report 3IS2, 3IS3, 3IS4, and 3IS6. 1PT1, 1SGPD1, 1TB1, 3CR1, 3IS1, BVPS1 A2 pages 259, 266, 3IS2, 3IS3, 3IS4, and 3IS6. 298, 304, 310, 27 3.1.1.4 52 2nd bullet In LAR Attachment A, the licensee stated that in Fire compartment 2SG1S (3.11.2) is In LAR Attachment A, the licensee stated that in FPE RAI 02 (L15150 fire compartments 2 ASP, 2 CB 1, 2 CB 6, 2 CV 1, 2 not listed, but was identified in the fire compartments 2 ASP, 2 CB 1, 2 CB 6, 2 CV 1, 2 ML15147A372 pg 11)

CV 2, 2 CV 3, 2 CV 5, 2 CV 6, 2 FB 1, 2 PA 4, and 2 FPE RAI 02 Table for NFPA 805 CV 2, 2 CV 3, 2 CV 5, 2 CV 6, 2 FB 1, 2 PA 4, and 2 PA 5, there are (HVAC duct penetrations in the Section 3.11.2. PA 5, and 2SG1S, there are (HVAC duct barrier between the affected fire compartment penetrations in the barrier between the affected fire compartment 28 3.1.1.4 52 3rd Bullet o In LAR Attachment A, the licensee stated that in Fire Compartments 2PT1, 2SG1S In LAR Attachment A, the licensee stated that in FPE RAI 02 (L15150 fire compartments 2 SB 1, 2 SB 2, 2 SB 3, 2 SB 4, 2 are not listed, but were identified in fire compartments 2PT1, 2 SB 1, 2 SB 2, 2 SB 3, 2 ML15147A372 pgs 9,11)

SB 5, 2 SB 6, 2 SB 7, 2 SB 8, 2 SB 9, 2 WH 1, and 3 the FPE RAI 02 Table for NFPA 805 SB 4, 2 SB 5, 2 SB 6, 2 SB 7, 2 SB 8, 2 SB 9, 2SG CR 1 there are HVAC duct penetrations in the Section 3.11.3. 1S, 2 WH 1, and 3 CR 1 barrier between the affected fire area and adjacent fire compartments that are protected by two 11/2 hour fire rated dampers in series, and a deviation for using two 11/2 hour fire dampers in lieu of one 3 hour3.472222e-5 days <br />8.333333e-4 hours <br />4.960317e-6 weeks <br />1.1415e-6 months <br /> fire damper, 29 3.1.1.4 54 1 NFPA 805 Section 3.11.3 Fire Compartment 2RC1 is not Add: In LAR Attachment A, the licensee stated FPE RAI 02 (L15150 described in this section, but was that in fire compartment 2RC1, the ML15147A372 pg 9); SER listed in the FPE RAI 02 Table for containment access hatch does not contain a UL Section 3.5.1 pg 193 NFPA 805 Section 3.11.3. label or certification of fire testing.

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30 3.1.1.4 54 1 NFPA 805 Section 3.11.3 Fire Compartments 2TR1, 2TR2, 2 Add: Also in its response to FPE RAI 02, the FPE RAI 02 (L15150 TR3 are not described but were in licensee revised its compliance strategy to ML15147A372 pgs 11) the FPE RAI 02 Table for NFPA 805 remove "Compliance by Previous Approval" to Section 3.11.2 to state the credit a performancebased evaluation for fire compliance basis changed from compartments 2TR1, 2TR2, and 2TR3.

"Complies by Previous Approval" to "Performancebasedevaluation".

31 3.1.1.5 55 5th bullet Section 3.11.3, which concerns the requirement Add discussion to align with Section Add: In the revised Approval Request 5, approval L16162 ML16133A340 that the listed fire resistance rating for fire 3.1.4.5 since in the supplemented was requested for the use of fire damper page L1; SER section dampers is consistent with the designated fire Attachment L, Approval Request 5 configurations that contain two 1.5hour fire 3.1.4.5 page 84.

resistance rating of the barrier as determined by does not identify 1hour fire wrap. dampers in series as follows: 1. Two 1.5hour fire the performance requirements established by (L16162 ML16133A340 page L1) dampers in series located within the fire barrier Chapter 4. The licensee requested NRC approval and 2. Two 1.5hour fire dampers in series with for the use of a PB method to justify the use of one located within the fire barrier and one two 1.5 hour5.787037e-5 days <br />0.00139 hours <br />8.267196e-6 weeks <br />1.9025e-6 months <br /> rated fire dampers in series with a 1 located close to, but outside, the fire barrier.

hour fire wrap on the ductwork instead of a 3 hour3.472222e-5 days <br />8.333333e-4 hours <br />4.960317e-6 weeks <br />1.1415e-6 months <br /> fire damper, thereby meeting the requirements of NFPA 805. See SE Section 3.1.4.5.

32 3.1.1.6 62 3 NFPA 805, Section 3.4.3(a), ...The licensee The LAR Attachment S, Table S3 that NFPA 805, Section 3.4.3(a), ... The licensee Reference 8 and ADAMS included this action in LAR Attachment S, Table S requires update of fire brigade included this action in LAR Attachment S, Table S accession number 3, as supplemented, Implementation Item BV1 procedure is BV13020. 3, as supplemented, Implementation Item BV1 ML14002A086 2371. 3020.

33 3.1.1.6 63 1 In LAR Attachment A, the licensee identified an This does not align with what LAR In LAR Attachment A, the licensee identified an Reference 8 and ADAMS action to verify flow rate nozzle pressure for all Attachment A, Section 3.6.2 stated: action to verify there is an adequate water flow accession number hose stations upon completion the hydraulic "Will Comply With Use Of rate and nozzle pressure for all hose stations by ML14002A086 calculations. Commitment completion of hydraulic calculations.

The capability to ensure an adequate water flow rate and nozzle pressure will be verified upon completion of hydraulic calculations."

34 3.1.1.6 63 2 NFPA 805, Section 3.8.2, The licensee identified Item BV20487 is for CO2 discharge NFPA 805, Section 3.8.2, The licensee identified Reference 8 and ADAMS actions in LAR Attachment S, Table S2, as testing. BV21022 is for diesel room actions in LAR Attachment S, Table S2, as accession number supplemented, Modifications BV11875, BV1 ventilation fan control. Neither of supplemented, Modifications BV11875, BV1 ML14002A086 2839, BV12840, BV12841, and LAR Attachment these are related to NFPA 72, nor the 2839, BV12840, BV12841, and LAR Attachment S, Table S 3, as supplemented, Implementation discussed fire compartments. They S, Table S 3, as supplemented, Implementation Items BV12826, BV20487, and BV21022. should be removed from this Items BV12826, BV20487, and BV21022.

paragraph.

35 3.1.1.6 65 2nd The licensee included these actions in LAR This should be BV21576. The licensee included these actions in LAR Ref 18 ML17111A887 2017 paragraph Attachment S, Table S 3, as supplemented, Attachment S, Table S 3, as supplemented, 0421, Enclosure B, Att. K Implementation Items BV1 3041 and BV11576. Implementation Items BV1 3041 and BV21576.

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36 3.1.2 68 1 As stated in LAR Section 4.1.3, the power block The words used in section 4.1.3 state As stated in LAR Section 4.1.3, the power block Reference 9 and ADAMS includes structures that contain equipment that "structures that have equipment includes structures that have equipment required accession number could affect plant operation for power required for nuclear plant for nuclear plant operations as identified in LAR ML14002A086 generation, equipment important to safety, operations." Attachment I, Table I1, Beaver Valley, Unit No.

equipment that could affect the ability to 1 Power Block Definition, and LAR Attachment I, maintain the NSCA in the event of a fire, or It does not specifically state Table I2, Beaver Valley, Unit No. 2 Power Block structures containing radioactive materials that "structures that contain equipment Definition."

could potentially be released in the event of a that could affect plant operation for fire. power generation, equipment important to safety, equipment that could affect the ability to maintain the NSCA in the event of a fire, or structures containing radioactive materials that could potentially be released in the event of a fire."

37 3.1.3.2 68 6 In LAR Attachment S, Table S2, as supplemented, LAR Table S2 item BV12854 will "In LAR Attachment S, Table S2, as Reference 17, Modification Items BV11875 and BV20829, the install incipient detection in an supplemented, Modification Items BV11875, ML17030A312, 20170130, licensee proposed the installation of very early inverter cabinet greater than 250V BV12854, and BV20829, the licensee proposed Attachment Page 2 and warning fire detection systems (VEWFDS) in low (treated as a power cabinet per the installation of very early warning fire Reference 18, voltage cabinets located in fire compartments 1 NUREG2180) consistent with the LAR detection systems (VEWFDS) in low voltage select ML17111A887, 20170421, CR4, 2CB1, and 2CB6 Attachment S Supplement and the cabinets located in fire compartments 1CR4, 2 Att 3 Page 2 and Enclosure response to PRA RAI 27. CB1, and 2CB6" D Page S12.

38 3.1.3.2 69 8 The licensee further stated that sensitivity This should be changed to "sensitivity The licensee further stated that sensitivity FPE RAI 15B (L15118 testing will include the gain and alarm settings." settings will include the gain and alarm ML15118A484 pg 11 of 68) thresholds, and that each detector will have an thresholds, and that each detector will have an associated setpoint document that contains the associated setpoint document that contains the alarm setpoints, which will be subject to design alarm setpoints, which will be subject to design control program requirements. control program requirements.

39 3.1.3.2 70 4 In its response to FPE RAI 15f (Reference 12) , the Both BV1 & 2 modifications have In its response to FPE RAI 15f (Reference 11) , the Reference 18 and ADAMS licensee stated that the VEWFDS will be been completed. Items BV13110 licensee stated that the VEWFDS will be accession number connected to interface with the control room and BV21624 Interface the Unit1/2 connected to interface with the control room ML17111A887 annunciation system, and that LAR Attachment S, Incipient Fire Detection System with annunciation system, and that LAR Attachment S, Table S2, as supplemented, was revised to the Main Control Room Annunciator Table S2, as supplemented, was revised to include the modification. The licensee included System were added to Table S1 include the modification. The modifications have this action in a letter dated April 21, 2017, in LAR been completed. The licensee included this Attachment S, Table S2, as supplemented, action in a letter dated April 21, 2017, in LAR Modification BV13110. Attachment S, Table S1, as supplemented, Modifications BV13110 and BV21624.

40 3.1.3.2; 70; 4; ...in a letter dated April 21, 2017, Include a reference to the Utility's ...in a letter dated April 21, 2017 (Reference 18), SE Reference 18, 3.2.6.1 122 9 letter. ... ML17111A887, L17122, Attachment 3 pg 1 and Updated pg S8 (pdf Pg 250) 11/28/2017 8 of 26

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41 3.1.3.2 71 1 The detailed discussion of the VEWFDS in Include a reference for FPE RAI 15e. The detailed discussion of the VEWFDS in SE Reference 11, response to FPE RAI 15e, such as operator and response to FPE RAI 15e (Reference 11), such as ML15147A372, L15150, Pg operator response credited in the NSCA, is operator and operator response credited in the 52 included in SE Section 3.2.6. NSCA, is included in SE Section 3.2.6.

42 3.1.3.2 71 2 The NRC concludes that the licensees response "FPE RAI 15ac" should be "FRE RAI The NRC concludes that the licensees response Reference 10 and ADAMS to FPE RAI 15ac and RAI 15f is acceptable 15ad" since the FPE RAI 15 to FPE RAI 15ad and RAI 15f is acceptable accession number because the licensee demonstrated that the discussion included a, b, c & d. because the licensee demonstrated that the ML151184A484 design, installation, maintenance, and operation Also "Table S2. Modification BV1 design, installation, maintenance, and operation Reference 18 and ADAMS of the VEWFDS is in accordance with the 3110" should be "Table S1, of the VEWFDS is in accordance with the accession number guidance contained in FAQ 080046, and the Modification Items BV13110 and guidance contained in FAQ 080046, and the ML17111A887 alarm annunciation system will comply with the BV21624" alarm annunciation system will complies with the requirements of NFPA 805, Section 3.8, subject to requirements of NFPA 805, Section 3.8, as completion of LAR Attachment S, Table S2, indicated by completion of LAR Attachment S, Modification BV13110 Table S1, Modification Items BV13110 and BV2 1624.

43 3.1.3.3 71 3 In its response to FPE RAI 01 (Reference 12) FPE RAI 01 response is included in In its response to FPE RAI 01 (Reference 11) Letter dated May 27, 2015 Reference 11 44 3.1.3.3 72 4 in accordance with Table FPE 01 of its response FPE RAI 01 response is included in in accordance with Table FPE 01 of its response Letter dated May 27, 2015 to FPE RAI 01 (Reference 12), Reference 11 to FPE RAI 01 (Reference 11),

45 3.1.4.6 91 4 The licensee stated that for the Cable trays with mixed thermoplastic The licensee stated that for the Letter L17358 thermoplastic/unknown cable types, it assumed and thermoset do not always use thermoplastic/unknown cable types, it assumed bounding case thermoplastic flame bounding case thermoplastic. Rather, bounding case thermoplastic flame DRAFT SER Attachment A, propagation/spread, HRRs, and thermal damage the method used at BVPS is propagation/spread, HRRs, and thermal damage Page 8 criteria in the FM analysis. The licensee further consistent with or more conservative criteria in the FM analysis. The licensee further stated that the FM analysis assumed a bounding than the guidance in NUREG/CR stated that the FM analysis assumed a bounding case (thermoplastic) flame propagation/spread 7010. case (thermoplastic)is consistent with or more rate, HRR, and thermal damage criteria for conservative than the approved guidance (i.e.,

raceways containing a mixture of thermoplastic NUREG/CR7010, and thermoset cable types, and that this results NUREG/CR6850) with regards to flame in a conservative and bounding FM analysis with propagation/spread rate, HRR, and thermal regard to cable material types and associated damage criteria for raceways containing a flame propagation rates. mixture of thermoplastic and thermoset cable types, and that this results in a conservative and bounding FM analysis with regard to cable material types and associated flame propagation rates.

46 3.2.1 105 10 ...As described in Section 4.2.1.1 and Attachment Unable to locate in Attachment B a ...As described in Section 4.2.1.1 and Attachment ADAMS Package Accession B of the LAR, the licensee performed a review description of the referenced review. B of the LAR, the licensee performed a review No. ML14002A086 (LAR against the guidance of NEI 0001, Revision 2, to This is only described in LAR Section against the guidance of NEI 0001, Revision 2, to Attachment B).

identify substantive changes from NEI 0001, 4.2.1.1. identify substantive changes from NEI 0001, Revision 1, that are applicable to the NFPA 805 Revision 1, that are applicable to the NFPA 805 transition. transition.

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47 3.2.1 106 4 In Safe Shutdown Analysis (SSD) RAI 01 Typo: the response to SSD RAI 01 is in In Safe Shutdown Analysis (SSD) RAI 01 Reference 11, ADAMS (Reference 22), the NRC staff ... requested that Reference 11, not Reference 10. (Reference 22), the NRC staff ... requested that accession number the licensee clarify the discrepancy. In its the licensee clarify the discrepancy. In its ML15147A372, Attachment response to SSD RAI 01 (Reference 10), the response to SSD RAI 01 (Reference 11), the L15150, Page 56.

licensee stated licensee stated 48 3.2.1.4 112 2 ...The licensee stated that decay heat is removed The "RHR" abbreviation is ambiguous ...The licensee stated that decay heat is removed Section 2.2.2, Page 115, by use of a natural circulation cooldown and in this context: recommend this be by use of a natural circulation cooldown and under "Decay Heat steam release by the main steam safety valves clarified to distinguish between the steam release by the main steam safety valves Removal".

and manual operation of atmospheric dump RHR Valve and the RHR System. The and manual operation of atmospheric dump valves or RHR and that AFW is credited to supply RHR System is not credited for Hot valves or RHR valve and that AFW is credited to cooling water to the SGs... Standby, while the RHR Valve is an supply cooling water to the SGs...

alternative to the atmospheric dump valves.

49 3.2.1.5 113 4 ...The licensee further stated that the turns ratio Typo: Volume 2 of JACQUEFIRE is ...The licensee further stated that the turns ratio Section 9.0, Page 244, analysis is based upon NUREG/CR 7150, Joint Reference 141, not 128. analysis is based upon NUREG/CR 7150, Joint Reference 141.

Assessment of Cable Damage and Quantification Assessment of Cable Damage and Quantification of Effects from Fire (JACQUE FIRE), Volume 2: of Effects from Fire (JACQUE FIRE), Volume 2:

Expert Elicitation Exercise for Nuclear Power Expert Elicitation Exercise for Nuclear Power Plant Fire Induced Electrical Circuit Failure Plant Fire Induced Electrical Circuit Failure (Reference 128), which concluded... (Reference 141), which concluded...

50 3.2.4 119 6 ... Table B3 is not LAR Att. B but is LAR ... Reference 9 and ADAMS The results of the MSO expert panel discussions Att. C The results of the MSO expert panel discussions accession number were added to each of these tables; and were added to each of these tables; and ML14002A086 The MSOs that were added to the NSCA and The MSOs that were added to the NSCA and resulted in failures are documented as VFDRs, resulted in failures are documented as VFDRs, and resolutions are documented in LAR and resolutions are documented in LAR Attachment B, Table B3. Attachment C, Table B3.

51 3.2.5 120 6 As described in LAR Section 4.2.1.3, the licensees The reference for FAQ 070030 is As described in LAR Section 4.2.1.3, the licensees Reference 72 process is based on the methodology of FAQ 07 Reference 72. process is based on the methodology of FAQ 07 0030 (Reference 131) and consisted of the 0030 (Reference 72) and consisted of the following steps: The reference for FAQ 070030 is not following steps:

Reference 131.

52 3.2.6.1 122 6 In LAR Attachment S, Table S2, as supplemented, LAR Table S2 item BV12854 will In LAR Attachment S, Table S2, as supplemented, Reference 17, Modification Items BV11875 and BV20829, the install incipient detection in an Modification Items BV11875, BV12854, and BV2 ML17030A312, 20170130, licensee indicated that a VEWFDS will be added inverter cabinet greater than 250V 0829, the licensee indicated that a VEWFDS will Attachment Page 2 as follows: (treated as a power cabinet per be added as follows:

NUREG2180) consistent with the LAR Reference 18, Attachment S Supplement and the ML17111A887, 20170421, response to PRA RAI 27. Att 3 Page 2 and Enclosure D Page S12.

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53 3.2.6.1 122 10 In LAR Attachment W, the licensee stated that To clarify, suggest adding that In LAR Attachment W, the licensee stated that PRA RAI 27 (L17024, the installation of VEWFDS incipient detection in "VEWFDS will be installed in the 480V the installation of VEWFDS incipient detection in ML17030A312 pg 2 of 3) low voltage cabinets located in fire Computer Inverter and credited in low voltage cabinets located in fire BV12854 compartments 1 CR 4, 2 CB 1, and 2 CB 6 is to accordance with NUREG2180." compartments 1CR4, 2CB1, and 2CB6 is to reduce the likelihood of fire propagation outside reduce the likelihood of fire propagation outside the cabinets the cabinets. VEWFDS will also be installed in one 480 VAC cabinet in accordance with NUREG 2180 (Ref. 17) 54 3.2.7 124 2 The NRC staff reviewed the proposed installation LAR Table S2 item BV12854 will The NRC staff reviewed the proposed installation Reference 17, of a VEWFDS to monitor conditions in certain key install incipient detection in an of a VEWFDS to monitor conditions in certain key ML17030A312, 20170130, electrical cabinets at Beaver Valley as described inverter cabinet greater than 250V electrical cabinets at Beaver Valley as described Attachment Page 2 in LAR Modification Items BV11875 and BV2 (treated as a power cabinet per in LAR Modification Items BV11875, BV12854 0829, and in its response to FPE RAI 15. NUREG2180) consistent with the LAR and BV20829, and in its response to FPE RAI 15 Reference 18, Attachment S Supplement and the and PRA RAI 27. ML17111A887, 20170421, response to PRA RAI 27. Att 3 Page 2 and Enclosure D Page S12.

55 3.4.1.2 127 6 each retained VFDR was evaluated against the Safety margin was evaluated for the each compartment with VFDRs was evaluated LAR Section 4.5.2.2 safety margin criteria compartment and not for each VFDR against the safety margin criteria 56 3.4.1.2 127 6 (bullet 1) FM for the FPRA was specifically reviewed for BVPS has used additional FAQs that FM for the FPRA was specifically reviewed for SER Reference 10, 11, and adequate safety margin and, in general, was are not listed in LAR Section 3.4 adequate safety margin and, in general, was 12 (responses to PRA RAI developed utilizing industry, NRC, and National developed utilizing industry, NRC, and National 4,7,9, and 25)

Institute of Standards and Technology (NIST) Institute of Standards and Technology (NIST) accepted codes, supported by guidance that accepted codes, supported by guidance that includes NUREG/CR6850, EPRI/NRCRES Fire includes NUREG/CR6850, EPRI/NRCRES Fire PRA Methodology for Nuclear Power Facilities; PRA Methodology for Nuclear Power Facilities; NEI 0402; and associated FAQs resolutions as NEI 0402; and associated FAQs resolutions as described in LAR Section 3.4 and specifically described in LAR Section 3.4 and specifically identified throughout the LAR. identified throughout the LAR and subsequent RAI responses.

57 3.4.1.2 128 5 (very last Based on its review of the LAR, the FREs, and the should refer to PRA RAI 21, instead of Based on its review of the LAR, the FREs, and the Reference 11, sentence in licensees response to PRA RAI 20 20 licensees response to PRA RAI 21 ML1547A372. (pages 179 the and 183, or pdf 181 and section) 185) 58 3.4.2.2 131 2 accordance with NEI 0701 (Reference 139) Typo NEI 0701 should be NEI 0712 accordance with NEI 0712 (Reference 139) N/A 59 3.4.2.2 132 3 In PRA RAI 01.a (Reference 22) associated with Missing a digit in the F&0 reference In PRA RAI 01.a (Reference 22) associated with Reference 22 and ADAMS F&O CFA10 , the NRC staff stated that the F&O CFA101 , the NRC staff stated that the accession number licensees use of Option #2 from NUREG/CR licensees use of Option #2 from NUREG/CR ML15049A507 6850 6850 11/28/2017 11 of 26

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60 3.4.2.2 132 4 In PRA RAI 1.c (Reference 22) concerning F&O The F&O discussed in this RAI applies In PRA RAI 1.c (Reference 22) concerning F&O Reference 10, QNSC101, the NRC staff requested that the to BV1 only (BV2 LERF was fully QNSC101, the NRC staff requested that the ML15118A484. (page 28 of licensee provide justification for the sufficiency of quantified and screened licensee provide justification for the sufficiency of 68, or pdf 30/70).

the sampling method it used to determine that appropriately). The draft statement the sampling method it used to determine that First sentence of the RAI the sum of the LERF contributions for all refers to the additional sampling the sum of the LERF contributions for all response.

screened scenarios was less than 10 percent of screening as applicable to both units. screened scenarios at Unit 1 was less than 10 the estimated total LERF for fire events. In its percent of the estimated total LERF for fire response to PRA RAI 01.c (Reference 10), the events. In its response to PRA RAI 01.c licensee explained that scenarios having a CDF (Reference 10), the licensee explained that higher than 1E08 were retained and that LERF scenarios having a CDF higher than 1E08 were screening was performed on the next most risk retained and that LERF screening was performed dominant scenarios (i.e., scenarios with a CDF on the next most risk dominant scenarios (i.e.,

between 1E08/year and 1E09/year). The scenarios with a CDF between 1E08/year and licensee explained that it compared the total 1E09/year). The licensee explained that it LERF of the screened scenarios for each unit to compared the total LERF of the screened the LERF of unscreened scenarios (i.e., scenarios scenarios for Unit 1 to the LERF of unscreened with a CDF higher than 1E08/year) and used this scenarios (i.e., scenarios with a CDF higher than comparison to conservatively calculate the ratio 1E08/year) and used this comparison to of screened LERF scenarios to total LERF, which conservatively calculate the ratio of screened was determined to be about 3 percent LERF scenarios to total LERF, which was determined to be about 3 percent 61 3.4.2.2 132 4 The NRC staff concludes that the licensees The F&O discussed in this RAI applies The NRC staff concludes that the licensees Reference 10, response to the RAI is acceptable because the to BV1 only (BV2 LERF was fully response to the RAI is acceptable because the ML15118A484. (page 28 of licensee demonstrated that its treatment of quantified and screened licensee demonstrated that its treatment of 8, or pdf 30/70).

quantitative screening using the simplified appropriately). The draft statement quantitative screening using the simplified First sentence of the RAI approach is sufficient to show that the ratio of refers to the additional sampling approach is sufficient to show that the ratio of response.

quantitatively screened LERF scenarios is a small screening as applicable to both units. quantitatively screened LERF scenarios is a small fraction of the total LERF for both units and fraction of the total LERF for Unit 1 and because because all fire scenarios would be rescreened all fire scenarios would be rescreened prior to prior to self approval. self approval.

62 3.4.2.2 132 4 Implementation Items BV13108 and BV21662 Typo BV21662 should be BV21622 Implementation Items BV13108 and BV21622 N/A 63 3.4.2.2 135 2 In its response to PRA RAI 05 Wrong reference In its response to PRA RAI 05 Reference 11 and ADAMS (Reference 10), the licensee explained that it (Reference 11), the licensee explained that it accession number credited RAs associated with repairs for DID but credited RAs associated with repairs for DID but ML15147A372 did not credit them in the FPRA. did not credit them in the FPRA.

64 3.4.2.2 138 4 In its response to Wrong reference In its response to Reference 10 and ADAMS PRA RAI 13 (Reference 11), the licensee explained PRA RAI 13 (Reference 1110), the licensee accession number that Unit Nos. 1 and 2 are physically explained that Unit Nos. 1 and 2 are physically ML15118A484 separate units and that the partitioning of the separate units and that the partitioning of the plants into PAUs for the FPRA was performed to plants into PAUs for the FPRA was performed to maintain this separation with the exception of maintain this separation with the exception of locations where cable or equipment from both locations where cable or equipment from both units was located. units was located.

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65 3.4.2.2 139 2 In its response to PRA RAI 14 PRA RAI 14 response was contained In its response to PRA RAI 14 Reference 10, (Reference 11) and PRA RAI 03 (Reference 19), in Reference 10 (ML15118A484), not (Reference 10) and PRA RAI 03 (Reference 19), ML15118A484. (page 41 of the licensee explained that based on a sensitivity Reference 11 (ML15147A372) the licensee explained that based on a sensitivity 68, or pdf 43/70).

study, the impact of SOKC was determined to be study, the impact of SOKC was determined to be very small, and therefore, was not included in the very small, and therefore, was not included in the risk estimates in its integrated analysis. risk estimates in its integrated analysis.

66 3.4.2.2 139 3 In its response to PRA RAI 15 (Reference 11), the Wrong reference In its response to PRA RAI 15 (Reference 10), the Reference 10 and ADAMS licensee licensee accession number explained that the HRA used to support the LAR explained that the HRA used to support the LAR ML15118A484 reflects the guidance in the final July 2012 reflects the guidance in the final July 2012 NUREG1921 report, and therefore, there is no NUREG1921 report, and therefore, there is no impact to the risk estimates from using the draft impact to the risk estimates from using the draft version. version.

67 3.4.2.2 140 2 (i.e., Unit No. 1 CDF of Unit 2 CDF should be 6.9E05 not (i.e., Unit No. 1 CDF of 5.9E05/year and LERF of N/A 5.9E05/year and LERF of 4.3E07/year; Unit No. 6.9E05 4.3E07/year; Unit No. 2 CDF of 6.9E05/year 2 CDF of 6.9E05/year and LERF of and LERF of 1.8E06/year),

1.8E06/year),

68 3.4.2.2 140 2 "In its response to Wrong reference "In its response to Reference 19 and ADAMS PRA RAI 19 (Reference 12), the licensee provided PRA RAI 19 (Reference 1219), the licensee accession number the total risk increase associated with provided the total risk increase associated with ML17177A097 retained VFDRs without crediting risk reduction retained VFDRs without crediting risk reduction plant modifications." plant modifications."

69 3.4.2.2 142 2 In its response to PRA RAI 03.b (Reference 12) The response to PRA RAI 03.b is In its response to PRA RAI 03.b (Reference 19) Reference 19 Reference 19. ML17177A097 20170623 70 3.4.2.2 142 2 Table S 3, to fully apply the guidance contained in Typo NUREG 2160 should be NUREG Table S 3, to fully apply the guidance contained in N/A NUREG 2160 and NUREG 2178 2169 NUREG 2169 and NUREG 2178 71 3.4.2.2 & 139, 238 & 3, In PRA RAI 15 (Reference 22), the NRC staff NUREG1921 is listed in the reference In PRA RAI 15 (Reference 22), the NRC staff SER Section 9.0 9.0 244 Reference explained that guidance in a draft version of section twice. Suggest removing explained that guidance in a draft version of 60, & NUREG1921, EPRI/NRCRES Fire Human reference 145 from Section 9.0 and NUREG1921, EPRI/NRCRES Fire Human Reference Reliability Guidelines (Reference 145) updating reference on page 139 to Reliability Guidelines (Reference 60) 145 Reference 60 72 3.4.2.3.1 144 1 V &V of these algebraic models is documented in LAR Attachment J and SER V&V of these algebraic models is documented in Supplemental Information NUREG1824, Verification and Validation of Attachment A reference NUREG NUREG1824, Verification and Validation of Regarding LAR (Reference Selected Fire Models for Nuclear Power Plant 1824, Supplement 1 as the V&V basis Selected Fire Models for Nuclear Power Plant 18 ADAMS Accession No.

Applications, Volumes 3 and 4 (Reference 57). for the algebraic models. Update Applications, Supplement 1 Volumes 3 and 4 ML17111A887) accordingly (Reference 165).

73 3.4.2.3.1 144 3 This HGL correlation is described in NUREG1805, LAR Attachment J and SER This HGL correlation is described in NUREG1805, Supplemental Information and its V&V is documented in NUREG1824, Attachment A reference NUREG and its V&V is documented in NUREG1824, Regarding LAR (Reference Volume 3. 1824, Supplement 1 as MQH's HGL Supplement 1. 18 ADAMS Accession No.

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74 3.4.2.3.1 144 4 In LAR Section 4.5.1.2, the licensee identified the LAR Section 4.5.1.2 does not provide In LAR Attachment J, the licensee identified the use of the following empirical correlations that a list of empirical correlations. This use of the following empirical correlations that are not addressed in NUREG1824, Volumes 3 needs to be verified. are not addressed in NUREG1824, Volumes 3 and 4. and 4.

75 3.4.2.3.1 144 14 All algebraic fire models and empirical Algebraic fire models and empirical All algebraic fire models and empirical LAR Attachment J, Page J13 correlations were implemented in a database correlations were not implemented correlations were implemented in a database and workbook referred to as the Fire Modeling into a database. and workbook referred to as the Fire Modeling Reference 18, Workbook (FMWB). Workbook (FMWB). ML17111A887, 20170421, Enclosure A, Page J14 76 3.4.2.3.1 144 4, 2nd "Ceiling Jet Temperature, Method of Alpert Remove ceiling jet temperature "Ceiling Jet Temperature, Method of Alpert Section 6.2, NUREG1824, bullet (Reference 150)" correlation from this bulleted list. It is (Reference 150)" Volume 4 (Reference 57)

V&V'd per Section 6.2 of NUREG 1824 Supplemental Information Regarding LAR (Reference 18 ADAMS Accession No.

ML17111A887),

Supplemented LAR Attachment J 77 3.4.2.3.1 145 1 The licensees screening was based on the 98th HRRs from NUREG2178 are also The licensees screening was based on the 98th DRAFT SER Section 3.4.2.2 percentile fire HRR from the NUREG/CR6850 used. percentile fire HRR from the NUREG/CR6850 methodology (Reference 51). methodology (Reference 51) and NUREG2178 Response to PRA RAI 03.b (Reference 140). (Reference 19), Attachment 1, Page 8 78 3.4.2.3.1 145 5 V&V of CFAST and FDS is documented in NUREG NUREG1824, Supplement 1 used as V&V of CFAST and FDS is documented in NUREG Supplemental Information 1824, Volumes 5 and 7, respectively. the V&V basis for FDS Version 6 1824, Volumes 5 and 7, respectively as well as Regarding LAR (Reference analyses NUREG1824, Supplement 1 (Reference 165). 18 ADAMS Accession No.

ML17111A887),

Supplemented LAR Attachment J 79 3.4.2.3.1 155 1st bullet, "The licensee also stated that it credited fire Per response to FM RAI 02.b, neither "The licensee also stated that it credited fire Licensee Response to RAIs 2nd wraps and barrier systems for the duration of the cable tray covers fire wraps were wraps and barrier systems for the duration of the dated 20150626 paragraph manufacturer's rating, but that it did not credit credited in high hazard events manufacturer's rating., but that it The licensee (Reference 12 ADAMS wraps within the ZOI of a high hazard event to did not credit wraps or cable tray covers within Accession No.

prevent damage in those scenarios." the ZOI of a high hazard event to prevent damage ML15177A110), Page 52 in those scenarios."

80 3.4.2.3.2 152 1 cabinets in the MCR are separated by a single This was a conservative assumption cabinets in the MCR are conservatively assumed FM RAI 01.j(vii) metal wall with cables in direct contact and was not verified to be separated by a single metal wall with cables in direct contact 81 3.4.3 158 3 The NRC staff concludes that the licensees The reference for FAQ 080054 is The NRC staff concludes that the licensees Reference 80 approach for calculating the change in risk Reference 80. approach for calculating the change in risk associated with VFDRs is acceptable because it is associated with VFDRs is acceptable because it is consistent with RG 1.205, Section 2.2.4.1, and The reference for FAQ 080054 is not consistent with RG 1.205, Section 2.2.4.1, and FAQ 080054 (Reference 79). Reference 79. FAQ 080054 (Reference 80).

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82 3.4.4 158 3 The licensee identified a large number of RAs in There are two table in LAR The licensee identified a large number of RAs in Reference 19 and ADAMS its LAR Attachment G, Table G1, provided in its Attachment G: Table G1 and Table G its LAR Attachment G, Table G1 and Table G2, accession number response to PRA RAI 03 (Reference 19). In PRA 2. See LIC (20) in Reference 19. provided in its response to PRA RAI 03 (Reference ML17177A097 RAI 18 (Reference 22), NRC staff requested that 19). In PRA RAI 18 (Reference 22), NRC staff the licensee provide clarification regarding which requested that the licensee provide clarification RAs were identified for only DID. regarding which RAs were identified for only DID.

83 3.4.4 159 2 The NRC staff concludes that the CDF and LERF The risk acceptance guideline for CDF The NRC staff concludes that the CDF for both (ADAMS Accession No.

for both units are above the risk acceptance is 1E05, not 1E05. units are above the risk acceptance guidelines of ML17177A097).

guidelines of 1E05/year and 1E 6/year contained 1E05/year and LERF is below the risk acceptance in RG 1.174, respectively. guidelines of 1E06/year contained in RG 1.174.

84 3.4.4 159 3 The licensee reviewed all of the RAs for adverse There are two tables in LAR The licensee reviewed all of the RAs for adverse Reference 19 and ADAMS impact and resolved each action as stated in LAR Attachment G: Table G1 and Table G impact and resolved each action as stated in LAR accession number Attachment G. The NRC staff found that none of 2. See LIC (20) in Reference 19. Attachment G. The NRC staff found that none of ML17177A097 the RAs listed in LAR Attachment G, Table G1, the RAs listed in LAR Attachment G, Table G1 have an adverse impact on the FPRA. The and Table G2, have an adverse impact on the licensee evaluated all RAs against the feasibility FPRA. The licensee evaluated all RAs against the criteria provided in NEI 0402, FAQ 070030, and feasibility criteria provided in NEI 0402, FAQ 07 RG 1.205. In addition, the licensee included an 0030, and RG 1.205. In addition, the licensee action in LAR Attachment S, Table S3, included an action in LAR Attachment S, Table S Implementation Item BV13027, to demonstrate 3, Implementation Item BV13027, to and document the feasibility of credited NFPA demonstrate and document the feasibility of 805 RAs and update training and brigade drills credited NFPA 805 RAs and update training and after the fire response procedures are updated. brigade drills after the fire response procedures The NRC staff concludes that this action is are updated. The NRC staff concludes that this acceptable because it will incorporate the action is acceptable because it will incorporate provisions of NFPA 805 into the FPP and would the provisions of NFPA 805 into the FPP and be required by the proposed license condition. would be required by the proposed license condition.

85 3.4.6 160 4 In its response to PRA RAI 19 (Reference 11), the Wrong reference In its response to PRA RAI 19 (Reference 19), the Reference 19 and ADAMS licensee provided its explanation of how it made licensee provided its explanation of how it made accession number modelling modelling adjustments so that the change in risk ML17177A097 adjustments so that the change in risk was not was not underestimated.

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86 3.4.6 160 4 In PRA RAI 19 (Reference 22), the NRC staff I think this section should also refer In PRA RAI 19 (Reference 22) and PRA RAI 19.01 Reference 20, explained that conservatisms in the compliant to PRA RAI 19.01 and its response, (Reference 29), the NRC staff explained that ML17235A512. (page 3 of plant model could have caused overestimation of which further discussed this issue. conservatisms in the compliant plant model 12, or pdf 5/19) the risk offset values and underestimation of the could have caused overestimation of the risk change in risk. The NRC staff requested that the offset values and underestimation of the change Reference 29, licensee identify conservative modeling or in risk. The NRC staff requested that the licensee ML17220A234 modelling assumptions resulting in identify conservative modeling or modelling underestimation of the change in risk and to assumptions resulting in underestimation of the show that in such cases the underestimation change in risk and to show that in such cases the could still be offset by the decrease associated underestimation could still be offset by the with non VFDR modifications. In its response to decrease associated with non VFDR PRA RAI 19 (Reference 11), the licensee provided modifications. In its responses to PRA RAI 19 its explanation of how it made modelling (Reference 11) and PRA RAI 19.01 (Reference 20),

adjustments so that the change in risk was not the licensee provided its explanation of how it underestimated. made modelling adjustments so that the change in risk was not underestimated.

87 3.4.7 161 4 In its response to PRA RAI 14 (Reference 11) and Wrong reference In its response to PRA RAI 14 (Reference 1110) Reference 10 and ADAMS PRA RAI 03 and PRA RAI 03 accession number (Reference 19), the licensee explained that from (Reference 19), the licensee explained that from ML15118A484 a sensitivity study, it determined the impact of a sensitivity study, it determined the impact of SOKC to be very small, and therefore, was not SOKC to be very small, and therefore, was not included in the risk estimates. included in the risk estimates.

88 3.4.8 163 1st bullet Accordingly, the CDF and LERF for both units The risk acceptance guideline for CDF Accordingly, the CDF for both units are above the (ADAMS Accession No.

above the risk acceptance guidelines of is 1E05, not 1E05. The conclusion risk acceptance guidelines of 1E05/year and ML17177A097).

1E05/year and 1E 6/year in RG 1.174, statement is not clear. LERF is below the risk acceptance guidelines of 1E respectively. 06/year contained in RG 1.174.

89 3.5.1.1 169 2 The licensee performed a detailed analysis of fire Include passive fire protection The licensee performed a detailed analysis of fire LAR protection features and identified the fire features, as in Item 4) in the previous protection features and identified the fire suppression and detection systems required to paragraph. Section 3.5.1.8 does not suppression and detection systems and passive meet the NSPC for each fire area. reference Table 43 listing of passive fire protection features required to meet the fire protection features. NSPC for each fire area.

90 3.5.1.3 169 1 In LAR Section 4.2.3, the licensee stated that six This was supplemented in the In LAR Section 4.2.3, the licensee stated that six Updated Attachment K L licensing actions for Unit No. 1 and nine licensing updated Attachment K submitted in L licensing actions for Unit No. 1 and eleven 17122 (ML17111A887) actions for Unit No. 2 will be transitioned into the 17122 (ML17111A887) Enclosure B. licensing actions for Unit No. 2 will be Enclosure B NFPA 805 FPP as previously approved. transitioned into the NFPA 805 FPP as previously In this updated Attachment K, there approved.

are six licensing actions for Unit No. 1 (11.02, 11.05, 11.16, 11.18, 11.24, 11.26) and eleven licensing actions for Unit 2 (3, 4, 5, 6, 8, 11, 18, 26, 29, 30, 31) that will be transitioned into the NFPA 805 FPP as previously approved.

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91 3.5.1.3 171 LA 11.02 Missing a condition as bases for Pressurizer PORV blocking valve power cables are Ref 18 ML17111A887 2017 Table 3.52 NRC Staff's exemption approval. Add in. run in conduit approximately 20 feet above the 0421, Enclosure B, Att. K Evaluation floor to the penetration area where they are 4th separated by a fire barrier and automatic paragraph suppression and detection system.

92 3.5.1.3 175 LA 11.16 Missing a condition as bases for Separation of approximately 5 feet is maintained Ref 18 ML17111A887 2017 Table 3.52 NRC Staff's exemption approval. Add in. between source range channels. 0421, Enclosure B, Att. K Evaluation 2nd Source range cables are in conduit.

paragraph 93 3.5.1.3 175 LA 11.16 In response to SSD RAI 06 (Reference 12), the Licensing Action number is incorrect In response to SSD RAI 06 (Reference 12), the Ref 12 ML15177A110 2015 Table 3.52 NRC Staff's licensee stated that Licensing Action 10 will not and may be confused with BVPS2 licensee stated that Licensing Action 11.10 will 0626 Evaluation be transitioned. not be transitioned.

4th paragraph 94 3.5.1.3 176 LA 11.18 1NS1 Corrected fire compartments 1NS1 Ref 18 ML17111A887 2017 Table 3.52 Applicable 1PA1A 1PA1A 0421, Enclosure B, Att. K Fire 1PA1C 1PA1C Compartm 1PA1E 1PA1E ent 1PA1G 1PA1G 1PA1GA 1PA1GA 1PA1GB 1PA1GB 1PA1GC 1PA1GC 1TB1 1PT1 3CR1 1SBGEN 3IS1 1SGPD1 3IS2 1TB1 3IS3 3CR1 3IS4 3IS1 3IS2 3IS3 3IS4 3IS6 95 3.5.1.3 186 LA 11 Not Applicable Does not match the fire Not Applicable Ref 18 ML17111A887 2017 Table 3.52 Applicable compartment in Licensing Action 11 2PA4 0421, Enclosure B, Att. K Fire Compartm ent 96 3.5.1.3 189 LA 26 The diesel generator supplies the 120V Typo The diesel generator supplies the 120V Ref 18 ML17111A887 2017 Table 3.52 NRC Staff's alternating current (AC) uninterruptible power alternating current (AC) uninterruptible power 0421, Enclosure B, Att. K Evaluation supply system required for the detection system supply system required for the detection system 2nd and the 25V direct current (DC) panels for the fire and the 125V direct current (DC) panels for the Paragraph detection and suppression systems. fire detection and suppression systems.

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97 3.5.1.3 191 LA 30 Clarification Request 15: It is requested that the Clarification Request 15 was Clarification Request 15: It is requested that the SSD RAI 13(d) (L15188 Table 3.52 NRC document as a prior approval recognition withdrawn per SSD RAI 13(d) (L15 NRC document as a prior approval recognition ML15177A110); FPE RAI that the absence of sprinkler protection in the 188 ML15177A110) and FPE RAI that the absence of sprinkler protection in the 05(a)(viii) (L15118 intake structure compartment (3 IS 4) that 05(a)(viii) (L15118 ML15118A484). intake structure compartment (3 IS 4) that ML15118A484); SER Section houses the diesel fire pump is acceptable houses the diesel fire pump is acceptable 3.5.2 (pg 203)

This is also discussed in section 3.5.2 (pg 203) of the SE.

98 3.5.1.3 191 LA 30 Based on the previous staff approval of this Clarification Request 15 was Based on the previous staff approval of this SSD RAI 13(d) (L15188 Table 3.52 deviation in SER dated June 6, 1979 (Reference withdrawn per SSD RAI 13(d) (L15 deviation in SER dated June 6, 1979 (Reference ML15177A110); FPE RAI 96), Clarification Request 15, and the statement 188 ML15177A110) and FPE RAI 96), Clarification Request 15, and the statement 05(a)(viii) (L15118 by the licensee that the bases remain valid, the 05(a)(viii) (L15118 ML15118A484). by the licensee that the bases remain valid, the ML15118A484); SER Section NRC staff concludes that the applicability of this NRC staff concludes that the applicability of this 3.5.2 (pg 203) licensing action is acceptable. This is also discussed in section 3.5.2 licensing action is acceptable.

(pg 203) of the SE.

99 3.5.1.3 191 LA 30 3IS4 Other Intake Fire Compartments are 3IS1 Ref 18 ML17111A887 2017 Table 3.52 Applicable also part of the LA 3IS2 0421, Enclosure B, Att. K Fire 3IS3 Compartm 3IS4 ent 100 3.5.1.3 194 2 In its response to FPE RAI 04a and FPE RAI 04c A followup RAI was issued regarding Replace with: In FPE RAI 04.01 (Reference 25), FPE RAI 04.01 (L15371 (Reference 12), the licensee stated that LAR NFPA 805 Section 3.3.5.3 (FPE RAI the NRC staff stated In the engineering ML15356A136); L16058 Attachment K, as supplemented, Licensing Action 04.01 L15371 ML15356A136), with evaluation, the licensee concluded that the low (ML16055A160); SER 27 is not required, and an engineering evaluation the response stating that approval population of cables that do not meet Institute of Section 3.1.4.6 (pg 90) was performed that analyzed the low population will be requested as an Attachment L Electrical and Electronics Engineers (IEEE) of cables with potential nonqualified electric Item. The Attachment L Item was Standard 383, 1974 Edition, or equivalent, were cable insulation material installed in electrical submitted as Approval Request 6. (L considered in the fire modeling evaluation and raceways and determined the configuration to be 16058 ML16055A160). determined to be adequate for the hazard. In acceptable, and removed the compliance accordance with FAQ 060008, this type of EEEE statement Submit for NRC Approval. The NRC This should be updated to reflect the cannot be selfapproved by the licensee. In its staff concludes that the licensees response to Approval Request, which is identified response to FPE RAI 04.01 (Reference 14), the FPE RAI 04a is acceptable because it performed in SE Section 3.1.4.6 licensee stated that the compliance strategy for an engineering evaluation and concluded that NFPA 805 Section 3.3.5.3, for the low population the cable is acceptable, which is in accordance See SE pages 35/36 for same of cables with potentially nonqualified electrical with RG 1.205, NEI 04 02, and FAQ 06 0022 comment. cable insulation material installed in electrical raceways at BVPS1 and BVPS2 will be revised to "Submit for NRC Approval."

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101 3.5.1.5 196 2 In LAR Attachment C, the licensee identified Component ID for three of the four In LAR Attachment C, the licensee identified LAR Attachment C, Page 49 VFDR BV20502 in fire area 2CV1, which affected valves were transcribed VFDR BV20502 in fire area 2CV1, which (VFDR BV20502).

involves fire damage to power cables associated incorrectly from LAR Attachment C. involves fire damage to power cables associated with high low pressure interface valves 2RHS They should be: with high low pressure interface valves 2RHS MV701AP, 2RHSMV701BP, 2RHSMV702AP , 2RHSMOV701AP MOV701AP, 2RHSMOV701BP, 2RHSMOV702A and 2RHSMOV702BP. The licensee stated in the 2RHSMOV701BP P , and 2RHSMOV702BP. The licensee stated in disposition that the VDR will be corrected by a 2RHSMOV702AP the disposition that the VFDR will be corrected by plant modification. 2RHSMOV702BP a plant modification.

Typo: VFDR 102 3.5.1.6 197 2 The licensee stated that the generator fuel tank excessive detail the licensee demonstrated adequate reserves of N/A has a 4 gallon capacity, which will run the fuel for sustainable operation of portable generator for about 4.2 hours2.314815e-5 days <br />5.555556e-4 hours <br />3.306878e-6 weeks <br />7.61e-7 months <br />, and that the ventilation equipment during which time available gasoline is enough to keep the additional fuel could be obtained to replenish generator running for about 15.75 hours8.680556e-4 days <br />0.0208 hours <br />1.240079e-4 weeks <br />2.85375e-5 months <br />. The reserves.

licensee further stated that the gasoline engine driven fans used for the Beaver Valley, Unit No. 1, diesel generator rooms have a one quart fuel capacity, which will run the fan for about 1 hour1.157407e-5 days <br />2.777778e-4 hours <br />1.653439e-6 weeks <br />3.805e-7 months <br />; therefore, the available gasoline/oil mixture is enough to keep both fans running for about 10 hours1.157407e-4 days <br />0.00278 hours <br />1.653439e-5 weeks <br />3.805e-6 months <br />.

103 3.5.1.7 199 2 ... In its response to SSD RAI 04a (Reference 12), The licensee response for PRA RAI ... In its response to SSD RAI 04a (Reference 12), Reference 9 and ADAMS the licensee stated that the differentiation of RAs 18b is contained in Reference 11. the licensee stated that the differentiation of RAs accession number in LAR Attachment G, Tables G1 and G2, was in LAR Attachment G, Tables G1 and G2, was ML14002A086 defined and submitted as part of the licensees The licensee response for PRA RAI defined and submitted as part of the licensees response to PRA RAI 18b (Reference 22). 18b is not contained in Reference 22. response to PRA RAI 18b (Reference 11).

104 3.5.1.7 199 2 The licensee further stated that the RAs would be The licensee response for PRA RAI 03 The licensee further stated that the RAs would be Reference 9 and ADAMS updated in response to PRA RAI 03 (Reference is contained in Reference 19. updated in response to PRA RAI 03 (Reference accession number 22), which is evaluated in SE Section 3.4. 19), which is evaluated in SE Section 3.4. ML14002A086 The licensee response for PRA RAI 03 is not contained in Reference 22.

105 3.5.2 201 2 In LAR Attachment T, Prior Approval Clarification Two licensing actions are dependent In LAR Attachment T, Prior Approval Clarification Reference 8, LAR Request 2, the licensee stated that the licensing on the clarification in Attachment T, Request 2, the licensee stated that the licensing Attachment T submittals associated with Licensing Action 11.02 Clarification Request #2. submittals associated with Licensing Action 11.02 did not state that all cables are routed in and 11.16 did not state that all cables are conduit, routed in conduit, 106 3.5.2 202 2 The licensee submitted its revised LAR Approval Request 5 was revised in a The licensee submitted its revised LAR Reference 16 Attachment L including Approval Request 5 on subsequent submittal. Attachment L including Approval Request 5 on February 24, 2016 (Reference 15). February 24, 2016 (Reference 15) and an updated Approval Request 5 on May 12, 2016 (Reference 16).

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107 3.5.2 202 3 "In its response to SSD RAI 13d Reference points to BVPS1 "In its response to SSD RAI 13d Reference 35 (Reference 12), the licensee provided excerpts document rather than reference for (Reference 12), the licensee provided excerpts from NRC SER dated June 6, 1979 BVPS2 from NRC SER dated June 6, 1979 (Reference 96), a letter from Duquesne Light and (Reference 35), a letter from Duquesne Light and Power to the NRC, and the Beaver Valley, Unit Power to the NRC, and the Beaver Valley, Unit No. 2, NUREG 1057 SER (Reference 96), indicating No. 2, NUREG 1057 SER (Reference 96), indicating that the fire pumps are located in the intake that the fire pumps are located in the intake structure,..." structure,..."

108 3.5.3.3 207 6 "Pinch points refer to a particular location in an This definition is not consistent with "Pinch points refer to plant locations where a LAR Section 4.3.1, Page 40.

area where the damage from a single fire the definition stated in LAR single fire may damage all success paths of a KSF. FAQ 070040 Revision 4, scenario could result in failure of multiple Attachment D or LAR Section 4.3. a particular location in an area where the Section F.3, ADAMS components or trains of a system such that the damage from a single fire scenario could result in Accession No.

maximum detriment on that systems LAR Section 4.3.1 defines a pinch failure of multiple components or trains of a ML082070249.

performance would be realized from the single point as: "plant locations where a system such that the maximum detriment on fire scenario. Typically, this involves close single fire may damage all success that systems performance would be realized vertical proximity of cables that support paths of a KSF." Other locations in the from the single fire scenario. Typically, this redundant components or trains of a system such LAR have slightly different, but involves close vertical proximity of cables that that all such cables can be damaged by just one consistent, wording. support redundant components or trains of a fire scenario." system such that all such cables can be damaged This definition is consistent with FAQ by just one fire scenario."

070040, which states on Page 14 to "Identify locations where: 1. Fires may cause damage to the equipment (and cabling) credited above."

109 3.7.2 214 1 ...the licensees monitoring program will meet NFPA 805, Section 2.6 requires the ...the licensees monitoring program will meet NFPA 805, Reference 3.

the requirements specified in Sections 2.6.1, monitoring program to ensure that the requirements specified in Sections 2.6, 2.6.1, 2.6.2, and 2.6.3 of NFPA 805 the assumptions in the engineering 2.6.2, and 2.6.3 of NFPA 805 analysis remain valid for those assumptions that are subject to change.

110 3.8.2 217 3 The LAR also stated that analyses based on the Fire risk evaluations get an expert The LAR also stated that analyses based on the Reference 8, LAR Section PRA program, which includes the FREs, are issued panel review, not necessarily a FPRA PRA program, which includes the FREs, require 4.7.2.

as formal analyses subject to these same peer review. the use of qualified individuals, procedures that configuration control processes, and are require additionally subjected to the PRA peer review calculations be subject to independent review process specified in the ASME/ANS PRA standard and verification, record retention, peer review, (Reference 45). and a corrective action program that ensures appropriate actions are taken when errors are discovered.

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111 3.8.2.1 218 1 The licensee stated that its procedures require FPRA is performed consistent with Replace with these words, "FENOC requires that Reference 8, LAR Section independent review of analyses, calculations, and the standard for internal events PRA, the calculations and evaluations in support of 4.7.3 evaluations, including those performed in not with standards for Appendix B NFPA 805, exclusive of the Fire PRA, be support of compliance with 10 CFR 50.48(c). The programs. The words in the draft SE performed within the scope of the QA program, LAR stated that the transition to NFPA 805 was are not stated in the LAR. which requires independent review as defined by independently reviewed, and that analyses, BVPS1 and BVPS2 calculations, and evaluations to be performed procedures."

posttransition will be independently reviewed, as required by existing procedures.

112 3.8.3.2.1 218 1 NUREG1824, Verification and Validation of NUREG1824, Supplement 1 should NUREG1824, Verification and Validation of Supplemental Information Selected Fire Models for Nuclear Power Plant also be referenced per Supplement Selected Fire Models for Nuclear Power Plant Regarding LAR (Reference Applications, Volumes 17 (Reference 57), LAR Attachment J Applications, Volumes 17 (Reference 57) and 18 ADAMS Accession No.

documents the V&V of five selected fire models Supplement 1 to NUREG1824 (Reference 165) ML17111A887),

commonly used to support applications of RI/PB documents the V&V of five selected fire models Supplemented LAR fire protection at NPPs. The seven volumes of this commonly used to support applications of RI/PB Attachment J NUREGseries report provide technical... fire protection at NPPs. The seven volumes of this These NUREGseries reports provide technical...

113 3.8.3.2.1 218 2 "Accordingly, for those FM elements performed NUREG1824, Supplement 1 should "Accordingly, for those FM elements performed Supplemental Information by the licensee using the V&V applications be referenced per Supplement LAR by the licensee using the V&V applications Regarding LAR (Reference contained in NUREG1824 to support the Attachment J contained in NUREG1824, Supplement 1 to 18 ADAMS Accession No.

transition to NFPA 805, the NRC staff concludes support the transition to NFPA 805, the NRC staff ML17111A887),

that the use of these models is acceptable, concludes that the use of these models is Supplemented LAR provided that the intended application is within acceptable, provided that the intended Attachment J the appropriate limitations of the model, as application is within the appropriate limitations identified in NUREG1824." of the model, as identified in NUREG1824, Supplement 1."

114 3.8.3.2.1 218 3 In LAR Attachment J, as supplemented, the NUREG1824, Supplement 1 should In LAR Attachment J, as supplemented, the Supplemental Information licensee identified the use of several empirical be referenced per Supplement LAR licensee identified the use of several empirical Regarding LAR (Reference correlations that are not addressed in NUREG Attachment J correlations that are not addressed in NUREG 18 ADAMS Accession No.

1824 (see SE Section 3.4.2.3.1). The NRC staff 1824, Supplement 1 (see SE Section 3.4.2.3.1). ML17111A887),

reviewed these correlations, as well as the The NRC staff reviewed these correlations, as Supplemented LAR related material provided in the LAR, in order to well as the related material provided in the LAR, Attachment J determine whether the licensee adequately in order to determine whether the licensee demonstrated alignment with specific portions of adequately demonstrated alignment with specific the applicable NUREG1824 guidance. portions of the applicable NUREG1824, Supplement 1 guidance.

115 3.8.3.2.1 218 4 "The NRC staff concludes that the theoretical NUREG1824, Supplement 1 should "The NRC staff concludes that the theoretical Supplemental Information bases of the models and empirical correlations be referenced per Supplement LAR bases of the models and empirical correlations Regarding LAR (Reference used in the FM calculations that were not Attachment J used in the FM calculations that were not 18 ADAMS Accession No.

addressed in NUREG1824 were identified by the addressed in NUREG1824, Supplement 1 were ML17111A887),

NRC staff and described in authoritative identified by the NRC staff and described in Supplemented LAR publications, peer reviewed journal articles or authoritative publications, peer reviewed journal Attachment J conference papers, or national research articles or conference papers, or national laboratory reports..." research laboratory reports..."

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116 3.8.3.2.1 219 3 Based on the above, the NRC staff concludes that NUREG1824, Supplement 1 should Based on the above, the NRC staff concludes that Supplemental Information this approach provides reasonable assurance that be referenced per Supplement LAR this approach provides reasonable assurance that Regarding LAR (Reference the FM used in the development of the fire Attachment J the FM used in the development of the fire 18 ADAMS Accession No.

scenarios for the Beaver Valley FREs is scenarios for the Beaver Valley FREs is ML17111A887),

appropriate, and thus, acceptable for use in appropriate, and thus, acceptable for use in Supplemented LAR transition to NFPA 805 because the V&V of the transition to NFPA 805 because the V&V of the Attachment J empirical correlations used by the licensee were empirical correlations used by the licensee were consistent with either NUREG1824, authoritative consistent with either NUREG1824, Supplement publications, peer reviewed journal articles, or 1, authoritative publications, peer reviewed national research laboratory reports. journal articles, or national research laboratory reports.

117 3.8.3.2.2 219 1st bullet, "The licensee further explained that the fuels and Add statement clarifying that NUREG "The licensee further explained that the fuels and Supplemental Information 2nd corresponding smoke properties in the areas 1824, Supplement 1 is now used as corresponding smoke properties in the areas Regarding LAR (Reference paragraph where it applied the smoke detection actuation the V&V basis, per Supplement LAR where it applied the smoke detection actuation 18 ADAMS Accession No.

correlation are within the range of the materials Attachment J correlation are within the range of the materials ML17111A887),

that were tested to develop the temperature to that were tested to develop the temperature to Supplemented LAR smoke density correlation." smoke density correlation. In the letter dated Attachment J April 21, 2017 (Reference 18), the licensee identified that Alpert's ceiling jet correlation has been applied within the NUREG1824, Supplement 1 (Reference 165) validated range or it provided technical justification in cases in which it used the correlation outside the range."

118 3.8.3.3.2 220 1st bullet, In its response to FM RAI 04.a (Reference 12), the Add statement clarifying that NUREG In its response to FM RAI 04.a (Reference 12), the Licensee Response to RAIs 2nd licensee stated that the limitations and 1824, Supplement 1 is now used as licensee stated that the limitations and dated 20150626 paragraph assumptions associated with the algebraic the V&V basis, per Supplement LAR assumptions associated with the algebraic (Reference 12 ADAMS models are documented in NUREG1805 and Attachment J. Per response to FM RAI models are documented in NUREG1805 and Accession No.

NUREG1824, and that in most cases, it applied 04.a, NUREG1934 is used in NUREG1824, and that in most cases, it applied ML15177A110), Page 56 the subject correlations within normalized reference to the validated ranges, nor the subject correlations within normalized parameter ranges summarized in NUREG1934. NUREG1824. parameter ranges summarized in NUREG1934. Supplemental Information The licensee further explained that in cases The licensee further explained that in cases Regarding LAR (Reference where it applied an algebraic model outside the where it applied an algebraic model outside the 18 ADAMS Accession No.

validated range described in NUREG1824, it validated range described in NUREG1934, it ML17111A887),

justified its use, either by a qualitative justified its use, either by a qualitative Supplemented LAR assessment or by a quantitative sensitivity assessment or by a quantitative sensitivity Attachment J analysis. analysis. In the letter dated April 21, 2017 (Reference 18), the licensee identified that the algebraic models have been applied within the NUREG1824, Supplement 1 (Reference 165) validated ranges or it provided technical justification in cases in which it used the algebraic models outside the range.

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119 3.8.3.3.2 221 2nd bullet, "In its response to FM RAI 04.c (Reference 12), Since submittal of this RAI, FDS "In its response to FM RAI 04.c (Reference 12), Supplemental Information 2nd the licensee explained that the normalized Version 6 was used in two analyses, the licensee explained that the normalized Regarding LAR (Reference paragraph parameters summarized in NUREG1934 were which is validated by NUREG1824, parameters summarized in NUREG1934 were 18 ADAMS Accession No.

calculated for each of the FDS analyses. The Supplement 1. calculated for each of the FDS analyses. The ML17111A887),

licensee further explained that in cases where licensee further explained that in cases where Supplemented LAR the model was applied outside the validated the model was applied outside the validated Attachment J range, it justified the use of the model either by a range, it justified the use of the model either by a qualitative assessment or by a quantitative qualitative assessment or by a quantitative sensitivity analysis." sensitivity analysis. In the letter dated April 21, 2017 (Reference 18), the licensee identified that FDS Version 6 analyses have been applied within the NUREG1824, Supplement 1 (Reference 165) validated ranges or it provided technical justification in cases in which it used the correlation outside the range."

120 3.8.3.4.2 223 2nd bullet In FM RAI 05.d (Reference 22), the NRC staff Three, not two, contractors In FM RAI 05.d (Reference 22), the NRC staff FM RAI 05.d requested that the licensee explain how it performed fire modeling requested that the licensee explain how it ensured consistency between the two ensured consistency among the contractors that contractors that were involved in the FM were involved in the FM analyses performed in analyses performed in support of the LAR. support of the LAR.

121 3.8.3.5.1 224 (2) An extensive discussion of quantifying model NUREG1824, Supplement 1 is not An extensive discussion of quantifying model NUREG1824, Supplement 1 uncertainty can be found in NUREG1934, listed as well. New analyses use uncertainty can be found in NUREG1934, Nuclear Power Plant Fire Modeling Application NUREG1824, Supplement 1 Nuclear Power Plant Fire Modeling Application Guide (NPP FIRE MAG) (Reference 61). uncertainty. Guide (NPP FIRE MAG) (Reference 61) and NUREG1824, Supplement 1, Verification and Validation of Selected Fire Models for Nuclear Power Plant Applications, (Reference 165).

122 3.8.3.5.2 226 12th sub Cable trays with any amount of thermoplastic The approach has been refined to Cable trays with a predominant any amount of Draft SER, Att. A, pg A10 bullet cable, regardless of percentage, were treated as utilize the full guidance within thermoplastic cable, regardless of percentage, thermoplastic for fire spread rate. NUREG/CR7010 for scenarios where were treated as thermoplastic for in accordance NUREG/CR7010, Section NUREG2180 was applied. with NUREG/CR7010 (i.e., FLASHCAT) fire 9.2.2, pg 152 spread rate.

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123 4.0 230 (c)2 Insert "[2]" after "Unit 1" in two The licensee shall implement the Unit 1 (2) The license condition places to note this license condition modifications to its facility, as described in applies to both units.

applies to both units. Attachment S, Table S 2, Plant Modifications Committed, in FENOC letter L 17 122, dated April 21, 2017, to complete the transition to full compliance with 10 CFR 50.48(c), by the completion of the second Unit 1 and Unit 2 refueling outages, respectively, after issuance of the safety evaluation. The licensee shall maintain appropriate compensatory measures in place until completion of these modifications.

124 4.0 230 (c)3 The licensee shall implement the items listed in A statement needs added that the The licensee shall implement the items listed in L17122 (ML17111A887)

Attachment S, Table S 3, Implementation Table S3 implementation items Attachment S, Table S 3, Implementation Table S3 Implementation Items, of FENOC letter L 17 268, dated August related to the FPRA model updates Items, of FENOC letter L 17 268, dated August Item Changes Note 1; 22, 2017, by 12 months after issuance of the (BV11633, BV12974, BV13060, BV1 22, 2017, by 12 months after issuance of the Updated Attachment S, safety evaluation 3108, BV13109, BV21580, BV2 safety evaluation (with the exception of Items Table S3, Note 1 (L17268 1622, BV21623, and BV21750). This BV11633, BV12974, BV13060, BV13108, BV1 ML17235A512) was described in L17122 3109, BV21580, BV21622, BV21623, and BV2 (ML17111A887) Table S3 1750, which are to be completed in accordance Implementation Item Changes Note with the Table S2 Modifications Schedule."

1. Also, this was shown in the updated Attachment S, Table S3, Note 1 (L17268 ML17235A512) 125 9.0 234 Reference "(ADAMS Package Accession No. Accession No. ML17111A882 is not "(ADAMS Package Accession No. Reference 18 and ADAMS 18 ML17111A882)." found in ADAMS. ML17111A887)." accession number ML17111A887 126 9.0 245 Reference "NBSIR 853196" Reference has a minor typo "NBSIR 853195" NBSIR 853195, "Heat 153 Release Rate Characteristics of Some Combustible Fuel Sources in Nuclear Power Plants" 127 Att. A A4 Row 2 "The plume radius correlation is derived from NRC's Evaluation of Acceptability "The plume radius correlation is derived from Supplemental Information Column 4 Heskestads plume centerline temperature does not reference justifications for Heskestads plume centerline temperature Regarding LAR (Reference correlation, for which V&V is documented in when plume radius is outside the correlation, for which V&V is documented in 18 ADAMS Accession No.

NUREG1824. The plume radius correlation is validated range as mention in LAR NUREG1824, Supplement 1. The plume radius ML17111A887) subject to the same validated ranges." Attachment J. correlation is subject to the same validated ranges and justifications (See response to FM RAI It also should reference NUREG1824, 04.a (Reference 12))."

Supplement 1.

128 Att. A A6 Row 2 "the validated range reported in NUREG1934, NRC's Evaluation of Acceptability the validated range reported in NUREG1824, Supplemental Information Column 4 Supplement 1." should reference NUREG1824, Supplement 1." Regarding LAR (Reference Supplement 1 18 ADAMS Accession No.

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129 Att. A A9 Row 3 Add Following to SER Attachment A: "Obstructed Supplemental Information Obstructed Plume Radius V&V Basis Plume Radius"; "Correlation," "Application of Regarding LAR (Reference is missing for SER Attachment A. V&V Beaver Valley, Unit No. 1 & Beaver Valley, Unit 18 ADAMS Accession No.

Basis for obstructed plume radius No. 2," "V&V Basis," and "NRC Staff's Evaluation ML17111A887), Page J16 needs to be added as stated in See of Acceptability." of Supplemented LAR Page J16 of LAR Attachment J as Attachment J supplemented (i.e., Reference 18).

130 Att. B B4 Row 2 "NUREG1824" All references to NUREG1824 in the "NUREG1824, Supplement 1" Supplemental Information Column 4 evaluation of acceptability section Regarding LAR (Reference should be NUREG1824, Supplement 18 ADAMS Accession No.

1 ML17111A887) 131 Att. C C1 °C degrees Celsius (°C) is defined in Add °C l degrees Celsius draft SE, page 136 3.4.2.2, but it is not listed in the abbreviation table 132 Att. C C1 AC AC (alternating current) is not listed Add AC l alternating current draft SE, page 189 in the abbreviations list 133 Att. C C1 ASME ASME l American Society for Testing and Incorrect acronym definition ASME l American Society of Mechanical N/A Materials Engineers 134 Att. C C1 BVPS Acronym BVPS and definition are BVPS l Beaver Valley Power Station Draft SER Page 232 and 241 missing from Attachment C.

135 Att. C C1 CVCS chemical volume control system Add CVCS l chemical volume control system draft SE, page 115 (CVCS) is defined in 3.2.2, but it is not listed in the abbreviation table 136 Att. C C1 DWST demineralized water storage tank Add DWST l demineralized water storage tank draft SE, page 114 (DWST) is defined in in 3.2.2, but it is not listed in the abbreviation table 137 Att. C C1 ERF emergency response facility (ERF) is Add ERF l emergency response facility draft SE, page 63 defined in 3.1.1.6, but it is not in the abbreviation table 138 Att. C C1 FMDB FMDB l Fire modeling database Acronym FMDB is not used in the FMWB l Fire Modeling Workbook Draft SER Page 144 and Att.

SER, however, FMWB is used on page A.

144 and throughout Att. A of the draft SER 139 Att. C C1 FPEE fire protection engineering add FPEE l fire protection engineering evaluation draft SE, page 144 evaluation (FPEE) is listed in Table 2.3 1, but it is not in the abbreviation table 140 Att. C C1 GPM gallons per minute (gpm) is listed in Add gpm gallons per minute draft SE, page 190 Table 3.52, but not in the abbreviation table 141 Att. C C2 HRRPUA Acronym HRRPUA and definition are HRRPUA l heat release rate per unit area Draft SER Page 146 missing from Attachment C.

142 Att. C C2 IA 3.4.3 lists instrument air (IA), but it's n add IA l instrument air draft SE, page 157 143 Att. C C2 POS Plant Operating State (POS) is in Add POS l Plant Operating State draft SE, page 206 3.5.3.1, but it is not in the abbreviation list 11/28/2017 25 of 26

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144 Att. C C2 PPDWST primary plant demineralized water Add PPDWST l primary plant demineralized draft SE, Page 114 storage tank (PPDWST) is in 3.2.2, water storage tank but not in the abbreviation list 145 Att. C C2 PPE personal protective equipment (PPE) Add PPE l personal protective equipment draft SE, page 121 is in 3.2.5, but not in abbreviation list 146 Att. C C3 RW/SW RW/SW is written in 3.2.2, but it is add RW/SW l river water/service water not in the abbreviation list and is not defined in the text 147 Att. C C3 SG steam generator (SG) is in 3.2.1.3, but add SG l steam generator draft SE, page 77 it is not in the abbreviation list 148 Att. C C3 SOFC SOFC l stateofknowledge correlation Incorrect acronym definition SOKC l stateofknowledge correlation Draft SER Pages 139 and 161 149 Att. C C3 VDC ventilation duct chase VDC is listed as ventilation duct chase Volts Direct Current in the abbreviation list, but it looks like it should be V DC (Volts DC) 11/28/2017 26 of 26

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