ML20314A058
| ML20314A058 | |
| Person / Time | |
|---|---|
| Site: | 99902026 |
| Issue date: | 03/17/2021 |
| From: | Joseph Holonich Licensing Processes Branch |
| To: | Yang S HF Controls Corp |
| Holonich J | |
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| EPID L-2018-TOP-0031 | |
| Download: ML20314A058 (4) | |
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1 Appendix A: Comments on Draft Safety Evaluation and NRC Staff Disposition Comment No.
Page Line Comment Type Suggested Revision NRC Disposition 1
2 N/A Editorial Remove DSP and DUT from abbreviation list.
Abbreviations not used Accepted 2
3 N/A Editorial Remove Xtal from abbreviation list. Not used Accepted 3
9 44 Editorial Remove IEEE Std. 1042 1987. Was withdrawn and no longer referenced in RG 1.69, Rev 1 Accepted 4
10 17 Editorial Correct platform Accepted 5
10 22 Editorial Cite correct section, 5.2.13 Accepted 6
10 43 Editorial Correct PSA 5.2.1 Accepted 7
11 N/A Editorial Add hyphen to HFC-FPGA in row Controller Accepted 8
16 44 Editorial Delete extra space Accepted 9
17 5
Editorial Correct spelling of intellectual Accepted 10 17 24 Editorial Add term Std.
Accepted 11 18 17 Editorial Add space Accepted 12 18 26-27 Editorial Combine lines to remove redundant term Accepted 13 18 42 Editorial Made lifecycle one word Accepted 14 19 17-18 Editorial Change title to lower case Accepted 15 19 20-29 Editorial Add bullet for consistency Accepted 16 19 45 Editorial Correct spelling of lifecycle Accepted 17 21 7
Editorial Add line spacing for consistency Accepted 18 21 44 Editorial Correct spelling of lifecycle Accepted 19 22 12-13 Editorial Correct spelling of lifecycle Accepted 20 22 26 Editorial Add line spacing for consistency Accepted 21 22 34 Editorial Add line spacing for consistency Accepted 22 22 35 Editorial Made lifecycle one word and corrected typo Accepted 23 22 41 Editorial Add line spacing for consistency Accepted 24 22 46 Editorial Correct spelling of lifecycle Accepted 25 22 48 Editorial Add line spacing for consistency Accepted 26 23 4
Editorial Add line spacing for consistency Accepted 27 23 11 Editorial Add term Std.
Accepted
2 Comment No.
Page Line Comment Type Suggested Revision NRC Disposition 28 23 14 Editorial Add line spacing for consistency Accepted 29 23 17 Editorial Correct spelling of lifecycle Accepted 30 25 7
Editorial Correct spelling of lifecycle Accepted 31 25 17 Editorial Correct spelling of lifecycle Accepted 32 25 34 Editorial Remove period Accepted 33 25 37-39 Editorial Fix indentation Accepted 34 25 48 Editorial Correct spelling of lifecycle Accepted 35 27 7
Editorial Comma deleted Accepted 36 27 11 Editorial Period deleted Accepted 37 26 14 Editorial Add line spacing for consistency Accepted 38 26 20 Editorial Add line spacing for consistency Accepted 39 26 26 Editorial Add line spacing for consistency Accepted 40 26 41 Editorial Add line spacing for consistency Accepted 41 26 48 Editorial Add line spacing for consistency Accepted 42 28 6
Editorial Remove reference to IEEE Std. 1042-1987 Accepted 43 28 8
Editorial Delete period Accepted 44 28 11 Editorial Add hyphen HFC-FPGA Accepted 45 28 30 Editorial Correct spelling of lifecycle Accepted 46 29 11 Editorial Delete period Accepted 47 29 28 Editorial Added Std. to be consistent Accepted 48 30 7
Editorial Space added Accepted 49 30 31 Editorial Add line spacing for consistency Accepted 50 30 36 Editorial Add line spacing for consistency Accepted 51 31 5
Editorial Delete comma and add space Accepted 52 31 7
Editorial Deleted year for consistency.
Accepted 53 31 10 Editorial Deleted year for consistency.
Accepted 54 31 14 Editorial Deleted year for consistency.
Accepted 55 33 9
Editorial Add line spacing for consistency Accepted 56 33 15 Editorial Add line spacing for consistency Accepted 57 33 26 Editorial Add line spacing for consistency Accepted 58 34 42 Editorial Add line spacing for consistency Accepted 59 36 45 Editorial Correct spelling of gegahertz Accepted 60 36 47 Editorial Add hyphen HFC-FPGA Accepted
3 Comment No.
Page Line Comment Type Suggested Revision NRC Disposition 61 39 25 Editorial Change an to a Accepted 62 40 24 Editorial Correct reference to 3.4 Accepted 63 41 27 Editorial Change an to a Accepted 64 42 3-7 Editorial Fixe indentation Accepted 65 42 10 Editorial Change a to an Accepted 66 42 22 Editorial Add hyphen to HFC-FPGA Accepted 67 42 28 Editorial Correct reference to 3.3.2.5 Accepted 68 42 44-47 Editorial Aligned bullet indentation Accepted 69 43 40 Editorial Add hyphen to HFC-FPGA Accepted 70 43 48 Editorial Add space Accepted 71 47 30 Editorial Corrected reference to 3.2.4 Accepted 72 50 4
Editorial Bullet location corrected Accepted 73 52 4
Editorial Added that the Accepted 74 53 41 Editorial Added hyphen to post-accident Accepted 75 55 32 Editorial Added Std. to be consistent Accepted 76 55 40 Editorial Add spacing line Accepted 77 55 42 Editorial RG 1.153 is not listed in Section 2 Accepted 78 55 44 Editorial Added Std. to be consistent Accepted 79 55 45 Editorial Added spacing line Accepted 80 56 22 Editorial Corrected reference 3.3.2.6 Accepted 81 56 32 Editorial Added Std. to be consistent Accepted 82 56 33 Editorial Added spacing line Accepted 83 57 31 Editorial Added Std. to be consistent Accepted 84 57 39 Editorial Added Std. to be consistent Accepted 85 57 46 Editorial Corrected spelling of lifecycle Accepted 86 58 23 Editorial Corrected spelling of lifecycle Accepted 87 59 4-9 Proprietary Information Remove markings for information incorrectly identified as proprietary Accepted 88 59 11 Proprietary Information Remove markings. One-step is not proprietary.
Accepted 89 59 11 Editorial Change verb tense from is to was Accepted 90 59 17 Editorial Added Std. to be consistent Accepted 91 59 26 Editorial Added Std. to be consistent Accepted 92 59 29 Editorial Added Std. to be consistent Accepted
4 Comment No.
Page Line Comment Type Suggested Revision NRC Disposition 93 59 40 Editorial Added Std. to be consistent Accepted 94 60 34 Editorial Corrected reference to 5.2 Accepted 95 60 42 Editorial Corrected reference to TR-106493 Accepted 96 61 4
Editorial Added Std. to be consistent Accepted 97 61 17 Editorial Deleted extra space Accepted 98 61 35 Editorial Added Std. to be consistent Accepted 99 61 37 Editorial Corrected references to 5.2.13 and 5.2.16 Accepted 100 62 27 Editorial Added Std. to be consistent Accepted 101 62 29 Editorial Deleted extra line Accepted 102 64 10 Editorial Added hyphen to self-diagnostic Accepted 103 65 36 Editorial Added Std. to be consistent Accepted 104 66 37 Editorial Correct spelling of lifecycle Accepted 105 66 40 Editorial Add hyphen to HFC-FPGA Accepted 106 67 21-23 Proprietary Information Remove markings for information incorrectly identified as proprietary Accepted 107 67 39 Editorial Corrected reference to 3.3.2 Accepted 108 71 35 Editorial Accepted 109 71 41 Editorial Corrected references to 3.3.1.1 and 3.3.1.3 Accepted 110 73 41 Editorial Added space Accepted 111 73 43 Editorial Added space Accepted