ML19330A164

Proposed Corrections to Midland Hearing Transcript Per ASLB 720628 Order,Superseding 720602 Corrections

ML19330A164
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Site:	Midland
Issue date:	09/01/1972
From:	Restrick J CONSUMERS ENERGY CO. (FORMERLY CONSUMERS POWER CO.)
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m UNITED STATES OF AMERICA ATOMIC ENERGY COMMISSION BEF0PE THE A'IOMIC SAFETY AND LICENSING BOARD ,

In the Matter of )

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CONSUMIRS POWER COMPANY ) Docket Nos. 50-329 and 50-330

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(Midland Plant, Units 1 and 2) )

APPLICANT'S PROPOSED TRANSCRIPT CORRECTIONS Applicant proposes that the following corrections be made in the transcript of the hearings in the Midland proceeding:

Page Line Proposed Correction 5 9 "Scholen, Geman" to "Scholer, Fier=an" 6 14 " fund" to " Fund" 6 25 "represeted" to " represented" 8 11 "MR. KESSLER" to "MR. WESSEL" 25 4 "Chairm" to "Chaiman" 25-26 - Statement at top of p. 26 is Mr. Roisman's, a sentence or more has been emitted.

28 21 "environmenta 1 protection" to " environ-mental protection" 29 2 "environmenta 1 issues" to " environ-mental issues" 32 20 "specifid" to " specific" 33 2 "wolefully" to "woefuuy" 37 2 "a-pearances" to " appearances" 44 9 "rul" to " rule" 8007150@p

2 M Line Proposed Correction 57 1 "idenrying" to " identifying" 63 20 "controver" to " controvert" 66 13 "assesseatn" to " assessment" 67 11 " plant" to " plan" 67 -23 "A-plicant" to " Applicant" 72 10 "engergy" to " energy" 74 19 "AVRS" to "ACRS" 77 10 "I" to "E" 82 16 "seond" to "second" 83 4 "b-en" to "been" 84 19 "Yench" to "Jensch" 84 21 "NIPA" to "NEPA" 84 23 "Yench" to "Jensch" 85 2 "fench" to "Jensch" .

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-f6[' 19 " copies" to " copied" l 1

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87 5 following " amendments" add "until October 1, 1970" 96 23 "Yench" to "Jensch" 97 5 "Yench" to "Jensch" 97 23 "Yench" to "Jensch" 100 23 " underline" to " underlie"

'108 5 "Yench" to "Jensch" 114 25 "ha-pen" to " happen" 152 19 "opponing" to " opposing" 161 5 between "seem" and "to" insert "not" -

164 19 "70" to "17"

3 Pg Line Proposed Correction 176 21-22 " confer f a" to " conference all of a" 179 5 "cources" to " sources" 390 3 "by-produce" to "by-product" 419 21 " appreciate" appears incorrect 468 7 "see" to "seem" 473 24 "effect of" to " effective" 475 3 "requestions" to " regulations" 475 3 " coordinates" to " ordinances" 476 9 insert " agencies" following " federal" 480 18 "in the" to "into" 492 1 " possibility" to " plausibility" 496 lo "descripted" to " described" 509 25 "not" to "got" 541 14 "exluded" to " excluded" 547 20 "igoing" to " going" 556 18 "say" to " stay" 560 ,

12 "sa tipulation" to "a stipulation" 561 e " unfair" to " fair" 563 14 "does" to "does not" i

, 567 5 "thar" to "that" 1

575 20 "intervenots" to "intervenors" 576 18 "want" to "what" 580 7 " lightly" to "likely" 586 9 "sais" to "says" 591 20 " subjective" to " subject to" 594 14 " things" to " thinks"

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h Line Proposed Correction 600 23 "dat" to "date" 607 10 delete second " areas" 618 21 "please" to " pleasure" 621 5 "what" to "want" 6k2 2 "yo" to "you" 661 15 "evidenc" to " evidence" 688 15 "ASOB" to "ASLB" 743 11-12 "surfact" to " surface" 746 14 " assign" to " design" 751 25 "B&S" to "B&W" 757 5 " CHAIRMAN MURPHY" to "MR. CIERRY" 760 19 and 22 ". Applicant" to "Intervenors" 778 19 and 22 "cjange" to " change" 786 5 "J. P. Castner" to " Jacob Kastner" 787 24 "Castner" to "Kastner" 812 22 " question" to " questions" 835 25 "sh-er" to " sheer" 852 5 "gater" to " gather" 869 9 "sysstem" to " system" 890 18 "his" to "this" 902 12 "ADIK" to "A, D, I, K" 903 22 "Ithi nk" to "I think" 917 5 " Borrows" to " Burroughs" 929- 4 "ving" to "having" 934 16 "Hendri" to "Hendrie" 949 24 '14th" to "17th"

5 Pge Line Proposed correction 950 21 "8" to "A" 971 21 "usure" to "sure" 978 23 " forma ly" to " formally" 984 1 " prom sing" to " premising" 990 16 "that" to "if" 997 1 "one instane" to "in one instance" 1000 19 "eith" to "with" 1011 8 " dependent" to " independent" 1011 18 " fifteen" to " fifty" 1012 22 " CHAIRMAN MURPHY: I like" to

" CHAIRMAN MURPHY: I would like" 1024 14 "thissis" to "this is" 1042 3 " tit" to "it" 1052 14 "desing" to " design" ,

1060 14 "be be" to "we be" 1061 22 " intention" to " contention" 1066 21 "procedding" to " proceeding" 1069 9 "calver" to "calvert" 1073 17 " objection" to " object" 1076 17-18 "to Mr. Blaskey" to " a Mr. Blasingame" 1094 13 " quality" to " quantify" 1100 6, 9 "cateleguing" to " cataloguing" 1106 10, 13, 15 "B&W122" to "BAW 10022" 1117 24 " David" to " James" 1154 23 "different" to " difference" 1178 7 "absnece" to " absence" 1215 12 " clarke" to " clark"

6 h Line Proposed Correction 1217 19 " clarke" to " clark" 124h 15 "few very" to "very few"

1249 17 "FSAR" to "PSAR" i 1258 1 " particulate" to "particular" 1259 24 "10,0015" to "10,015" 1262 17 "documdnts" to " documents" 1269 1 "wondeering" to " wondering" 1270 11 "Mr. Chairan" to "Mr. Chairman" 1272 15 "hamoney" to " harmony" '

1272 18 "certificat-on" to " certification" 1289 17 "shter's" to " staff's" 1

1304 14 "Wesel's" to "Wessel's" 130h 25 "ceyer" to "nyer" 1330 4 "readiation" to " radiation" 1349 14 "corby" to "comey" 1378 15 "BAW-1015" to "BAW-10,015" 1390 18 "do-sn't" to "deesn't" 1392 19 "inquirieis" to " inquiries" a

1397 24 "alalyses" to " analyses"  ;

1409 13, 14, 17 " Swart " to "swarts" 1436 23 "148" to "148kh" '

1444 25 "thad" to "had" 1k82 5 "axked" to " asked" 1486 1 " applicant" to " application" 1486 13 "to" to "of" 1487 11 "that" to "than" 1487 25 " Applicant" to " Applicant's"

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_Page Line Proposed Correc Q 1491 4 "Wesel" to "Wessel" 1h97 9 "driect" to " direct" 1518 18 " father" to " farther" 1535 12 "og" to "of" 1538 14-15 delete second " introduced" 1549 12 "comapred" to " compared" 1552 5 "elicity" to " elicit" 1557 14 "comptuer" to " computer" 1557 20 "conservations" to " conservative" 1562 19 "than" to "that" 1571 17-19 delete full sentence - repetition 1577 1 insert " CHAIRMAN MURPHY" 1577 h delete second "Mr. Cherry" 1605 2 " iodine" to " idea" 1614 17 "that Chi over Q cancels out" to "the Chi over Q's cancel out" 1615 25 "either" to "E to" 1617 6 insert "ever" between "it" and "the" 1622 20 insert "only" between "If" and "one" 1622 21 "slightly higher" to "a slightly higher dose" 1623 5 " designing" to " assigning" 1623 18 insert " iodine in" between "of" and " building" 1624 19 "we" to "they" 1625 7 "ARDT" to "DRDT" 1628 19 "817" to "8.7" 1638 6 " wha " to "what"

8 M Line Proposed Correction 1645 4 "ALL" to " FALL" 1655 10 "Mr. Burley" to "Dr. Burley" 1748 19 "now" to "not" 1779 5 "of" to "or" 1803 11-12 " explosion" to " exposure" 1863- 25 "50" to "15" 1864 4 "50" to "15" 1875 6 " attach" to " attack" 1919 22 "100015" to "10,015" 2002 6 "to" to "two" 2011 1 "Does" to "Doce" 2019 12, 13 "nonesense" to " nonsense" 2036 3 "and the" to "in the" 2038 6 "&" to "%"

2065 24 " relative" to " relation" 2090 11 " Applicant" to " Staff" 2100 6 "Wertz" to "Wirtz v."

2110 9 "Westhinghouse" to " Westinghouse" 2126 19 " questions" to " sections" 2131 16 "nuelear technology" to " Nuclear Technology" 2131 16 "synpositum" to " symposium" 2184 20 "durves" to " curves" 2186 11 "stitle" to " title" 2221 24 " polish" to " police" 2246 8 "raidation" to " radiation" 2271 7 " threshing" to " fleshing"

9 Page Line Pronosed Correction 2327 16 " colleagues" to " colleague" 2331 18 " barriers" to " generators" 2345 6 " engineer" to "etgineering" 2345 12-13 " engineering" to " auxiliary or electrical" 2359 12 insert "are" before "asking" 2375 2 "enmmanded" to " containment" 2379 20 " surface" to " serv.ce" 2380 6 " surface" to " service" 2405 23 "must" to "just" 241o 19 "supportint" to " supporting" 2411 14 " safety" to " safely" 2425 16 "They Staff" to "The Staff" 2429 16 " inadequate" to " adequate" 2439 7 " joint" to " join" 2468 19 "sdifferent" to "different" 2493 l' insert "," between " environment" and

" dewatering" 2526 9 "Ansperger" to " Asperger" 2527 4, 13 "Ansperger" to " Asperger" 2530 11, 13 "Ansperger" to " Asperger" 2542 h "you" to "your" 25k2 12 "theor" to " theory" 2557 9 "0" to "on" l 2572 12 "new" to "not" 2572 25 "ocene" to "oconee" 2573 6 " state" to " stage"

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_Page, Line Proposed Correction 2574 8 "publiched" to " published" 2623 13 "coule" to "could" 2627 12 " brining" to " bringing" 2632 3 "10 CFR" to "10 CFR 20" 2642 14 "ncminally" to "nomally" 2M2 15 " impress-on" to " impression" 2t63 20 "loacting" to " locating" 2665 5 "p;1an" to " plan" 2665 18 "og" to "of" 2683 25 "wuold" to "would" 2693 17 'McDue" to "McCue" 2693 25 "ECC" to "ECCS" 2698 22 " cross-evidence" to " cross-examination" 2722 13 " ton" to "on" 2722 13 insert " power" between " emergency" and " supplies" 2742 19 "100015" to "10,015" 27h4 6 "100015" to "10,015" 2773 14, 16 "Murray" to "Murri" 2782 19 "vervice" to " service" 2783 20 "if" to "it" 2817 14 "evenr" to "even" 2822 20 "neespapers" to " newspapers" 2824 9 "cooroborate" to " corroborate" 2835 20 "Nitt's" to "Nitti's" 28k1 15 "taht" to "that"

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11 Pg Line Proposed Correction 2842 13 "L. F. Pausley and the Indian" to "L. F. Parsly in the" 2848 19-20 " result of NSPV" to "results of NSPP" 2879 13 "vich" to "which" 2891 19 "10002k" to "10,024" 2896 1 " YORE" to " MURPHY" 2898 15 insert "willing" after " perfectly" 2929 13 "fety" to " safety" 2935 8 " January 1" to " January 21" 2947 21 "furhter" to "further" 2967 15 " Trust" to " Antitrust 2986 6 " cooperate" to " cooper up" 2986 7 "tht" to "that" 3003 24 " guy" to " buy" 3005 20 "must" to ",just" 3006 1, 3 "503k" to "50.34" 301k 23 "hypotentical" to " hypothetical" 3042 2h "idifficulties" to " difficulties"

, 3043 k "xircumstances" to " circumstances" 3Ch9 19 "antent" to " intent" 3061 3 "tht" to "that" 3064 13 "meetting" to " meeting" 3068 5 "Down" to "Dow" 307h 19 "uRurri" to "Murri" 3107 1 "$33" to "k33" 3110 22 " draft" to " graph" 3113 23 "taht" to "that"

12 M Line Proposed Correction 3119-20 appears to be sentence missing 3166 7 "knwo" to "know" 3170 15 "lile" to "like" 3171 24 "Herry" to " Cherry" 3215 11 "belive" to "believe" 3238 14 "fehicles" to " vehicles" 3242 2 "not" to "no" 3267 16 "Divsion" to " Division" 3306 4 "iodicy" to " idiocy" 3322 -17 "F" to "E" 3322 22 " Jostle" to " Joust with" 3326 6 " tis" to "it's" 3332 8 "supervicial" to " superficial" 3340 25 "protions" to " portions" 3341 21 "ot" to "to" 3372 19 "who" to "with" 3397 11 "answr" to " answer" 3398 2 "maitained" to " maintained" j

- 3410 11 insert "they" following "as" j 3439 2 "Wieness" to " Witness" 3442 18 "in" to "of" 3499 2 " seismological" to " meteorological" l 3500 13 insert "MR. WESSEL" before' sentence 3540 5 "shipshod" to " slipshod" 3561 2o "Diuno" to "Dinunno" i

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13 Page Line Proposed Correction 3573 -18 "Doq" to "Dow" 3582 21 " dustiness" to "sustiness" 3591 4 "oxperimentall" to " experimentally" 3594 14 "tht" to "that" 3619 3 "TLat's" te "That's" 3649 4 "hydroscopic" to " hygroscopic" 3686 2 "sypes" to " types" 3742 8 "sengence" is =eaningless 3806 3 "does" to " dose" 3817 1 "privision" to " provision" 3838 13 "recepient" to " recipient" 3838 14 "aother" to "another" 3839 9 "norhing" to "nothing" 3919 9 & 14 "Reicher" to "Reinker" 3921 - 11 "Reicher" to "Reinker" 3932 8 " cod s" to " codes" 3948 5 "anme" to "name" l 3949 3 "Electrid" to " Electric" 3966 24 add "with" between " familiar" and l

" chloride" l 3999 14 "suppliker" to " supplier" 4000 18 Who is speaking?

4006 1 " Generator" to "Goneration" 4008 18 " Generator" to " Generation" 4008 24 "edocument" to " document" 4022 25 " specification" to " classification" 4157 6 "than" to "that" I

14 Pge Line Proposed Correction h159 e? "survillance" to " surveillance" 4205 9&n "Victorine" to "Victoreen" 4207 22 "Victorine" to "Victoreen" 4208 2 "Victorine" to "Victoreen" 4208 20 "policty" to " policy" 4210 6 "inot" to "into" 4214 25 "Victorine" to "Victoreen" 4225 13 "recor " to " report" 4261 19 "Wxhibit" to " Exhibit" 4302 23 delete "vo" 4311 19 "if" to "is" 4318 20 "Greer" to "Grier" 4329 25 "1967" to "1965" 4339 13 "Any" to "And" 4351 3 "D c-1" to "D+c-1" 4 00 4 "Victorine" to "Victoreen" WO1 1&2 "Victorine" to "Victoreen" W30 23 "M-45" to "N-45" WW 16 insert "or" between " vessel" and " steam" 4h73 14 "Bernse" to "Bernsen" M78 18 " grated" to " granted" M93 2 " Pack" to " Peck" M97 8 "They" to "The" 4561 12 & 15 "Geier" to "Grier" 4586 21 "xcan" to "can" 4603 8 " cods" to " codes" 4606 19 " doss" to "does"

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4610 21 "comebody" to "somebody" 4615 8 "Page" to "Paige" 4628 8 "ntractors" to " contractors" 4664 4 "KE" to " decay heat" 4691 7 " effluence" to " effluents" 4769 5 "udnerstand" to " understand" 1

4782 16 "sdischarged" to " discharged" 4828 14 "the first" to "that first" 4836 13 "fossile" to " fossil" k841 6 "MR. REIS" to "MR. ROISMAN" 4850 11 "or" to "of" 4854 6 "migh" to "might" 4860 21 " Argon" to "Argonne" 4861 12, 22, 23 " Argon" to "Argonne" 4862 2, 7 " Argon" to "Argonne" 4863 7, 13 " Argon" to "Argonne" 4864 4,6,9 " Argon" to "Argonne" 4872 6 "themsleves" to "t , mselves" k874 1 "noot" to "not"  ;

4876 5, 15, 16,'20, 23, 24 " Argon" to "Argonne" 4877 9 " Argon" to "Argonne" 4879 24 " Argon" to "Argonne" e

4880 17, 20 " Argon" to "Argonne" 4881 4 " Argon" to "Argonne" 4888 10 " hearken" to " harken" 4890 4, 16, 22 " Argon" to "Argonne" l

16 Page Line Proposed Correction 4891 6 " sui" to "sua" 4892 1 " Argon" to "Argonne" 4896 24 " Argon" to "Argonne" 4898 9 "mie" to " mis" 4902 3 "undesinged" to " undesigned" 4906 n, 14, 17 " Argon" to "Argonne" 4910 1 " CHAIRMAN MURPirl" to "MR. ROISMAN" 4919 23 "EDP" to "D F" k921 1 "D P" to "EDF" 4923 17 "EDP" to "EDF" 4927 16 "EDP" to "EDF" 4931 14 "SALB" to "ASLB" 494h 10 "We" to "It" 4953 n "and answer" to "an answer" 4983 9 "introduduce" to " introduce" 4989 1 "Chziman" to "Chaiman" 4990 12 "BAB" to "BAW" 4993 20 "think" to " thing" 4997 22 "W&B" to "B&W" 5002 19 "saw" to "say" 5011 13 " Argon" to "Argonne" Son 22 "Hanover" to "Hanauer" 5012 1 "Hanover" to "Hanauer" 5013 2, 7 "Hanover" to "Hanauer" 5019 15 "not National" to "to the National" 5028 -1 "WESSLER" to "WESSEL" 5028 10 "Cherm & Meltott" to "Cherin & Menott"

17 M Line Pronosed Correction 5030 24 Col.en's" to "Cowan's" 5038 3 "retunr" to " return" 5039 23 "htink" to "think" 5042 13 " Hoover" to " Haver" 5048 19 " Hoover, Dr. R ops" to "Huver, Dr. Loucks" 5054 8 "Wessler" to "We-sel" 5069 15 "probatibe" to " probative" 5079 25 "indivuidly" to " individually" 5107 10 "make" to "made" 5125 3 "nisity" to " falsity" 5136 25 " king" to " kind" 5223 11 "bisis" to " basis" 5230 14 "mutaul" to " mutual" 5232 19 "Barry" to " Mary" 5239 25 "in" to "the" 5240 19 "to the" to "for" 5240 20 "of" to "to" 5240 21 " Ernest Eckhart" to "Ernst Eckert" 5242 22 "for Council on Environmental Quality

' Agency's proceedings" to "of the Council en Environmental Quality for agency proceedings" 5243 22 "failing the application" to "filira the application is" 52h3 24 " materials, we then ask" to " materials.

'ne then asked" 5245 18 "abour" to "about" 5251 17 " Hudson" to " Scenic Hudson" I

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18 Page Line Proposed Correction 5251 17 "sy" to "by" 5253 18 " flak" to " flat" 5258 13 "on" to "as" 5264. 3 " corp" to " core" 5270 9 "transcent" to " transcend" 5270 15 "permis" to "pers'.t" 5272 14-16 garbled 5274 h " radium" to " uranium" 5286 5 " sort" to "short" 5289 22 delete "over" 5290 22 garbled 5295 17 "Taks" to " Task" 5303 12 " contention" to " intention" 5310 20 "Butsell" to "But:el" 5312 6 "3MD" to "B&W" 5323 3 "Joine" to " Join" 5324 11 "revuttal" to " rebuttal" 5333 1 "Perhpas" to "Perhaps" 5335 11 "Alos" to "Also" 5369 9 delete "not" 5372 lo delete " requesting" insert "on request for" 5380 5 "no" to "an" 5388 1 omits last paragraph of Zadera qualifications (See Addendum)

" chlorine alum" to " chlorine, alum" 5390 23 5398 22 "10-10" to "10-1" 5399 17 "lo-lo" to "10-1"

19 Page Line Proposed Correction 5416 23 " alkyd reaction" to "alcalic reaction"

5h17 10 "comon of" to "none of" 5421 2 " silicone" to " silica" 5421 3 " iron" to " oxide" 5423 lo, 11 " items" to " elements" 5426 13 " graphs , samples" to " grab ss1Jples" 5433 4 " late" to " laid" 5433 7 " rebuttal" to "a bus load of" 5h36 15 "has" to "does act have" Sh60 6 " water resources" to " Water Resources Commission" 5h60 7 "in other agreements" to "and in other agreements" 5466 6 "are the" to "have" 5466 6 "are very low" to "have very low electric charges" 5466 15 "amonium iodide" to "armonium ion" 5469 16 " silicon" to " silica" 5471 6 "it was May" to "the form is dated May" i 5473 15 "date" to " data" 5473' 25 " firms" to "fonns" 5475 23 "Seven-Bay" to "seven-day" 5485 2 "they use a number or sampling methods" to "they identify the number of samplings that" 5485 18 "there are" to "the" 5485 19 " discharged" to " discharged are accurate" 5511 9 "of 60,000" to "60" 5513 9 "that--on" to "on" 5519 12, 13 "inacetic" to "in hydroxing acetic"

20 h Line Proposed Correction 5521 7 delete "how" 5521 18 "ought to" to "could"

'5521 19 "the henomen" to " phenomena" 5527 4 "from Dr.Templin" to "by Dow Chemical" 5529 24 "deminerali::er" to "deminerali::ed water" 5532 17 " hydrochloric" to " hypochlorous"

" higher" to " ion" 5532 18 " chlorine dialate or hydrochloric" to

" chlorine or hypochlorous" 5550 23 " affluent" to " effluent" 5551 5, 7 " affluent" to " effluent" 5559 1 " affluent" to " effluent" 5560 9 " affluent" to " effluent" 5565 25 " affluent" to " effluent" 5575 22 " consolidation" to " certification" 5580 21 "gynergistic" to " synergistic" 5588 19 " par" to "Part" 5589 3, 4, 15, 22 " par" to "Part" 5590 3,4,5 " par" to "Part" 5594 2 "grabble" to " grapple" 5611 20 " salts" to " solids" 5612 20 " stages" to " stations" 5617 25 "never became" to "can be" 5619 7 " chlorine" to " chloride" 5620 13 " Bullet Creek" to " Bullock creek" 5621 18, 25 " Bullet Creek" to " Bullock Creek" 5622 5, 10 " Bullet creek" to " Bullock creek" 5622 8 " intentions" to "co tn entions"

21 Page Line Proposed Correction 5626 24 "10-C of our" to "10 CFR" 5628 19 "XII-IX" to "XII-9" 5628 24 "to" to "through" 5631 7 " sight" to " site" 5632 14 " released" to " releasing" 5633 12 " require" to " recall" 5635 8 "dilatorious" to " deleterious" f

5638 23 "MR. RESTRICK" to " CHAIRMAN MURPHY" 56 4 14 "of" to "to cause a" 56W 15 insert "not" before '%elow" 56W 25 "Dow gets" to "Down to" 56M 25 " day" to " liter" 56h5 12 "XII-IV" to "XII h" 5645 20 "in" to "and" 56h5 25 "XII-IV" to "XII-4" 56h6 10 "12-7" to "XII-7" 5658 10 "XII-X" to "XII-10" 5660 5 "at the flow of filling" to "the flow" 5662 2 " blow" to " flow" 3663 13 "there" to "these" 5666 6 "XII-X" to "XII-10" 5667 22 "of" to "shows" 5667 3&4 "into evaporator losses" to "due to evaporation losses" 5669 21 "otherwise" to "other" 5670 16 "within degree" to "within a one degree" 5672- 15 "4.4-C" to "k.4-3" 5672 24 "they were" to "it was"

22 Pg Line Propcsed Correction 5692 19 "KARTALIA" to "RESTRICK" 5722 23 "skinnalation" to " scintillation" 5724 7 "Mr." to "Mrs."

5728 11 " diversion" to " conversion" 5729 7 "dissimilation" to " assimilation" 5732 12 "or" to "our" 5733 10 " load" to " low" 5734 3 "DOB" to " BOD" 5735 25 "D0D" to " BOD" 5777 21 " terribly" to " generally" 5780 13 " pump" to " pond" 5796 10 " mold" to " mole" 5800 22 "kenitic" to " kinetic" 5810 14 "information" to "effect" 5825 15 "has" to "has not" 5826 16 " Vital Plankton" to "phytoplankton" 5836 19 "Geisal" to "Qysel" 5856 18 "osmodic" to " osmotic" 5857 6 "osmodic" to " osmotic" 21 l 5858 "III-XXXV" to "III-35" i 5858 24 " thousandth of a part" to " thousandth l of a part per million"

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5868 5,'10, 14 " Bullet" to " Bullock" 5871 10, 15, 22 "tridium" to " tritium" i 5872 4, 19 "tridium" to " tritium" l 5873 5, 22, 25 "tridium" to " tritium" 5874 8, 11, 14, 17 "tridium" to " tritium" l l

23 Page Line Proposed Correction 5874 22 " par" to "Part" 5876 19 " par" to "Part" 5877 2, 8, 22 "tridium" to " tritium" 5877 lo, 18 " par" to "Part" 5877 8 "below" to "below Part" 5878 5 "tridium" to " tritium" 5882 22 "collectify" to " identify" 5885 13 "no" to "Yes" 5887 18 "date" to " data" 5910 9 "date that they" to " data that"  ;

l 5915 16 " plants" to " plans" i i

5917 23 " fire" to " fossil-fired" '

5923 24 "III-VI" to "III-6" 59W 2 "10 percent" to " tenth of a percent" 5959 9 " sick" to " stick" 5959 lo " hour" to "oitr" 5974 12 "Pasquel" to "Pasquill" 5989 21 delete ", Dr."

5998 lo "184" to "1484" 6003 13 "XII-XI" to "XII-11" 6008 15 "BASR" to "PSAR" 6011 9 "PASR" to "PSAR" 6013 1 "EECS" to "ECCS" 6013 15 "EECS" to "ECCS" 6017 8 " rejected" to "proe cted" 6019 15 " vital plankton" to "phytoplankton"

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I 24 g Line Proposed Correction 6019 19 " fly" to " fry" 6026 24 "1cw" to " load" 6029-A 6 " John" to " Thomas" 6048 2 "logistis" to " logistics" 6050 3 "thresshold" to "threshhold" 6056 20-21 "ETO systems" to " ecosystems" 6058 24 "ECO system" to " ecosystem" 6059 8 " Board of" to " Water" 6066 4 "Down" to "Dow" 6066 6 " cross " to " cost "

6074 7 "upon" to " pond" 6075 7 " treat" to " treaty" 6085 6 "decredibility" to " credibility" 6096 9 delete "MR. LOWENSTEIN" 6101 6 "minitoring" to " monitoring" 6107 20 " Argon" to "Argonne" ,

l 6ni 7 " John" to " Tom" 6ne 4 "apparently" to " presently" )

6n3 3 "nuclerar" to " nuclear" 6nk n " cooling plant" to " cooling pond" 6121 6 "possibly" to "approximately" 6123 3 " competence" to " confidence" 6131 9 "in the flow 50" to "with the flow 350" 6137 16 "Mr. Like" to "Mr. Wend" 6138 10 "6 91" to "6 9-1" 6138 11, 14 "b.t.u. power" to " BTU per hour"

25 Page Line Proposed Correction 6139 1 "6.91" to "6.9-1" 6144 1 "3-7, and table 3-6" to "III-7 and table III-6" 614k 24 "3-6" to "III-6" 6145 1 "3-1, on page 3-6" to "III-1, on page III-6" 6146 9 "3-6" to "III-6" 6146 13 "3-7" to "III-7" 6146 14 "timex" to " times" 6146 19 " surface" to " service" 6147 2 "3-6" to "III-6" 6147 16 " surface" to " service" 6152 1 "off" to "all" 6159 13 "towards" to " towers" 6163 3 "the tower" to "Dow" 6166 8 " deficiency" to " efficiency" 6167 22 "carno" to "carnot" 6169 13 " plant" to " pond" 6184 2 "occonee" to "oconee" 6196 25 "on" to "on that."

6211 14 "waterholing" to "waterholding" 6220 23 "Pasquel" to "Pasquin "

6221 5, 7, 11, 16 "Pasquel" to Pasquill" 6228 23 delete "than" 6231 3, 4, n , 16, 20, 24 "Pasquel" to "Pasquill" 6232 5, 7, 25 "Pasquel" to "Pasquin" 6233 4, 14 "Pasquel" to "Pasquill" l

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26 M Line Proposed Correction 6234 5 "past 12" to "Pasquill" 6234 8, 14, 17 "Pasquel" to "Pasquin "

6235 2 "Pasquel" to "Pasquill" 6235 4 " prune" to " plume" 6236 4, 9, 14 "Pasquel" to "Pasquill" 6237 3 "Pasquel" to "Pasqui n" 6239 5 "Pasquel" to "Pasquin" 6240 12, 17 "Pasquel" to "Pasquill" 6241 6 "Pasquel" to "Pasquill" 6242 1-2, k, 20 "hydroscopic" to " hygroscopic" 6243 14 "hydroscopic" to " hygroscopic" 6246 1 " dripping" to " drifting" 6246 4 " plant" to " pond" 6248 h " plan" to " plant" 6264 7, 13 "fo uile " to " fossil "

6265 6 "fo uile " to " fossil "

6266 6 "stupply" to " supply" 6271 18, 20 " surface" to " service" 6274 25 "an" to "an oppor "

6279 24 " fuel" to " field" 6298 10 " ten to fifty" to "10,250" 6298 24 "10,200 to 2,300" to "10,200 to 10,300" 6303 24 "Down" to "Dow" 6326 17 "Pasquel" to "Pasquill" 6326 25 "34" to "page 34" 6329 7 "1" to "22" 6345 1 "will" to "were"

27 M Line Proposed Cerrection 6352 2, 8 "Pasquel" to "Pasquill" 6353 23, 2k "Pasquel" to "Pasquill" 6354 3 "Pasquel" to "Pasquill" 6354, 2 "1932" to "1972" 6355 3 "Pasquel" to "Pasquill" 6k74 19 "not" to "no" 6484 10 "4/63"to"8/69" 6509 18 "PRW" to "PWR" 65u 16 "no" to "one" 6511 16 " Road" to "Rowe" 6528 20 "1980" to "1980 projections" 6530 5 " time" to " kind" 6533 5 delete "what is" 6570 5 "k6" to "486" 6578 3 " impossible" to "possible" 6578 6 " case of" to " case of oil" 6579 5 " expiration" to " exploration" 6579 18 delete second "that" 6582 19 "30" to "13" 6586 20 "That is the" to "That is. The" 6613 12 " variance" to "various" 4

6614 25 " community" to "co:mmmities" l

6615 4 insert "and" following " communities" 6615- 5 "at" to "in a" '

l 6626 3 "Raulerson Scope" to "Reilescope" 6626 4 "somewhat of the area" to " basal area" I

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28 Page Line Prouosed Correction 6627 7 "Haylow's" to "Harlow's" 6630 1 " analysis" to " habitat analysis" 6631 7 " dominance" to " dominants" 6642 14 " coverage" to " cover" 6644 1 "desiduous" to " deciduous" 6647 21 " lights" to " lives" 6650 8 "nuceids" to "nuclides" 6655 13 " varying" to "very" -

6655 15 " discharged" to " discharges" 6665 12 "even" to "10" 6681 9 "1m. LIIG" to "MR. REICHARD" 6684 9 " rom" to "romula" 6666 22 "we" to "they" 6693 2 "miotis" to "w otis" 6700-01 25 & 1 delete "We will Judicially notice that the animals are here" 6705 18 " plan" to " plant" 6710 16 " Analogy" to "Limnology" 6710 18 " offered" to " authored" 6710 17 " Fisheries" to " Fishery" 6710 19 "A. M. Beaton" to "A. M. Beeton" 6713 25 "= = 1ogy" to "limnology" 6714 11 " relative, or rapid" to "relatively rapid" 6716 16 "attributary" to " tributary" 6731 7-8 " understanding that Bechtel" to "under-standing. Bechtel" L

29 g Line Pronosed Correction 6734 18 " fly" to " fry" 6739 1 " virtue" to " nature" 6740 1 "those" to "these" 67h4 25 "your" to "the" 6747 6 "woodweb" to "roodweb" 6751 20 "4h0" to "140" 6760 9, 12, 13 "Curtland" to "Kirtland" 6764 9 "26" to "28" 6780 11 "3-7" to "III-7" 6816 5 "Bosschier" to "Bosscher" 6816 25 "three boilers" to "rebceilers" 6817 2 "three boilers" to "reboilers"

[ 6821 11, 15, 18 "11-3" to "XI-3" 6832 17 "125,000,000" to "1,500,000" 68h3 3 "Shannon" to "Hanson" 6850 1 "on the base rate" to "in the rate base" 6867 25 " concentrate" to " condensate" 6869 22 " concentrate" to " condensate" 6872 22 "and" to "on" 6890 11 " College of Engineering, University of California; Hamburg; B.S. Civil -

Nuclear 1954" to " College of Engineering, Hamburg, Germany - B.S. Civil - Nuclear 1954; University of California" 6899 24 "seven" to "several" 6915 11 "fran" to "during" 6937 16 "for the" to " figure" 6956 13 " boxes" to '%1ocks"

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30 h Line Proposed Correction 6959 3 " welds" to " valves" 6982 1 " ship" to " chip" 6982 13 " ship" to " chip" 6986 20 "cDrR" to "CVTR" 6986 21 " total" to " thermal"

. 6986 23 " total" to " thermal" j 6987 13 "carR" to "CVTR" 6998 6 " cast" to " cask"

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6998 12 "MRR" to "MR."

6998 13 "miligram power" to "minirem per hour"

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6998 21 " tense" to " tenth'i 6999 3 " Forks-to-dose" to " Flux-to-dose" 7000 1 "MR. KANGA:" to "MR. NEUENDORF:"

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7012 17 "in" to "on" 7023 6 "f.o.b. to be reprocessed in the plant" to "f.o.b. the reprocessing plant."

7027 10 "are" to "were" 7036 11 "to" to "at" 7111 7 " Eastern" to "Easton" 71kh 21 "Radway" to "radwaste" 7145 11 "Radway" to "radwaste"

.: 71 % 4 " Donald D. " to "B J. "

7233 12 " James" to "Jains" 7242 20- "a waterfall" to " water fev1" 7390 8 "5200" to "50 to 200" 739' 22 "algil" to " algal" 7k32 3 " plan" to " plant"

31 g Line Pronosed Correction 7436 14 "300" to "200" 7455 24 " correcting" to " collecting" 7477 2 " inner" to " inert" 7512 20 " marketing" to " monitoring" 7518 3 " refer" to " referred"

7518 3 "31" to "21" 7535 22 " chemistry" to " chemist" 7563 4 "59" to "95"

[- 7602 19 " actual" to " accident"

! 7607 20 " casts" to " casks" l

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7608 25 " cast" to " cask" 7619 22 "oherr" to "other" 7705 4 "ko" to "4" 7729 21 "you" to "Dow" 7758 11 " gamma" to " gambling" 7781 lo "over" to " older" 7782 2 "13 megawatts and 100 megawatts" to "1300 megawatts" 7782 16 insert "each" before " capable" 7803 8 " illegal" to " legal" 7d83 20 " inner action" to " interaction" 7864 2 " inner action" to " interaction" 7885 16-17 " inner action" to " interaction" 7886 23 Who is "Houch"7 7903 lo " destroy" to " describe" l 8038 12 "Mysel" to " Kaiser" I

32 Pg Line Proposed Correction 8050 3 " Atomic Energy" to " economy energy" 8083 19 " ordinance" to " ordinate" 8087 4 " Coal " to " Oil "

810h 6 " power" to " pumped" 8140 11 " course" to " coarse" 8149 20 " plan" to " plant" 8161- 3 "decondition" to " decommission" 8176 18 "isotrcpes" to " isotopes" 8179 24 "thenno" to " thermal" 8199 22 "lorigina" to " original" 8260 14 " affluence" to " effluents" 8270 19 "arbuably" to " arguably" 8288 15 " Pine Lake cooling" to " primary I coolant"

! 8302 26 " Post" to "Most"

j. 8330 12 "fragible" to " frangible" 8330 24 " ten" to " tend" 83ho 5, 9 " disburse" to " disperse" 83h8 23 " intending" to " tending" 8396 1, 2 "Radway" to "radwaste '

8403 12, 19 "Radway" to "radwaste" I i

84A 7 " Rusk" to " Rust"

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8h59 23 "Laucks" to "Loucks" l 8460 3 " Rusk's" to " Rust's" 8486 24 "Part 10 with CFR and" to "10 CFR" 8511 20 " strain" to " stream" l

33 h Line Proposed Correction 8607 25 "Outhbert" to "Cuthbert" 8608 3, 6 "outhbert" to "Cuthbert" 8615 17 "Outhbert" to "Cuthbert" 8630 6 "liekly" to "likely" 8645 22 " plan" to " plant" 8684 16 " steam" to " scheme" 8685 18 "ps" to " psi" 8694 16 " reactive" to " reactor" 8712 21 "thermo" to "themal" 8724 11 "I want" to "I don't want" 8733 7 " basis" to " basin" 8734 17 " appendix" to " appendage" 8788 12 " chlorine" to " chloride" 8830 2 "Wgieniets" to "Wgienists" 8831 6 "in" to "for" 8832 3 "potentially" to " potentiate" 8832 25 " Chem" to " Chemical" 8833 14 "curiated" to " cure rate of" 8834 2 "The" to "At"  ;

8834 14 "even clinical" to "some clinical human" 8837 4 "To" to "For" 8838 6 " dormant. Incubation" to "domant incubation" 8838 10 " records" to " references" )

i 8838 16 "bruphium and cerium" to " ruthenium "  !

8838 22 " Warren Gates" to " Warren and Gates" l 8838 23 "Dr. Gates" to "Drs. Warren and Gates" i

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- 34 Page Line Proposed Correction 8839 e' " rims" to " rems" 8839 5 "sember" to "cember" 8839 8 " cerium No." to "ceriu= "

8839 8 following "he" insert " inserted them into the lungs" 8839 11 " running" to " ranging" 8839 12 " rims" to " rems" 8839 15 "a dose" to "relatively low radiation dose" 8839 17 "prolonium" to " polonium" 8839 18-19 "or prolonium 75" to "an exposure or 75" 8839 20 "was" to "has" 8839 20 "relatively".to " relative" 8839 21 delete "for this" 8839 21 "710 rims" to "750 rems" 8841 20 "because" to "but" 8844 17 delete "and"

-8844 18 - "FSAR" to "PSAR" 8844 22 "into" to "on" 8845 6 " adsorbed" to " absorbed" 8847 6 "Meaipie" to "Meaipe" 8849 4 "it" to "he" 8850 lo "100.15" to "one hundreth, .15" 8850 21 " thermal" to " chemical" 8851' 19 " tissues" to " issues" 8852 4 "not" to "now" 8852 5, 9 " adsorbed" to " absorbed" 8854 10 " Martin" to "Norton"

.. c .' , 35 Pg Line h uosed Correction 8854 16 " infirmed" to " informed" 8855 22 '%ut" to "that" 8855 9 " produce" to " product" 8859- 21 "Mr. W an" to "Dr. Langham" 8860 6 " Edith Elena" to "Edithylena" 8864 15 "in the time" to "everytime" 8864 19 " fairs" to '% ears" 8903 21 "nucleis" to "nuclides" 8904 6 "rybithin" to "rubidiu:n" 8910 6 "wouldn't" to "couldn't" 8914 2 "was was" to "was" 8914 16, 17 " tax" to "teit" 8916 8 "is the" to "is in the" 8924 20 "of" to "if" 8928 12 " effective" to "effect of" 8932 17 "of this" to "of research on this" 8936 7 " fact" to "effect" Addendum 5388 1 Add: "1969 - Present San Francisco office, Water Treatment, Waste Treatment, Feasibility Studies, Economic Evaluation, for Nuclear and Fossil Fuel Power Plants."

Respectfully sub=itted,

/s/ John K. Restrick John K. Restrick Attorney for Applicant Dated September 1, 1972

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