ML24184B923
| ML24184B923 | |
| Person / Time | |
|---|---|
| Issue date: | 07/02/2024 |
| From: | Leslie Fields Licensing Processes Branch |
| To: | Gerond George Licensing Processes Branch |
| References | |
| PWROG-18068 NP, Rev 1 | |
| Download: ML24184B923 (1) | |
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TOPICAL REPORT PWROG-18068 NP, REVISION 1 COMMENT RESOLUTION TABLE (NRC EDITORIAL SUGGESTIONS)
Comment Number Text Location in DSE/ TR markup/ RAI response Comment Type Suggested Revision Response to Comment DSE or TR Page Line (NRC edits shown in red)
PWROG NRC (Suggested Editorial
- Changes, Clarity,
- Accuracy, Proprietary) 1 (TR markup)
DSE Section 4.2 4-3 n/a Suggested Editorial Changes Edit suggested for Section 4.2, 2nd paragraph, first sentence to read:
"can be determined for forgings, plates, and welds based on common manufacturer, material class, or flux types (i.e.,
the material purchase or welding fabrication specification and heat treatment be consistent with the RPV material of interest)...
2 (TR markup)
DSE Section 4.2 4-4 n/a Suggested Editorial Changes The second term in Equation 5 under the square root sign,
{2*C([If BM, 1.1]T30RPV)D}2, should be {2*Equation 12}2.
3 (TR markup)
DSE Section 4.3.4.2 4-9 n/a Suggested Editorial Changes As shown in the following, add to the first sentence of the first paragraph of Section 4.3.4.2:
For high flux irradiations (e.g.
MTR irradiations used in an MTR campaign), a set of validation specimens 4 (TR markup)
DSE Section 4.6 4-22 n/a Suggested Editorial Changes The NRC staff noted that the Yes and No of the flowchart decision block at the bottom of page 4-22 of the TR markup are switched and thus needs correction.
5 (TR markup)
DSE Sections 4.3.4.2 and 4.6 4-22 n/a Suggested Editorial Changes The NRC staff noted that between the block that states Calculate T0highflux for other and the decision block that states Is the Adjusted T0highfluxVM T0 PWRVM, there needs to be one or two more blocks that state the use of weighting factors and selection of appropriate PWR irradiation data, consistent with the text in TR markup Section 4.3.4.2 (bottom region of TR markup page 4-9).