ML20196D382
ML20196D382 | |
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Issue date: | 11/05/1988 |
From: | Alexander Adams Office of Nuclear Reactor Regulation |
To: | Byszewski W INTERNATIONAL ATOMIC ENERGY AGENCY |
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November 5, 198S Dr. W. Byszewski Division of Nuclear Safety International Atomic Energy Agency Wagramerstrasse 5 P. O. Box 100 A-1400 Vienna Austria
Dear Dr. Byszewski:
SUBJECT:
DRAFT 5 0F "DESIGN FOR SAFETY OF RESEARCH REACTORS" I have reviewed draf t 5 of "Design for Safety of Research Reactors". Please find enclosed my comments for consideration at the follow-up Consultants Meeting. The majority of sqy coments are editorial in nature.
It was a pleasure to help with the development of this safety guide and to work with research reactor personnel from other countries. I would be glad to discuss my coments at your convenience.
Sincerely,
/s/
Alexander Adams, Jr., Project Manager Standardization and Non-Power Reactor Project Directorate Division of Reactor Projects - III, IV, Y and Special Projects Office of Nuclear Reactor Regulation Enclosur$:
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Dr. W. Byszewski Division of Nuclear Safety International Atomic Energy Agency Wagramerstrasse 5 P. O. Box 100 A-1400 Vienna Austria
Dear Dr. Syszewski:
SUBJECT:
DRAFT 5 0F "DESIGN FOR SAFETY OF RESEARCH REACTORS" I have reviewed draft 5 of "Design for Safety of Research Reactors". Please find enclosed my comments for consideration at the follow-up Consultants Meeting. The majority of ray comunents are editorial in nature.
It was a pleasure to help with the development of this safety guide and to work with research reactor personnel from other countries. I would be glad to (
discuss my coments at your convenience.
Sincerely, f h0 t
,Proj . Manager Alexander StandardizationAdams,andJr.,d N - wer Reactor Project Directorate Division of Reactor Projects - Ill, IV, Y and Special Projects (iffice of Huclear Reactor Regulation
Enclosure:
As stated
ENCLOSURE l 4 .
1 COMMENTS ON DRAFT 5 DESIGN FOR SAFETI 0F RESEARCH REACTORS
- 1. General Comment - Throughout the text many words that are spelled with the letter "z", eg., minimize, organization, are misspelled with an "s".
- 2. p 5, second paragraph - The word "application" is misspelled.
- 3. p 7, second paragraph - Wording should be added that makes it clear that Appendix A is not a complete list. The designer should not be given the impression that if he has considered Appendix A he has covered all possibilities.
- 4. p 6. first paragraph - Same comment for Appendix B as for Appendix A.
- 5. p 8, 3.5.d. line 5 - The word "plant" should be "plan".
- 6. 3.7 - The word "program" and "programme ' both appear in this section.
- 7. p 10, 3.7'- Change the last line to "...each system, structure and component ..."
- 8. p 12, 3.9.2, Change the second sentence to "Human factors is . . ."
- 9. p 13, 3.10, first paragraph, last sentence - It should be made clear what period of time is being referred to and how long it lasts.
- 10. p 15, 4.4.1 - Comma in the phase "chemical and," should be removed. Also, "fuel elament" should be "fuel elements".
- 11. p 16, 4.5.2 - Remove first comma.
- 12. p 19, 4.8.4 - The words "ventilation" and "operational" are misspelled.
- 13. p 19 and 20, 4.8.4, 4.8.5, 4.8.6, 4.8.7, and 4.8.8 - Consideration should be given to moving these sections to Section 4.3, Buildings and Structures. They seem out of place in their current location in the text.
- 14. p 20, 4.8.9 and 4.8.10 - Consideration should be given to moving these [
sections to Section 4.5, Reactor Coolant Systam. They seem out of place in their current location in the text.
- 15. p 21, 4.9.5 - The word "safety" should not be capitalized.
- 16. p 21, 4.9.5 - The word "arrangement" is misspalled.
- 17. p 23, 4.14.2 - This section reads more like a General Safety Principle.
Please consiJer moving it to that section of the guide.
- 18. p 27, definition for Channel - The word "combined" is misspelled. Also the "*" at the and of the definition should be removed.
- 19. Appendix B - The headings are not at the top of each page.
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