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{{#Wiki_filter:NRR-PMDAPEm Resource From:                         Sebrosky, Joseph Sent:                         Monday, April 14, 2014 10:18 AM To:                           NRR-PMDA-ECapture Resource; Burkhardt, Janet; George, Andrea
{{#Wiki_filter:1 NRR-PMDAPEm Resource From:
Sebrosky, Joseph Sent:
Monday, April 14, 2014 10:18 AM To:
NRR-PMDA-ECapture Resource; Burkhardt, Janet; George, Andrea


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As another example, a Draft Safety Evaluation (SE) might be provided to a licensee or applicant to obtain agreement that it contains no proprietary information, in accordance with Office Instruction LIC-204. Similarly, draft SEs or selected portions thereof may be provided to a licensee or applicant to obtain agreement that factual information is accurate and complete. If these exchanges result in the discovery of new information needed for decision making, then this additional information must be appropriately submitted and preserved.
As another example, a Draft Safety Evaluation (SE) might be provided to a licensee or applicant to obtain agreement that it contains no proprietary information, in accordance with Office Instruction LIC-204. Similarly, draft SEs or selected portions thereof may be provided to a licensee or applicant to obtain agreement that factual information is accurate and complete. If these exchanges result in the discovery of new information needed for decision making, then this additional information must be appropriately submitted and preserved.
The staff binned the comments received by NPPD into three different files found below (i.e., administrative, editorial, and technical. The staff indicated that in some cases it would make changes to the safety evaluation based on NPPDs comments. The changes will be reflected in the final version of the documents.
The staff binned the comments received by NPPD into three different files found below (i.e., administrative, editorial, and technical. The staff indicated that in some cases it would make changes to the safety evaluation based on NPPDs comments. The changes will be reflected in the final version of the documents.
Joe Sebrosky Project Manager Nuclear Regulatory Commission Division of Operating Reactor Licensing joseph.sebrosky@nrc.gov 301-415-1132
Joe Sebrosky Project Manager Nuclear Regulatory Commission Division of Operating Reactor Licensing joseph.sebrosky@nrc.gov 301-415-1132  
-----Original Appointment-----
-----Original Appointment-----
From: Sebrosky, Joseph Sent: Wednesday, April 09, 2014 2:37 PM To: 'Victor,, William R.- Strategic Initiatives' (wrvicto@nppd.com); Van Der Kamp, David (dwvande@nppd.com); George, Andrea; Barrett, Harold; Robinson, Jay; Wall, Scott Cc: 'Meyer, Steve'; 'Shudak, Thomas G.'; 'Barker, Troy S.'; 'Ouellette, Paul'
From: Sebrosky, Joseph Sent: Wednesday, April 09, 2014 2:37 PM To: 'Victor,, William R.- Strategic Initiatives' (wrvicto@nppd.com); Van Der Kamp, David (dwvande@nppd.com); George, Andrea; Barrett, Harold; Robinson, Jay; Wall, Scott Cc: 'Meyer, Steve'; 'Shudak, Thomas G.'; 'Barker, Troy S.'; 'Ouellette, Paul'  


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==Purpose:==
==Purpose:==
To discuss comments received from NPPD on Cooper NFPA 805 safety evaluation, and to determine if the proposed disposition involves additional interactions Outcome: Clear understanding of comment, disposition of comment, and path forward Agenda:
To discuss comments received from NPPD on Cooper NFPA 805 safety evaluation, and to determine if the proposed disposition involves additional interactions Outcome: Clear understanding of comment, disposition of comment, and path forward Agenda:  
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I.       Discussion of comment and proposed disposition Draft Cooper SE  Draft Cooper SE    Draft Cooper SE Administrative... Editorial Comm... Technical Comm...
2 I.
II.       Identification of areas for future interactions III.     Next steps IV.       wrapup 2
Discussion of comment and proposed disposition Draft Cooper SE Administrative...
Draft Cooper SE Editorial Comm...
Draft Cooper SE Technical Comm...
II.
Identification of areas for future interactions III.
Next steps IV.
wrapup  


Hearing Identifier:     NRR_PMDA Email Number:           1223 Mail Envelope Properties     (Joseph.Sebrosky@nrc.gov20140414101800)
Hearing Identifier:
NRR_PMDA Email Number:
1223 Mail Envelope Properties (Joseph.Sebrosky@nrc.gov20140414101800)  


==Subject:==
==Subject:==
RE: phone call with NPPD to discussion comments on Cooper NFPA 805 safety evaluation (ME8551)
RE: phone call with NPPD to discussion comments on Cooper NFPA 805 safety evaluation (ME8551)
Sent Date:             4/14/2014 10:18:29 AM Received Date:         4/14/2014 10:18:00 AM From:                   Sebrosky, Joseph Created By:             Joseph.Sebrosky@nrc.gov Recipients:
Sent Date:
4/14/2014 10:18:29 AM Received Date:
4/14/2014 10:18:00 AM From:
Sebrosky, Joseph Created By:
Joseph.Sebrosky@nrc.gov Recipients:  
"NRR-PMDA-ECapture Resource" <NRR-PMDA-ECapture.Resource@nrc.gov>
"NRR-PMDA-ECapture Resource" <NRR-PMDA-ECapture.Resource@nrc.gov>
Tracking Status: None "Burkhardt, Janet" <Janet.Burkhardt@nrc.gov>
Tracking Status: None "Burkhardt, Janet" <Janet.Burkhardt@nrc.gov>
Tracking Status: None "George, Andrea" <Andrea.George@nrc.gov>
Tracking Status: None "George, Andrea" <Andrea.George@nrc.gov>
Tracking Status: None Post Office:
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Files                           Size                     Date & Time MESSAGE                         2652                     4/14/2014 10:18:00 AM Draft Cooper SE Administrative Comments from Licensee NRC addressed.docx                 920569 Draft Cooper SE Editorial Comments from Licensee NRC Addressed.docx 1425673 Draft Cooper SE Technical Comments from Licensee NRC Addressed.docx                       467807 Options Priority:                       Standard Return Notification:           No Reply Requested:               No Sensitivity:                   Normal Expiration Date:
Files Size Date & Time MESSAGE 2652 4/14/2014 10:18:00 AM Draft Cooper SE Administrative Comments from Licensee NRC addressed.docx 920569 Draft Cooper SE Editorial Comments from Licensee NRC Addressed.docx 1425673 Draft Cooper SE Technical Comments from Licensee NRC Addressed.docx 467807 Options Priority:
Recipients Received:
Standard Return Notification:
No Reply Requested:
No Sensitivity:
Normal Expiration Date:
Recipients Received:  


Draft SE Comment Sheet Draft SE Administrative Comments The following comments on the draft NFPA 805 Safety Evaluations relate to non-material accuracy and completeness issues, and certain other areas of administrative importance.
1 Draft SE Comment Sheet Draft SE Administrative Comments The following comments on the draft NFPA 805 Safety Evaluations relate to non-material accuracy and completeness issues, and certain other areas of administrative importance.
Comment         Location                             Comment                           Suggested Disposition         NRC Response Number 1           Enclosure 1-      The August 23, 2014, letter is characterized as a   Recommend deletion of the Page 1/1.A.        supplement to the LAR. In fact, this letter         8/23/2014 letter from provided acknowledgement of the terms and           paragraph 1.A.
Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 1 -
conditions of the CNS NFPA 805 portal. The letter, of itself, contained no supplemental information relevant to the NRC review of the application.
Page 1/1.A.
2           Enclosure 1-      NPPD projects to be submitting a final letter on     Recommend inclusion of the Page 1/1.A.        4/11/2014 containing a requested change to the       4/11/2014 letter in Paragraph License Condition and providing clean/ retyped      1.A if the 4/11/2014 submittal pages of the license.                                date is acceptable.
The {{letter dated|date=August 23, 2014|text=August 23, 2014, letter}} is characterized as a supplement to the LAR. In fact, this letter provided acknowledgement of the terms and conditions of the CNS NFPA 805 portal. The letter, of itself, contained no supplemental information relevant to the NRC review of the application.
3           Enclosure 1-       The 8/23/14 letter is characterized as a             Recommend deletion of the Page 2/2.(4)      supplement to the LAR. In fact, this letter         8/23/2014 letter from provided acknowledgement of the terms and           paragraph 2.(4).
Recommend deletion of the 8/23/2014 letter from paragraph 1.A.
conditions of the CNS NFPA 805 portal. The letter, of itself, contained no supplemental information relevant to the NRC review of the application.
2 -
4           Enclosure 1-       NPPD projects to be submitting a final letter on     Recommend inclusion of the Page 2/2.(4)      4/11/2014 containing a requested change to the       4/11/2014 letter in Paragraph License Condition and providing clean/ retyped      2.(4) if the 4/11/2014 pages of the license.                                submittal date is acceptable.
Page 1/1.A.
5           Enclosure 1-       The instruction say to insert pages 3 through 8. Revise instructions to insert Page 3            Attachment 2 of the LAR projects that the License   pages 3 through 7.
NPPD projects to be submitting a final letter on 4/11/2014 containing a requested change to the License Condition and providing clean/ retyped pages of the license.
will only extend to Page 7.
Recommend inclusion of the 4/11/2014 letter in Paragraph 1.A if the 4/11/2014 submittal date is acceptable.
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3 -
Page 2/2.(4)
The 8/23/14 letter is characterized as a supplement to the LAR. In fact, this letter provided acknowledgement of the terms and conditions of the CNS NFPA 805 portal. The letter, of itself, contained no supplemental information relevant to the NRC review of the application.
Recommend deletion of the 8/23/2014 letter from paragraph 2.(4).
4 -
Page 2/2.(4)
NPPD projects to be submitting a final letter on 4/11/2014 containing a requested change to the License Condition and providing clean/ retyped pages of the license.
Recommend inclusion of the 4/11/2014 letter in Paragraph 2.(4) if the 4/11/2014 submittal date is acceptable.
5 -
Page 3 The instruction say to insert pages 3 through 8. of the LAR projects that the License will only extend to Page 7.
Revise instructions to insert pages 3 through 7.


Comment     Location                           Comment                         Suggested Disposition         NRC Response Number 6       TOC-Page         Section is entitled Updated Final Safety Analysis Revise section title to      Revised per comment.
2 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 6
i/2.4.4          Report. The CNS document is actually entitled     Updated Safety Analysis Updated Safety Analysis Report.                 Report.
TOC-Page i/2.4.4 Section is entitled Updated Final Safety Analysis Report. The CNS document is actually entitled Updated Safety Analysis Report.
7       TOC-Page ii     TOC is missing section 3.1.1.6.                   Incorporate section 3.1.1.6, Revised per comment.
Revise section title to Updated Safety Analysis Report.
Compliance Strategy -
Revised per comment.
7 TOC-Page ii TOC is missing section 3.1.1.6.
Incorporate section 3.1.1.6, Compliance Strategy -
Complies With Required Action, Page 37, into TOC.
Complies With Required Action, Page 37, into TOC.
8       TOC Page iii and Section 3.4.2.3.2 identifies Callaway           Change to Cooper           Revised per comment.
Revised per comment.
SE Page 88 9       TOC Page vi     Attachment A and B tables are mis-numbered.       Change "Table 3.8.3.2-1" to   Revised per comment.
8 TOC Page iii and SE Page 88 Section 3.4.2.3.2 identifies Callaway Change to Cooper Revised per comment.
                                                                            "Table 3.8-1," and "Table 3.8.3.2-2" to "Table 3.8-2."
9 TOC Page vi Attachment A and B tables are mis-numbered.
10     SE Page 3/1.2-   The August 23, 2014 letter is characterized as a   Recommend deletion of the 1st paragraph    supplement to the LAR. In fact, this letter       8/23/2014 letter from the provided acknowledgement of the terms and         requested licensing action.
Change "Table 3.8.3.2-1" to "Table 3.8-1," and "Table 3.8.3.2-2" to "Table 3.8-2."
conditions of the CNS NFPA 805 portal. The letter, of itself, contained no supplemental information relevant to the NRC review of the application.
Revised per comment.
11     SE Page 3/1.2-   NPPD projects to be submitting a final letter on   Recommend inclusion of the 1st paragraph    4/11/2014 containing a requested change to the     4/11/2014 letter in first License Condition and providing clean/ retyped    paragraph if the 4/11/2014 pages of the license.                              submittal date is acceptable.
10 SE Page 3/1.2-1st paragraph The {{letter dated|date=August 23, 2014|text=August 23, 2014 letter}} is characterized as a supplement to the LAR. In fact, this letter provided acknowledgement of the terms and conditions of the CNS NFPA 805 portal. The letter, of itself, contained no supplemental information relevant to the NRC review of the application.
12     SE Page 3/1.2-   The 2/18/2014 letter was made in response to an   Recommend the 2/6/2014 1st paragraph    NRC 2/6/2014 letter that documented the onsite     letter be added to the second audit conducted 1/24/2014-1/25/2014. That         sentence of NRC letters that letter is not referenced in the second sentence. prompted RAI responses, and creation of a Reference for this letter.
Recommend deletion of the 8/23/2014 letter from the requested licensing action.
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11 SE Page 3/1.2-1st paragraph NPPD projects to be submitting a final letter on 4/11/2014 containing a requested change to the License Condition and providing clean/ retyped pages of the license.
Recommend inclusion of the 4/11/2014 letter in first paragraph if the 4/11/2014 submittal date is acceptable.
12 SE Page 3/1.2-1st paragraph The 2/18/2014 letter was made in response to an NRC 2/6/2014 letter that documented the onsite audit conducted 1/24/2014-1/25/2014. That letter is not referenced in the second sentence.
Recommend the 2/6/2014 letter be added to the second sentence of NRC letters that prompted RAI responses, and creation of a Reference for this letter.  


Comment     Location                         Comment                           Suggested Disposition         NRC Response Number 13     SE Page 3/1.2-   The 7/12/2012 letter was made in response to an   Recommend the67/21/2012 1st paragraph    e-mail from Lynnea Wilkins to Ed McCutchen on     e-mail be added to the second 6/21/2012. This e-mail is not reflected in the     sentence of NRC letters that second sentence or in the References. Note - the   prompted RAI responses, and second sentence that addresses the prompts for    creation of a Reference for the other responses include e-mails.               this communication.
3 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 13 SE Page 3/1.2-1st paragraph The 7/12/2012 letter was made in response to an e-mail from Lynnea Wilkins to Ed McCutchen on 6/21/2012. This e-mail is not reflected in the second sentence or in the References. Note - the second sentence that addresses the prompts for the other responses include e-mails.
14     SE Page 4/1st   First sentence of paragraph states Updated Final Revise sentence to read      Revised per comment.
Recommend the67/21/2012 e-mail be added to the second sentence of NRC letters that prompted RAI responses, and creation of a Reference for this communication.
paragraph        Safety Analysis Report (UFSAR). The CNS           Updated Safety Analysis document is actually entitled Updated Safety     Report (USAR).
14 SE Page 4/1st paragraph First sentence of paragraph states Updated Final Safety Analysis Report (UFSAR). The CNS document is actually entitled Updated Safety Analysis Report.
Analysis Report.
Revise sentence to read Updated Safety Analysis Report (USAR).
15     SE Page 15       SE Section 3.2.7 should be added to FAQ 07-0038. Make correction.             Revised per comment.
Revised per comment.
16     SE Page 20/2nd   Section 2.4.4 Heading and body of section use     Replace Updated Fire Safety  Revised per comment.
15 SE Page 15 SE Section 3.2.7 should be added to FAQ 07-0038.
paragraph        Updated Final Safety Analysis Report (UFSAR).     Analysis Report (UFSAR) with CNS has an Updated Safety Analysis Report         Updates Safety Analysis (USAR) and not an UFSAR                           Report (USAR) 17     SE Page 23/5th   Last sentence of paragraph states See LAR         Revise to read See LAR      Revised per comment.
Make correction.
paragraph        Attachment S for implementation items.           Attachment S, as Attachment S has been updated in later RAI         supplemented, for responses and supplements since LAR.               implementation items.
Revised per comment.
16 SE Page 20/2nd paragraph Section 2.4.4 Heading and body of section use Updated Final Safety Analysis Report (UFSAR).
CNS has an Updated Safety Analysis Report (USAR) and not an UFSAR Replace Updated Fire Safety Analysis Report (UFSAR) with Updates Safety Analysis Report (USAR)
Revised per comment.
17 SE Page 23/5th paragraph Last sentence of paragraph states See LAR Attachment S for implementation items.
Attachment S has been updated in later RAI responses and supplements since LAR.
Revise to read See LAR Attachment S, as supplemented, for implementation items.
Alternative, refer to the 2/18/2014 letter that provided the updated S-3 table.
Alternative, refer to the 2/18/2014 letter that provided the updated S-3 table.
18     SE Page         The section title is "Modifications," but the     Recommend changing title to  Revised per comment.
Revised per comment.
27/Section 2.7.1 subject matter includes both modifications and     "Modifications and implementation items.                              Implementation Items."
18 SE Page 27/Section 2.7.1 The section title is "Modifications," but the subject matter includes both modifications and implementation items.
19     SE Page 31/Item Item 6 has a cross-reference to Section 2.9 of the Revise to cross-reference    Revised per comment.
Recommend changing title to "Modifications and Implementation Items."
6                SE for implementation items. There is no Section  Section 2.8.
Revised per comment.
2.9 of the SE.
19 SE Page 31/Item 6
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Item 6 has a cross-reference to Section 2.9 of the SE for implementation items. There is no Section 2.9 of the SE.
Revise to cross-reference Section 2.8.
Revised per comment.


Comment     Location                           Comment                           Suggested Disposition           NRC Response Number 20     SE Page           The last two sentences refer to the analysis and   Delete last two sentences    Revised per comment.
4 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 20 SE Page 33/Section 3.1.1.4, 1st paragraph The last two sentences refer to the analysis and rescission of exemptions under the Section Compliance Strategy - Complies with Previous NRC Approval. However, none of these NFPA 805 elements on the B-1 table relied on the NRC exemptions to achieve NRC Approval. Rescission of exemptions is discussed in Section 2.5.
33/Section        rescission of exemptions under the Section         regarding the performance of 3.1.1.4, 1st      Compliance Strategy - Complies with Previous       RI/PB analysis on exemptions, paragraph        NRC Approval. However, none of these NFPA 805       and the request that they be elements on the B-1 table relied on the NRC         rescinded.
Delete last two sentences regarding the performance of RI/PB analysis on exemptions, and the request that they be rescinded.
exemptions to achieve NRC Approval. Rescission of exemptions is discussed in Section 2.5.
Revised per comment.
21     SE Page           First sentence makes a cross-reference to SE       Correct cross-reference.      Revised to include SE 40/Section        Section 3.1.1.6. Should be made to Section                                       Sections 3.1.1.5 and 3.1.1.6 3.1.4.1, 1st      3.1.1.5.                                                                          as both are applicable.
21 SE Page 40/Section 3.1.4.1, 1st paragraph First sentence makes a cross-reference to SE Section 3.1.1.6. Should be made to Section 3.1.1.5.
paragraph 22     SE Page 51 / last The corresponding NFPA 805, Section 3.3.5.2 is   Correct NFPA 805 section. Revised per comment.
Correct cross-reference.
paragraph        identified but should be Section 3.6.1 23     SE Page 65 / last Correct Fire Area RBCF to RB-CF                 Correct typo.                 Revised per comment.
Revised to include SE Sections 3.1.1.5 and 3.1.1.6 as both are applicable.
paragraph 24     SE Page 68/last   First sentence characterizes S-2.4 as an           Revise sentence to read      Revised per comment.
22 SE Page 51 / last paragraph The corresponding NFPA 805, Section 3.3.5.2 is identified but should be Section 3.6.1 Correct NFPA 805 section.
paragraph        implementation item. Table S-2 items are           "modification S-2.4."
Revised per comment.
modifications.
23 SE Page 65 / last paragraph Correct Fire Area RBCF to RB-CF Correct typo.
25     SE Page 81/top   The first full sentence on page 81 states The     Revise wording in this        Revised per comment.
Revised per comment.
paragraph - first licensee clarified that the fire-affected equipment sentence from PRA RAI 14 full sentence in  list for several transients related to PRA RAI 13   to PRA RAI 15 this paragraph    and PRA RAI 14 were inappropriate and were revised; This is an incorrect reference to PRA RAI 14. It should be PRA RAI 15 26     SE Page 83/1st   Second sentence reads "The licensee determined     Make corrections.            Revised per comment.
24 SE Page 68/last paragraph First sentence characterizes S-2.4 as an implementation item. Table S-2 items are modifications.
full paragraph    via walkdowns that that sensitive equipment were located..." Should read "The licensee determined via walkdowns that sensitive equipment is located..."
Revise sentence to read "modification S-2.4."
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Revised per comment.
25 SE Page 81/top paragraph - first full sentence in this paragraph The first full sentence on page 81 states The licensee clarified that the fire-affected equipment list for several transients related to PRA RAI 13 and PRA RAI 14 were inappropriate and were revised; This is an incorrect reference to PRA RAI 14. It should be PRA RAI 15 Revise wording in this sentence from PRA RAI 14 to PRA RAI 15 Revised per comment.
26 SE Page 83/1st full paragraph Second sentence reads "The licensee determined via walkdowns that that sensitive equipment were located..." Should read "The licensee determined via walkdowns that sensitive equipment is located..."
Make corrections.
Revised per comment.


Comment     Location                         Comment                             Suggested Disposition           NRC Response Number 27     SE Page 88 / 2nd Change fire zone RB-3C to 3C as RB is the       Fix in both paragraphs on     Revised per comment.
5 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 27 SE Page 88 / 2nd and 5th paragraphs of bullet Change fire zone RB-3C to 3C as RB is the compartment ID.
and 5th          compartment ID.                                    page.
Fix in both paragraphs on page.
paragraphs of bullet 28     SE Page 88 / 4th Move end parenthesis after foam insulation to       Make correction                Revised per comment.
Revised per comment.
paragraph of    end of sentence as both fire zones are part of i.e.
28 SE Page 88 / 4th paragraph of bullet Move end parenthesis after foam insulation to end of sentence as both fire zones are part of i.e.
bullet 29     SE Page 89 / 2nd Change fire areas to Fire Zones 13A and 20B     Make correction                Revised per comment.
Make correction Revised per comment.
bullet on page  and change fire area 13A to Fire Zone 13A Last sentence change end to add and therefore, the revised analysis is acceptable.
29 SE Page 89 / 2nd bullet on page Change fire areas to Fire Zones 13A and 20B and change fire area 13A to Fire Zone 13A Last sentence change end to add and therefore, the revised analysis is acceptable.
30     SE page 99       Footnote (1) of Table 3.4.6-2 states:               The footnote should be        Revised per comment.
Make correction Revised per comment.
corrected to state and PRA (1) LAR dated April 24, 2012, as               RAI 16e response in letter supplemented by letter dated July 12,       dated February 12, 2013 2012 (References 6 and 7, respectively),   (Reference 10) and RAI response letter dated February 18, 2014 (Reference 15)
30 SE page 99 Footnote (1) of Table 3.4.6-2 states:
(1) LAR dated April 24, 2012, as supplemented by {{letter dated|date=July 12, 2012|text=letter dated July 12, 2012}} (References 6 and 7, respectively),
and RAI response {{letter dated|date=February 18, 2014|text=letter dated February 18, 2014}} (Reference 15)
Footnote (1) references RAI response letter 2/18/14. Fire Area RB-FN results were revised in PRA RAI 16e in letter dated 2/12/13 not in the response dated 2/18/14. The NRC appears to have referenced the wrong RAI response letter here.
Footnote (1) references RAI response letter 2/18/14. Fire Area RB-FN results were revised in PRA RAI 16e in letter dated 2/12/13 not in the response dated 2/18/14. The NRC appears to have referenced the wrong RAI response letter here.
31     SE Page 110 /   The fourth bullet, Fire area boundaries         Revise to read The licensees Revised per comment.
The footnote should be corrected to state and PRA RAI 16e response in {{letter dated|date=February 12, 2013|text=letter dated February 12, 2013}} (Reference 10)
4th bullet      appears to be incomplete.                          analysis appropriately identified fire area boundaries...
Revised per comment.
31     SE Page 121/     Correct sections from 2.71 and 2.72 to 2.7.1     Make correction               Revised to 2.7 and 2.8 Section 3.6.8    and 2.7.2 5
31 SE Page 110 /
4th bullet The fourth bullet, Fire area boundaries appears to be incomplete.
Revise to read The licensees analysis appropriately identified fire area boundaries...
Revised per comment.
31 SE Page 121/
Section 3.6.8 Correct sections from 2.71 and 2.72 to 2.7.1 and 2.7.2 Make correction Revised to 2.7 and 2.8  


Comment     Location                           Comment                   Suggested Disposition           NRC Response Number 32     SE Page 131/ 2nd Change contractors System Failure Analysis Make correction                Revised per comment.
6 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 32 SE Page 131/ 2nd paragraph under 1st bullet Change contractors System Failure Analysis Software (SAFE) to contractors System Assurance and Fire Protection Engineering software (SAFE)
paragraph        Software (SAFE) to contractors System under 1st bullet Assurance and Fire Protection Engineering software (SAFE) 33     SE Page 137/1st The 8/23/14 letter is characterized as a     Recommend deletion of the paragraph        supplement to the LAR. In fact, this letter   8/23/2014 letter from the list provided acknowledgement of the terms and     of LAR supplements.
Make correction Revised per comment.
conditions of the CNS NFPA 805 portal. The letter, of itself, contained no supplemental information relevant to the NRC review of the application.
33 SE Page 137/1st paragraph The 8/23/14 letter is characterized as a supplement to the LAR. In fact, this letter provided acknowledgement of the terms and conditions of the CNS NFPA 805 portal. The letter, of itself, contained no supplemental information relevant to the NRC review of the application.
34     SE Page 137, Pg. Replace highlighted text when SE report is   Remove highlighted text.
Recommend deletion of the 8/23/2014 letter from the list of LAR supplements.
139, Pg. 138    complete and date is available.
34 SE Page 137, Pg.
(Ref. #73) 35     SE Attachment   Change ASD Aspirating smoke detector" to     Make correction               Revised per comment.
139, Pg. 138 (Ref. #73)
C (pg. C1)       "ASD - alternate shutdown.
Replace highlighted text when SE report is complete and date is available.
36      SE Attachment    Change UFSAR to USAR Updated Safety                                       Revised per comment.
Remove highlighted text.
C (pg. C3)      Analysis Report 6
35 SE Attachment C (pg. C1)
Change ASD Aspirating smoke detector" to "ASD - alternate shutdown.
Make correction Revised per comment.
36 SE Attachment C (pg. C3)
Change UFSAR to USAR Updated Safety Analysis Report Revised per comment.  


Draft SE Editorial Comments The following comments on the draft Safety Evaluation relates to editorial/grammatical enhancements.
1 Draft SE Editorial Comments The following comments on the draft Safety Evaluation relates to editorial/grammatical enhancements.
Comment         Location                         Comment                             Suggested Disposition               NRC Response Number 1           TOC Page         Section title Defense in Depth should read       Include hyphens in section title. Revised per comment.
Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 1
iv/3.5.1.7 and  Defense-In-Depth.
TOC Page iv/3.5.1.7 and SE Page 108 Section title Defense in Depth should read Defense-In-Depth.
SE Page 108 2           SE Page 6/2nd   Should have a colon instead or period after in   Make correction.                  Revised per comment.
Include hyphens in section title.
paragraph        accordance with 10 CFR 50.48(c)(4).
Revised per comment.
3           SE Page 6/3rd   First sentence states require licensees to       Revise typo.                      Revised per comment.
2 SE Page 6/2nd paragraph Should have a colon instead or period after in accordance with 10 CFR 50.48(c)(4).
paragraph        submit an LAR for NRC review The word an should be a.
Make correction.
4           SE Page 20/2nd   Section 2.4.4 - Second sentence refers to         Correct S-3 Table                Revised per comment.
Revised per comment.
paragraph        "Table S-3, Item S3.26." The correct designator   implementation item is "S-3.26."                                       designator to "S-3.26."
3 SE Page 6/3rd paragraph First sentence states require licensees to submit an LAR for NRC review The word an should be a.
5           SE Page 36 /     Last word dated should be removed from the       Remove extra word dated         Revised per comment.
Revise typo.
3.6.1 discussion 3.6.1 discussion bullet bullet 6          SE Page 36 /    Change license requested approval to             Correct to licensee.             Revised per comment.
Revised per comment.
3.10.7           licensee requested approval discussion bullet 7          SE Page 42 /     Change E-136 to E136.                         Fix ASTM test ID.                 Revised per comment.
4 SE Page 20/2nd paragraph Section 2.4.4 - Second sentence refers to "Table S-3, Item S3.26." The correct designator is "S-3.26."
Section 3.1.4.3 and Reference 64 8           SE Page         Correct line Control Building - Computer Room     Correct fire zone number.         Revised per comment.
Correct S-3 Table implementation item designator to "S-3.26."
45/after 1st    (Fire Zone 10A) paragraph 9           SE Page 50 / 3rd Middle of paragraph - additional 50 feet of       Remove the before NFPA 14.      Revised per comment.
Revised per comment.
paragraph        hose to the standard 100 feet of hose required by the NFPA 14 was 1
5 SE Page 36 /
3.6.1 discussion bullet Last word dated should be removed from the 3.6.1 discussion bullet Remove extra word dated Revised per comment.
6 SE Page 36 /
3.10.7 discussion bullet Change license requested approval to licensee requested approval Correct to licensee.
Revised per comment.
7 SE Page 42 /
Section 3.1.4.3 and Reference 64 Change E-136 to E136.
Fix ASTM test ID.
Revised per comment.
8 SE Page 45/after 1st paragraph Correct line Control Building - Computer Room (Fire Zone 10A)
Correct fire zone number.
Revised per comment.
9 SE Page 50 / 3rd paragraph Middle of paragraph - additional 50 feet of hose to the standard 100 feet of hose required by the NFPA 14 was Remove the before NFPA 14.
Revised per comment.


Comment     Location                         Comment                           Suggested Disposition           NRC Response Number 10     SE Page 58 / 3rd Correct hyphens in LAR Attachment B Table B-2     Fix title                     Revised per comment.
2 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 10 SE Page 58 / 3rd Paragraph Correct hyphens in LAR Attachment B Table B-2 title in 3rd paragraph Fix title Revised per comment.
Paragraph        title in 3rd paragraph 11     SE Page 58 /     Capitalize Aligns with Intent in bullet (2) and Capitalize categories to match No change. Could not Bullets (2) and  capitalize Not in Alignment, but No Adverse     B-2 Table                     identify issue.
11 SE Page 58 /
(5)              Consequences in bullet (5) 12     SE Page 59 / 1st Second Sentence In SSD RAI 01 November 14,       Add dated                    Revised per comment.
Bullets (2) and (5)
Paragraph        2012 needs to be revised to In SSD RAI 01 dated November 14, 2012 13     SE Page 59 / 1st Second Sentence Section 3.2.1.2 for post-fire   Delete a.                    Revised per comment.
Capitalize Aligns with Intent in bullet (2) and capitalize Not in Alignment, but No Adverse Consequences in bullet (5)
Paragraph        operation of a manual rising-stem valves that have Delete a before manual rising-stem valves 14     SE page. 63 /     Last Sentence of 2nd full paragraph The expert   Correct typo.                  Revised per comment.
Capitalize categories to match B-2 Table No change. Could not identify issue.
2nd Paragraph    panelwith experience in electrical engineering; PRA, SSA Replace semicolon (;)
12 SE Page 59 / 1st Paragraph Second Sentence In SSD RAI 01 November 14, 2012 needs to be revised to In SSD RAI 01 dated November 14, 2012 Add dated Revised per comment.
13 SE Page 59 / 1st Paragraph Second Sentence Section 3.2.1.2 for post-fire operation of a manual rising-stem valves that have Delete a before manual rising-stem valves Delete a.
Revised per comment.
14 SE page. 63 /
2nd Paragraph Last Sentence of 2nd full paragraph The expert panelwith experience in electrical engineering; PRA, SSA Replace semicolon (;)
with comma (,)
with comma (,)
15     SE Page 65 / 1st equipment-from should remove hyphen (-)         Correct typo.                 Revised per comment.
Correct typo.
full paragraph 16     SE Page. 70 / 1st Last sentence of first paragraph, change NRC     Correct typo.                 Revised per comment.
Revised per comment.
Paragraph        endorsed to NRC-endorsed 17     SE Page 74 / 1st Remove hyphen (-) in PRA RAI-12 to PRA RAI     Correct typo.                 Revised per comment.
15 SE Page 65 / 1st full paragraph equipment-from should remove hyphen (-)
full paragraph    12 18     SE Page 75 / 1st Correct implementation item 3.24 to S-3.24   Correct typo.                 Revised per comment.
Correct typo.
full paragraph 19     SE Page 76/ 2nd   Remove hyphen (-) in NFPA-805 to NFPA         Correct typo.                 Revised per comment.
Revised per comment.
full paragraph    805 20     SE Page. 78 / 1st 3rd to last sentence - the human failure       Correct typo.                  Revised per comment.
16 SE Page. 70 / 1st Paragraph Last sentence of first paragraph, change NRC endorsed to NRC-endorsed Correct typo.
full paragraph    events created for the FPRA was less that the 1E-6 floor Replace that with than 21     SE Page 78 / 2nd Correct Item S3 correct to match S-3 table   Correct S-3 Table              Revised per comment.
Revised per comment.
full paragraph    ID of S-3.19.                                    implementation item ID to S-3.19 2
17 SE Page 74 / 1st full paragraph Remove hyphen (-) in PRA RAI-12 to PRA RAI 12 Correct typo.
Revised per comment.
18 SE Page 75 / 1st full paragraph Correct implementation item 3.24 to S-3.24 Correct typo.
Revised per comment.
19 SE Page 76/ 2nd full paragraph Remove hyphen (-) in NFPA-805 to NFPA 805 Correct typo.
Revised per comment.
20 SE Page. 78 / 1st full paragraph 3rd to last sentence - the human failure events created for the FPRA was less that the 1E-6 floor Replace that with than Correct typo.
Revised per comment.
21 SE Page 78 / 2nd full paragraph Correct Item S3 correct to match S-3 table ID of S-3.19.
Correct S-3 Table implementation item ID to S-3.19 Revised per comment.


Comment     Location                       Comment                         Suggested Disposition       NRC Response Number 22     SE Page 78 / 3rd RAI 18 should be identified as PRA RAI 18   Make correction.         Revised per comment.
3 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 22 SE Page 78 / 3rd full paragraph RAI 18 should be identified as PRA RAI 18 Make correction.
full paragraph 23     SE Page 79 / 1st RAI 40 should be identified as PRA RAI 40   Make corrections          Revised per comment.
Revised per comment.
partial          throughout.
23 SE Page 79 / 1st partial paragraph RAI 40 should be identified as PRA RAI 40 throughout.
paragraph Correct PRA RAI-02.f-01 to PRA RAI 02.f.01 Correct Item S3 correct to match S-3 table ID of S-3.19.
Correct PRA RAI-02.f-01 to PRA RAI 02.f.01 Correct Item S3 correct to match S-3 table ID of S-3.19.
24     SE Page 80 / 1st RAI 40 should be identified as PRA RAI 40   Make corrections          Revised per comment.
Make corrections Revised per comment.
paragraph        throughout.
24 SE Page 80 / 1st paragraph RAI 40 should be identified as PRA RAI 40 throughout.
RAI 14 should be identified as PRA RAI 14.
RAI 14 should be identified as PRA RAI 14.
RAI 14.01 should be identified as PRA RAI 14.01.
RAI 14.01 should be identified as PRA RAI 14.01.
Correct Item S3 correct to match S-3 table ID of S-3.19.
Correct Item S3 correct to match S-3 table ID of S-3.19.
25     SE Page 80 / 2nd Remove hyphen (-) in post-NFPA-805 to read   Make correction           Revised per comment.
Make corrections Revised per comment.
Paragraph        post-NFPA 805 26     SE Page 80 / 2nd RAI 36 should be identified as PRA RAI 36. Make correction           Revised per comment.
25 SE Page 80 / 2nd Paragraph Remove hyphen (-) in post-NFPA-805 to read post-NFPA 805 Make correction Revised per comment.
Paragraph 27     SE Page 81 / 1st Correct Item S3 correct to match S-3 table Make corrections          Revised per comment.
26 SE Page 80 / 2nd Paragraph RAI 36 should be identified as PRA RAI 36.
partial          ID of S-3.19.
Make correction Revised per comment.
paragraph RAI 40 should be identified as PRA RAI 40 RAI-36, RAI-11, and RAI-16e should be PRA RAI 36, PRA RAI 11, and PRA RAI 16.e 3
27 SE Page 81 / 1st partial paragraph Correct Item S3 correct to match S-3 table ID of S-3.19.
RAI 40 should be identified as PRA RAI 40 RAI-36, RAI-11, and RAI-16e should be PRA RAI 36, PRA RAI 11, and PRA RAI 16.e Make corrections Revised per comment.


Comment     Location                       Comment                     Suggested Disposition       NRC Response Number 28     SE Page 81 / 1st Add the before Auxiliary Relay Room in 1st                         Revised per comment.
4 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 28 SE Page 81 / 1st full paragraph Add the before Auxiliary Relay Room in 1st sentence for modeling transient fires with Auxiliary Relay Room Remove hyphens (-) from RAI title PRA RAI-04 to PRA RAI 04 Correct RAI 4.1 or PRA RAI 04-01 to read PRA RAI 04.01 throughout Correct RAI-04-02 to PRA RAI 04.02 RAI 40 should be identified as PRA RAI 40 Correct Item S3 correct to match S-3 table ID of S-3.19.
full paragraph  sentence for modeling transient fires with Auxiliary Relay Room Remove hyphens (-) from RAI title PRA RAI-04 to PRA RAI 04 Correct RAI 4.1 or PRA RAI 04-01 to read PRA RAI 04.01 throughout Correct RAI-04-02 to PRA RAI 04.02 RAI 40 should be identified as PRA RAI 40 Correct Item S3 correct to match S-3 table ID of S-3.19.
Revised per comment.
29     SE Page 82 / 1st RAI 40 should be identified as PRA RAI 40                         Revised per comment.
29 SE Page 82 / 1st partial paragraph RAI 40 should be identified as PRA RAI 40 Correct Item S3 correct to match S-3 table ID of S-3.19.
partial paragraph        Correct Item S3 correct to match S-3 table ID of S-3.19.
Revised per comment.
30     SE page 82 / 1st RAI 40 should be identified as PRA RAI 40                         Revised per comment.
30 SE page 82 / 1st full paragraph RAI 40 should be identified as PRA RAI 40 Correct Item S3 correct to match S-3 table ID of S-3.19.
full paragraph Correct Item S3 correct to match S-3 table ID of S-3.19.
Revised per comment.
31     SE Page 82 / 2nd Correct PRA RAI-05 to PRA RAI 05                                 Revised per comment.
31 SE Page 82 / 2nd full paragraph Correct PRA RAI-05 to PRA RAI 05 Revised per comment.
full paragraph 32     SE Page 82/ last RAI 40 should be identified as PRA RAI 40                         Revised per comment.
32 SE Page 82/ last paragraph RAI 40 should be identified as PRA RAI 40 Correct Item S3 correct to match S-3 table ID of S-3.19.
paragraph Correct Item S3 correct to match S-3 table ID of S-3.19.
Revised per comment.
4


Comment     Location                         Comment                       Suggested Disposition       NRC Response Number 33     SE Page 83 / 1st Remove for from sentence For the critical   Make correction          Revised per comment.
5 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 33 SE Page 83 / 1st partial paragraph Remove for from sentence For the critical switchgear rooms, the response notes that fire barriers exist for with a rating of 1.5 hours.
partial          switchgear rooms, the response notes that fire paragraph        barriers exist for with a rating of 1.5 hours.
Make correction Revised per comment.
34     SE Page 83 / 1st Lowercase Fire Zones in 1st sentence.        Make corrections        Revised per comment.
34 SE Page 83 / 1st full paragraph Lowercase Fire Zones in 1st sentence.
full paragraph Add full title of NUREG/CR to NUREG/CR-6850 Correct PRA RAI-02f-01 to PRA RAI 02.f.01 Item 2) revise from abandonment conditions are reached to abandonment conditions being reached 35     SE Page 83 /     3rd sentence revise to The licensee also       Make corrections.        Revised per comment.
Add full title of NUREG/CR to NUREG/CR-6850 Correct PRA RAI-02f-01 to PRA RAI 02.f.01 Item 2) revise from abandonment conditions are reached to abandonment conditions being reached Make corrections Revised per comment.
last paragraph  discussed the COP timing analysis as it related to HRA of containment isolation and all components associated with containment isolation pathways were selected and subsequently cable traced.
35 SE Page 83 /
36     SE Page 84 / 2nd RAI 40 should be identified as PRA RAI 40   Make corrections        Revised per comment.
last paragraph 3rd sentence revise to The licensee also discussed the COP timing analysis as it related to HRA of containment isolation and all components associated with containment isolation pathways were selected and subsequently cable traced.
paragraph Correct Item S3 correct to match S-3 table ID of S-3.19.
Make corrections.
37     SE Page 86 / 1st Change FDTS to FDTs                         Make corrections        Revised per comment.
Revised per comment.
paragraph Validation and Verification should be reversed to Verification and Validation 38     SE Page 86 / 2nd Add comma (,) in reference - Sprinkler         Make correction          Revised per comment.
36 SE Page 84 / 2nd paragraph RAI 40 should be identified as PRA RAI 40 Correct Item S3 correct to match S-3 table ID of S-3.19.
group of bullets Activation Correlation (Reference 32, Chapter 10) 5
Make corrections Revised per comment.
37 SE Page 86 / 1st paragraph Change FDTS to FDTs Validation and Verification should be reversed to Verification and Validation Make corrections Revised per comment.
38 SE Page 86 / 2nd group of bullets Add comma (,) in reference - Sprinkler Activation Correlation (Reference 32, Chapter
: 10)
Make correction Revised per comment.


Comment     Location                       Comment                         Suggested Disposition       NRC Response Number 39     SE Page 87 /     Change HGL Study to HGL study               Make correction         Revised per comment.
6 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 39 SE Page 87 /
last bullet under CFAST 40     SE Page 88 / 4th Move end parenthesis after foam insulation to   Make correction          Revised per comment.
last bullet under CFAST Change HGL Study to HGL study Make correction Revised per comment.
paragraph of    end of sentence as both fire zones are part of bullet          i.e.
40 SE Page 88 / 4th paragraph of bullet Move end parenthesis after foam insulation to end of sentence as both fire zones are part of i.e.
41      SE Page 93 /    1st paragraph - Change NFPA-805 to NFPA      Make correction         Revised per comment.
Make correction Revised per comment.
Section 3.4.2.4 805 2nd paragraph - Correct Item S3 correct to match S-3 table ID of S-3.19.
41 SE Page 93 /
42                      The second sentence has a typo: ... acceptable  Make corrections        Revised per comment.
Section 3.4.2.4 1st paragraph - Change NFPA-805 to NFPA 805 2nd paragraph - Correct Item S3 correct to match S-3 table ID of S-3.19.
SE Section 3.4.3 alternative to comply...
Make correction Revised per comment.
Page 93/1st Should be ... acceptable alternatives to Paragraph comply...
42 SE Section 3.4.3 Page 93/1st Paragraph The second sentence has a typo:... acceptable alternative to comply...
43                       The second sentence has a typo: None of the                             Revised per comment.
Should be... acceptable alternatives to comply...
RAs listed in LAR Table G-1 was found to have SE Section 3.4.4 an adverse impact on the FPRA.
Make corrections Revised per comment.
Page 95/4th Should be: None of the RAs listed in LAR Table Paragraph G-1 were found to have any adverse impacts on the FPRA.
43 SE Section 3.4.4 Page 95/4th Paragraph The second sentence has a typo: None of the RAs listed in LAR Table G-1 was found to have an adverse impact on the FPRA.
44     SE Page 95 / 4th 1st paragraph - Change NFPA-805 to NFPA       Make correction          Revised per comment.
Should be: None of the RAs listed in LAR Table G-1 were found to have any adverse impacts on the FPRA.
full paragraph  805 Delete stray period at end of paragraph.
Revised per comment.
45     SE Section 3.4.4 Remove the second period at the end of this     Make correction         Revised per comment.
44 SE Page 95 / 4th full paragraph 1st paragraph - Change NFPA-805 to NFPA 805 Delete stray period at end of paragraph.
Page 95/5th      paragraph.
Make correction Revised per comment.
Paragraph 46     SE Page 99 / 2nd Correct Item S-3 correct to match S-3 table Make correction          Revised per comment.
45 SE Section 3.4.4 Page 95/5th Paragraph Remove the second period at the end of this paragraph.
paragraph        ID of S-3.30.
Make correction Revised per comment.
47     SE Page 99 / 3rd Correct PRA RAI-13 to PRA RAI 13             Make correction         Revised per comment.
46 SE Page 99 / 2nd paragraph Correct Item S-3 correct to match S-3 table ID of S-3.30.
paragraph 6
Make correction Revised per comment.
47 SE Page 99 / 3rd paragraph Correct PRA RAI-13 to PRA RAI 13 Make correction Revised per comment.  


Comment     Location                     Comment                         Suggested Disposition       NRC Response Number 48     SE Page 100 / Change NFPA-805 to NFPA 805                   Make correction         Revised per comment.
7 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 48 SE Page 100 /
last bullet 49     SE Page 101 / Change comma (,) to colon (:)                     Make correction         Revised per comment.
last bullet Change NFPA-805 to NFPA 805 Make correction Revised per comment.
1st bullet 50     SE Page 103 / Fix hyphen in Title of LAR Section 4.2.4 to Fire Make correction         Revised per comment.
49 SE Page 101 /
2nd paragraph  Area - Transition 51     SE Page 104 / Correct description of RB-M to (/) instead of (I) Make correction          Revised per comment.
1st bullet Change comma (,) to colon (:)
Table          Reactor Building North / East Side, RHR Heat Exchanger Room A 52     SE Page 107 / Remove stray character after The NRC Staffs   Make correction         Revised per comment.
Make correction Revised per comment.
last paragraph in last sentence.
50 SE Page 103 /
53     SE Page 108 / Add missing of in second sentence between       Make correction          Revised per comment.
2nd paragraph Fix hyphen in Title of LAR Section 4.2.4 to Fire Area - Transition Make correction Revised per comment.
last paragraph installation and these fire protection features.
51 SE Page 104 /
Replace addition with additional in 3rd sentence including any additional fire protection systems 54     SE Page 109 / Add space between SSD RAI 08 and dated       Make correction         Revised per comment.
Table Correct description of RB-M to (/) instead of (I)
Section 3.5.1.10 55     SE Page 114 / Change (complete bum-out) to (complete         Make correction         Revised per comment.
Reactor Building North / East Side, RHR Heat Exchanger Room A Make correction Revised per comment.
1st full      burn-out) paragraph 56     SE Page       Under NFPA 805 Section 1.4.2 (1) the             Make correction          Revised per comment.
52 SE Page 107 /
116/Section    parenthesis within the end bracket is not 3.6.1          necessary.
last paragraph Remove stray character after The NRC Staffs in last sentence.
57     SE Page 117 / Add in to text the methodology given NEI 04-   Make correction          Revised per comment.
Make correction Revised per comment.
1st paragraph  02 to read the methodology given in NEI 04-under indented 02 text 7
53 SE Page 108 /
last paragraph Add missing of in second sentence between installation and these fire protection features.
Replace addition with additional in 3rd sentence including any additional fire protection systems Make correction Revised per comment.
54 SE Page 109 /
Section 3.5.1.10 Add space between SSD RAI 08 and dated Make correction Revised per comment.
55 SE Page 114 /
1st full paragraph Change (complete bum-out) to (complete burn-out)
Make correction Revised per comment.
56 SE Page 116/Section 3.6.1 Under NFPA 805 Section 1.4.2 (1) the parenthesis within the end bracket is not necessary.
Make correction Revised per comment.
57 SE Page 117 /
1st paragraph under indented text Add in to text the methodology given NEI 04-02 to read the methodology given in NEI 04-02 Make correction Revised per comment.


Comment     Location                       Comment                     Suggested Disposition       NRC Response Number 58     SE Page 117 / Change dry well to drywell                 Make correction         Revised per comment.
8 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 58 SE Page 117 /
last paragraph 59     SE Page 120 / Change Enclosure E, Table E-1 to read LAR   Make correction          Revised per comment.
last paragraph Change dry well to drywell Make correction Revised per comment.
1st paragraph  Attachment E, Table E-1 under Section 3.6.7 60     SE Page 123 / Revise to read exceeded in order to bring   Make correction         Revised per comment.
59 SE Page 120 /
3rd bullet    performance 61     SE Page 123 / Correct implementation items to S-3.1 and S- Make correction         Revised per comment.
1st paragraph under Section 3.6.7 Change Enclosure E, Table E-1 to read LAR Attachment E, Table E-1 Make correction Revised per comment.
1st paragraph  3.23 62     SE Page 125 / Add of in the following engineering        Make correction          Revised per comment.
60 SE Page 123 /
Section 3.8.3 analyses used to support transition of the CNS FPP 63     SE Page 128 / Remove space between 10 and &deg;C             Make correction         Revised per comment.
3rd bullet Revise to read exceeded in order to bring performance Make correction Revised per comment.
2nd bullet 64     SE Page 129 / Correct implementation item to S-3.8         Make correction         Revised per comment.
61 SE Page 123 /
1st partial sentence 65     SE Page 130 / Correct implementation items to S-3.8 and S- Make correction         Revised per comment.
1st paragraph Correct implementation items to S-3.1 and S-3.23 Make correction Revised per comment.
Section       3.27 3.8.3.3.3 66      SE Page 131 /  Add FM in front of RAI in clarify its     Make correction          Revised per comment.
62 SE Page 125 /
Section        responses to an FM RAI.
Section 3.8.3 Add of in the following engineering analyses used to support transition of the CNS FPP Make correction Revised per comment.
3.8.3.4.2 Replace (.) with (:) at end of 1st paragraph 67     SE Page 133 / Delete extra FM in front of FM RAI 05(a)   Make correction         Revised per comment.
63 SE Page 128 /
1st bullet 68     SE Page 134   Change NUREG 1824 to NUREG-1824            Make correction          Revised per comment.
2nd bullet Remove space between 10 and &deg;C Make correction Revised per comment.
and Pg. 135 /
64 SE Page 129 /
2nd paragraph Change FDTs to FDTs throughout open under closed  bullets on pages 134 and 135 bullet 8
1st partial sentence Correct implementation item to S-3.8 Make correction Revised per comment.
65 SE Page 130 /
Section 3.8.3.3.3 Correct implementation items to S-3.8 and S-3.27 Make correction Revised per comment.
66 SE Page 131 /
Section 3.8.3.4.2 Add FM in front of RAI in clarify its responses to an FM RAI.
Replace (.) with (:) at end of 1st paragraph Make correction Revised per comment.
67 SE Page 133 /
1st bullet Delete extra FM in front of FM RAI 05(a)
Make correction Revised per comment.
68 SE Page 134 and Pg. 135 /
2nd paragraph under closed bullet Change NUREG 1824 to NUREG-1824 Change FDTs to FDTs throughout open bullets on pages 134 and 135 Make correction Revised per comment.


Comment     Location                       Comment                         Suggested Disposition     NRC Response Number 69     SE Page 135 / Change last sentence to uncertainty analysis   Make correction          Revised per comment.
9 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 69 SE Page 135 /
Section      is in identified LAR Table S-3 to 3.8.3.5.3    uncertainty analysis is identified in LAR Table S-3 Change implementation item 8 to implementation item S-3.8.
Section 3.8.3.5.3 Change last sentence to uncertainty analysis is in identified LAR Table S-3 to uncertainty analysis is identified in LAR Table S-3 Change implementation item 8 to implementation item S-3.8.
9
Make correction Revised per comment.


Draft SE Technical Comments The following comments on the draft NFPA 805 Safety Evaluations relate to material accuracy and completeness issues, and certain other areas of higher importance.
1 Draft SE Technical Comments The following comments on the draft NFPA 805 Safety Evaluations relate to material accuracy and completeness issues, and certain other areas of higher importance.
Comment         Location                         Comment                           Suggested Disposition               NRC Response Number 1           SE Pages 13 and   On these pages the NRC cites the use of NFPA     Add note or clarification i n      No change. The 34                101, Life Safety Code. NPPD is not committed   Section 3.1.1.5, bullet 3.3.3 that referenced standard is to that standard, except to the degree it is     provides a disclaimer that NFPA    listed in Section 2.2 of the reflected in NFPA 805 requirements, as           101 is not an endorsed standard    SE which is titled:
Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 1
evaluated in the B-1 table. NPPD is concerned     for NFPA 805.                      Applicable Staff that the wording in the SE could be construed in                                     Guidance. There is no the future to constitute a commitment in total                                       wording in the SE that to that standard. It is additionally noted that                                     indicates the licensee is the NRC has not endorsed this standard, as part                                     committed to the use of of NFPA 805, as it does not have a nexus to                                         this standard or that the nuclear safety.                                                                      NRC requires compliance with this standard.
SE Pages 13 and 34 On these pages the NRC cites the use of NFPA 101, Life Safety Code. NPPD is not committed to that standard, except to the degree it is reflected in NFPA 805 requirements, as evaluated in the B-1 table. NPPD is concerned that the wording in the SE could be construed in the future to constitute a commitment in total to that standard. It is additionally noted that the NRC has not endorsed this standard, as part of NFPA 805, as it does not have a nexus to nuclear safety.
2           SE Page 14/Table FAQ 07-0030 references SE Sections 3.2.2 and     Delete reference in FAQ 07-0030    Revised per comment.
Add note or clarification i n Section 3.1.1.5, bullet 3.3.3 that provides a disclaimer that NFPA 101 is not an endorsed standard for NFPA 805.
2.3-1            3.4.3. There is no reference to FAQ 07-0030 in   to SE Section 3.2.2 and 3.4.3.
No change. The referenced standard is listed in Section 2.2 of the SE which is titled:
these sections. Also, SE Section 3.2.5 references this FAQ, but it not an SE Section     Add 3.2.5 to SE Table 2.3-1 cited in Table 2.3-1.
Applicable Staff Guidance. There is no wording in the SE that indicates the licensee is committed to the use of this standard or that the NRC requires compliance with this standard.
3           SE Page 17/Table FAQ 12-0062, regarding USAR updates was used     Add FAQ 12-0062 to the FAQ        Revised per comment.
2 SE Page 14/Table 2.3-1 FAQ 07-0030 references SE Sections 3.2.2 and 3.4.3. There is no reference to FAQ 07-0030 in these sections. Also, SE Section 3.2.5 references this FAQ, but it not an SE Section cited in Table 2.3-1.
2.3-1            in the LAR (S-3.26 Implementation Item) and is   table.                            Note that FAQ 12-0062 discussed in the SE, but missing from the FAQ                                       was not included in LAR table                                                                                Attachment H.
Delete reference in FAQ 07-0030 to SE Section 3.2.2 and 3.4.3.
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Add 3.2.5 to SE Table 2.3-1 Revised per comment.
3 SE Page 17/Table 2.3-1 FAQ 12-0062, regarding USAR updates was used in the LAR (S-3.26 Implementation Item) and is discussed in the SE, but missing from the FAQ table Add FAQ 12-0062 to the FAQ table.
Revised per comment.
Note that FAQ 12-0062 was not included in LAR Attachment H.  


Comment     Location                         Comment                           Suggested Disposition             NRC Response Number 4       SE Page 17/Table FAQ 12-0064, "Hot Work/Transient Fire           Delete of FAQ 12-0064 from        Revised per comment.
2 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 4
2.3-1            Frequency Influence Factors," is included in the Table.
SE Page 17/Table 2.3-1 FAQ 12-0064, "Hot Work/Transient Fire Frequency Influence Factors," is included in the table. However, this FAQ was finalized after submittal of the LAR, an thus, the LAR did not include any reference to FAQ 12-0064. SE Sections 3.4.2.2 and 3.4.7 referenced in the table do not mention it.
table. However, this FAQ was finalized after submittal of the LAR, an thus, the LAR did not include any reference to FAQ 12-0064. SE Sections 3.4.2.2 and 3.4.7 referenced in the table do not mention it.
Delete of FAQ 12-0064 from Table.
5       SE Page21         The 5th bulleted exemption describes the         Delete elevation of the Control  Revised per comment.
Revised per comment.
Control Building Basement as being at 903'-6". Building Basement.
5 SE Page21 The 5th bulleted exemption describes the Control Building Basement as being at 903'-6".
The actual elevation is below the grade level of 903'-6". The 9/21/83 Safety Evaluation does not include any elevation information. Page 23 of the LAR erroneously included this elevation information, and will be deleted in the follow-up 4/11/2014 letter.
The actual elevation is below the grade level of 903'-6". The 9/21/83 Safety Evaluation does not include any elevation information. Page 23 of the LAR erroneously included this elevation information, and will be deleted in the follow-up 4/11/2014 letter.
6       SE Page 22/3rd   Section 2.6.1, second sentence, states: "The     Revise to read: "The licensee    Revised per comment.
Delete elevation of the Control Building Basement.
paragraph        license developed a change process that is       developed will develop a change based on ..." This change process has not been   process that is based on..."
Revised per comment.
developed yet.
6 SE Page 22/3rd paragraph Section 2.6.1, second sentence, states: "The license developed a change process that is based on..." This change process has not been developed yet.
7       SE Page           The paragraph does not discuss the specific      Include discussion of bullets on  Revised per comment.
Revise to read: "The licensee developed will develop a change process that is based on..."
22/Section 2.6.1, bullets from the NPPD LAR specific to screening. page 48 of the NPPD LAR such 3rd paragraph    Without these bullets this SE appears to only   that screening is also recognized apply screening to address changes that are     as a process that is used to only administrative in nature. This would not   identify changes that have less recognize the other purposes of screening that   than minimal impacts to risk.
Revised per comment.
include screening for changes that would have less than minimal impacts to risk.
7 SE Page 22/Section 2.6.1, 3rd paragraph The paragraph does not discuss the specific bullets from the NPPD LAR specific to screening.
8       SE Section 2.6.1 Response to RAIs (Ref. NLS2013011 response to   Include discussions to recognize  Revised per comment.
Without these bullets this SE appears to only apply screening to address changes that are only administrative in nature. This would not recognize the other purposes of screening that include screening for changes that would have less than minimal impacts to risk.
Programmatic RAI 05) is not included in the      that NPPD will incorporate the discussion for the plant change evaluation       change evaluation process process.                                        detailed in FAQ 12-0061.
Include discussion of bullets on page 48 of the NPPD LAR such that screening is also recognized as a process that is used to identify changes that have less than minimal impacts to risk.
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Revised per comment.
8 SE Section 2.6.1 Response to RAIs (Ref. NLS2013011 response to Programmatic RAI 05) is not included in the discussion for the plant change evaluation process.
Include discussions to recognize that NPPD will incorporate the change evaluation process detailed in FAQ 12-0061.
Revised per comment.


Comment       Location                       Comment                           Suggested Disposition             NRC Response Number 9       SE Page 22/last   SE states that the screening process was         Reword to reflect use of NEI 02-  Revised per comment.
3 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 9
full paragraph    modeled after NEI 02-03 Rev. 0. Revision 1 to   03 Rev. 1 and revise Reference NEI 02-03 was actually used. No reference to a   52.
SE Page 22/last full paragraph SE states that the screening process was modeled after NEI 02-03 Rev. 0. Revision 1 to NEI 02-03 was actually used. No reference to a revision number was made in the LAR.
revision number was made in the LAR.
Reword to reflect use of NEI 02-03 Rev. 1 and revise Reference
10     SE Page           The safety evaluation states The licensee      Revise statement to read The    No change. SE states 22/Section 2.6.1, stated that the screening is followed by         licensee stated that the          what was stated in the last paragraph    engineering evaluations. This statement       screening will identify when a    LAR.
: 52.
could be interpreted as all change evaluations   change will require additional is would include an engineering evaluation.         followed by engineering However, some changes may not require           evaluations."
Revised per comment.
engineering evaluations in that the change would be screened as trivial or having a less than minor risk impact.
10 SE Page 22/Section 2.6.1, last paragraph The safety evaluation states The licensee stated that the screening is followed by engineering evaluations. This statement could be interpreted as all change evaluations would include an engineering evaluation.
11     SE Page 23/5th   First sentence makes reference to "Non-Power     Revise to read "Non-Power        Revised per comment and paragraph        Mode NSCA Treatment." CNS does not have a       Mode reviews, etc.."             per LAR.
However, some changes may not require engineering evaluations in that the change would be screened as trivial or having a less than minor risk impact.
document of this type.
Revise statement to read The licensee stated that the screening will identify when a change will require additional is followed by engineering evaluations."
12     SE Page 27/1st   Excerpt "...may be used after transition to NFPA Revise excerpt to the following:  Revised per comment.
No change. SE states what was stated in the LAR.
paragraph        805 as a part of the FREs conducted to           ..." may be used after transition determine the change in risk associated with     to NFPA 805 as a part of the FREs proposed plant changes. " details that Cooper   Plant change Evaluations Nuclear Station will continue to perform FREs   conducted to determine the after transition. However, FREs were used to     change in risk associated with evaluate VFDRs and therefore will not be used   proposed plant changes.
11 SE Page 23/5th paragraph First sentence makes reference to "Non-Power Mode NSCA Treatment." CNS does not have a document of this type.
after transition.
Revise to read "Non-Power Mode reviews, etc.."
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Revised per comment and per LAR.
12 SE Page 27/1st paragraph Excerpt "...may be used after transition to NFPA 805 as a part of the FREs conducted to determine the change in risk associated with proposed plant changes. " details that Cooper Nuclear Station will continue to perform FREs after transition. However, FREs were used to evaluate VFDRs and therefore will not be used after transition.
Revise excerpt to the following:
..." may be used after transition to NFPA 805 as a part of the FREs Plant change Evaluations conducted to determine the change in risk associated with proposed plant changes.
Revised per comment.  


Comment     Location                         Comment                           Suggested Disposition             NRC Response Number 13     SE Page 27/last   Section 2.7.1 - Item S-3.30 states will be in   Revise statement indicate that S- Revised per comment.
4 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 13 SE Page 27/last paragraph Section 2.7.1 - Item S-3.30 states will be in place 6 months after completion of modifications. This does not match the proposed licensee implementation period of implementation by May 31, 2017. The basis for the May 31, 2017, date was to allow six months after the projected end of Refueling Outage RE29, but that does not subsume that committed implementation date.
paragraph        place 6 months after completion of               3.30 will be completed by May modifications. This does not match the           31, 2017..
Revise statement indicate that S-3.30 will be completed by May 31, 2017..
proposed licensee implementation period of implementation by May 31, 2017. The basis for the May 31, 2017, date was to allow six months after the projected end of Refueling Outage RE29, but that does not subsume that committed implementation date.
Revised per comment.
14     SE Page           The wording in the License Condition could        Add a statement at the end of    No change. Upon 28/Section 2.7.1 legally be construed that once the S-2 and S-3   Section 2.7.1 stating:            completion of part c of are complete, no further changes to these                                           the license condition, configurations or processes could be made         "Once compliance has been        changes are made in without violating the license condition. NPPD     achieved with the Table S-2      accordance with parts a proposed to add words to the license condition   Modifications and Table S-3      and b of the license to make it clear that once compliance was         Implementation Items, future      condition.
14 SE Page 28/Section 2.7.1 The wording in the License Condition could legally be construed that once the S-2 and S-3 are complete, no further changes to these configurations or processes could be made without violating the license condition. NPPD proposed to add words to the license condition to make it clear that once compliance was achieved, future changes could be made utilizing the protocols of the license condition, but was told by the NRC via e-mail that was unnecessary.
achieved, future changes could be made           changes to those affected utilizing the protocols of the license condition, configurations, processes, and but was told by the NRC via e-mail that was       procedures may be made using unnecessary.                                      the self-approval process of the Fire Protection license condition."
Add a statement at the end of Section 2.7.1 stating:
15     SE Page           The second sentence describes Implementation      Revise statement indicate that S- Revised per comment.
"Once compliance has been achieved with the Table S-2 Modifications and Table S-3 Implementation Items, future changes to those affected configurations, processes, and procedures may be made using the self-approval process of the Fire Protection license condition."
28/Section 2.7.2, Item S-30 as being completed within 6 months     3.30 will be completed by May 1st paragraph    after completion of the modifications described   31, 2017..
No change. Upon completion of part c of the license condition, changes are made in accordance with parts a and b of the license condition.
in the S-2 table. This does not match the proposed licensee implementation period of implementation by May 31, 2017. The basis for the May 31, 2017, date was to allow six months after the projected end of Refueling Outage RE29, but that does not subsume that date.
15 SE Page 28/Section 2.7.2, 1st paragraph The second sentence describes Implementation Item S-30 as being completed within 6 months after completion of the modifications described in the S-2 table. This does not match the proposed licensee implementation period of implementation by May 31, 2017. The basis for the May 31, 2017, date was to allow six months after the projected end of Refueling Outage RE29, but that does not subsume that date.
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Revise statement indicate that S-3.30 will be completed by May 31, 2017..
Revised per comment.


Comment       Location                       Comment                           Suggested Disposition             NRC Response Number 16     SE Page 61/first The bullet states that the plant staff will       Make correction.                  Revised per comment.
5 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 16 SE Page 61/first bullet The bullet states that the plant staff will endeavor to achieve a hot standby condition.
bullet          endeavor to achieve a hot standby condition.
This is not applicable to BWR Technical Specifications. "hot standby" should be "hot shutdown (Mode 3)" for consistency with CNS Technical Specifications, and consistency with the later words cold shutdown (MODE 4) if necessary..
This is not applicable to BWR Technical Specifications. "hot standby" should be "hot shutdown (Mode 3)" for consistency with CNS Technical Specifications, and consistency with the later words cold shutdown (MODE 4) if necessary..
17     SE Page 68/2nd   First sentence indicates that the post-transition Revise to read "... compensatory  No change. The full paragraph  period commences with the issuance of the         measures necessary in the        licensees understanding Safety Evaluation. This is not NPPDs             period between transition(12      is not correct. The post understanding. For purposes of the response to   months after issuance of this SE) transition period begins FPE RAI 10, the post-transition period was       and completion of the            upon issuance of the intended to mean after the 12-month               modification."                   license amendment.
Make correction.
implementation period after receiving the SE.
Revised per comment.
18     SE Page 69/1st   First sentence implies that a continuous fire     Revise the sentence to read "The  No change. See response paragraph        watch will be in place until the modifications   licensee further stated that      to Comment 17. The post are in place. The fire watch will be put in place compensatory measures during      transition period begins after the 12-month implementation period. See     times when the incipient         upon issuance of the Comment 17.                                      detection is out of service,     license amendment.
17 SE Page 68/2nd full paragraph First sentence indicates that the post-transition period commences with the issuance of the Safety Evaluation. This is not NPPDs understanding. For purposes of the response to FPE RAI 10, the post-transition period was intended to mean after the 12-month implementation period after receiving the SE.
including prior to completion of the modification, plant procedures will provide a continuous fire watch with hand-held incipient detection in the Auxiliary Relay Room after the 12-month implementation period."
Revise to read "... compensatory measures necessary in the period between transition(12 months after issuance of this SE) and completion of the modification."
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No change. The licensees understanding is not correct. The post transition period begins upon issuance of the license amendment.
18 SE Page 69/1st paragraph First sentence implies that a continuous fire watch will be in place until the modifications are in place. The fire watch will be put in place after the 12-month implementation period. See Comment 17.
Revise the sentence to read "The licensee further stated that compensatory measures during times when the incipient detection is out of service, including prior to completion of the modification, plant procedures will provide a continuous fire watch with hand-held incipient detection in the Auxiliary Relay Room after the 12-month implementation period."
No change. See response to Comment 17. The post transition period begins upon issuance of the license amendment.


Comment       Location                       Comment                               Suggested Disposition             NRC Response Number 19     SE Page 72 last Excerpt "In PRA RAI 12, the licensee               Delete the three bullets            Revised. The three paragraph        quantitatively defines the term: potentially risk following the excerpt. Replace      bullets with quantitative significant fire scenarios. Potentially risk     the excerpt with "In PRA RAI 12,    guidelines were not significant fire scenarios for the purpose of     it is recognized that during some  deleted as they form an evaluating the need for DID are defined as..."     DID evaluations, it may become      integral part of the SE and requires further clarification to detail its       necessary to consider the          are consistent with past application as detailed in PRA RAI 12. Also, it is potential for risk significant fire SEs.
6 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 19 SE Page 72 last paragraph Excerpt "In PRA RAI 12, the licensee quantitatively defines the term: potentially risk significant fire scenarios. Potentially risk significant fire scenarios for the purpose of evaluating the need for DID are defined as..."
recommended that the specific threshold be         scenarios to impact VFDRs. In excluded from the SE as these are guidelines       these cases, the licensee provide developed by Cooper Nuclear Station and not       quantitative results from the mandated by NFPA 805 requirements.                 FPRA for the purpose of evaluating the DID for VFDRs.
requires further clarification to detail its application as detailed in PRA RAI 12. Also, it is recommended that the specific threshold be excluded from the SE as these are guidelines developed by Cooper Nuclear Station and not mandated by NFPA 805 requirements.
20     SE Page         The excerpt "Also, CNS has removed                 A reference to the documents       Revised. The identified 74/Section      unacceptable methods or committed to              (i.e., as described in PRA RAI 40) sentence was deleted.
Delete the three bullets following the excerpt. Replace the excerpt with "In PRA RAI 12, it is recognized that during some DID evaluations, it may become necessary to consider the potential for risk significant fire scenarios to impact VFDRs. In these cases, the licensee provide quantitative results from the FPRA for the purpose of evaluating the DID for VFDRs.
3.4.1.2 last    updating the FPRA." does not provide the          that specify actions required for paragraph        required specificity to define what is meant by    updating the FPRA should be "updating" the FPRA.                              provided in this paragraph.
Revised. The three bullets with quantitative guidelines were not deleted as they form an integral part of the SE and are consistent with past SEs.
21     SE Page         The excerpt "Therefore, the NRC staff concludes   Recommend replacing "FRE"          Revised per comment.
20 SE Page 74/Section 3.4.1.2 last paragraph The excerpt "Also, CNS has removed unacceptable methods or committed to updating the FPRA." does not provide the required specificity to define what is meant by "updating" the FPRA.
75/Section 3.4.2 that the PRA should be capable of supporting       with "Plant Change Evaluations".
A reference to the documents (i.e., as described in PRA RAI 40) that specify actions required for updating the FPRA should be provided in this paragraph.
last paragraph  post-transition FREs to support,..." use of the term FRE is incorrect. Cooper's risk based evaluations after transition to NFPA 805 will not include FREs as these were done to evaluate transition.
Revised. The identified sentence was deleted.
23     SE Page 81/1st   Paragraph lists Fire Zones 8B, 8C, 8E, 8G, and     Add Fire Zone 8F.                  Revised per comment.
21 SE Page 75/Section 3.4.2 last paragraph The excerpt "Therefore, the NRC staff concludes that the PRA should be capable of supporting post-transition FREs to support,..." use of the term FRE is incorrect. Cooper's risk based evaluations after transition to NFPA 805 will not include FREs as these were done to evaluate transition.
full paragraph  8H from PRA-RAI 04.02, but does not include Fire Zone 8F, as described in PRA RAI 04.02.
Recommend replacing "FRE" with "Plant Change Evaluations".
24     SE Page 83/1st   To better reflect the response to PRA RAI         Make revision.                      Revised per comment.
Revised per comment.
full paragraph  02f.01, Item 3) needs to be revised to 3) MCB cabinet walls protect sensitive equipment for a sufficient period such that the likelihood of not suppressing the fire prior to damage is low.
23 SE Page 81/1st full paragraph Paragraph lists Fire Zones 8B, 8C, 8E, 8G, and 8H from PRA-RAI 04.02, but does not include Fire Zone 8F, as described in PRA RAI 04.02.
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Add Fire Zone 8F.
Revised per comment.
24 SE Page 83/1st full paragraph To better reflect the response to PRA RAI 02f.01, Item 3) needs to be revised to 3) MCB cabinet walls protect sensitive equipment for a sufficient period such that the likelihood of not suppressing the fire prior to damage is low.
Make revision.
Revised per comment.


Comment     Location                         Comment                             Suggested Disposition             NRC Response Number 25     SE Page 86 / 2nd Fire Modeling Database should be replaced       Correct throughout SE              Revised per comment.
7 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 25 SE Page 86 / 2nd paragraph Fire Modeling Database should be replaced with Fire Modeling Workbook throughout and FMDB replaced with FMWB throughout SE.
paragraph        with Fire Modeling Workbook throughout and FMDB replaced with FMWB throughout SE.
Correct throughout SE Revised per comment.
26     SE Page 87 /     The bullet Suppression activation time           Remove bullet Suppression        Revised per comment.
26 SE Page 87 /
bullets under FDS calculation in specific fire areas was not used   activation time calculation in at Cooper.                                        specific fire areas 27     SE Page 91 / last Change transient height to 2 feet based on       Make correction                   Revised per comment.
bullets under FDS The bullet Suppression activation time calculation in specific fire areas was not used at Cooper.
paragraph of      SDP guidance.
Remove bullet Suppression activation time calculation in specific fire areas Revised per comment.
page 28     SE Page 99/Table Fire Area TB-A Description contains buildings   Remove Off Gas Building and        Revised per comment.
27 SE Page 91 / last paragraph of page Change transient height to 2 feet based on SDP guidance.
3.4.6-2          (Off Gas Building and Optimum Water               Optimum Water Chemistry from Chemistry) that are considered part of Fire Area   the TB-A description as these YD, as described in the LAR B-3 Table for these   buildings are considered part of Fire Areas.                                        the YD. A revision to Attachment I of the LAR will be made to provide this clarification.
Make correction Revised per comment.
29     SE Page 104/     Fire Area TB-A Area Description contains         Remove Off Gas Building and        Revised per comment.
28 SE Page 99/Table 3.4.6-2 Fire Area TB-A Description contains buildings (Off Gas Building and Optimum Water Chemistry) that are considered part of Fire Area YD, as described in the LAR B-3 Table for these Fire Areas.
able 3.5-1        buildings (Off Gas Building and Optimum Water     Optimum Water Chemistry from Chemistry) that are considered part of Fire Area   the TB-A description as these YD, consistent with the LAR B-3 table.             buildings are considered part of the YD. A revision to Attachment I of the LAR will be made to provide this clarification.
Remove Off Gas Building and Optimum Water Chemistry from the TB-A description as these buildings are considered part of the YD. A revision to Attachment I of the LAR will be made to provide this clarification.
30     SE Page 109/1st   First sentence indicates shielding for Fire Areas Correct sentence to include fixed  Revised per comment.
Revised per comment.
partial paragraph CB-D and RB-m is for transient fires assumed in   sources as adequate for the these fire areas. In Fire Area CB-D, the shielding fire duration of the transient and that has been installed is for fixed sources       fixed source fires assumed (electrical panels). This is currently being installed.
29 SE Page 104/
31     SE Page 122/2nd   For consistency with FAQ 10-0059, under           Make addition                      Revised per comment.
able 3.5-1 Fire Area TB-A Area Description contains buildings (Off Gas Building and Optimum Water Chemistry) that are considered part of Fire Area YD, consistent with the LAR B-3 table.
paragraph under  discussion of the scope of the monitoring indented text    program add FPRA equipment.
Remove Off Gas Building and Optimum Water Chemistry from the TB-A description as these buildings are considered part of the YD. A revision to Attachment I of the LAR will be made to provide this clarification.
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Revised per comment.
30 SE Page 109/1st partial paragraph First sentence indicates shielding for Fire Areas CB-D and RB-m is for transient fires assumed in these fire areas. In Fire Area CB-D, the shielding that has been installed is for fixed sources (electrical panels). This is currently being installed.
Correct sentence to include fixed sources as adequate for the fire duration of the transient and fixed source fires assumed Revised per comment.
31 SE Page 122/2nd paragraph under indented text For consistency with FAQ 10-0059, under discussion of the scope of the monitoring program add FPRA equipment.
Make addition Revised per comment.


Comment     Location                         Comment                         Suggested Disposition             NRC Response Number 32     SE Page           CNS does not use a Fire Modeling Database.     Revise to read: "...were         Revised per comment.
8 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 32 SE Page 126/bullet at end of page CNS does not use a Fire Modeling Database.
126/bullet at end Fire Modeling Database should be replaced    implemented in a database and of page          with Fire Modeling Workbook.                  workbook referred to as the Fire Modeling WorkbookDatabase (FMDBFMWB).
Fire Modeling Database should be replaced with Fire Modeling Workbook.
Revise to read: "...were implemented in a database and workbook referred to as the Fire Modeling WorkbookDatabase (FMDBFMWB).
Replace FMDB with FMWB throughout SE.
Replace FMDB with FMWB throughout SE.
33     SE Attachments   Fire Modeling Database should be replaced     Needs to be corrected            Revised per comment.
Revised per comment.
A and B          with Fire Modeling Workbook throughout and throughout both Attachments A FMDB.                                        and B.
33 SE Attachments A and B Fire Modeling Database should be replaced with Fire Modeling Workbook throughout and FMDB.
34     SE Attachment A   Application at CNS - Second sentence does not   Make corrections                Revised per comment.
Needs to be corrected throughout both Attachments A and B.
(pg. A2) Radiant  read correctly. Revise to read "The correlation Heat Flux        was used to determine the horizontal separation distance..."
Revised per comment.
V&V Basis for NUREG-1805 is Chapter 5 not Chapter 3 35     SE Attachment A   V&V Basis for NUREG-1805 is Chapter 2 not     Make correction                 Revised per comment.
34 SE Attachment A (pg. A2) Radiant Heat Flux Application at CNS - Second sentence does not read correctly. Revise to read "The correlation was used to determine the horizontal separation distance..."
(pg. A2) Hot Gas Chapter 3 Layer MQH 36      SE Attachment A  V&V Basis for NUREG-1805 is Chapter 2 not     Make correction                 Revised per comment.
V&V Basis for NUREG-1805 is Chapter 5 not Chapter 3 Make corrections Revised per comment.
(pg. A3) Hot Gas Chapter 3 Layer Beyler 37      SE Attachment A  V&V Basis for NUREG-1805 is Chapter 2 not     Make correction                 Revised per comment.
35 SE Attachment A (pg. A2) Hot Gas Layer MQH V&V Basis for NUREG-1805 is Chapter 2 not Chapter 3 Make correction Revised per comment.
(pg. A3) Hot Gas  Chapter 3 Layer FPA 38     SE Attachment A   V&V Basis for NUREG-1824 is Volume 4 not     Make correction                 Revised per comment.
36 SE Attachment A (pg. A3) Hot Gas Layer Beyler V&V Basis for NUREG-1805 is Chapter 2 not Chapter 3 Make correction Revised per comment.
(Pg. A4) Ceiling  Volume 3 Jet Temperature 8
37 SE Attachment A (pg. A3) Hot Gas Layer FPA V&V Basis for NUREG-1805 is Chapter 2 not Chapter 3 Make correction Revised per comment.
38 SE Attachment A (Pg. A4) Ceiling Jet Temperature V&V Basis for NUREG-1824 is Volume 4 not Volume 3 Make correction Revised per comment.  


Comment     Location                           Comment                       Suggested Disposition       NRC Response Number 39     SE Attachment A   V&V Basis for NUREG-1805 is Chapter 10 not   Make correction           Revised per comment.
9 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 39 SE Attachment A (Pg. A4) Sprinkler Activation Correlation V&V Basis for NUREG-1805 is Chapter 10 not Chapter 3 Make correction Revised per comment.
(Pg. A4) Sprinkler Chapter 3 Activation Correlation 40      SE Attachment A    V&V Basis for NUREG-1805 is Chapter 11 not   Make correction          Revised per comment.
40 SE Attachment A (Pg. A5) Heat Detector Actuation Correlation V&V Basis for NUREG-1805 is Chapter 11 not Chapter 3 V&V Basis for NUREG-1824 is Volume 4 not Volume 3 Remove SFPE Handbook discussion from the V&V Basis as this is related to smoke detector actuation.
(Pg. A5) Heat      Chapter 3 Detector Actuation          V&V Basis for NUREG-1824 is Volume 4 not Correlation        Volume 3 Remove SFPE Handbook discussion from the V&V Basis as this is related to smoke detector actuation.
Revise NRC Staff Evaluation 2nd bullet to The correlation is validated in authoritative publication of the NFPA Handbook.
Revise NRC Staff Evaluation 2nd bullet to The correlation is validated in authoritative publication of the NFPA Handbook.
9
Make correction Revised per comment.


Comment     Location                         Comment                           Suggested Disposition       NRC Response Number 41     SE Attachment A The smoke detector correlation is based on the     Make correction          Revised per comment.
10 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 41 SE Attachment A (pg. A6) Smoke Detector Actuation The smoke detector correlation is based on the ceiling jet correlation of Alpert and the 10&deg;C rise is the Method of Heskestad and Delichatsios.
(pg. A6) Smoke  ceiling jet correlation of Alpert and the 10&deg;C rise Detector        is the Method of Heskestad and Delichatsios.
This correlation needs to be revised to include discussion of the Alpert Ceiling Jet correlation.
Actuation        This correlation needs to be revised to include discussion of the Alpert Ceiling Jet correlation.
V&V Basis for NUREG-1805 is Chapter 11 not Chapter 3 V&V Basis for NUREG-1824 is Volume 4 not Volume 3 Add SFPE Handbook Chapter 4-1 to the V&V Basis for Smoke Detector Actuation.
V&V Basis for NUREG-1805 is Chapter 11 not Chapter 3 V&V Basis for NUREG-1824 is Volume 4 not Volume 3 Add SFPE Handbook Chapter 4-1 to the V&V Basis for Smoke Detector Actuation.
Revise NRC Staff Evaluation 2nd bullet to The correlation is validated in authoritative publications of the NFPA and SFPE Handbooks.
Revise NRC Staff Evaluation 2nd bullet to The correlation is validated in authoritative publications of the NFPA and SFPE Handbooks.
42     SE Attachment B V&V Basis for NUREG-1824 is Volume 7 not         Make correction          Revised per comment.
Make correction Revised per comment.
(pg. B1) FDS for Volume 3 MCR NRC Staff Evaluation - Add is between abandonment time calculations and acceptable. in last sentence.
42 SE Attachment B (pg. B1) FDS for MCR V&V Basis for NUREG-1824 is Volume 7 not Volume 3 NRC Staff Evaluation - Add is between abandonment time calculations and acceptable. in last sentence.
43     SE Attachment B V&V Basis for NUREG-1824 is Volume 7 not         Make correction           Revised per comment.
Make correction Revised per comment.
(pg. B2)        Volume 3 Temperature Sensitive Equipment ZOI 10
43 SE Attachment B (pg. B2)
Temperature Sensitive Equipment ZOI V&V Basis for NUREG-1824 is Volume 7 not Volume 3 Make correction Revised per comment.  


Comment     Location                       Comment                       Suggested Disposition       NRC Response Number 44     SE Attachment B   V&V Basis for NUREG-1824 is Volume 7 not  Make correction            Revised per comment.
11 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 44 SE Attachment B (pg. B3)
(pg. B3)         Volume 3 Plume/Hot Gas Layer Interaction 45      SE Attachment B  V&V Basis for NUREG-1824 is Volume 5 not Make correction           Revised per comment.
Plume/Hot Gas Layer Interaction V&V Basis for NUREG-1824 is Volume 7 not Volume 3 Make correction Revised per comment.
(pg. B3) Hot Gas Volume 3 Layer CFAST 46      SE Attachment B  V&V Basis for NUREG-1824 is Volume 5 not Make correction           Revised per comment.
45 SE Attachment B (pg. B3) Hot Gas Layer CFAST V&V Basis for NUREG-1824 is Volume 5 not Volume 3 Make correction Revised per comment.
(pg. B4)         Volume 3 Temperature sensitive hot gas Application at CNS - Change equipments to layer            equipment.
46 SE Attachment B (pg. B4)
47     SE Attachment C   CNS does not use a Fire Modeling Database   Replace duplicated FMDB    Revised per comment.
Temperature sensitive hot gas layer V&V Basis for NUREG-1824 is Volume 5 not Volume 3 Application at CNS - Change equipments to equipment.
(FMDB) (see Comments32 and 33)             acronyms with FMWB (Fire Modeling Workbook).
Make correction Revised per comment.
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47 SE Attachment C CNS does not use a Fire Modeling Database (FMDB) (see Comments32 and 33)
Replace duplicated FMDB acronyms with FMWB (Fire Modeling Workbook).
Revised per comment.}}

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NRR E-mail Capture - Phone Call with NPPD to Discussion Comments on Cooper NFPA 805 Safety Evaluation (ME8551)
ML14104A878
Person / Time
Site: Cooper Entergy icon.png
Issue date: 04/14/2014
From: Joseph Sebrosky
Division of Operating Reactor Licensing
To: Janet Burkhardt, Andrea George
Office of Nuclear Reactor Regulation
References
ME8551
Download: ML14104A878 (29)


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1 NRR-PMDAPEm Resource From:

Sebrosky, Joseph Sent:

Monday, April 14, 2014 10:18 AM To:

NRR-PMDA-ECapture Resource; Burkhardt, Janet; George, Andrea

Subject:

RE: phone call with NPPD to discussion comments on Cooper NFPA 805 safety evaluation (ME8551)

The purpose of this email is to capture background information for a phone call that was held on 4/10/14 between NRC representatives and Nebraska Public Power District (NPPD) representatives to discuss comments the NRC staff received on a draft of the Cooper safety evaluation associated with NPPDs license amendment request to transition to National Fire Protection Association 805 requirements. The agenda for the phone call can be found below.

The draft safety evaluation was provided to NPPD in an email dated March 27, 2014, and was provided to NPPD in accordance with NRCs Office of Nuclear Reactor Regulation Office Instruction COM-203, Revision 2, which states in part:

As another example, a Draft Safety Evaluation (SE) might be provided to a licensee or applicant to obtain agreement that it contains no proprietary information, in accordance with Office Instruction LIC-204. Similarly, draft SEs or selected portions thereof may be provided to a licensee or applicant to obtain agreement that factual information is accurate and complete. If these exchanges result in the discovery of new information needed for decision making, then this additional information must be appropriately submitted and preserved.

The staff binned the comments received by NPPD into three different files found below (i.e., administrative, editorial, and technical. The staff indicated that in some cases it would make changes to the safety evaluation based on NPPDs comments. The changes will be reflected in the final version of the documents.

Joe Sebrosky Project Manager Nuclear Regulatory Commission Division of Operating Reactor Licensing joseph.sebrosky@nrc.gov 301-415-1132


Original Appointment-----

From: Sebrosky, Joseph Sent: Wednesday, April 09, 2014 2:37 PM To: 'Victor,, William R.- Strategic Initiatives' (wrvicto@nppd.com); Van Der Kamp, David (dwvande@nppd.com); George, Andrea; Barrett, Harold; Robinson, Jay; Wall, Scott Cc: 'Meyer, Steve'; 'Shudak, Thomas G.'; 'Barker, Troy S.'; 'Ouellette, Paul'

Subject:

phone call with NPPD to discussion comments on Cooper NFPA 805 safety evaluation When: Thursday, April 10, 2014 12:00 PM-1:00 PM (UTC-05:00) Eastern Time (US & Canada).

Where: HQ-O-10B2

Purpose:

To discuss comments received from NPPD on Cooper NFPA 805 safety evaluation, and to determine if the proposed disposition involves additional interactions Outcome: Clear understanding of comment, disposition of comment, and path forward Agenda:

2 I.

Discussion of comment and proposed disposition Draft Cooper SE Administrative...

Draft Cooper SE Editorial Comm...

Draft Cooper SE Technical Comm...

II.

Identification of areas for future interactions III.

Next steps IV.

wrapup

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RE: phone call with NPPD to discussion comments on Cooper NFPA 805 safety evaluation (ME8551)

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Files Size Date & Time MESSAGE 2652 4/14/2014 10:18:00 AM Draft Cooper SE Administrative Comments from Licensee NRC addressed.docx 920569 Draft Cooper SE Editorial Comments from Licensee NRC Addressed.docx 1425673 Draft Cooper SE Technical Comments from Licensee NRC Addressed.docx 467807 Options Priority:

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1 Draft SE Comment Sheet Draft SE Administrative Comments The following comments on the draft NFPA 805 Safety Evaluations relate to non-material accuracy and completeness issues, and certain other areas of administrative importance.

Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 1 -

Page 1/1.A.

The August 23, 2014, letter is characterized as a supplement to the LAR. In fact, this letter provided acknowledgement of the terms and conditions of the CNS NFPA 805 portal. The letter, of itself, contained no supplemental information relevant to the NRC review of the application.

Recommend deletion of the 8/23/2014 letter from paragraph 1.A.

2 -

Page 1/1.A.

NPPD projects to be submitting a final letter on 4/11/2014 containing a requested change to the License Condition and providing clean/ retyped pages of the license.

Recommend inclusion of the 4/11/2014 letter in Paragraph 1.A if the 4/11/2014 submittal date is acceptable.

3 -

Page 2/2.(4)

The 8/23/14 letter is characterized as a supplement to the LAR. In fact, this letter provided acknowledgement of the terms and conditions of the CNS NFPA 805 portal. The letter, of itself, contained no supplemental information relevant to the NRC review of the application.

Recommend deletion of the 8/23/2014 letter from paragraph 2.(4).

4 -

Page 2/2.(4)

NPPD projects to be submitting a final letter on 4/11/2014 containing a requested change to the License Condition and providing clean/ retyped pages of the license.

Recommend inclusion of the 4/11/2014 letter in Paragraph 2.(4) if the 4/11/2014 submittal date is acceptable.

5 -

Page 3 The instruction say to insert pages 3 through 8. of the LAR projects that the License will only extend to Page 7.

Revise instructions to insert pages 3 through 7.

2 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 6

TOC-Page i/2.4.4 Section is entitled Updated Final Safety Analysis Report. The CNS document is actually entitled Updated Safety Analysis Report.

Revise section title to Updated Safety Analysis Report.

Revised per comment.

7 TOC-Page ii TOC is missing section 3.1.1.6.

Incorporate section 3.1.1.6, Compliance Strategy -

Complies With Required Action, Page 37, into TOC.

Revised per comment.

8 TOC Page iii and SE Page 88 Section 3.4.2.3.2 identifies Callaway Change to Cooper Revised per comment.

9 TOC Page vi Attachment A and B tables are mis-numbered.

Change "Table 3.8.3.2-1" to "Table 3.8-1," and "Table 3.8.3.2-2" to "Table 3.8-2."

Revised per comment.

10 SE Page 3/1.2-1st paragraph The August 23, 2014 letter is characterized as a supplement to the LAR. In fact, this letter provided acknowledgement of the terms and conditions of the CNS NFPA 805 portal. The letter, of itself, contained no supplemental information relevant to the NRC review of the application.

Recommend deletion of the 8/23/2014 letter from the requested licensing action.

11 SE Page 3/1.2-1st paragraph NPPD projects to be submitting a final letter on 4/11/2014 containing a requested change to the License Condition and providing clean/ retyped pages of the license.

Recommend inclusion of the 4/11/2014 letter in first paragraph if the 4/11/2014 submittal date is acceptable.

12 SE Page 3/1.2-1st paragraph The 2/18/2014 letter was made in response to an NRC 2/6/2014 letter that documented the onsite audit conducted 1/24/2014-1/25/2014. That letter is not referenced in the second sentence.

Recommend the 2/6/2014 letter be added to the second sentence of NRC letters that prompted RAI responses, and creation of a Reference for this letter.

3 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 13 SE Page 3/1.2-1st paragraph The 7/12/2012 letter was made in response to an e-mail from Lynnea Wilkins to Ed McCutchen on 6/21/2012. This e-mail is not reflected in the second sentence or in the References. Note - the second sentence that addresses the prompts for the other responses include e-mails.

Recommend the67/21/2012 e-mail be added to the second sentence of NRC letters that prompted RAI responses, and creation of a Reference for this communication.

14 SE Page 4/1st paragraph First sentence of paragraph states Updated Final Safety Analysis Report (UFSAR). The CNS document is actually entitled Updated Safety Analysis Report.

Revise sentence to read Updated Safety Analysis Report (USAR).

Revised per comment.

15 SE Page 15 SE Section 3.2.7 should be added to FAQ 07-0038.

Make correction.

Revised per comment.

16 SE Page 20/2nd paragraph Section 2.4.4 Heading and body of section use Updated Final Safety Analysis Report (UFSAR).

CNS has an Updated Safety Analysis Report (USAR) and not an UFSAR Replace Updated Fire Safety Analysis Report (UFSAR) with Updates Safety Analysis Report (USAR)

Revised per comment.

17 SE Page 23/5th paragraph Last sentence of paragraph states See LAR Attachment S for implementation items.

Attachment S has been updated in later RAI responses and supplements since LAR.

Revise to read See LAR Attachment S, as supplemented, for implementation items.

Alternative, refer to the 2/18/2014 letter that provided the updated S-3 table.

Revised per comment.

18 SE Page 27/Section 2.7.1 The section title is "Modifications," but the subject matter includes both modifications and implementation items.

Recommend changing title to "Modifications and Implementation Items."

Revised per comment.

19 SE Page 31/Item 6

Item 6 has a cross-reference to Section 2.9 of the SE for implementation items. There is no Section 2.9 of the SE.

Revise to cross-reference Section 2.8.

Revised per comment.

4 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 20 SE Page 33/Section 3.1.1.4, 1st paragraph The last two sentences refer to the analysis and rescission of exemptions under the Section Compliance Strategy - Complies with Previous NRC Approval. However, none of these NFPA 805 elements on the B-1 table relied on the NRC exemptions to achieve NRC Approval. Rescission of exemptions is discussed in Section 2.5.

Delete last two sentences regarding the performance of RI/PB analysis on exemptions, and the request that they be rescinded.

Revised per comment.

21 SE Page 40/Section 3.1.4.1, 1st paragraph First sentence makes a cross-reference to SE Section 3.1.1.6. Should be made to Section 3.1.1.5.

Correct cross-reference.

Revised to include SE Sections 3.1.1.5 and 3.1.1.6 as both are applicable.

22 SE Page 51 / last paragraph The corresponding NFPA 805, Section 3.3.5.2 is identified but should be Section 3.6.1 Correct NFPA 805 section.

Revised per comment.

23 SE Page 65 / last paragraph Correct Fire Area RBCF to RB-CF Correct typo.

Revised per comment.

24 SE Page 68/last paragraph First sentence characterizes S-2.4 as an implementation item. Table S-2 items are modifications.

Revise sentence to read "modification S-2.4."

Revised per comment.

25 SE Page 81/top paragraph - first full sentence in this paragraph The first full sentence on page 81 states The licensee clarified that the fire-affected equipment list for several transients related to PRA RAI 13 and PRA RAI 14 were inappropriate and were revised; This is an incorrect reference to PRA RAI 14. It should be PRA RAI 15 Revise wording in this sentence from PRA RAI 14 to PRA RAI 15 Revised per comment.

26 SE Page 83/1st full paragraph Second sentence reads "The licensee determined via walkdowns that that sensitive equipment were located..." Should read "The licensee determined via walkdowns that sensitive equipment is located..."

Make corrections.

Revised per comment.

5 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 27 SE Page 88 / 2nd and 5th paragraphs of bullet Change fire zone RB-3C to 3C as RB is the compartment ID.

Fix in both paragraphs on page.

Revised per comment.

28 SE Page 88 / 4th paragraph of bullet Move end parenthesis after foam insulation to end of sentence as both fire zones are part of i.e.

Make correction Revised per comment.

29 SE Page 89 / 2nd bullet on page Change fire areas to Fire Zones 13A and 20B and change fire area 13A to Fire Zone 13A Last sentence change end to add and therefore, the revised analysis is acceptable.

Make correction Revised per comment.

30 SE page 99 Footnote (1) of Table 3.4.6-2 states:

(1) LAR dated April 24, 2012, as supplemented by letter dated July 12, 2012 (References 6 and 7, respectively),

and RAI response letter dated February 18, 2014 (Reference 15)

Footnote (1) references RAI response letter 2/18/14. Fire Area RB-FN results were revised in PRA RAI 16e in letter dated 2/12/13 not in the response dated 2/18/14. The NRC appears to have referenced the wrong RAI response letter here.

The footnote should be corrected to state and PRA RAI 16e response in letter dated February 12, 2013 (Reference 10)

Revised per comment.

31 SE Page 110 /

4th bullet The fourth bullet, Fire area boundaries appears to be incomplete.

Revise to read The licensees analysis appropriately identified fire area boundaries...

Revised per comment.

31 SE Page 121/

Section 3.6.8 Correct sections from 2.71 and 2.72 to 2.7.1 and 2.7.2 Make correction Revised to 2.7 and 2.8

6 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 32 SE Page 131/ 2nd paragraph under 1st bullet Change contractors System Failure Analysis Software (SAFE) to contractors System Assurance and Fire Protection Engineering software (SAFE)

Make correction Revised per comment.

33 SE Page 137/1st paragraph The 8/23/14 letter is characterized as a supplement to the LAR. In fact, this letter provided acknowledgement of the terms and conditions of the CNS NFPA 805 portal. The letter, of itself, contained no supplemental information relevant to the NRC review of the application.

Recommend deletion of the 8/23/2014 letter from the list of LAR supplements.

34 SE Page 137, Pg.

139, Pg. 138 (Ref. #73)

Replace highlighted text when SE report is complete and date is available.

Remove highlighted text.

35 SE Attachment C (pg. C1)

Change ASD Aspirating smoke detector" to "ASD - alternate shutdown.

Make correction Revised per comment.

36 SE Attachment C (pg. C3)

Change UFSAR to USAR Updated Safety Analysis Report Revised per comment.

1 Draft SE Editorial Comments The following comments on the draft Safety Evaluation relates to editorial/grammatical enhancements.

Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 1

TOC Page iv/3.5.1.7 and SE Page 108 Section title Defense in Depth should read Defense-In-Depth.

Include hyphens in section title.

Revised per comment.

2 SE Page 6/2nd paragraph Should have a colon instead or period after in accordance with 10 CFR 50.48(c)(4).

Make correction.

Revised per comment.

3 SE Page 6/3rd paragraph First sentence states require licensees to submit an LAR for NRC review The word an should be a.

Revise typo.

Revised per comment.

4 SE Page 20/2nd paragraph Section 2.4.4 - Second sentence refers to "Table S-3, Item S3.26." The correct designator is "S-3.26."

Correct S-3 Table implementation item designator to "S-3.26."

Revised per comment.

5 SE Page 36 /

3.6.1 discussion bullet Last word dated should be removed from the 3.6.1 discussion bullet Remove extra word dated Revised per comment.

6 SE Page 36 /

3.10.7 discussion bullet Change license requested approval to licensee requested approval Correct to licensee.

Revised per comment.

7 SE Page 42 /

Section 3.1.4.3 and Reference 64 Change E-136 to E136.

Fix ASTM test ID.

Revised per comment.

8 SE Page 45/after 1st paragraph Correct line Control Building - Computer Room (Fire Zone 10A)

Correct fire zone number.

Revised per comment.

9 SE Page 50 / 3rd paragraph Middle of paragraph - additional 50 feet of hose to the standard 100 feet of hose required by the NFPA 14 was Remove the before NFPA 14.

Revised per comment.

2 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 10 SE Page 58 / 3rd Paragraph Correct hyphens in LAR Attachment B Table B-2 title in 3rd paragraph Fix title Revised per comment.

11 SE Page 58 /

Bullets (2) and (5)

Capitalize Aligns with Intent in bullet (2) and capitalize Not in Alignment, but No Adverse Consequences in bullet (5)

Capitalize categories to match B-2 Table No change. Could not identify issue.

12 SE Page 59 / 1st Paragraph Second Sentence In SSD RAI 01 November 14, 2012 needs to be revised to In SSD RAI 01 dated November 14, 2012 Add dated Revised per comment.

13 SE Page 59 / 1st Paragraph Second Sentence Section 3.2.1.2 for post-fire operation of a manual rising-stem valves that have Delete a before manual rising-stem valves Delete a.

Revised per comment.

14 SE page. 63 /

2nd Paragraph Last Sentence of 2nd full paragraph The expert panelwith experience in electrical engineering; PRA, SSA Replace semicolon (;)

with comma (,)

Correct typo.

Revised per comment.

15 SE Page 65 / 1st full paragraph equipment-from should remove hyphen (-)

Correct typo.

Revised per comment.

16 SE Page. 70 / 1st Paragraph Last sentence of first paragraph, change NRC endorsed to NRC-endorsed Correct typo.

Revised per comment.

17 SE Page 74 / 1st full paragraph Remove hyphen (-) in PRA RAI-12 to PRA RAI 12 Correct typo.

Revised per comment.

18 SE Page 75 / 1st full paragraph Correct implementation item 3.24 to S-3.24 Correct typo.

Revised per comment.

19 SE Page 76/ 2nd full paragraph Remove hyphen (-) in NFPA-805 to NFPA 805 Correct typo.

Revised per comment.

20 SE Page. 78 / 1st full paragraph 3rd to last sentence - the human failure events created for the FPRA was less that the 1E-6 floor Replace that with than Correct typo.

Revised per comment.

21 SE Page 78 / 2nd full paragraph Correct Item S3 correct to match S-3 table ID of S-3.19.

Correct S-3 Table implementation item ID to S-3.19 Revised per comment.

3 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 22 SE Page 78 / 3rd full paragraph RAI 18 should be identified as PRA RAI 18 Make correction.

Revised per comment.

23 SE Page 79 / 1st partial paragraph RAI 40 should be identified as PRA RAI 40 throughout.

Correct PRA RAI-02.f-01 to PRA RAI 02.f.01 Correct Item S3 correct to match S-3 table ID of S-3.19.

Make corrections Revised per comment.

24 SE Page 80 / 1st paragraph RAI 40 should be identified as PRA RAI 40 throughout.

RAI 14 should be identified as PRA RAI 14.

RAI 14.01 should be identified as PRA RAI 14.01.

Correct Item S3 correct to match S-3 table ID of S-3.19.

Make corrections Revised per comment.

25 SE Page 80 / 2nd Paragraph Remove hyphen (-) in post-NFPA-805 to read post-NFPA 805 Make correction Revised per comment.

26 SE Page 80 / 2nd Paragraph RAI 36 should be identified as PRA RAI 36.

Make correction Revised per comment.

27 SE Page 81 / 1st partial paragraph Correct Item S3 correct to match S-3 table ID of S-3.19.

RAI 40 should be identified as PRA RAI 40 RAI-36, RAI-11, and RAI-16e should be PRA RAI 36, PRA RAI 11, and PRA RAI 16.e Make corrections Revised per comment.

4 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 28 SE Page 81 / 1st full paragraph Add the before Auxiliary Relay Room in 1st sentence for modeling transient fires with Auxiliary Relay Room Remove hyphens (-) from RAI title PRA RAI-04 to PRA RAI 04 Correct RAI 4.1 or PRA RAI 04-01 to read PRA RAI 04.01 throughout Correct RAI-04-02 to PRA RAI 04.02 RAI 40 should be identified as PRA RAI 40 Correct Item S3 correct to match S-3 table ID of S-3.19.

Revised per comment.

29 SE Page 82 / 1st partial paragraph RAI 40 should be identified as PRA RAI 40 Correct Item S3 correct to match S-3 table ID of S-3.19.

Revised per comment.

30 SE page 82 / 1st full paragraph RAI 40 should be identified as PRA RAI 40 Correct Item S3 correct to match S-3 table ID of S-3.19.

Revised per comment.

31 SE Page 82 / 2nd full paragraph Correct PRA RAI-05 to PRA RAI 05 Revised per comment.

32 SE Page 82/ last paragraph RAI 40 should be identified as PRA RAI 40 Correct Item S3 correct to match S-3 table ID of S-3.19.

Revised per comment.

5 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 33 SE Page 83 / 1st partial paragraph Remove for from sentence For the critical switchgear rooms, the response notes that fire barriers exist for with a rating of 1.5 hours5.787037e-5 days <br />0.00139 hours <br />8.267196e-6 weeks <br />1.9025e-6 months <br />.

Make correction Revised per comment.

34 SE Page 83 / 1st full paragraph Lowercase Fire Zones in 1st sentence.

Add full title of NUREG/CR to NUREG/CR-6850 Correct PRA RAI-02f-01 to PRA RAI 02.f.01 Item 2) revise from abandonment conditions are reached to abandonment conditions being reached Make corrections Revised per comment.

35 SE Page 83 /

last paragraph 3rd sentence revise to The licensee also discussed the COP timing analysis as it related to HRA of containment isolation and all components associated with containment isolation pathways were selected and subsequently cable traced.

Make corrections.

Revised per comment.

36 SE Page 84 / 2nd paragraph RAI 40 should be identified as PRA RAI 40 Correct Item S3 correct to match S-3 table ID of S-3.19.

Make corrections Revised per comment.

37 SE Page 86 / 1st paragraph Change FDTS to FDTs Validation and Verification should be reversed to Verification and Validation Make corrections Revised per comment.

38 SE Page 86 / 2nd group of bullets Add comma (,) in reference - Sprinkler Activation Correlation (Reference 32, Chapter

10)

Make correction Revised per comment.

6 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 39 SE Page 87 /

last bullet under CFAST Change HGL Study to HGL study Make correction Revised per comment.

40 SE Page 88 / 4th paragraph of bullet Move end parenthesis after foam insulation to end of sentence as both fire zones are part of i.e.

Make correction Revised per comment.

41 SE Page 93 /

Section 3.4.2.4 1st paragraph - Change NFPA-805 to NFPA 805 2nd paragraph - Correct Item S3 correct to match S-3 table ID of S-3.19.

Make correction Revised per comment.

42 SE Section 3.4.3 Page 93/1st Paragraph The second sentence has a typo:... acceptable alternative to comply...

Should be... acceptable alternatives to comply...

Make corrections Revised per comment.

43 SE Section 3.4.4 Page 95/4th Paragraph The second sentence has a typo: None of the RAs listed in LAR Table G-1 was found to have an adverse impact on the FPRA.

Should be: None of the RAs listed in LAR Table G-1 were found to have any adverse impacts on the FPRA.

Revised per comment.

44 SE Page 95 / 4th full paragraph 1st paragraph - Change NFPA-805 to NFPA 805 Delete stray period at end of paragraph.

Make correction Revised per comment.

45 SE Section 3.4.4 Page 95/5th Paragraph Remove the second period at the end of this paragraph.

Make correction Revised per comment.

46 SE Page 99 / 2nd paragraph Correct Item S-3 correct to match S-3 table ID of S-3.30.

Make correction Revised per comment.

47 SE Page 99 / 3rd paragraph Correct PRA RAI-13 to PRA RAI 13 Make correction Revised per comment.

7 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 48 SE Page 100 /

last bullet Change NFPA-805 to NFPA 805 Make correction Revised per comment.

49 SE Page 101 /

1st bullet Change comma (,) to colon (:)

Make correction Revised per comment.

50 SE Page 103 /

2nd paragraph Fix hyphen in Title of LAR Section 4.2.4 to Fire Area - Transition Make correction Revised per comment.

51 SE Page 104 /

Table Correct description of RB-M to (/) instead of (I)

Reactor Building North / East Side, RHR Heat Exchanger Room A Make correction Revised per comment.

52 SE Page 107 /

last paragraph Remove stray character after The NRC Staffs in last sentence.

Make correction Revised per comment.

53 SE Page 108 /

last paragraph Add missing of in second sentence between installation and these fire protection features.

Replace addition with additional in 3rd sentence including any additional fire protection systems Make correction Revised per comment.

54 SE Page 109 /

Section 3.5.1.10 Add space between SSD RAI 08 and dated Make correction Revised per comment.

55 SE Page 114 /

1st full paragraph Change (complete bum-out) to (complete burn-out)

Make correction Revised per comment.

56 SE Page 116/Section 3.6.1 Under NFPA 805 Section 1.4.2 (1) the parenthesis within the end bracket is not necessary.

Make correction Revised per comment.

57 SE Page 117 /

1st paragraph under indented text Add in to text the methodology given NEI 04-02 to read the methodology given in NEI 04-02 Make correction Revised per comment.

8 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 58 SE Page 117 /

last paragraph Change dry well to drywell Make correction Revised per comment.

59 SE Page 120 /

1st paragraph under Section 3.6.7 Change Enclosure E, Table E-1 to read LAR Attachment E, Table E-1 Make correction Revised per comment.

60 SE Page 123 /

3rd bullet Revise to read exceeded in order to bring performance Make correction Revised per comment.

61 SE Page 123 /

1st paragraph Correct implementation items to S-3.1 and S-3.23 Make correction Revised per comment.

62 SE Page 125 /

Section 3.8.3 Add of in the following engineering analyses used to support transition of the CNS FPP Make correction Revised per comment.

63 SE Page 128 /

2nd bullet Remove space between 10 and °C Make correction Revised per comment.

64 SE Page 129 /

1st partial sentence Correct implementation item to S-3.8 Make correction Revised per comment.

65 SE Page 130 /

Section 3.8.3.3.3 Correct implementation items to S-3.8 and S-3.27 Make correction Revised per comment.

66 SE Page 131 /

Section 3.8.3.4.2 Add FM in front of RAI in clarify its responses to an FM RAI.

Replace (.) with (:) at end of 1st paragraph Make correction Revised per comment.

67 SE Page 133 /

1st bullet Delete extra FM in front of FM RAI 05(a)

Make correction Revised per comment.

68 SE Page 134 and Pg. 135 /

2nd paragraph under closed bullet Change NUREG 1824 to NUREG-1824 Change FDTs to FDTs throughout open bullets on pages 134 and 135 Make correction Revised per comment.

9 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 69 SE Page 135 /

Section 3.8.3.5.3 Change last sentence to uncertainty analysis is in identified LAR Table S-3 to uncertainty analysis is identified in LAR Table S-3 Change implementation item 8 to implementation item S-3.8.

Make correction Revised per comment.

1 Draft SE Technical Comments The following comments on the draft NFPA 805 Safety Evaluations relate to material accuracy and completeness issues, and certain other areas of higher importance.

Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 1

SE Pages 13 and 34 On these pages the NRC cites the use of NFPA 101, Life Safety Code. NPPD is not committed to that standard, except to the degree it is reflected in NFPA 805 requirements, as evaluated in the B-1 table. NPPD is concerned that the wording in the SE could be construed in the future to constitute a commitment in total to that standard. It is additionally noted that the NRC has not endorsed this standard, as part of NFPA 805, as it does not have a nexus to nuclear safety.

Add note or clarification i n Section 3.1.1.5, bullet 3.3.3 that provides a disclaimer that NFPA 101 is not an endorsed standard for NFPA 805.

No change. The referenced standard is listed in Section 2.2 of the SE which is titled:

Applicable Staff Guidance. There is no wording in the SE that indicates the licensee is committed to the use of this standard or that the NRC requires compliance with this standard.

2 SE Page 14/Table 2.3-1 FAQ 07-0030 references SE Sections 3.2.2 and 3.4.3. There is no reference to FAQ 07-0030 in these sections. Also, SE Section 3.2.5 references this FAQ, but it not an SE Section cited in Table 2.3-1.

Delete reference in FAQ 07-0030 to SE Section 3.2.2 and 3.4.3.

Add 3.2.5 to SE Table 2.3-1 Revised per comment.

3 SE Page 17/Table 2.3-1 FAQ 12-0062, regarding USAR updates was used in the LAR (S-3.26 Implementation Item) and is discussed in the SE, but missing from the FAQ table Add FAQ 12-0062 to the FAQ table.

Revised per comment.

Note that FAQ 12-0062 was not included in LAR Attachment H.

2 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 4

SE Page 17/Table 2.3-1 FAQ 12-0064, "Hot Work/Transient Fire Frequency Influence Factors," is included in the table. However, this FAQ was finalized after submittal of the LAR, an thus, the LAR did not include any reference to FAQ 12-0064. SE Sections 3.4.2.2 and 3.4.7 referenced in the table do not mention it.

Delete of FAQ 12-0064 from Table.

Revised per comment.

5 SE Page21 The 5th bulleted exemption describes the Control Building Basement as being at 903'-6".

The actual elevation is below the grade level of 903'-6". The 9/21/83 Safety Evaluation does not include any elevation information. Page 23 of the LAR erroneously included this elevation information, and will be deleted in the follow-up 4/11/2014 letter.

Delete elevation of the Control Building Basement.

Revised per comment.

6 SE Page 22/3rd paragraph Section 2.6.1, second sentence, states: "The license developed a change process that is based on..." This change process has not been developed yet.

Revise to read: "The licensee developed will develop a change process that is based on..."

Revised per comment.

7 SE Page 22/Section 2.6.1, 3rd paragraph The paragraph does not discuss the specific bullets from the NPPD LAR specific to screening.

Without these bullets this SE appears to only apply screening to address changes that are only administrative in nature. This would not recognize the other purposes of screening that include screening for changes that would have less than minimal impacts to risk.

Include discussion of bullets on page 48 of the NPPD LAR such that screening is also recognized as a process that is used to identify changes that have less than minimal impacts to risk.

Revised per comment.

8 SE Section 2.6.1 Response to RAIs (Ref. NLS2013011 response to Programmatic RAI 05) is not included in the discussion for the plant change evaluation process.

Include discussions to recognize that NPPD will incorporate the change evaluation process detailed in FAQ 12-0061.

Revised per comment.

3 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 9

SE Page 22/last full paragraph SE states that the screening process was modeled after NEI 02-03 Rev. 0. Revision 1 to NEI 02-03 was actually used. No reference to a revision number was made in the LAR.

Reword to reflect use of NEI 02-03 Rev. 1 and revise Reference

52.

Revised per comment.

10 SE Page 22/Section 2.6.1, last paragraph The safety evaluation states The licensee stated that the screening is followed by engineering evaluations. This statement could be interpreted as all change evaluations would include an engineering evaluation.

However, some changes may not require engineering evaluations in that the change would be screened as trivial or having a less than minor risk impact.

Revise statement to read The licensee stated that the screening will identify when a change will require additional is followed by engineering evaluations."

No change. SE states what was stated in the LAR.

11 SE Page 23/5th paragraph First sentence makes reference to "Non-Power Mode NSCA Treatment." CNS does not have a document of this type.

Revise to read "Non-Power Mode reviews, etc.."

Revised per comment and per LAR.

12 SE Page 27/1st paragraph Excerpt "...may be used after transition to NFPA 805 as a part of the FREs conducted to determine the change in risk associated with proposed plant changes. " details that Cooper Nuclear Station will continue to perform FREs after transition. However, FREs were used to evaluate VFDRs and therefore will not be used after transition.

Revise excerpt to the following:

..." may be used after transition to NFPA 805 as a part of the FREs Plant change Evaluations conducted to determine the change in risk associated with proposed plant changes.

Revised per comment.

4 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 13 SE Page 27/last paragraph Section 2.7.1 - Item S-3.30 states will be in place 6 months after completion of modifications. This does not match the proposed licensee implementation period of implementation by May 31, 2017. The basis for the May 31, 2017, date was to allow six months after the projected end of Refueling Outage RE29, but that does not subsume that committed implementation date.

Revise statement indicate that S-3.30 will be completed by May 31, 2017..

Revised per comment.

14 SE Page 28/Section 2.7.1 The wording in the License Condition could legally be construed that once the S-2 and S-3 are complete, no further changes to these configurations or processes could be made without violating the license condition. NPPD proposed to add words to the license condition to make it clear that once compliance was achieved, future changes could be made utilizing the protocols of the license condition, but was told by the NRC via e-mail that was unnecessary.

Add a statement at the end of Section 2.7.1 stating:

"Once compliance has been achieved with the Table S-2 Modifications and Table S-3 Implementation Items, future changes to those affected configurations, processes, and procedures may be made using the self-approval process of the Fire Protection license condition."

No change. Upon completion of part c of the license condition, changes are made in accordance with parts a and b of the license condition.

15 SE Page 28/Section 2.7.2, 1st paragraph The second sentence describes Implementation Item S-30 as being completed within 6 months after completion of the modifications described in the S-2 table. This does not match the proposed licensee implementation period of implementation by May 31, 2017. The basis for the May 31, 2017, date was to allow six months after the projected end of Refueling Outage RE29, but that does not subsume that date.

Revise statement indicate that S-3.30 will be completed by May 31, 2017..

Revised per comment.

5 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 16 SE Page 61/first bullet The bullet states that the plant staff will endeavor to achieve a hot standby condition.

This is not applicable to BWR Technical Specifications. "hot standby" should be "hot shutdown (Mode 3)" for consistency with CNS Technical Specifications, and consistency with the later words cold shutdown (MODE 4) if necessary..

Make correction.

Revised per comment.

17 SE Page 68/2nd full paragraph First sentence indicates that the post-transition period commences with the issuance of the Safety Evaluation. This is not NPPDs understanding. For purposes of the response to FPE RAI 10, the post-transition period was intended to mean after the 12-month implementation period after receiving the SE.

Revise to read "... compensatory measures necessary in the period between transition(12 months after issuance of this SE) and completion of the modification."

No change. The licensees understanding is not correct. The post transition period begins upon issuance of the license amendment.

18 SE Page 69/1st paragraph First sentence implies that a continuous fire watch will be in place until the modifications are in place. The fire watch will be put in place after the 12-month implementation period. See Comment 17.

Revise the sentence to read "The licensee further stated that compensatory measures during times when the incipient detection is out of service, including prior to completion of the modification, plant procedures will provide a continuous fire watch with hand-held incipient detection in the Auxiliary Relay Room after the 12-month implementation period."

No change. See response to Comment 17. The post transition period begins upon issuance of the license amendment.

6 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 19 SE Page 72 last paragraph Excerpt "In PRA RAI 12, the licensee quantitatively defines the term: potentially risk significant fire scenarios. Potentially risk significant fire scenarios for the purpose of evaluating the need for DID are defined as..."

requires further clarification to detail its application as detailed in PRA RAI 12. Also, it is recommended that the specific threshold be excluded from the SE as these are guidelines developed by Cooper Nuclear Station and not mandated by NFPA 805 requirements.

Delete the three bullets following the excerpt. Replace the excerpt with "In PRA RAI 12, it is recognized that during some DID evaluations, it may become necessary to consider the potential for risk significant fire scenarios to impact VFDRs. In these cases, the licensee provide quantitative results from the FPRA for the purpose of evaluating the DID for VFDRs.

Revised. The three bullets with quantitative guidelines were not deleted as they form an integral part of the SE and are consistent with past SEs.

20 SE Page 74/Section 3.4.1.2 last paragraph The excerpt "Also, CNS has removed unacceptable methods or committed to updating the FPRA." does not provide the required specificity to define what is meant by "updating" the FPRA.

A reference to the documents (i.e., as described in PRA RAI 40) that specify actions required for updating the FPRA should be provided in this paragraph.

Revised. The identified sentence was deleted.

21 SE Page 75/Section 3.4.2 last paragraph The excerpt "Therefore, the NRC staff concludes that the PRA should be capable of supporting post-transition FREs to support,..." use of the term FRE is incorrect. Cooper's risk based evaluations after transition to NFPA 805 will not include FREs as these were done to evaluate transition.

Recommend replacing "FRE" with "Plant Change Evaluations".

Revised per comment.

23 SE Page 81/1st full paragraph Paragraph lists Fire Zones 8B, 8C, 8E, 8G, and 8H from PRA-RAI 04.02, but does not include Fire Zone 8F, as described in PRA RAI 04.02.

Add Fire Zone 8F.

Revised per comment.

24 SE Page 83/1st full paragraph To better reflect the response to PRA RAI 02f.01, Item 3) needs to be revised to 3) MCB cabinet walls protect sensitive equipment for a sufficient period such that the likelihood of not suppressing the fire prior to damage is low.

Make revision.

Revised per comment.

7 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 25 SE Page 86 / 2nd paragraph Fire Modeling Database should be replaced with Fire Modeling Workbook throughout and FMDB replaced with FMWB throughout SE.

Correct throughout SE Revised per comment.

26 SE Page 87 /

bullets under FDS The bullet Suppression activation time calculation in specific fire areas was not used at Cooper.

Remove bullet Suppression activation time calculation in specific fire areas Revised per comment.

27 SE Page 91 / last paragraph of page Change transient height to 2 feet based on SDP guidance.

Make correction Revised per comment.

28 SE Page 99/Table 3.4.6-2 Fire Area TB-A Description contains buildings (Off Gas Building and Optimum Water Chemistry) that are considered part of Fire Area YD, as described in the LAR B-3 Table for these Fire Areas.

Remove Off Gas Building and Optimum Water Chemistry from the TB-A description as these buildings are considered part of the YD. A revision to Attachment I of the LAR will be made to provide this clarification.

Revised per comment.

29 SE Page 104/

able 3.5-1 Fire Area TB-A Area Description contains buildings (Off Gas Building and Optimum Water Chemistry) that are considered part of Fire Area YD, consistent with the LAR B-3 table.

Remove Off Gas Building and Optimum Water Chemistry from the TB-A description as these buildings are considered part of the YD. A revision to Attachment I of the LAR will be made to provide this clarification.

Revised per comment.

30 SE Page 109/1st partial paragraph First sentence indicates shielding for Fire Areas CB-D and RB-m is for transient fires assumed in these fire areas. In Fire Area CB-D, the shielding that has been installed is for fixed sources (electrical panels). This is currently being installed.

Correct sentence to include fixed sources as adequate for the fire duration of the transient and fixed source fires assumed Revised per comment.

31 SE Page 122/2nd paragraph under indented text For consistency with FAQ 10-0059, under discussion of the scope of the monitoring program add FPRA equipment.

Make addition Revised per comment.

8 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 32 SE Page 126/bullet at end of page CNS does not use a Fire Modeling Database.

Fire Modeling Database should be replaced with Fire Modeling Workbook.

Revise to read: "...were implemented in a database and workbook referred to as the Fire Modeling WorkbookDatabase (FMDBFMWB).

Replace FMDB with FMWB throughout SE.

Revised per comment.

33 SE Attachments A and B Fire Modeling Database should be replaced with Fire Modeling Workbook throughout and FMDB.

Needs to be corrected throughout both Attachments A and B.

Revised per comment.

34 SE Attachment A (pg. A2) Radiant Heat Flux Application at CNS - Second sentence does not read correctly. Revise to read "The correlation was used to determine the horizontal separation distance..."

V&V Basis for NUREG-1805 is Chapter 5 not Chapter 3 Make corrections Revised per comment.

35 SE Attachment A (pg. A2) Hot Gas Layer MQH V&V Basis for NUREG-1805 is Chapter 2 not Chapter 3 Make correction Revised per comment.

36 SE Attachment A (pg. A3) Hot Gas Layer Beyler V&V Basis for NUREG-1805 is Chapter 2 not Chapter 3 Make correction Revised per comment.

37 SE Attachment A (pg. A3) Hot Gas Layer FPA V&V Basis for NUREG-1805 is Chapter 2 not Chapter 3 Make correction Revised per comment.

38 SE Attachment A (Pg. A4) Ceiling Jet Temperature V&V Basis for NUREG-1824 is Volume 4 not Volume 3 Make correction Revised per comment.

9 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 39 SE Attachment A (Pg. A4) Sprinkler Activation Correlation V&V Basis for NUREG-1805 is Chapter 10 not Chapter 3 Make correction Revised per comment.

40 SE Attachment A (Pg. A5) Heat Detector Actuation Correlation V&V Basis for NUREG-1805 is Chapter 11 not Chapter 3 V&V Basis for NUREG-1824 is Volume 4 not Volume 3 Remove SFPE Handbook discussion from the V&V Basis as this is related to smoke detector actuation.

Revise NRC Staff Evaluation 2nd bullet to The correlation is validated in authoritative publication of the NFPA Handbook.

Make correction Revised per comment.

10 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 41 SE Attachment A (pg. A6) Smoke Detector Actuation The smoke detector correlation is based on the ceiling jet correlation of Alpert and the 10°C rise is the Method of Heskestad and Delichatsios.

This correlation needs to be revised to include discussion of the Alpert Ceiling Jet correlation.

V&V Basis for NUREG-1805 is Chapter 11 not Chapter 3 V&V Basis for NUREG-1824 is Volume 4 not Volume 3 Add SFPE Handbook Chapter 4-1 to the V&V Basis for Smoke Detector Actuation.

Revise NRC Staff Evaluation 2nd bullet to The correlation is validated in authoritative publications of the NFPA and SFPE Handbooks.

Make correction Revised per comment.

42 SE Attachment B (pg. B1) FDS for MCR V&V Basis for NUREG-1824 is Volume 7 not Volume 3 NRC Staff Evaluation - Add is between abandonment time calculations and acceptable. in last sentence.

Make correction Revised per comment.

43 SE Attachment B (pg. B2)

Temperature Sensitive Equipment ZOI V&V Basis for NUREG-1824 is Volume 7 not Volume 3 Make correction Revised per comment.

11 Comment Number Location Comment Suggested Disposition NRC Response 44 SE Attachment B (pg. B3)

Plume/Hot Gas Layer Interaction V&V Basis for NUREG-1824 is Volume 7 not Volume 3 Make correction Revised per comment.

45 SE Attachment B (pg. B3) Hot Gas Layer CFAST V&V Basis for NUREG-1824 is Volume 5 not Volume 3 Make correction Revised per comment.

46 SE Attachment B (pg. B4)

Temperature sensitive hot gas layer V&V Basis for NUREG-1824 is Volume 5 not Volume 3 Application at CNS - Change equipments to equipment.

Make correction Revised per comment.

47 SE Attachment C CNS does not use a Fire Modeling Database (FMDB) (see Comments32 and 33)

Replace duplicated FMDB acronyms with FMWB (Fire Modeling Workbook).

Revised per comment.